MANAN FF-LOVE HURTS TO HEAL part 8 on pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haha Manan manik ka baap nikla :p
Nice update!!
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Part 5
Mananbir enter the house. Manik see the house it was dam beautiful.
Manik enter Nandani room and saw a big frame on the wall of Nandani Nidhi and manan pic. And he also saw a room name "SPACE memories" When he turnaround he saw a big poster hiding with curtain. He was about to take out the curtain when Nandani enter and saw him.
Nandani- manik tum kya kar rahe
Manik- kuch nhi curtain ke peeche dekh raha tha ki kya hai
Nandani goes and stand in from of curtain- manik kisi ke room meh puche bina u should not touch anything listen washroom udhar hai tum change kar lo. Kuch dino ke liye Rohit is out of station so u can take his clothes
Manik- rohit kon hai
Nandani- tum se matlab go and change DRAZZLER 3 is waiting for u downstairs
Manik- yaa
Manik goes inside for change and think- who the hell is rohit I need to find out asap.
Nandani tries to hold her tears and went downstairs with Manik
Cabir- chal ghar chalte hai wahan Navya wait kar rhi hai
Nandani- navya kaisi hai
Cabir- she is too good aacha ek baat puchu meh tumse
Nandani- haan pucho
Cabir- why did u left manik? Nandani janti ho tumahare us fusion concert ke bad ke bad jot um letter chor ke gyi thi ussne manik ko bilkul tod diya tha
Flashback-
After FC manik try once more to get back Nandani so he reach Nandani's green room where he found a letter from Nandani
Nandani's Letter
Manik meh janti thi ki tum ek baar mujhe rok ne aao gay par iska koi fyada nhi hai lekin meh aaj tum se bas ek bat hi bolu gi ki is baar aapna promise mat bulna Dhruv ko kabhi realize maat dilna pls aur meh tum se ek aakri baar kuch maang rhi hu pls Cabir se kehna ki woh Navya ka khayal rakhe aur mukti ko kehna ki Abhi jinda hai who Delhi ke hospital meh treatment le rha hai aur Aaliya se kehne ki who ek second chance dhruv ko de aur manik tum aapna khayal rakhna kisi se bhi rude behave mat karna aur ho sake toh nyonika mam ki galti ko bula kar unne maaf kar lena aur move on karna. Pls aur mere ghar mat aana kyo ki wahan koi nhi mile ga Chacha Chachi aur Rishab wahan se chale gaye hai.
Nandani
After reading manik broke down burst out crying and call cabir
Manik- Cabir woh chali gyi
Cabir- kon chali gyi
Manik- Nandani
Cabir- kyat u kahan hai jaldi bata
Manik- meh Nandani ke green room meh hu
Cabir- ruk meh aata hu
Cabir cut the call and reach Nandani green room along with FAB 3 and Navya
Cabir- Manik woh ese kese chali gyi
Mukti- haan Manik ese kya hua
Aaliya- manik kuch toh bolo
Manik was not able to speak so he pass the letter to cabir
Cabir reads the letter- woh chali gyi lekin she always think for everyone
Mukti- I regret to not have a friend like Nandani
Aaliya- right mukti
Flash back ends
Nandani- cabir pls who saari bate meh bulna chati hu toh abhi hum uske bare meh baat na kare toh aacha hai
Cabir- meh janta hu Nandani par jitna difficult tumhare liye tha utna hi difficult manik ke liye bhi tha
Nandani- cabir I promise mujhe todha time do meh tumhe sab bata du gi
Cabir- Nandani I wait. Aacha chalo meh chalta hu Navya ghar par wait kr rhi hai
Nandani- thik hai Cabir
Manik overhear the convo and he left with cabir and DRAZZLERS 3.
They reach Dhrulya home and find everyone there. Manik was smiling like an idiot after meeting Nandani and Dhruv notices it
Dhruv- kya baat manik itna smile kar rahe ho kuch khass hua kya
Mukti- aur nhi toh kya
Manik was about to speak when cabir interrupt
Cabir- kush toh ho ga hi nandani se jo mil ke aa rha
Aaliya- kya nandani kahan se mil gyi
Cabir- are who manan aur Nidhi ki mom hai aur pata hai Dr. ban gyi hai
Navya- kya baat hai toh ek kaam karte hai hum log Nandani ko ghar bula lete hai
Abhi- haan yeh idea aacha hai waise bhi baby doll ko dekhe hue kitne din ho gye hai
Cabir- chalo kuch plan karte hai kyu manik
Manik- haan guys aur mujhe yeh bhi pata karna hai ki uska husband kon hai
Cabir- aur nhi toh kya tujhe to pata karna hi ho ga
Mukti- toh kaam karte hai DRAZZLERS 5 ko invite karlete hai toh nandani bhi aa jai gi
Dhruv- toh usse call kon kare ga
Abhi- navya kar legi who uski baat bhi sun le gi kyu navya
Navya-haan Abhi ruko meh abhi kavya se no. leti hu
Navya goes and take no. from kavya
Murthy home
Nidhi manan chalo dinner kar lo
Nidhi- aaye maa
Manan- maa aapko pata hai aaj us manik ki wajah se ..
Nandani- sshhh ese nhi bolte who tum se bade hai
Manan- ok mom
After dinner Nidhi and manan go to sleep and then nandani phone start ringing. She goes and check her phone some unknown so she picks up
Nandani- hello... Dr. Nandani Murthy speaking who's that side
Navya- hi nandani hum navya bol rahe hai
Nandani- hi navya hw r u itne saalo ke baad meri yaad aa rhi hai
Navya- are tum humme bina bataye chale gayi
Abhi- aur nhi toh kya aur jaate jaate mujhe marwa gyi
Nandani- kya esa kya kiya maine abhi
Abhi- baby doll kya jarurat thi mukti ko mere bare meh batane ki
Nandani- ese nhi bolte nhi mukti is such a sweet girl and she deserve u
Mukti - hi nandani hw r u
Nandani- I m fine mukti
Mukti- abhi tum ruko abhi meh tumme baatati hu
Aaliya- hi nandani
Nandani- hi aaliya aur mukti abhi ko chor do
Mukti- nandani tum keh rhi ho isliye meh chor rhi hu warna iski toh meh
Nandani- are mukti leave it who sirf majak kar rha uski yeh purani aadat abhi tak nhi gyi
Cabir- aur nhi toh kya
Navya- are hummne usse call kiya tha mujhe toh baat kar ne do
Nandani- haan bolo navya
Navya- are yaar yeh kavya zid kar rhi hai ki DRAZZLERS 4 ko tret deni hai toh hum kahe rhe thay ki tum Nidhi aur manan hummare ghar aa jao
Nandani- guys meh Nidhi aur manan ko bej du gi par meh nhi aa sakti kyu ki yaar hospital kon dekhe ga
Abhi- baby doll pls aa jao naa agar ek din aa jao gi toh hospital band nhi ho ga
Nandani- but yaar patients
Cabir- are who ek din dursre dr. dek le gay pls
Mukti- haan nandani waise bhi bahut din ho gay mile hue
Aaliya- plss plss nandani
Nandani- aacha ek min ruko let me ask Dr. Rohit agar who mere patients dekh le gaa ek din toh
Listening rohit name manik get angry and move out
Cabir- thik hai
Nandani talk to rohit and he say yes
Nandani- guys ok done kab aana hai
Navya- kal subhay cabir aa jaye ga tumme pick karne
Nandani- are nhi meh aa jao gi u don't worry
Cabir- thik hai toh kal milte hai
Abhi- haan we are waiting for u
Mukti and Aaliya- yes we r waiting
Nandani- guys its already very late meh kal milti hu good night
FAB3 navya and abhi in unison- good night
And nandani cuts the call and sleep
Here dhrulya's mansion every one was happy to knoe about it ki nandani is coming
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Update soonish ...its going on good ..tht manan scene is like tht partner movie same haalat salman ki ti .e😆 continue it ...
Lots of love ...❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is interesting plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6

Next morning manik was super excited to meet nandani so he wake up at 5 am and get ready and reach at cabir's place at 6 am. He rang up the bell.
Cabir- navya dudwale (milk man)ko kaha karo thoda late aaye

Navya- dekho naa kon hai agar dudwala hai hai toh dud le kar gas par rak dena

Cabir- tum jao na in sleeping voice Navya throw a pillow on cabir and cabir fall down from bed AND HERE MANIK continually ranging the bell, cabir goes and open the door with a bowl

Cabir- rubbing his eyes- bhayia itni jaldi aapko kisne aane ko kaha hai aap na 9 baje aaya karo

Manik- saale dudwala nhi manik hu

Cabir- bhayia subhay ke 6 baje aacha majak kar lete ho

Manik hit playfully cabir- uth jaaa

Cabir- are haan yeh toh manik hai(while rubbing eyes) tu yahan itne subhay subhay

Manik- aare bul gaya humme dhruv ke ghar jana tha nandani aane wali hai

Cabir- are yaar subhay 6 baje thodi naa jaye gay

Navya- cabir kon aaya hai

Cabir- manik aaya hai uth jao

Navya- kya! Manik aacha aate hai

Manik to navya- good morning navya (with his millon dollor smile)

Navya-(shocked) good morning manik tum itni subhay

Manik- haan woh dhruv ghar jana hai naa

Navya- aacha... Cabir usse andar toh bulao

Cabir- are haan aao manik

Navya- tum log baato meh coffee lati hu

Manik- thik hai

After all this manik navya cabir and kavya left from their home and Dhrulya's house

Nandani's home

This morning was different for her even she don't know why she was feeling low

nandani pov- i don't know why always this happen to me? why when i try to move on i come back on the same place. aayiappa mujhe nhi pata ki manik har baar wapis kyu aa jata hai par pls usse yeh pata na chal paye about nidhi condition. nandani pov end she goes to room to wake manan and nidhi as they haveto leave for dhruv house

nandani- nidhi manan get up we have to go to dhruv uncle ghar

manan- maa let me sleep aur sid didn't told me about this

nandani- are haan tumhare soneke baad call kiya tha aur do u know what dhruv uncle is my college best friend

nidhi- oh wow maa

nandai- chalo get ready fast i go and make break fast nandani gets ready to go and call manan and nidhi

nandani- manan nidhi chalo hum late ho jaye gay

manan- maa chalo i m ready

nandani- jao apna guitar le ke aao meh car nikal ti hu nandani manan and nidhi drove and reach dhruvlya house and meet every one there and she happy to meet every body. here manik was just staring her and she was completely ignoring him.


Phewww here i end with part 6 have fun and leaveur precious comments
Edited by VipriNM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Wow nice update manik and cabir part was really good and please if possible update alternate days dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice part...
waiting for their patch up
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Very nice but chotu sa next time big wala plzzz...
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CONT SOON
WAITING😆
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PART 7 As nandani reach dhrulya house. navya goes and hug nandani navya- hi nandani it ne saalo meh tum bilkul nhi badli kahi se bhi nhi lagti ki do baacho ki maa ho nandani- are navya college se jane ke baad i was just busy preparing and look after all that i finally become dr. nandani murthy cabir- yaa we can see that but tell me one thing why r u carrying ur doctor's coat and stethscope humara bhi check up karna hai kya nandani- shut up cabir she hugs him too. and say- yaar kuch nhi if there will be some emergency so i have to rush to hospital so that's why abhi- oh ho baby doll aaj toh koi emergency aayi gi hi nhi kyu ki pateints ko bhi pata hai ki dr. nandani murthy aaj apne friends ke saath busy hai mukti aaliya and dhruv came from behind and stand behind nandani nandani- waise guys mukti aaliya aur ... she stops and think she should ask about dhruv or not ki woh mujhse abhi gussa ho ga kya cabir- aur .. kaun nandani nandani- aur... dhruv abhi- turn behind nandani turns behind and saw them standing silently and in a second they threw water on her and started laughind loud mukti aliya and dhruv - welcome nandani nandani coming back to sense bcz she was shocked with this kind of welcome nan- guys wat th hell yeh kya kiya yaar aaliya- tumhara welcome nand- yese kon welcome karta hai mukti- u know naa hum ese hi karte hai nand- dhruv tum bhi... dhruv- meh kabhi kabar hi yese prank kar ta hu so chill and he hug her she was suprised with this kind of welcome nandani- aacha thik hai par what i do now look my clothes mukti- are haan chalo aapne kapde dete hai chalo nan- haan chalo she leaves and go for change. she wear pink shorts and a white backless top and her hair was straight and open. she was looking so beautiful and when came down manik was dumstuck. manik- wow!!! cabir hears that cabir- saale muh band kar le warna makhi chali jayi gi manik coming back to the sense- haan woh bas ese hi cabir- meh janta hu nandani dikh gyi ho gi waise usne esa kya pehen liya jo tera muh kula ka kula reh gya meh bhi toh dekhu and he was drumstruck too. nandani came to cabir and manik was just starings her cabir- nandani itna change jeans kurti se sidha shorts and backless top how? nandani- cabir!!!! nidhi ne mukti ke closet meh dekh liya aur she was forcing me to wear this so i thought kyu naa change hi sahi cabir- u r looking awesome here manik was just staring her manik pov- she is looking so beautiful i wanna kiss her. i love u nandani i love so much bas ek baar tum se baat kar lu aur sab thik ho jaye ga . pov end navya mukti and aliya set the dining table. mukti - guys aa jao lunch ready hai nandani- mujhe bula liya hota i would help u aliya- are nandani har din to karti ho gi naa so aaj nhi karo gi toh kuch nhi ho gaa waise u r looking hot nandani- thanks aliya everyone came and join them and DRAZZLERS 5 take their lunch to sid room nandani- guys manan aur nidhi kahan hai abhi- baby doll dont wry woh sab sid ke room hai nandani- oh acha cabir- tum khana kaho naa nandani- thik hai abhi- acha baby doll ek baat pucho nan- haan pucho naa abhi- mera jiju kon hai nandani spit out the water she was drinking and start coughing nandani- jiju... seriously i m still single cabir dhruv aliya mukti- what!!!! nan- guys dont be shock abhi- toh manan aur nidhi asman se tupke hai kya cabir- kahin manik toh nhi manik glare cabir - shut up cabir esa kuch bhi nhi hai nandnai- guys calm down manan and nidhi mere bache nhi hai navya u remember i told u about my best friend Sujata navya- haan i remember nan- haan so she get married to a typical punjabi boy sameer malhotra so manan aur nidhi sujata ke bache hai un dono ke jane ke baad i dont want ki un dono ke saath bhi wahi ho jo mere saath hua they need mother's love so i adopted them cabir- but what abt father's love nan- fathers love i don't think ki unko jarurat hai meh hu unke liye she thinks-aur waise bhi unke father ko koi farak hi nhi parta so leave it cabir- chalo then u r single toh koi hai kya jisse pasand karti ho nan- cabir pura din surgeries and uske baad ghar fir todha time aapne aur rohit ke kaam ke aalawa time hi nhi milta toh kya karo meh aapne liye so i m happy naa single is good mukti- oye yeh rohit kon hai nan- rohit he is my best friend ussne meri bahut help ki hai aur hum dono ek saath aapna hospital bhi dekhte hai aur he is smart and hot too she winks to mukti Cabir- oh hot and smart nan- but esa kuch bhi nhi hai Meantime nandani phone start ringing and rohit was calling and here manik was fuming with anger seeing rohit calling nandani nan- guys excuse me rohit ka call hai aliya- haan haan kar baat nandani picks the call but by mistake her call get on speaker rohit- hey nandu i wanna talk u abt some of the sugeries u were taken nandni- haan that sharma one rohit- yes that one they wanna meet u so i m fixing ur appointment for tmrw i u r free nandani- yaa sure anything else rohit- tum ho kahan abhi nandnai- are i told u naa abt my college friend s unse milne aayi hu kyu koi emergency hai kya rohit- nhi aacha toh aaj manik se milne gyi ho nan- shut up rohit meh manik se nhi aapne college friends se milne aayi hu bas chalo i call u later rohit- chalo bye enjoy with manik meet u tmrw calls end and when she turn back she saw manik standing their staring her she look down and start leaving from their and manik hold her hand manik- nandani kyu mujhe chor ke chali gyi nan- manik leave my hand manik- kyu nandani ek baar bhi mujhe batane ka muka nhi diya nan- kitne muke do manik tummhe kitne har baar meh sochti thik koi nhi u r a spoil brat sudhar jao gay but nhi (she was shouting) manik- tum meri baat sunne bina hi chali gyi nan- manik mera haath choro manik pins her wall manik shouts at her - kyu nhi sunna chati kyu i m apolizing dam it nan- its not enough manik- don't shout nan- kyu u only have right to shout aur agr meh chup nhi ho gi toh kya manik leans to kiss her and she push him nan- manik what r u doing and she leaves from their and all this seen by manan manan to himself - i need to find out yeh manik meri mom ko kyu pareshaan kar rha hai and I promise I won't spare u if my mom gets any problem
Phew! finally a update enjoy reading and pls... leave ur precious comments

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