MANAN FF-LOVE HURTS TO HEAL part 8 on pg 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good Evening!!!!
Heyyy
I am VipriNM and a newbie on this forum😊
I am a BIG FAN of MANAN😃

So i thought of writing a story based on them
<font color="#ff0000">MANAN FF-LOVE HURTS TO HEAL</font>

Part 1

Early morning with the birds chirping their most romantic tone waking up beautiful girl whose been sleeping peacefully with her children. She gets up remember all happen with her but seeing her Nidhi and Manan sleeping peacefully she forget all happen with her.
Every morning taking out her dairy and start writing. It was her daily routine. But in her daily routine she always remembers the night of love they make that night.
Flashback-
Nandani covered herself in bed sheet and start moving towards washroom but pair of hands pull her back and she land on his chest
Manik- maat jao
Nandani- manik tum so rahe ho
Manik- pata nhi as if I m dreaming or its real
Nandani- my monster it real.
Manik moves closer and peck on her forehead.
Nandani- manik utho we will get late for college
She enters the washroom and get ready for college when she came back and sees his shirtless Manik again sleeping.
Nandani- manik get up tum phir se so gaye
Manik- sone do naa Nandani waise bhi kal raat tumne sone kahan diya
Nandani start blushing- utho manik warna late ho jaye gay
Manik- stop blushing Nandani otherwise I be not able to control myself
Nandani- tum utho I go and make some breakfast for u
Nandani goes downstairs and prepare breakfast and Manik get ready and come downstairs and sees her shining star in kitchen and hold her waist
Nandani- Manik choro mujhe warna we get late
Manik- sshh... please don't spoil it. He moves closer to her only 0.00000001 mm is left between them there was no space for air also and Nandani closes her eyes.
Meantime Nandani phone rang up and Manik get irritated with call. She goes and checks its Cabir.
Manik- Nandani yaar itne subay tumme kon call kar raha hai
Nandani- Manik its Cabir.
Manik hold her from behind while Nandani was talking to Cabir
Nandani- good morning Cabir. Kya hua itne subay subay sab kuch thik hai naa navya is ok na
Cabir- good morning itne saare sawal ruko ek ek kar bolta hu. Navya thik hai aur maine call is liye kiya yeh puchne ke liye kya Manik tumhare saath hai kya
Nandani- haan ruko main phone deti hu
Nandani gives phone to manik still in same postion
Manik- bol cabir kya hua
Cabir- saale apna phone dekh kitne sare phone kiye tujhe maine kahan tha kal raat
Manik- woh actually mera phone silent peh tha isliye nhi dekha aur main raat meh Nandani ke saath thaa
Cabir- oh! Toh saari raat besharmi ki night aur saath meh dim dim light. Acha waise aisa kya hot kare rahe thay
Manik- shut up cabir tujhe aur kuch nhi sujta kya acha bol kya hua
Cabir- are haan tumari night ke wajah se meh bul gaya who dhruv ke plan ka sab planning ho gayi hai. Tu kab tak mile ga
Manik- tuhjse meh college meh milta hu chal bye and he cut the call and turn to Nandani who was busy preparing breakfast and he come near her and hold her waist tightly
Manik- so let's continue where we left and he leans forward
Nandani- let it be
Nandani pushes him and peck on his cheek
Manik- I mean on lips not on cheek
Nandani- Manik we get late! We continue in evening saying this she leaves.
Flash back ends.
But she didn't imagine what happened to her life in next moment. Every day she writes one incident which happened with her and Manik. She goes to her secret room where there were the walls was covered with Manik pictures. One wall was covered with cards she writes for Manik everyday. One of the four walls was of her and Manik selfie. And the fourth wall was covered with pictures of FAB5, navya and her remember how her life was. But she always thinks why she remembers every single thing after 7 years.

So here i finishes the Part 1
Hope u all like it😊
Do comment
The next part will be based on reviews
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue soon dude the concept sounds interestin😊😆😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyyy!!!!
What a beautiful start Vipsss..👏
Loved it😃

Want to know what happened with Nandini...

Continue soon...waiting...😊
Edited by Desirable_Star - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds interesting...
Cont soon...
Pm me when u update...

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story and very much interesting to know what happened please update soon
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Superb concept yaar...
Nice start...
Plz do continue regularly...
And update soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2
She comes out of her secret room and goes to her room where she sees Nidhi and Manan are still sleeping. She opens the curtain.
Nandani- get up its 6.30am u get late for ur school
Manan- Maa pls let me sleep naa
Nidhi- maa mere ko bhi
Nandani- tum dono nhi uth rahe naa ruko mujhe apna style apnana parega
Manan and Nidhi gets up with a jerk- no maa hum uth gaye
Nandani smile on their innocence- good! Chalo get ready ur bus will come in 45 minutes and I also have to leave for hospital aur aaj tumari skol meh concert bhi hai na
Manan and Nidhi- haan maa today DRAZZLERS 5 going to rock the floor.
Dhrulya's Mansion
Dhruv- aliya utho sid ko skol bhi jana hai
Aliya- haan meh uth rahi hu tum jao aur sid ko utha do I go and make the breakfast kyu ki manik, cabir aur abhi aate ho gay Samarth aur kavya ke saath.
Dhruv goes to sid's room
Dhruv- get up sid u have to perform today u remember na ki today DRAZZLERS 5 should rock the floor
Sid in sleepy voice- dad I know today I have to perform but let me sleep for some time
Dhruv- no get up manik chachu will be here in some time with kavya and Samarth
Sid- ok dad
Dhruv- I m waiting downstairs come and I m taking ur bag and luggage
Manik reach Dhrulya's mansion with Samarth kavya cabir and abhi
Manik- Buddy jaldi karo yaar waise bhi mukti ne ghar par late kar diya tha
Dhruv- bas ek min ruk sid aata ho ga
Sid comes down and hug manik
Sid- gud morning chachu
Manik- gud morning sid. Chalo waise bhi late ho gaye ho
Sid- haan chalo chachu main manan aur Nidhi ko message kar du ki hum gar se nikal rahe hai
Manik- waise ek baat batao aaj tumhara performance hai naa
Kavya- haan and aapko pata hai DRAZZLERS 5 ka main lead singer I mean manan ne naa ek song ko hum se hi surprise rakha hai bas hume tune hi batayi hai aur waise bhi song toh ussne hi gana hai
Manik- aacha
Kavya- aur aapko pata hai Nidhi aur meh are best friends and hum ko pata hai ki DRAZZLERS 5 will rock the show
Manik- I wish esa hi ho
They reached skol here Nandani also reach skol with manan and Nidhi
Manik stop at the skol entrance as he always feels the Nandani's presence
Cabir- ab kya hua tujhe fir yahan ruk gaya
Dhruv- haan buddy use itne saal ho gaye hai gaye hue aur yeh sub kuch meri wajah se ho raha hai na I know yaar mujhe maaf kar de
Manik- sshhh... Yaar esa kuch bhi nhi hai
Flashback-
Manik- Nandani I m sorry this is the second time I m breaking my promise
Nandani-sshhh... Manik esa maat bolo yeh mujhe nhi jane de ga
Manik- toh maat jao naa
Nandani- manik tum ne kaha na tumne promise todha hai toh pls promise me ki mere jane ki wajah tum kisi ko nhi batao gay aur dhruv ko kabhi responsible nhi samajo gay
Manik hug her tightly- I promise
Nandani- choro mujhe jana hai
Flashback ends


Si here I completed chapter 2
pls leave ur precious comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice one 👏 waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow very nice update and does manik know he as kids and nandini lives there only. Is dhruv responsible for there break up. Update fast dear suspense is killing when will manan face off come
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loving the story :D !!
Update soon :)

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