Arhi 4S: Char Chaand Haveli | REMOVED

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Removed. Should be updated on blog soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay I had to post the last part here...but it's somehow not fitting in. So I'm taking new spots. K bye.


FS sounds so bad. Argh!
Edited by Anarocksick - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i guess we can res right ?
if not I am sorry

RES ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start , very different though
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ananya devi Ji,

We all know your love and fascination for Rajasthan. I am so happy to see that you are channelizing that love in the form of this story and hopefully more to come. I love the picture, it's awesome.

Can't wait to read more about Arnav and Khushi's past, their friendship and if there was more to it. They seem very similar in the sense both lost their parents and were embraced by Devyani and her husband. Wonder what took Arnav away from his only family and friend and he definitely miss them.

Eagerly waiting for next part.

PS: I am really happy that you writing this despite your busy AD with studies, travelling, liquids and your fight to be "Kamiyaab". 😉 I genuinely hope you continue to write, even if they are short stories.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh Ana, this was such a beautiful piece of writing. I loved it so much, it's as if it was custom made for my reading pleasure 😊
It had a lot of my favorite things in it, besides our favorite jodi, Arnav and Khushi.

Rajasthan, historical buildings, poignance, serendipity, classical music in the background.

I love qawwali too...can just imagine listening to sufi music against the backdrop of an ancient structure...soul stirring..
I just love your writing an am so glad you're back :)

Looking forward to the next !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I got lucky. Just before falling into bed.
Ana, you made me homesick so early in the morning.
How will I go through the day now?
Love your love for my home state.
There are so many lost , forgotten Havelis there.
Each one of them must have a story to tell.

Trust you to find one and write its story.
Its always such a pleasure reading your work.
I can't thank you enough for writing this in spite of time constraints.

Arnav seems to have issues about being adopted.
And there is definitely tension between him and Khushi.
Why did he leave the Haveli and go?
Because he is adopted?
This is the dilemma many adopted children face.

Waiting for the next part now.

Edited by 1chilly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res and I following this from beginning

Ana I am certainly intrigued with Arnav and Khushi and the mystery that lied ahead in Char Chand Haveli :)
Edited by ssyahoo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it, it is beautiful, cant wait to get a glimpse of their past and of their future 😳 and that haveli is amazing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yeh duniya, yeh duniya pittal di
Yeh duniya pittal di
Yeh duniya pittal di..
Ho babydoll main sone di...

And that's a Res ! 😆

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