SAAJNAA....tere bina mera kya jeena! new poem!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Choda aapne hamara haath

Tab toota hamara saath

Marke bhi zinda bach gaye hum

Aapse ghumshuda ho gaye hum

Andhera din andheri raat

Kiya na kisi se baat

Phas gaye hum is narak mein

Aisa kyun paraya kar diya humein?

Saari duniya chod chale hum

Kasme-vade rishtey-naathey sab tod chale hum

Piya ke ghar jana hai

Unhein jhee bharke dekhna hai...par,

Thod diya aapne saare bhandhan

Ruk gayi saanse; hamari dhadkan

Ho gaye aap bewafaa jaisa

Kyun kiya aapne aisa

Khuli sachchai bhi kuch is tarah

Ek khatarnak raaz ki tarah

Jisko samjha humne piya

Woh toh tehra behrupiya

Saajna... aapko aazaad karenge hum

Chahe job hi ho jaye; aapki kasam

Jeena marna aapke hi saath

Le chale aap kahin bhi humein haaton haath

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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys!! pls read my new poem! and give ur genuine comments!!😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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missing poitu the most!!😭😭 agar woh hoti toh mera poem padke she would correct my errors!!!
poitu kahaan ho tum??😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg!!!shri such an amazing wonderful heart touching poem 😛 😭 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hanii_0

Omg!!!shri such an amazing wonderful heart touching poem 😛 😭 😭

thank u so much sahar!!!😃
is my grammar correct?? pls check karke bolo na!!!😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrividhya

missing poitu the most!!😭😭 agar woh hoti toh mera poem padke she would correct my errors!!!

poitu kahaan ho tum??😭

oh shri i also have this qsn where is poorva what happened to her
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Posted: 10 years ago
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shri u know that i dont know hindi well but after reading two to three times i got that... that 's really nice...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hari15

oh shri i also have this qsn where is poorva what happened to her

she is busy harii!!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hari15

shri u know that i dont know hindi well but after reading two to three times i got that... that 's really nice...

hari im really sorry!!! i thought of translating but im really bad at it!!! sorry!!!😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrividhya

she is busy harii!!!😊

oh fine shri but badly missing all her posts and stories...

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