Behne De Special Celebrations

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Hello crazy maaneetians,

We are again here with a new thread to celebrate the next song on maaneet... Behne De... The song where we got to see the first hug on our dear couple... The song where we got to see Geet dancing in the rain and Maan drooling on her... The song sequence which made all maaneetians to drool on their fav jodi drenching in rain...

Behne de anniversary was in July 14... But as we had already informed, from now on song specials will be celebrated not on
actual dates due to many inconveniences..

Each song on our maaneet are special to us... This is our 3rd song special thread... We both have thought about these
threads, to make our beloved forum more active... and we are happy that many have come forward in participating ... the
participation has just increased with each threads... But we all should now try to encourage and thank these participants...

The next song sequence on maaneet is "teri deewani"... the date of thread will be conveyed soon...

but for now let us celebrate the downpour with our maaneet...




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Muse by Rakhi (Krishna_Sourav) Pg 1
Deewana sa ek ladka by indu (-indu-)
Pg 1

Mere Mehboob by Shivi (libros) Pg 2
Pure Love by Simran (Preeti_Maaneet) Pg 2
Ice and Fire by sidlik (sidlik) Pg 2
Behne de Mujhe Behne de by Sangeetha (ghsp2fan) Pg 2

Sapne bhi sach hothe hain by Rashmi (Rashmi...) Pg 3
Pyaar mein takraar by Priyanka (priya_21)Pg 3
Rain kiss by Neeju (Neeju) Pg 3
A whisper of love Pg 3

Ho Gaya Hai Tumse To Pyar Sajna by Lakshmi (-lakshmi-) Pg 4
Deewana Mujh Sa Nahin by Valli (valli30) Pg 4
Bounded by destiny by Sangeetha (Sanghita0000) Pg 4

Her First Love by Anny (Anny90) Pg 64

Barsaat ki raat by idunno (idunno) Pg 75, Pg 78





Hira (KINGKHANFAN) Pg 1
Rashmi (Rashmi...) Pg 1
Ritu (Zindagidilse) Pg 1

Sweta (crazy_sweta) Pg 2
Jiya (JIYAMG) Pg 2
Priya (priya111111) Pg 2
Vandana (vandy28) Pg 2
Sangeetha (ghsp2fan) Pg 2
Vrinda (Vrinda22) Pg 2

Sanjh (Snow_angel) Pg 3
Anju (AnjuMaanManiac) Pg 3
Mouli (kkmouli) Pg 3

Suhaana (suhaaana) Pg 3

Anu (maaneetmishtikh) Pg 4
Lakshmi (-lakshmi-) Pg 4
Sona (shonamsk) Pg 4
Rakhi (Krishna_Sourav) Pg 4
Uma (uluvmg) Pg 4






Priya Pg 1
Anu Pg1
Muskaan Malik Pg 1

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OS by Rakhi (Krishna_Sourav)

Muse

Are aankh se boond gira koi Chingari ka tukda jala koi Umeed ko aag laga zara Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara

Maan n Geet two friends who always stood by each other...where Maaneet both belong from country's wealthiest family...

Maan is excellent student where geet is mediocre along with her another problem is hearing, she can't hear n can't talk also properly, she stammers lots...she has low feelings towards her this disability but her friend maan n her best friend yash n Vikram (who is younger brother of maan) always cheer her mood...

Geet draw brilliantly n maan also...but geet paint for her wish her desire n maan paint for money n he become professional painter n famous one...

Geet's family send proposal of geet's wedding for maan family got angry insult n reject it by saying he will never marry anyone...but her n his family think n assume..

Geet's mom hugged her n cried...She never said anything just cried..she can't go against her family nor she able to support her daughter fully...till this age few household make woman like this..they don't have their voice...

Geet cried n try to support her mother when her father hit her n curse her...

Geet try to avoid Maan who felt restless but he drowns himself into painting ...

Maan went out for his work to abroad n not aware of this fully...

After 1yr; Geet met him but like friend...he want to share but then he got to know Geet is not liking his painting sply the nude one..but it's his part of study..n profession...

Geet didn't say but she is hurt cause of it...Geet spoke to him politely yet try to maintain distance...but inside the world where no one enter there she worship...

She makes sketches n all related to maan...she dedicated her art to her muse...her maan but hide it...

Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara
Ghan itna baras ke galne lagoon
Mein paani ke upar tarne lagoon

There Maan himself drown in own misery...he reject every marriage proposal ...he continues his aboard tour n geet assume again those bad painting...she shut herself...but then ...how could she avoid him...

She finally bows down infront of his friendship...they met share spend time like friend yet there is something missing or hiding...

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Neither Geet stop her painting related to Maan n those painting sketches all went behind locked door...

Maan will draw her n give her new look at his imagination but never showed same with geet...

Nor Maan stop her abroad tour now he get tagging Casanova...changing girls like cloths...but their friendship remain unaffected...though maan is not aware of those painting n geet's thinking about him as muse nor Geet is aware behind those Casanova tagged or abroad tour...

Geet will share her other paintings n wants his opinion where maan will give his inputs to make her more better...He will search good university n want to admit her but she want to continue her study about art her him...n finally he agreed...

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

He agreed n helped her for further study , she complete her master when geet demand for her PhD under him..Maan want to deny as maan got some good proposal for painting exhibition...there he was in dilemma but finally geet's demand won n maan reject...

N after 6 months maan went to aboard n for some unknown reason...Geet want to know but maan divert her mind with some task...

Their friendship turn stronger...when geet can't demand or show any other wishes to anyone ,she showed it to maan who always fulfilled her wishes when geet give her 200% for maan n make him proud...Now maan also wants her opinion for his paintings though he always keen to know her feelings opinions...

Shart lagi hai mar jaane ki
Jeena hai toh pyaar mein
Dil kahin bhi ho mera
Jaan rakhi hai yaar mein
Behja behja hai saagar ka kehna
Behja behja hai nadiyaan ko behna

Soon , maan got to know that his younger brother fall for geet , Vikram fall for geet n propose her who reject the proposal...by saying she is not for her n he don't deserve her...

There maan notice Vikram's changing behavior, his drug addiction ...He wants to help but don't know how as he can't give pressure to geet...

There in Biggest Exhibition in India...He first time exhibit his painting about geet n declare her as his muse..All look shocked n stunt when geet felt embarrassed but maan's mom took it wrong way or right way...

Patte se tapakti boond ki awaaz sunai di thi
Nadiyaan mein tapak aur gum ho ja
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh

She looks depth of this n got to know about Maan Geet n their unconditional love under the pretext of Muse...she spend money behind them , hired investigators n know about geet's secret admiring which turning crazy love ..if maan said anything she will do...she is possessive. she almost make him go less outside of country...his paintings also decided by her..

There maan is not less, he is happily let her command n control his life...Now days she decide his cloths , which party he should attend...he left drinking even occasionally n smoking also ..she everyday cook for him..They spend most time at maan's farm house..Maan bought farm house lands for her...though geet is unaware of it..

Geet n maan both dedicated their prize award to each other..press confuse they felt something going on but maan's past GF doesn't resembles with geet so...

But Maan's mom got it ...she don't want it...Maan's mom got hold of those pics sketches geet made for maan...n maan's sketches

Maan's mom got that maaneet r muse for each other though both unaware it..Maans mom smiles n think to do the need full...

Maan's mom met geet n asked apologies...she give her few work for their office...Geet at first confuse n more shock but accept it...Maans mom asked her to not share this with maan as he will get nice surprise...

Maan's mom took geet under her...where geet give less time maan cause of maan surprise...

Maan got the surprise n praise geet who blushed like newly bride when maan felt like hold her...love her pamper her...more...

Patte se tapakti boond ki awaaz sunai di thi
Nadiyaan mein tapak aur gum ho ja
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh

One day Maan's mom met geet n said here is ur gift...Geet's eyes turn wide...huge two grand exhibition held by Khurana Enterprise...

She look shocked but maan's mom hugged her...they did exhibit Geet's few paintings..Geet got more exposed when one day geet met maan's mom n expressed her gratitude for her...

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

When geet want to give her something n maan's mom want nothing except one painting of maan's face..Geet look startled n said she don't sketch faces when maan's mom show her own sketches n make geet shock...she look here n there n maan's mom confront her n said so u r behind him..u want his money..

Geet look shock n deny when maan's mom want to know then y she is hiding this pics...n finally geet confessed her love for him...by signal about it...

Maan's mom confront her scold her humiliate her...she said she is just muse of maan's nothing more than it...he can use her physically but not marry an orphan n give her the status she don't deserve...n more did he ever showed anything about love or feelings...

Geet nodded no when maan's mom said then forget n let him live his life...he is feeling suffocated. He left his all work at abroad...she is so selfish n hurting his career so she can gain more by using him...she is loving him but hurting his career n using him..Geet nodded no when maan's mom said then let him free ...

Geet look devastated with all allegations but agreed...

But when geet asked maan to continue his tour n professional commitments but maan avoid by saying he want to help her n don't want to go...

Geet notice he is not moving when finally she decided something...

Couple of months...later;

Geet think about vikram's proposal n at first ; she don't want to accept but then accept it...Though maan's family has problem with it but agreed n geet family felt gratitude as they thought cause of geet's disability , she will never able to marry...

Maan's mother openly showed her disagreement but maan for vikram n geet make them accept it... maan think may be geet fall for vikram n vikram's love for geet...he give his consent...

During engagement, geet expressed her gratitude when maan tease her for becoming his bhabi...

She smiles sadly but she looks nervous when maan said mishty kyuon itna nervous ho rehe ho, sab ko tum jante ho acche se...n about mom's naraaj gee , u will erase it with ur love n affection...Mishty don't worry n don't say thanks u r my friend n for friend I can do anything..ur happiness, Vikram's happiness matter most for me...

Geet didn't say anything but smiles ...then geet said whenever he will need her she will be help when maan said u r saying this out of gratitudewhen geet giggle n nodded no n said nope I am not saying this out of gratitude...its cause of my friend n my love for u...

Maan smiles...Vikram n Geet engaged though Geet look little unsettled , she is smiling but its not reaching her eyes... after 2 months there wedding date fixed..Vikram look happy... n over excited...

They want something but Destiny wants something else.

Maaneet went for join exhibition then a restaurant opening .they enjoyed n forget for time being others things..they went to dhaba n have light dinner as they didn't have it in Restaurant ...they ate lassi n have competition then they dance is rain n played there n at the end they ended up by making love...n next day they regret it..They want to erase it yet its their beautiful divine moments...

Mera pal pal ang ang bhar diya
Tune jaan pe junoon saa kar diya
Mera hai kya jo mein haar du
Jaan teri hai tujh pe vaar du
Doob gaye jo suna hai saare
Tere dere aatey hai
Dil ko chulu mein bechare
Doobkiyan ghante khaate hain

They don't feel it bad or illicit yet they r shocked ...They try avoid it felt embarrassed..They differently dream about this but never thought when they r parting they will be ...Together by like this...

Beh ja behja chal todh kinaare ko
Behja behja dhar le majhdhaare ko

Chingari udha ke raakh se
Ek boond gira ke aankh se
Chalne ka ishaara kar gaya

Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Khurana n Handa both families r busy with wedding preparation but the wedding day...Vikram didn't came for wedding...His car went out for wedding venue but from mid way its turn n ..

Both family face humiliations n more Geet felt n faced humiliation n insult for all corner...everyone mock taunt her...her father slapped his own forehead n want her dead aise adha adhure lerki aake uske ghar mein sirf apsagun hua...

Geet cried n ran to go out n kill herself...when maan stopped her n saidwhat u r doing..Geet shook her head forcefully...but maan hold her tightly...n said u r not at fault but geet shook n indicate she is.

Maan keep saying things when geet hugged him n cried her silent tears pricked his heard like needles ... suddenly guest start saying something...when Maan's mom said maan left her...already I informed u this girl is doom n for her my son went away..I don't want her curse shadow will fallupon u...I was against this wedding all along, she used everyone always.

Maan :-mom pls but She didn't listen n almost push geet when maan hold her n said Basss...mom, y u r blaming her when ur son at fault, he propose he asked for wedding date he engaged with her then ran away..What kind of responsibility he has for her...

Maan's mother:-wow iss lerki ke liye tum aab mujhe suna rehe hoo...iye lerki...tune kuch kya mere bte ko , pehele maan ke piche now vikram ko...kisi ko nehi chorti tu...

Maan n Geet look shock when geet nodded no but maan's mom saidbahut koshish ke baad tujhe remove kya maan ke zindegi se but tu phir aagayi iye tere hi plan tha vikram je zariye maan ko phashana...

Maan:- what r u saying...when Maan's mom said what she has done...Geet look horrified when maan look at her with disgust...

That time Vikram n yash came..all look shock when vikram raised his hand n said bro m sorry..

Before maan or anyone can say anything , Yash :- this is all drama need to do to open some faces...

Vikram n Yash narrated everything about what maan's mother has done...then reveal its not end here..then went to geet's father n said he is another culprit n said he try to killed geet many times. he beat her...as cause she is daughter...he didn't stop but he poisoned his own daughters food he give her electric shock n result geet don't hear n stammer...

Geet got shock after shock when maan said what...but hold geet tightly...when virkam said he killed geet's nanny as she know about it ..Geet saved by Brij n rano aunty they loved her but not others...n they want her to die but rano's love save her where brij died to save her...

Vikram :- bro n geet m sorry but...I fall for her , her beauty innocence but then when she reject I can't take it n want to destroy myself but then got to know y she reject me..

Maan look curious at vikram then at geet who shaking her head when Vikram said bro...come see this n they slide show the sketches of maan , him related paintings ...geet's worship dedication n then said she loved u as her muse her God , her lover, her mentor, her guide when geet nodded no n maan look confuse but

Vikram showed maan few letters diaries n said sorry geet I don't want to invade ur personal space but I had to ...I can't see u sacrificing for wrong reason when he loves u..I love u but more as friend ..I am not sacrificing but I have witnessed the love between u..I realized n then I also got my love...

Maan look shock n stunt n geet also.

But yash said u called her muse but don't let her know about ur ventures...Geet , he went to abroad not for nude studies or paintings...

Maaneet look embarrassed when yash said he went there to study then exhibit ur paintings all face sketches bridal , n different poses...he worship u...u don't know but geet u r famous there by ur face then ur drawing went out side but as usual u give him the rights to see the outside ventures of urs n u never get to know it..

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

All sighed when maaneet both embarrassed n yash n vikram said kaise iye pyaar hain tum dono ka...pyaar karte ho jatate nehi ho.kyuon chupate gaaye...only MUSE of each other bann ke rehe gayee...iye sacrifice kya karna chah rehe the aap dono..

Both look embarrassed then yash said ur families want to hurt u, destroy u yet u let them direct or indirect..

Both maaneet felt embarrassed hurt when geet's father try to say but police came n said thanks mr yash for those prove...

Yash nodded n said mr handa u killed brij n u destroyed geet's life ...u killed her parents n it's ur punishment if I want I would have kill u...but...

Maan look at them then said to police...I want to meet ur ACP n Commissioner ...mr handa what u have done to my geet is sin ...n I will not let u go easily...

Rano look devastated n said I never know this u...but..Mr handa try to attack her when police took them..

Dadi ma who was in Paris for some business reason came n said I came here after informed by Yash n I wish maan geet u both need to talk...

They nodded when geet look startled n about fall as she is taking too much ...but maan scoop her in his arms n both went inside the mansion...

Maaneet talked n clear their mus assumption they laughed n felt shy yet embarrassed how they dedicated n make each other muse but love each other though has not guts or felt too shy to express then mus ..

Geet:-I thouuught u dooon't looove me when maan said I thought same...

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Geet :- I thought I was uuurrr MUSE onlllyyy

Maan:-I thought same

Maan :-I thought we r friends

Geet :-I thought sameee.

Maan:-I was thinking u fall for vikram

Geet :-I dddidn't...

Maan:-I want to see u happy

Geet :-I want aaalso waaant saaameee..

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Maan Geet look when maan said y u didn't say me about ur feelings..Geet make face n said iisss iiit saaame aaapply fffor u also...

They sighed then look at each other n maan said what is bygone is bygone...

Now let's move for future ..when geet raised her eye brows cutely n saidwhat is that...

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Maan sheepishly smiles then bend n said will u marry me?

Geet look shock when maan sat n said I never did nude study I draw from my mind...n that was not u also neither anyone..yes I went abroad but to study hard...Name fame money came n along with woman who r behind my name, fame n money , they know bad or good any how my name if tagged with them then...I never bother ..But the moment's felts its hurting u I left it n stopped them for that..I want to see u happy I got reason when u asked me for PHD but scared that may be it will give our relationship something...I will fall for u more but when m ur mentor but love can't be stop like this..n when I let u go , its come back to me..

Chingari udha ke raakh se
Ek boond gira ke aankh se
Chalne ka ishaara kar gaya

Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Geet pout & said wwwithout aaannny eeefffort u gooot it..

Maan bend his head when geet hold him n said maan n maan smiles n saidbolo tumhe jeetne ke liye kya kya karna hoga..

Geet:-nothinggg just huuumesha mere sath rehena kabhi iss samaj aur uski baton ko maat lana..kabhi mjhe ekele nehi chorna kabhi humare beech kuch aur laana.sirrrf hum dono..

Maan nodded n hugged her tightly ..they got another date as Dadi ma make ready the priest n that another auspicious day maaneet get married...

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Maan & Geet become Maaneet...they were Muse , inspiration for each other but become soulmate for each other..


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Deewana sa Ek Ladka

(Note - this is a continuation of the OS- MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE of HUM-TUM celebration thread...)

Maan entered his office in a cheerful mood.. he just came back from an official tour and he didn't even went to his home... where his family is waiting... but he came office just to get a glimpse of her... its been only a week he saw her... but he felt like a few years... he smiled at himself... and thought... what have you done to me Geet... see how THE MSK became a romeo...



He walked through the corridors.. nodding his head to the staff who greeted him... he may be walking for others... but he knew he wanted to run... but its his office and he didn't want them to get any clue what he is doing or going through...



He reached his cabin... and said no disturbance to the person outside... the person hanged a card on the door handle... and now nobody will dare to knock his door...



Maan reached for the remote which is placed on his table and turned it on... and opened the blinds... and saw her... she is as usual like a dew drop.. like a fresh flower... and his racing heart slowed its pace and came to the normal speed... he placed his hand on his heart ... easy baby... she will have to come to you one day...till then have some patience... if you again does this what will people think of me... be patient as that day is not far...


Maan sat on his chair and turned to her direction... He was seeing how she is doing her work... no... jhoot... his conscience said... he is drooling on her... she wore a white colour dress today and she looked no less than a Pari ... but he liked colours on her... she looks more beautiful in colours... coz every colour she wears compliments her... she saw at his direction... as she is talking to Adi... Adi might be saying about his arrival... He could see a sparkle in her eyes... her cheeks turned pinkish... but in no time her face paled... he hated that sadness on her face... and she turned her face and went away from there...



He hated it when she is not in front of his eyes... He picked up his phone and called Adi... and Geet to his cabin...



Adi came with Geet and knocked... Maan composed... closed the blinds as no one know that he can see through the glass... he always kept the blinds closed... and said.. Come in...



Adi and Geet - Good morning sir...



Maan - Good morning... he said looking into a file... but didn't say anything after that...



Adi - sir... app... itni jaldi... ghar nahi gaye... Adi is one of the persons who is close to Maan... so he has the liberty to talk other than office matters also...



Maan - Ghar jaake ky karta adi... mera dil toh yaha hai...



Adi - Sir...


Maan got up and came to the side of the table... He stood there and kept his hand on the table... no... on geet's dupatta... only Geet noticed... but Adi was seeing Maan and he missed it...



Maan - Office adi... one week se nahi tha... tum toh jaante ho mujhe office se aur tum sab se kitna pyaar hain ... he said that part looking at geet and then turned at adi and continued... I was missing office more... isliye yaha aagaya...




Adi laughed his typical laugh... heh...heh... heh... Geet was silently trying to pull her dupatta not making it obvious... but Maan was not leaving ...He said... sit down both of you... and he himself settled in the table with one leg on the ground... and started talking to Adi... as they are seated...



Maan - I think you know what I want..



Geet looked at him... he now a days is talking in dual meaning dialogs... she gulped and aksed... what sir...



Maan knew her very well by now... but he didn't answer... but instead of Maan, Adi answered... arrey geet... bhul gayi... maan sir ko sab on paper chahiye... abhi hum jo bhi baat karenge... tum woh sab likh lena... aur sir ko dikhadena...




Geet nodded and started to write what ever they are discussing... in between... Maan without knowing( or say knowingly) moved his leg and it touched Geet who was sitting near him... first he didn't notice... but after a couple of times... he noticed... every time he touched her.. there was a slight shiver in her... he didn't know whether it is becoz of inconvenience or he is also having the same effect on her which she has on him... but he didn't stop that... the touch was very small... only they know... no one else can see it...




Some time later when they are finished... Maan asked Adi to leave ... Geet is left behind... as Maan stopped her...




Maan is still sitting in the same position and seeing a file... but didn't say anything...




Geet waited for a few minutes... but he didn't tell her anything... she thought to leave...she started getting up... but Maan said... baithi raho Geet...




He finished the file and gave it back... everything is fine... get it typed and give me and dad a copy of this...




Geet nodded... sir.. main jaaoon...




Maan - Geet tum ab meri secretary bhi ho... so mera saara kaam tumhe hi karna hain... pata haina...




geet replied haa sir...




maan - toh ek achi gf ki tarah mera khayal rakho...



geet - sir... she thought... yeh main kya sunn rahi hoon..




Maan - Kyun.. kuch galat kaha maine ... ek achi P.A ki tarah mera khayal rakho... meri coffee lao thodi der mein... aur uske baad mere saamne baithna...




geet - sir...




Maan - arrey mujhe poora tih karne do.. har baar sir sir... karti rehti ho...



geet - ji




Maan - Good... tum mere saamne baitho... aur main tumhe dekhta rahunga... he thought... aur dictation lo...




geet - ji sir...




Maan - waise Geet.. tumne bataya nahi... tumhe mere paas kaam karke kaisa lagraha hai...




Geet - sir... she thought... did she hear paas...




Maan - kyun... mere saath kaam karna acha nahi lagraha hai tumhe...




Geet thought... tumhe kuch hogaya hai... maan sir ne saath kaha aur tumhe paas sunayi diya... geet... pagal mat bano... woh THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA hai... aur tum.. geet handa... aur unke saamne tum kuch bhi nahi ho... unme aur tum mein zameen aur asmaan ka farkh hai she came out of her revive when maan cleared his throat...she replied... no... nahi .. sir...





Maan - kya... you don't like working with me... kya geet tumne mera dil tod diya💔🥺... agar sach nahi toh jhoot hi boldeti... mere liya... he made a sad face...




Geet is made Maan's secretary on a temporary basis ... as the secretary of Yash Khurana has resigned and Maan with a big heart❤️ made his secretary.. Mrs. Kathe D'souza his fathers secretary... and made Geet his secretary temporarily for his benefit... so that he can spend time with her and maker fall for him...




Geet - no.. no sir.. aisi baat nahi hai... aap... aap ache hain...




Maan smiled at her... she is far better now... interacting with him... he remembered how she was on that night where he asked ... Mujhse dosti karoge...




The expression on her face was unforgettable... she was shocked .. confused... afraid... everything but happiness... it took him almost 15 days to convince her... and in no time he fell for her...




Maan - toh main sirf acha hoon...




geet - nahi.. nahi... aap bohut ache hain... she said in the same way... as the other night...




Maan smiled... geet aaj hame bahar jana hai... shaam ko... dinner pe... aaogi mere saath... date pe...




Geet - sir... bahar... dinner... date... she was shocked and worried...




Maan laughed out loud... Geet... look at your face... God... how ... how... he couldn't find the correct word...





Maan - I was joking geet... sham ko hamari meeting hain... bhul gayi... mehras ke saath... toh tumhe bhi hona hai waha... meri GF....he wanted to say... but said meri P.A. hona...



Geet - ok.. sir...kitne baje aana hai...



Maan - be ready by seven... i will pick you up...




Geet nodded and Maan talked to her some more time... and then she left...




Maan came for as said and they both attended the meeting... The meeting was in a hifi restaurant...Geet was dressed in her simple attire... she felt the odd one out... but Maan guided her and didn't leave her for a second...he didn't let her feel left out...he took care of her...The meeting went on well and the clients asked them for dinner... but Maan politely refused saying.. he has to leave... for an important work... and Maan and Geet left the restaurant...




Maan took her to highway and they headed towards the outskirts...




Geet - sir... hum kaha jaarahe hain...




Maan - kyun... tumhe darr lagraha hai mere saath aane se...




Geet smiled nervously... no..sir... aisa kuch nahi hain...




Maan - ab tak tum ne mujhe samjha hi nahi... nahi meri dil ki baat...




Geet- ji...




Maan - Geet main mazak karr raha hoon... tumne waha kuch bhi nahi khaya na... isliye hum dinner karne jaarahe hain... dinner ke baad main tumhe sahi salamat ghar chodunga... theek hai...




Geet nodded ...



In next few minutes Maan parked the car at a neat and clean place... there were a few cars... Geet got down and saw the place... the place is beautiful... fully illuminated by lights... but it looked like a big house in a village...



Geet - sir.. hum kaha aaye hain...




Maan - this is a dhaba Geet... yaha har punjabi dish milti hain... chalo andar chalte hain...




Geet nodded and followed Maan... Maan entered and talked to a person there... Geet was observing the surroundings... the dhaba is very big and there are sections... one side there are cots with planks on them for eating... and other side.. some tables were arranged with chairs... there a few people having their dinner...



Maan called Geet and said chalo... and Geet followed him silently... the person lead Maan and geet to the other side of the dhaba... the other side of the dhaba had small huts with tables and chairs in them... the person entered a small hut and Maan and Geet followed... the hut was beautifully decorated with lights and flowers.. though artificial... the person took out a small spray and sprayed it all over the hut... now it had a nice fragrance...



The person took their order and went away...



Maan - toh bolo geet.. kaisa laga yeh place...



Geet - jagah achi hai...




Maan - khana bhi acha hi hain... main bohut baar aaya hoon yaha...




They heard some dhol sound and turned in that direction... a few people who are in typical punjabi attire are dancing ... and old Punjabi folk songs were playing. ...




Maan and Geet enjoyed their food ... and came out ... the weather was awesome and maan didn't want to go home early... but he has to.. coz he has to drop her...




Maan sat in the car... Geet too joined them in the passenger seat... Maan started the car... but it stooped after travelling a small distance... he got down and checked the car... but he didn't know what to do...




Geet also came down... sir... kya hua...



Maan - pata nahi geet... sab theek hi hai.. par engine start nahi horaha hai...




Geet - ab ghar kaise jayenge sir... aisa lagta hai ki baarish bhi hone wali hain...




Maan also felt the change... it suddenly felt good...the breeze.. the atmosphere... and Geet... and in no time it started to drizzle...




Maan - oh.. no... Geet... jaldi gaadi mein baitho... main kuch karta hoon.. with that Maan ran and sat in the car... he took out his mobile and called to send him a car.. as his car broke down...





Maan - Geet... don't worry... he turned but he couldn't see Geet there... Geet looked around... and he saw her drenching in rain... she is enjoying the drops on her... she had her face up and eyes closed... and to Maan's eyes she looked beautiful...




Geet opened her eyes and saw maan... she went to the car and said... sir... bahar aayiye... yeh iss saal ki pehli baarish hain... toh aap bhi maza lijiye... when maan didn't respond... she shrugged and went away... she stood under the rain and started enjoying.. twriling around like a kid.. playing with rain water...




Maan was seeing her and drinking the beauty with his eyes... his heart beat increased...




Geet - sir... bahar aayiye... aur baarish ki maza lijiye... pehli baarish hai sir... iski baat hi kuch aur hai sir...




Maan in a trance opened the door and stepped into the rain... the rains started drenching him too...




Geet saw him and smiled... bachpan se hi mujhe baarish bohut pasand hai sir... mamma ki daant bhi khayi... aur papa mujhe hamesha bachate the... maa ki daant se... iss baarish se bohut saari yaadein judi hai sir ... meri... papa ke saath...




Geet revealed a little more of her life to him...





Geet - Main toh baarish ke mausam mein hi paida hui sir... matlab mera aur iska rista toh janam se hai... pinky meri cousin hain... par hamari dosti bhi baarish mein hi hui...




Maan smiled at her... he said... aur ab se mujhe bhi baarish pasand hain...



and then suddenly there is a lightening followed by loud sound of a thunder... Geet got scared and hugged Maan... who is standing opposite to her...




Maan too hugged her... daro mat geet... main hoon... hamesha tumhare saath...




Maan felt complete with Geet in his arms... he knew what he want... he knew he needed her like he need his breadth to survive...



Maan cherished the few moments Geet was in his hands... main yeh baarish ki raat kabhi nahi bhulunga... kabhi nahi...He thought... its time... Geet... its time...mere dil ki baat tumhe kehne ka... ab aur der nahi...
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Mere Mehboob


It was dark and almost midnight. A small flickering light could be seen from the window of a lone cottage in the middle of nowhere. The inside of the cottage was barely furnished with its main hall surrounded with flowing curtains and a baby grand piano in the middle. The cottage was drowned in darkness but for the lone candle burning near the piano, while the winds outside where brewing up a storm.

A young girl wearing a white anarkali sat at the piano with an air of melancholy surrounding her. The girl was gazing out in the distance when she started playing a piano and humming

mere mehboob chal aur kahin


mere mehboob chal aur kahin


mere mehboob


log miltey hain khayalon mein

bichhadtey hain kyun aake kareeb

ishq palte hai faaslon mein

pighalte hai junoon banke habeeb


o mere mehboob


Flashback


She was walking down the deserted college hallway to the administrative office looking down at her papers when she suddenly bumped and crashed into somebody sending her papers flying in all directions. She lost her footing and due to the fear of falling down she closed her eyes momentarily and when she opened them she found herself looking at a pair of warm chocolate brown eyes and a strong arm across her waist preventing her fall. Self-consciously she looked at the stranger and then straightened herself murmuring an apology"I'm sorry... I wasn't looking"

"Don't be ... I was equally at fault" he replied while helping her gather up the papers

"Are you new here... haven't seen you before" he asked curiously

"Yeah I'm today is my first day here..."

"Oh welcome to our college... I'm Maan by the way"

"Thanks... I'm geet"

"Well Geet see you around" he said while handing her the last of the papers, before walking away

And she just stood holding the papers, with her heart drumming in her chest, watching him walk away.

Flashback Ends

The memory of their first meeting left a smile on her face while she kept singing and remembering their subsequent meetings.

mere mehboob chal aur kahin

basayein mil ki hum duniya nayi

jahan milte ho, waadiyon mein...

khilte phulon ko apne naseeb

jahan chhedey na deewano ko

ulfatt mein koi bankey raqeeb

o mere mehboob

With that smile on her face she remembered their friendship, their relationship, the dinner dates, the night out to the movies, the walks in the park and along the sea... She let the joy of their togetherness wash over her... she was happily remembering the time they spent together with each other, in each other's arms until that fateful day when everything was destroyed. She shuddered violently just thinking of it.

Flashback

She was waiting for him at the steps of the temple. Today was the anniversary of the day they confessed their love for each other and both of them wanted to take God's blessings for the future before they went and revealed their relationship to their families. As usual Maan was a bit late so Geet was left standing below the steps that lead to the temple. Geet was tapping her foot and humming while checking her watch every few minutes. Her wait lasted for 15 minutes when she looked up to find Maan getting out of his car across the street.

Maan caught her eye from across the street, giving her a smile, and he held her gaze while he crossed the street and came to her. Both were so lost in each other that they failed to see a car, which was out of control, coming towards Maan and it hit him... leaving him lying in a pool of his blood.

All Geet remembered after that was, that her clothes were soaked with his blood and she was waiting outside the operation theatre. After what seemed like ages the doctor came out with a somber expression and murmured "I'm sorry" before he walked away. Geet felt the walls closing in on her and she moved towards the room where he was. She looked at him the one last time before she was made to leave from there.

In that one moment everything was destroyed she had lost everything that was of value to her... Fate had taken away her reason for living.

Flashback Ends

kyun ye sab dooriyan hat'tee nahi

kyun ye sab faasley mittey nahi

mere mehboob chal aur kahin

sajaayein hum jahaan, duniya nayi

jahaan bantey ho... hawaaon mein

ujadtey na ho mahal, khawaabon ke kabhi

jahaan chup jaayein baadaloon mein udtey hue paro'an pe

hum sabhi

o mere mehboob

She stopped playing the piano with the crackling of thunder and looked out as the first drop of rain touched the ground. She got up and walked out to the driveway still singing. Her senses were high on feelings from her memories.

fasaane ishq ke bhooli nahi

jalaayein aag aa dilon mein wahi

She caught the fragrance of the wet soil and her mind drifted back to the most beautiful day of her life while she let the joy of it wash over her.

Flashback

Maan and she had been dating for almost six months now... they had dinner date planned for the night, the actual plan being a surprise for her, and unfortunately due to traffic Maan was late in collecting her from the house... since he didn't want to be late for their reservations he insisted on taking a shortcut through the woods area near the city...

To give credit to their rotten luck for that evening, the car broke down and they were stranded in the middle of nowhere with not even a cow or stray dog in sight.

"Maan I told you not to take this shortcut... you wanted to reach on time now we won't reach at all... who knows what happened to this khatara of yours... mechanic to door there isn't even a stray dog in sight... and yes due to this fabulous location there is no signal in the phone...huh..." Geet shouted at him, annoyed with him due to his stubbornness which had got them in this mess. Maan scared of ruining her mood even more just silently moved out of the car to check what the problem was, leaving her to stew in her anger.

Maan was out working on the car to try and fix it while Geet was sitting inside reflecting on her reaction (rather over-reaction). She came out and walked to the front and said with a puppy dog expression "I'm sorry I over-reacted na... Abh it isn't your fault that the car broke down"

"koi baat nai senorita, bade bade desho me aisi choti-choti baate hoti rehti hai" Maan said with a teasing wink... bringing a smile back on her face... "Waise car abhi theek ho jayegi... actually coolant low hai so car is a bit heated also ye wire nikal gaya tha... I've almost fixed the wire then we just have to wait for the car to cool... since we have no water to speed up the cooling we'll have to wait..."

"Maan, why don't you look around if there is a stream or something... this place isn't safe... we shouldn't be here for long..."

"Yes Geet it isn't safe... that's the reason I don't wanna either leave you or take you far from the car... as it is looking at the weather the cool wind and clouds I think it might rain soon and we won't have to wait long then..."

Geet nodded and then started playing some music on her phone to pass time while Maan went back to fixing the wires. No sooner had the wires been fixed that it started raining so Maan shut the bonnet and ran inside the car to avoid getting wet. But in contrast to Maan, Geet had a smile on her face which was a mile wide and she started dancing and playing in the first rain of the season.

Inside the car, Maan turned to face Geet only to find an empty space, then he looked out to find Geet drenched in rain and looking like an angel fallen from the sky and twirling in the rain here. He kept on looking at her his eyes refusing to leave this beautiful sight when the sudden change in music got him in touch with his surroundings and reminding him of his surprise for her. The change in music pushed him in action though his eyes never left Geet.

Arrey aankh se boondh gira koi, chingari ka tukda jala koi

Umeed ko aag laga zara, sehra ki pyaas buja zara

Umeed ko aag laga zara, sehra ki pyaas buja zara

Gan itna baras ke galne lagun main paani ke upar tarne lagun

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de

Ohooo.. behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de mujhe behene de

Behenede ghangor ghata, behene de paani ki tara

Sagar mein ja girna hai, behene de nadiyan ki tara

He walked out in a trance letting the rain and Geet's joy in it wash over him. As soon as he reached Geet, he stopped her twirling by putting a hand on her shoulder. She looked at him questioningly when he dropped on his knees in front of her. He pulled out a ring and said "Geet from the first time I saw you when you fell in my arms and looked at me with those deep hazels, I was hooked... nothing else seemed to exist for me... all I could see and think about was you... I spent those two years of college in a limbo over my feelings for you... though I would never have had the courage to ask you out if I hadn't found out on our farewell that you had feelings for me... that day I just couldn't believe my luck when I overheard you telling someone that you liked me... I knew that this is my only chance I would have with you, so I asked you out and... you accepted... I was in heaven... these past six months with you have been the best days of my life though I feel that we're just getting started... Geet, I love you more than anything else in this world...and I want to spend the rest of my life with you... Will you marry me?"

All the while, she couldn't believe her luck, her happiness she kept thinking it's a dream that Maan proposed her... but on seeing into those warm chocolate brown eyes filled with love for her she nodded her acceptance and fell into his arms. He slipped the ring on her finger and engulfed her in a hug. Both of them embraced each other so tightly that even air wouldn't be able to pass through.

Mera pal pal ang ang bar diya, tune jaan pe junoon sa kar diya

Mera hai kya jo main haar doon, jaan teri hai tujhpe vaar doon

Doob gaye jo suna hai saare tere dere aate hain

Dil ke chulu mein bechaare dubkiyan ghote khaate hain

Beh ja, beh ja, chal tod kinare ko

Beh ja, beh ja, dhar le majdhare ko

Chingari udha ke raakh se ik boondh gira ke aankh se

Chalne ke ishaara kar gaya, kar gaya, kar gaya

Sab bhar gaya, bhar gaya

Kar gaya kar gaya, sab bhar gaya bhar gaya

A flash of lighting brought her back from her reverie, where she saw herself standing in the rain all by herself on the road with her arms outstretched to feel her lover. Looking at the emptiness she let a lone tear fall from her eyes as she fell down on her knees and then the sobs racked her delicate frame.

mere mehboob chal aur kahin

banaye aashiyaan door kahin

And then with a strong gust of wind, the only candle giving a sliver of light was put out and there was silence and darkness all around. Nothing could be seen, except the falling of rain, and there was complete silence but for the sound of lightening and thunder.


Edited by lakspriya - 10 years ago

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