Arhi 4S: Char Chaand Haveli | REMOVED - Page 21

Such a lovely story. I haven't seen the whole of Rajasthan, seen only few parts of it. But I love its architecture and its folk music. There is a richness and an old world charm in its architecture with those havelis and its colorful clothing. You brought it very much here. I loved that aspect.
Coming to the storyline I loved it. Two people who are in love yet were apart because one person refused to accept his feelings. But he was never harsh or rude to her. In fact he always liked to spend his time with Khushi. I loved it and I absolutely loved that the potential groom wasn't given much importance other than a catalyst who helped Arnav to accept his feelings which he was denying since long.
I loved the moments you created between friends, between ArnavKhushi during night with both of them watching rain, then Arnav & Dadi when he went to her room and then the morning scene between ArHi. but the best has to be the one where she sang for him.
Dadi surprised me when she didn't encourage Arnav. she is truly one smart woman. I'm so happy that finally they are together. 😳

Thz z one such freakingly cute awesom adorable ss

Very beautiful story Ana 👏. Loved it and can't believe that I missed this story of yours for so long !!!

Lovely story :) after reading this story, i dont have words to describe how amazing it is..!! You've put life to words:) wow!! Marvellous writing:)

wow..dont know how i missed this work of urs...loved it..😊..great four shot...you created an entire world..loved the portion where you ort of describe the mundane moments where arnav fell in luv with khushi when they were growing up...the reason why arnav said no earlier is very valid and i think he was right in rejecting the idea that time..though he couldve aked her to wait n see herself or something like that instead of saying no...and that poem by aashi12 is so nice...rhymes perfectly and goes with the whole theme of the story...great writing...👏