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dinazz

@dinazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#761

Unres next page !! 😃

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sonai

@rajeeviansonai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#762

aj firse part 1 to 29 tak parlia.its awesome story & fabulous writing

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Areesha

@Areesha566

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Posted: 10 years ago

#763

Oh wow that was a full on dhamakedar update
Love it
It was awesome how you write and describe every little detail, hats off to you dii
Thanks for pm
Update soon waiting
P.S. sorry for late reply

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dinazz

@dinazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#764

lovely !!

oh ! only the 3 ladies are there in the house .. but sure they are safe..😃😃

avni, anjali and simmi going through turmoil and inner conflict

oh of course he has done nothing to be forgiven for but every human wishes for the wellbeing of their family.. 😊

i hope karan does not get another dose !! wishing for a miracle to happen soon..😃😃

and the wait is on for Raza..😃

so patil knows everything now !! bechara patil unable to believe to truth , he was previously blinded by goodness of raza , abhi uski aakhein khuli toh sacchai samne aayi.. 😲😃

wow ! patil confronted raza aka sik ...👏👏

and arjun also in front of sik ! abhi maza aayega !!👍🏼

why did he crush the wireless mic !!😲😡

atlast the team reached karan and kiren ke paas bhi team aa gayi !! and the ladies also safe!!👍🏼

ohho ! gun shots !!😲😲

arjun injured !! 😲😲

this update was just fantastic .. throughout the story i was on the edge of my seat !! 😃

cliffhanger kyu diya di ???????

cont soon !!😃

thanks for pm !!😃

sorry for commenting late .. :(

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Known stranger

@kumarvisu12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#765

hey loved it. End is near but waiting. So Arjun is wounded.

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#766

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#767

Awsum Update Heli Di..😊 So finally its over with Sikander's Death. But Arjun is critical, I hope he survives.. I want him too. Kiren is safe and he got his family back, Karan will be safe too. Arjun-Sikander faceoff was written brilliantly! 👏 Thanx fr pm! Continue Soonz.

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 10 years ago

#768

Wow di...

Mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Do continue soon..

And thanka for the pm

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#769

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Finally it's over Sikander is dead
Kiran got his family back
Karan also will be alright
Loved Arjun-Sikander face off
Patil killed himself do that Sikander could feel the pain
Sooo Beautifully Written
You portrayed every emotion so perfectly
Hope Arjun will survive want him back
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM