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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: darkice7_12

sounds very interesting. eager to read more. update soon!


Thanks! Will do soon! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: JShukla

an interesting start... good... pls continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for all the encouragement guys!🤗It set me up on spirit to write and here I am with the first chapter!

Posting the first chapter below. Some of the dialogues are in English so if you want translations tell about it in either the comments or PM me! I'll PM the translated one to you for some of the dialogues are good in Hindi only and the others are in English.

As some asked about Sanjana being Sanam, yes she is Sanam.
Hope you like the first chapter!

Prologue : Barsat Ke Din Link

Song Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wofS5MTY3uo




Edited by Dil-E-Pagalpan - 10 years ago
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~Chapter 1~

Aag Ke Dariyan

Nearer and nearer! Kya Nasha! The smell, the touch, the taste, the moans, the sight! Can anyone have more pleasure than I'm having! Jaanleva ada phir bi in adaon keliye jaan nahi chodti jism se!

Saif! Tumhe ghar jaana hai!'

Jaana to hume hai par ye aap ke aankhiyon ko kaise mana kare hun?' saying so I kissed my Begum's hands! Nothing more can give pleasure than this! She was more intoxicating than the rains! If they chilled me she set me on fire! If they made my heart warm up her one look could burn me into ashes! If they showered their love I showered my love on her!

Saif kyu chahte ho tum hume?' Somewhere I wanted to know the answer if he liked me for what I was or for what power I had! I feared for the first time in these 2 years. I needed him and him not needing me pangs my heart! Breaks it in every way it can! He is my love! Only mine! He is my mine! I am his in the world of us! Chahat mein itni doobi hu ki chahanevale ko mera mani hu.

Aap, Sirf Aap! Ye inn aapke adaon pe, aap pe marta hu aur jeeta bi hun! Aap mein hone ke nashe mein chahat ko hi bhul chuka hun!

Aaiye chalke is hi aag mein aur jal jate hai!

He took my hand in his, and rested his other hand around my waist. The rains had their own beat, the moon watched us with pleasure as we swayed, the only ray of light in the darkness shimmered on us in the world of darkness, the song was playing in his mobile and our hearts swayed to their beats complimenting each other mingling with each other, lost in each other, the rain as our only witness we danced to our everlasting desires.

Aaa..Aaa..
Zarra Zarra Jale,
Zarra Zarra Phunke
As Lahe, As Lahe,
Rom-Rom Tape

***

Aapa stop! Why are you burning your hand?' Saying so he removed my hand from the candle where my hand was burning in fire and thoughts!

Saif to burn anybody you yourself need to be fire for it! Life is not that easy Saif and you know that? Everyone has abandoned us and I'll show what will happen when I abandon them!'

Till today I was a normal human being who did thefts for her living but what use? Tomorrow I will get a name, Shashi Kapoor and shiver people with my name alone!'

Shashi Kapoor ko to chuke deke phir chune ke layak nahi honge!'

Saif kal se mein is duniya ko raj karungi! Bhopal ki Mayor Noor Jahan Khanum!

Aapa apko kaun roksakta hai? Meri jo aapa hai!' he said and winked at me!

My brother, so naughty! Somewhere in the streets of Bhopal I found him when he was stumbling in life's struggles when he was just 10. No one was there to care for him, look after him, love him when I had none to love. He was my only reason to live, to take care of myself to take care of him. He filled my hopes that I was needed for someone. When I longed for a sibling he came like a brother sharing my pains, happiness everything. If only I had one brother! But he is more than any brother, he is my life! The only ray of happiness in my love. I can betray the whole world but not him. The only one for which my heart is still alive.

Are ha Saif. Mera vo purana phone karab huva hai us tek karke do! Sirf tum karsakte ho us pagal phone teek. Naya phone lena hai mujhe.'

'Jee Aapa' My Aapa was my only protector, my only apna, my only ray of light in my life till my Begum came in my life but my Aapa will be the only one till today who knows me, the Saif that I have lost long before! She is the one I love the most in this world, more than even myself!

A message rang as soon as my nauntaki bhai repaired the phone. Who's was it?

I played and could see the biggest lie of my life unfolding into the truth. Why me?

Woh Teer Si Chubhti Khoon Ki Bari
Jang Ka Ye Silsila Janm Se Jaari
Mere Jism Mein Jaise Rooh Hai Jaagi
Mujh Mein Hi Jaise Koi Ho Gaya Hai Baagi
Parinde Ko Udna Hai Sab Saadhe Nishana Hai

Ye Aag Ka Dariya Hai, Doob Ke Jaana
Ye Aag Ka Dariya Hai, Doob Ke Jaana Hai
Wooo..Wooo...Wooo..Wooo...

***

Wasn't the hotness I felt in me more that he lighted the wood? After hours of us searching for shelter and me drooling we had found a hut and lighted the wood for some warmth.

Things felt different, restless yet secure, unknown yet known. Why?

Say' he told me at once

What?'

About you' he said so obviously.

Like I really understand me and my confusing feelings' I murmured to myself and rolled my eyes.

Kya?'

Nothing'

You know what? Just leave it.'

Who was she? I mean why am I stuck up here with some random girl instead of enjoying in Bhopal with Arnav and Khushi who had just arrived there? Kyu kuch keechti hai jab jaane ko chahat hai?

Anyway leave it. Let me at least have a talk with my buddies. This girl seems to be stuck up in her own business. So boring she is!

Unbelievable!'

Wait, why did he even say that and imbalance my hormones that were already out of my control? But, there was something. Something that I was looking for years and looking, that feels, this feel...with him.

What?'

The network is not available.'

He climbed on the branches in hope of finding some availability, but he's falling down?

Suniye. Suniye' I said but he was in his own dreamland to hear me. Listen. How shall I tell?

Aahil!', I screamt not knowing how that name resided in my lips. He looked at me for a moment with a look...of love, of happiness, that of bliss lost for years and he fell...on me.

This voice was so familiar; those eyes were so fiery like hers, Sanam's. She called me this way with love and I find that love...in her. They had so much fire like her but how can she not be her, Sanam. What game of betrayal am I playing with myself? Only thing I know is I want to drown in these eyes of fire.She was empty and I wanted to fill her, because I could see Sanam in her even though she was not.

Sanam was my only ever true love. She was the only one with whom I felt good, I felt painless, I felt pure, I felt Aahil, I felt me. She brought colors in my life, showed me the real me, brought a reason to live for, to love for, to be me. She went away, the colours went away, the reasons went away, everything went away except for her love and her love still brings happiness in me and cherishes the memories we had, makes me live like me. She who made me love is today in some other girl who haunted me from my first sight or did I know her before?

Tere Roop Rang Mein Khan-Khan Hai
Aur Batiyan Mein Ras Manthan Hai
Tere Roop Rang Mein Khan-Khan Hai
Aur Batiyan Mein Ras Manthan Hai
Tu Bharam Hai Ya Ehsaas Mera
Masphir Honthon Ki Chhan Chhan Hai

Gehre-Gehre Mein Ho Tu Lakh Pehron Mein
Hoga Jo Ho, Tujhe Paana Hai


Ye Aag Ka Dariya Hai, Doob Ke Jaana Hai
Ye Aag Ka Dariya Hai, Doob Ke Jaana Hai

***

Kaisa aag ye jo nafrat ke dariyan ko hi jala de?

Kaisa aag ye jo khud ke dariyan ko hi thod de?

Kaisa aag ye jo ishq ke dariyan ko hi dhoka de?


Rang Se Tere Juda Hoke
Berang Hi Mujhko Rehna Hai
Rang Se Tere Juda Hoke
Berang Hi Mujhko Rehna Hai
Pal Pal Palchhin Man Waare
Kahe Ki Kuchh Na Kehna Hai

Tukdo Tukdo Mein Jee Main Raha
Ab Poora Na Ho Paunga Main Yahan
Zarre Ko Baazi Haan Toofan Se Lagaana Hai..


Ye Aag Ka Dariya Hai, Doob Ke Jaana Hai
Ye Aag Ka Dariya Hai, Doob Ke Jaana Hai.

***

Edited by Dil-E-Pagalpan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for reading! Hope you liked how the things came in! Do continue to read and I hope you are ok with the way the story is heading! Or please do tell me if you would find anything unpleasing. I'll see for sure if I could do something about it!

Do drop your valuable comments! Means a lot because that's what keeps me inspired to write! Appreciations and Criticisms are welcome!

Thank you all,

Rashmi!
Edited by Dil-E-Pagalpan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Next Chapter: To be continued (Continued, just hyperlinked that way.lol.)


Edited by Dil-E-Pagalpan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Amaizing.lv it.
Ab to inn stories se hi kaam chalana parega.
Thnks 4 pm.cntinu soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Amazing start
loved reading it
please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awesome dear. Loved how you have brought all the characters in this chapter.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update..
But i have one confusion if sanjana and sanam are same then why ahil is not recognizing her face or voice??
Contnue soon
thanx for pm

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