Manya /Rara SS Tumse pyaar hame hai kitna janejana Chapter 5, page 6 - Page 3

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Nice, it is a great concept
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im really glad you liked it !
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hi guys., im back with the update hope you enjoy it and please hit like and leave your comments , it encourages me to write more and sooner!

Chapter 4

Rama takes out his handkerchief and starts wrapping it around her foot ,,, covering the wound... rachita stares at rama spellbound of his care, and the concern that was evident in his eyes... when ramas done wrapping the handkerchief ... he lifts rachita in his arms and takes her to her house... rachitas eyes were just staring at his eyes... rachita notices sadness in his eyes...

Rach. rama... you look sad... is everytihing ok?????

Ra. no... everything is not ok... my parents .. my parents are no more... they died in the car accident that happened 16 days ago... ( he had wet eyes while saying this )

Rachita got the biggest shock of her life... unable to say a word to him... that's why in therir shop other guys were working ... so that was the reason of ramas sadness... rama leaves from there silently... and rachitas eyes fills with tears... ( guys ore piya bg music plays here )

Rama goes to his house... and locks himself in his room... and he .. breaks down... the biggest pain of his life : losing his parents... and then , the emptiness of his life... and... thinking that rachita doesn't love him... tha the doesn't diserve her... that he cant be the one for her... she deserves someone better...

Rama. rachita ji... I love you so much... I really really love you rachita ji... I wished you loved me as well... I just wished ... ( he says with tears in his eyes )

In the hospital...

MAntu enters in amayas room... where amaya is on the bed with her foot bandaged ... she had had an severe injury...

Dr. she needs to take rest... and please buy these medicines ..and take them on time...

M.. yes dr.

D.r ahh .. and you can take the patient home... ah .. wait .. you also have some injuries... wait ... illc all the nurse shell treat them...

M.. ok dr.

After the nurs finished her work.. mantu ... picked amays cruthes and picked her up in his arms... amaya got lost in his eyes ... and thye had a eyelock ( rabba ishq hai bg musici plays here ) and he takes her to the auto and accompanies her to her house... and then again... takes her to her house in his arms.. ... he rings the bell...rachita rachita opens the door.

Ra. mantu? amay?? yeh amaya ko kya hua?

Ma. actually ... I hit her .. with my bike... it ws an accident .. then took her to the doctor and ...

Ra. ok. come-...

And mantu takes her to her room... and he gently places her on her bed... and starts to leave the room... but.. his eyes were turning to see ... her... if she was ok...and .. to see her... amaya noticed it... he didn't wanted to leave,.. he was concerned about her... but she didn't said a thing...

mantu came downstairs ...and rachita offered him a glass of water...

M.. what was the need pf this rachita ?

Ra. I know it was an accident .. but you helped her.. took her to the hospital... tahnks a lot mantu

M.. no rachit a... it was my fault... I should have been more carefull... ok.. ill leave then... thank you

Ra. ok .. bye..

And mantu left... he in his bike... went to ramas house .. where he wanted to go but all that accident thing happened ... he rang the bell... and ... rama opened the door... and when mantu looked around ... he couldn't believe his eyes...he was shocked !!!

Precap. surprise!



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Nice update dr..
ended up with twist. .
I couldn't predict. .so update soon
continue
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Yaar so many viees but no comments???
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Originally posted by: AartShefa

Nice update dr..

ended up with twist. .
I couldn't predict. .so update soon
continue





Thanks a lot ! 😃
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Nice update...whats the precap surprise???
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its sth that many of us wanted to see !
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Hi guys, im here wiht the new chappy of this ss , hope you enjoy it , and please let me know if you liked it and please hit like!


Chapter5

Disclaimer: Alcohol is injurious to health . This is not promoting the comsuption of alcohol .

Mantu saw what he just simply never expected to see., at least not rama doing that.

R. Are... Mantu .. Tum? Yaha??? Iss waqt?? Itni raat ko ???

Mantus eyes looked at the dining table . Vodka bottles . One empty and one full.

M. Bhai... Raat nahi hui abhi tak... Shaam hai !! Aur... Aap... Aap. Ne .. Ap ne pi .. Aap kaisi pi sakte hai... Yeh kaisi .. Kyu???!!!p

And rama pulled him inside the house. Mantu was still confused. He just couldnt get that. Ramas eyes were red and he was definitely not in his senses.

R. Are yaar kyu matlab, bas peene ka man kara toh ... Socha pee loon...( and he moves few steps ahead and starts dancing ) Oh ..Pee loon tere neelay neelay nainon se shabnam, Pee loon tere geelay geelay hoto ki sargam,Pee loon hai peenay ka mausam

M. Are bhai , !!!!! App pagal ho gaye hai bhai... Aap ko chad gayi bhai...

r. Are mantu... Abhi chadi nahi hai . .. Abhi toh utri hai... Pet mein...( he says with almost not being able to stand properly )

And mantu sits on the chair and holds his head with both hands

M. Mahadev ... Yeh aapne kya kiya. ... Aur ... Yeh aap kya bol rahe hai...

And rama opens the other bottle of vodka ...

R. mantu... Tum bhi piyo... Tumhe bhi maza aa jayega !

M. Kya bol rahe hai aap! Nahi... Kabhi nahi ...

R. Accha ..Toh... Paani hi pee lo...

And he fills the glass with vodka , while mantu isnt looking at him...

M. Nahi peena mujhe ...

R. Arey thoda pee lo...

M. Nahi...

And rama forcefully made mantu drink that , despite the fact that mantu was repetedly saying no and trying to stop him but rama made him drink the full glass of vodka , even the last drop.

M. Bhai...yeh apne kya kiya? Pehli baar mei hi pura ja pura glass pila diya...!

R. Are koi nahi... Pehli baar mohabbat hui hai...yaar... Mujhe .. Pee le ... Tu bhi pee le... Aur peeni hai... Le...

M. Are nahi bhai... Pagal jo gaye ho kya...!!! Mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai... Ki aaj bahut lambi raat hone wali hai.

And saying this he holds his head, due to the helplessness.

After an hour...

Mantu was sitting on the sofa ( half his body was lying on the floor amd half up on the sofa ) and rama was sitting on the chair. .. ... Smiling like an and ... After all... Why shouldnt he smile ... After all ... He was dreaming with his rachita ji.

Ramas dream

Rachita came and grabbing ramas hands ...and put them on her waist... And then... Places her hands behind his neck...

R. I love you rachita ji

Rach. I love you too rama

And she kisses his cheek... And takes him in her embrace...

dream ends... Well ... Mantu ends it...

m. Bhai!!; bhai!!

R. I love you rachita ji... I really really love you rachita ji ... ( saying it and smiling at the same time )

Mantu wakes him up shaking his shoulders...

M. Bhai !! Bhai!!! ( rama wakes up completely with a jerk )

R. Yaar .. Tum mujhe bhai kyu bulate ho ?

M. ( hes drunk as well ... Unable to stand on his own...takes support of the rable ) youre my bhai... Bhai... Big brother ... Na?

R. Bhai... Yaar... Hum dono mein... Kich bhi chalta hai... Whaise ... Tu mera bhai... Hi sahi... I dont have family..you dont have family... Were family... Aur wo uma ..uma meri behen...

M. Haa... Main aapka bhai ...toh wo meri bhi behan...

R. Haan... Yaar. ... Main na... Aurnahi sah sakta...

M. Kya??

R. Pata nahi ! Tu bas mere saath chal..!

And he drangs mantu with him...

Precap . Another surprise .!

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Wow Ramtu in drunken state..
this is what we want in the show..
waiting for manya romance. .
update soon

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