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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice start
I liked the concept
Maan & Ragini celebrating their second anniversary but both are not happy in this relation. Ah...they are not made for each other.
Looking forward to next updates...
Please try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
priya please update already have liked and commented for part 1 looking forward to the story thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gayatrisahu1985

priya please update already have liked and commented for part 1 looking forward to the story thanks


dear write now busy in celebration of behne de anniversery then

going to update khawaish and khudrat the khel

fir try to write this
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swapna.p

nice start..
ragini and maan are not happy with this relation..

waiting for maaneet meeting..


thnks

whi soch rhi hu kaise milayu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

nice start both r pretned to be a happy couple infront of the world but in truth they r not both lost their child n blamed each other for this yash n meera did try their best but they couldnt bring them together lovely start thnx 4 pm


most welcome dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Arina_10

interesting update! well written!
thanks for the pm dear!
It's their second anniversary!
ragini didn't told him abt da pragnancy!
maan tried to console ragini!
she blamed him 😒
both are not happy & blame each other!
maan is so lonely 😭 😭
maan misses his dadi!
eagerly waiting for maaneet meeting 👏


😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

(thanks shruthe di)

Part 2


Ghume hai hum saari duniya mein

Par sakoon milta hai bs teri bahoo mein

.

.

Geet

.

Geet

Geet : ji maaji aayi

Maaji : nasta tyaar hai

Geet : ji bs ho gya

Maaji : jaake princess ko uthayo humari

Geet : hmm

Maaji : aur sun

Tera purse kaha hai

Geet : purse kis liye

Maaji : swal na kr

Pasie chaiye mujhe

Aaj pari ka phla din hai collage ka

Geet : usse pocket money di toh thi

Ab aur kis liye

Maaji : chup chap de rhi hai ya nhi

Geet : mere pass nhi hai

Pari ko bolo

Wo apne kharche limit mein rakhe

Yaha koi paiso ka ped nhi laga hai

Maaji : tu toh yhi bolongi

Mere bte ko toh kha gyi

Aaj wo hota

Toh mujhe tere aange hath na felane pdte

.

Pata nhi usne tujhme kya dekha

.

From past two year she listening this type of talk daily ... Now tears

also dried ...but pain is still...

Days and night passes like years...

.

Har din sochti hu

Asa kya kiya tha maine gunaah

Jiski mujhe ye saza milli

Jb bhi muskarana chaha

Usse phle aansu humesha mile

Khehne ko toh bhut bda parivaar hai mera

Par rishte ke naam pe ye hath humesha khali rhe hai

.

Again night come, as usual for walk she comes to rose garden... For

public this garden always closes up to 9 pm...

Rose Garden Asia's largest Rose Garden and is spreaded over 30 acres of land having over 1600 different species or roses. These have been planted beautifully carved out lawns and flowers beds.

But geet always come after 10 pm...

Kaka : geet beta

Geet : kaka aaj maine halwa bnaya tha

Aapko pasand hai

Toh aapke liye bhi le aayi

Kaka : beta koi khas wajh

Geet : khas wajh toh ab meri zindagi mein kuch nhi rhi kaka

Wo maaji ne bola

Toh bna diya

Kaka : khush raho beta

Geet : kaka mujhe andher jaana hai

Kaka : jaa

Jaldi aaiyo

Geet : thanks kaka

***********

Dev : geet I love you

Will you marry me

.

Geet I promise you

Mein tumhe wo har khushi dunga

Jo tum chahti ho

.

Geet : par dev

Mein

.

Dev : koi aur hai tumhari zindagi mein

Geet : nhi dev

You are my best friend

And I love you too but as friend

Dev : so

Tumhari taraf se HA hai fir

Geet : yes

.

But dev my family

You know na

Chacha chachi toh bilkul nhi maanege

Dev : sweetheart don't take tension

Maa aaj unse baat krne gyi hai

Abhi tk toh puch bhi gyi hongi

Geet : what

Itna sb kr diya tumne

Aur ab mujhse puch rhe ho

Dev : because I know my geet

She never denied

Geet : acha

Ydi mein NA khti toh

Dev : asa kbhi nhi ho sakta hai geet

Mein jaanta hu

Tum mere liye kuch bhi kr sakti ho

Jaise mein tumhare liye

Geet : yes dev

I do anything for you

Ek tum hi toh ho

Jo mujhse smjta hai

Jo sch mein mujhe khush dekhna chahta hai

Na ki mere chacha chachi ki tarah

Jo bs mujhe is liye jhel rhe hai

Smajh kya kahenga

Wo toh mujhe college bhi nhi jaane dete

Ladki pe kya paise waste krne

Wo toh acha huya

Tumhari wajh se mujhe part time hotel mein job mil gyi

Aur half scholarship

Dev : geet maine kuch nhi kiya

Ache logo ki madat khud bhagwan krte hai

Aur tumhare babaji toh humesha hai na tumhare sath

Geet : thanks dev

Par kya meri family maanegi

Dev : of course

Maanegi

.

Now give me gift

Geet : gift for what

Dev : geet aaj humari friendship ko 3 saal ho gye

Aur tum bhool gyi aaj ka din

Maine kbhi nhi socha tha

Tum humare is khas din ko bhool jaayungi

.

Now am angry with you

Geet : dev sorry

Sch mein na jaane mein kaise bhool gyi

Baba maaf krdo

Dev : ase maafi nhi maangte

Geet : toh fir kaise maangte hai

Dev : abhi batata hu

Dev pull her by waist and kissed on her lips, she shocked from sudden kiss...

Dev : don't shocked sweetheart

Bs ek kiss hi toh tha

Geet : how dare you

Mujhse bina puche

Dev : can I kiss you again

Dekho ab mein puch raha hu

.

Isliye bina puche kiss kiya tha

He winked...

**************

Dev happy friendship day

Dekho is baar mein nhi bhulu

.

She hugged herself and sits on bench...

Another side at far on one corner someone also sited and lost into

own self...

Chilly breezes only shoo thing the body nor to soul...both tries to

show the society we are happy family, but in inner both losing own

self...

Khud ko khote jaa rhe hai hum

Logo ko ye dekhane mein

Hum khush hai

Kya humara mann khush hai

Nhi...sayad ab ho bhi nhi sakta

************

Maan bte humne aapke liye ek ladki dekhi hai

Achi hai

Maan : daadi phle aapka ilaaz honga

Then meri shaadi

Daadi : pata nhi hum bachenge bhi ya nhi

Humari aapki shaadi ki khawaish sayad adhuri hi rh jaani hai

Maan : daadi kitni baar mein aapse kahu

Aapko kuch nhi honga

You are my life daadi

Daadi : beta ab waqt aa gya hai

Aap kissi aur ko apni zindagi bana le

Please beta

Humari aakhri khawaish hi smjh lijiye

.

Hum marne se phle aapka ghar basta dekhna chahta hai

Maan : daadi please as amt khiye

Daadi : ye ragini ki tasveer hai

Aapko kal unse milna hai

Maan : ji

***********

Geet ab toh tujhe na chahte huye bhi us char divari mein wapas

jaana honga

Let's go

.

.

Ye indhera kitna acha hai

Kam se kam

Roshani ki tarah aankho mein chubta toh nhi

.

.

She collided with someone, for protecting her, he held her by

shoulders ... Due to darkness both not able to see whole face, but,

both stare to each other...

.

Shi kaha aapne

Darkness is better from that light, where we smiles for society but nor for own...

Ye andhera khi acha hai

.

.

Sayad aap khud se naraaz hai

.

Sayad aap bhi

.

Sorry , andhere mein , mein aapko dekh nhi paayi

Aur aapse takra gyi

And thanks too

For saving me

.

Acha hai hum ek dusre ko nhi dekh paaye

Nhi toh firse ek jhooti muskan aur jud jaati

.

Good night

.

Same to you Miss

.

Miss

.

Ajnaabi rahe toh jyada acha hai

Km se km

Formality nhi hongi

.

Right Miss

Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
priya yaar why the part 2 link not working
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Posted: 9 years ago
where is the link/update dear? want 2 read!! or u still gng 2 update? Thanks

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