SidNi OS 'Mere Ankhon Ka Aksar Pani Banti Hai Tu'

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mere rubaru tu hi tu tu hi tu

heyya SidNians...how are you all?? Well I am here with an OS and a bit about the title...well the song Mere Rubaru is driving me crazy and whenever I listen to it I feel as if I am in SidNi world and my most favorite line in this song is "Mere Ankhon Ka Aksar Pani Banti Hai Tu" so keeping it in my mind I wrote this OS...I don't know how it is so do bear with me please

A/N this story has to do nothing with JR show...I mean it's not any continuation neither any other character has some important role other than SidNi here and flashbacks are in italic...scroll down

MERE ANKHON KA AKSAR PANI BANTI HAI TU

He sat by window starring at nothing lost in past...tears were there in his eyes but were adamant to not to fall as like him it too were hoping that she is here only

His mobile rang he and hurriedly walked to the side table and picked it up expecting some good news, some clue about her but to his utter disappointment they still hadn't found her...he was upset...the tears which were adamant to not to fall made it's way through his eyes...his heart wrenched as some painful thoughts crossed his mind

He hit the wall with his hand hard only making it all worst as blood started to ooze out from his wound...his wound which was still very fresh but it didn't pained him a bit, the thing which pained him is her absence but he isn't angry at her for doing this to him...he is the one who did all this...because of him everything happened and now look where he stands

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He was driving the car carelessly 'Siddharth please drive properly...why are you acting crazily?' Asked his newly wedded wife roshni 'come on jaan..it's my way to tell you how much happy I am...I mean after all the problems we had because of your not so important crazy psycho lover we are finally together' he giggled 'I know sid that you are happy but please slow down and concentrate on your driving please' she requested feeling scared 'and what if I didn't? ' he asked smirking and leaned in to capture her lips

And that's when she noticed s truck ahead 'Siddharth watch out' she screamed but it was too late for him to control everything and they met with a miserable accident

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'Roshni' he screamed her name sitting on the floor even though every part of his body is in pain because of his wounds but he don't acknowledge any as his own pain is enough to swallow his life

He cried badly that day...it's been two weeks and they aren't able to find her...

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A day later from accident he was running in the same area where they met with an accident ignoring his bandages and blood searching for her but there was no sign of her...raj was with him trying to console him but was it possible?

'Sir I guess the body gof burned while accident only' told one of the constable to inspector..Siddharth looked up with rage 'don't you dare think that...my roshni is alive and I am going to find her at any cost...you guyz are of no use...get lost' he shouted angrily before fainting due to stress and pain

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He caressed there wedding picture and chuckled remembering there unique wedding night when in the mid of night she requested him to bring an ice cream for her...he was shocked and on asking the reason for sudden request she told him that she loves having ice cream when she is very happy and that day she was very very very very happy ... he laughed remembering the number of very's she used

And then one more memory made it's way

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Siddharth along with his parents came at roshni's place for SidNi rishta and because patel's and khurana's were family friend they all agreed for the wedding asap...it was all too much to believe after the problems they went through before because of roshni's class fellow Neil...

Roshni was reading some emotional novel when someone wiped her tears ...she stood up shocked 'sid..what are you doing here? ' 'idiot I am not some crazy that will roam around city at this hour but if I am standing here it means I came to see you' 'Siddharth we are getting married in two days and you are here to see me...seriously?...do you want mom to break this wedding? ' she asked making him choked out the breath he took

'No ways but you should care about it na..I knew it that you were going to waste your time on this not so useful novel and Will cry whole night because you bought it in front of me...and I couldn't let my beautiful bride cry just two days before my wedding so I am here' he said proudly while she blushed unable to share her feelings on the amount of love she felt for him that moment...she closed the novle and put it aside 'lets sleep' she announced 'haww besharam ladki...shaadi se pehle hi' he said pretending to be shocked while she smacked him hard

Stop being Mr.Sharmila...I meant help me in sleeping and then you can leave once I fell asleep' she explained 'in short I have to do babysitting?' He asked giggling 'yes any problem?' She asked back crossing her hand across her chest..he innocently nodded a no and made her lie on bed sitting beside her...she hugged his legs as she placed her head on his lap... he kept talking about all useless stuffs and in no time she fell asleep only because of him being with here...later, he made her lie properly pecked her lips and left in the same way he came...balcony!!!!

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'I miss you roshni...please come back to me soon' he cried out as sleep engulfed him with her picture in his hand

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He got ready for the day...another day without her...his worst punishment...he bandaged his hand hard but stopped doing further not wanting roshni to find him in pain because he knew it will hurt roshni and what hurts her hurts him too

But where is roshni? His mind asked

Here in me... his heart replied

No I want her back to me... his mind argued

And I feel it will happen very soon.. heart replied and may be with the hope and honesty it had mind too agreed to wait patiently

As he made his way out to his car planning to check hospitals yet again his eyes landed on a pale figure walking towards the entrance of his house... he stood rotted at his spot...it was roshni coming to him, she had tears in her eyes which brought tears in his eyes too

The happiness he felt that moment made him feel like dying there with happiness but he couldn't scared that she would go away again

And in no time she was standing in fornt of him...he was lost of word while she too weeped silently...she wiped his tears with her thumb and that brought him back to reality revealing to him that this all is not a dream...he instantly pulled her in a hug crying his heart out

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As everyone from both house met roshni she told them how she landed in some village and was unconscious for few days...people there were so helpful and they only help her to come here...

Soon all left and they were alone in the room ...he went and sat beside her eyeing the wound at her arm...leaning in he kissed thst part of her arm while she closed her eyes taking in the beautiful medicine for her pain

He then kissed all over her face mumbling a sorry for doing what he did... 'I am sorry..I M sorry' he cried 'it's okay Siddharth..please don't cry I can't just see you in tears...I love you and whatever happen happened...we are together and that's all we have to feel blessed about' she said trying to lessen his guilt while he just nodded

They hugged each other crying but this time with tears of happiness because even after facing death from so close there are with each other together...and they promised to be together forever

Mere Ankhon Ka Aksar Pani Banti Hai Tu
Har Pal Tujhe Yad Karo
Khud Mai Tujhko Dhondo

Mere Rubaru, Tu hu tu, Tu hi tu
Mere Rubaru, Tu hi tu
Mere Rubaru, Tu hu tu, Tu hi tu
Mere Rubaru, Tu hi tu

~The End~

Hope it was worth reading...do share your views and ignore my mistakes...hit like if you like and if not then criticism is welcome😳

Thanks
-aroo
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Harmony10 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aroo I was waiting for someone to write a story with this amaizing song and u did it so beautifully. It was such an emotional update but with a happy ending! Felt bad for Sid and how guilty he was for loosing his Roshni 😭 loved the night scene and Sid's naughty dialogue! SidNi flashback scene and last scene was superb 👏 loved it 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice emotional one aroo.. u write the emotions of both sidni so well.. 👏 thank god it had a happy ending! 😆 loved the flashbacks.. really bitter sweet emotional update... 😳 i was actually writing a new story too... where i planned an accident scenario too.. 😛 abh what to do? lol i need to think something else!! 😆

p.s u still havent unressed in one of my stories as far as i remember.. donno which one though 😛
just checked.. in SOL
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowowoowoww...mera rubaru...everything perfect... It was such a emotional update ...beautiful. One...this made me remember d Jr episode...WHR sid..was asking sorrie...for making her work...awww...loved it to d core...keep rocking...nd giving us ..fabulous updates... Waiiiting for more wonderful fabulous works on sidni...
Keep smiling...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abinaya12

Wowowoowoww...mera rubaru...everything perfect... It was such a emotional update ...beautiful. One...this made me remember d Jr episode...WHR sid..was asking sorrie...for making her work...awww...loved it to d core...keep rocking...nd giving us ..fabulous updates... Waiiiting for more wonderful fabulous works on sidni...

Keep smiling...😊


Thank you so much abinaya...I am really very glad that you liked it😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: heemasomani

Fantastic os

emotional one


Thanks😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: skinnypal

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nice emotional one aroo.. u write the emotions of both sidni so well.. 👏 thank god it had a happy ending! 😆 loved the flashbacks.. really bitter sweet emotional update... 😳 i was actually writing a new story too... where i planned an accident scenario too.. 😛 abh what to do? lol i need to think something else!! 😆

p.s u still havent unressed in one of my stories as far as i remember.. donno which one though 😛
just checked.. in SOL


Thank you pal...I am really glad you liked it😊 thank u😃
Awww ab kia karein? ara u can write it na still I m damn sure u hadn't planned it all same na😉

P.s sorry sorry sorry bhol gayeI will do asap nw...promise pakka wala😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover


Thank you pal...I am really glad you liked it😊 thank u😃
Awww ab kia karein? ara u can write it na still I m damn sure u hadn't planned it all same na😉

P.s sorry sorry sorry bhol gayeI will do asap nw...promise pakka wala😃


Nope it is different 😃 thankfully 😆

Okay Arooo.. will be waiting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: skinnypal


Nope it is different 😃 thankfully 😆

Okay Arooo.. will be waiting 😊


Hehe then update soonish😊😃

Done😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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well written aroo loved it sid's emotions and the fb scenes👏

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