KaYa TS [ Completed ]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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" Shut up will you " a little ananya shouted on the top of her voice " all of you , i mean all of you " she yelled again and banged the bench with the duster . " One more word and i'll write your name on the board kabir ! behave " she eyes at him .
Kabir on the other hand showed her a tongue and continued to play pen fight with his buddies .
Ananya marched upto his table and stood beside , she adjusted her hair before she would clear her throat to grab kabir's attention .
" I said quite " she murmured with her sealed lips .
Kabir ignored her presence .
She banged the duster on the bench again to irritate him
" what is your problem " he sounded irritated " do you want me to go deaf ! " .
" that would make the matter worse , i just want you to be quite ! " every word from this sentence reflected attitude .
" in your dreams " kabir replied to him ...

" abe kamine kuttke ruk kabir tu idhar aa " ananya ran after kabir who just took off her rubber band .
" kya karegi , pakadke dikha " kabir was smiling and so was ananya , his smile did show how much he loved to irritate her this way .
" pagal meri choti khul jayegi maam dategi please " ananya begged him but he kept on running
" Ye hi plan he mera , tu samaj gai jaldi .. hosiyaar ho gai he haan " he turned to reply her and then continued to run .
" kabir pleas eme thak gai hu abhi bas bohot hua " ananya said in a heavy breath and sat on the nearest bench ..
" tu idhar bethi he " kabir , who had a worried look on his face asked but she didn't reply so he pulled her choti and tied the rubber band back on it and caressed her hair a little .

" Yaar ananya please teri dost ka number de de na line marni he mujhe " kabir literally begged ananya for her roommates number .
" nahi dungi be , she has a bf ! let her live " ananya made a packman face for kabir turned around to do her hair .
Ananya was getting ready for the fresher's party at their new college ..
" abe yaar to baju vali kisi hot ladki ko dhoondh ab mere liye ! " kabir ordered while ananya applied a little mascara on eyes .
" dekhtih u tere level ki koi mili to " Ananya relied him and pulled her purse and was about to leave when kabir caught her wrist .
" bas kar be ! samaj nahi padhta he tujhe " he said looking into her eyes .
" kya smaja nahi padhta kabir ? " ananya was confused and so where her expression .
" accha " he said and pulled her even closer so that she dashed his waist .
" don't you get what your heavy breaths wanna say " he moved his face a little closer to her's but she couldn't even look at him .
" look at me ananya " he pulled up her chin with one of his hand .
" stop doing that ok , before it gets too late .. " he said leaving her " you know that i love you and i know you heard me when i was talking to Vikram! "

Its to be continued .. provided that people read it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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You should continue this story...
Just put up in the title that it is an OS, TS, SS or something...
The people who read fics may miss this otherwise...
You are going great...
I can see that this is a childhood friendship love between Kabir and Ananya...
Adorable at first, sizzling right now...
Please bring it on... It's awesome!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you so much ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aazeen02

You should continue this story...
Just put up in the title that it is an OS, TS, SS or something...
The people who read fics may miss this otherwise...
You are going great...
I can see that this is a childhood friendship love between Kabir and Ananya...
Adorable at first, sizzling right now...
Please bring it on... It's awesome!



thank you so much ❤️ i'll just change it and thanks a lot for the suggestion 😊 .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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That is soo awesome and cute..you should write more.
Plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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soo cute start.
kabir and ananya as chaildhood friends!!
and the rubber band scene was mind blowing.
finally kabir voiced out what was in heis heart...
lets see what will be ananya's reaction.adorable part.
love it.
thnk u so much for pm.
Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh so cute
do continue dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its totally awesome and different. Plz do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
this was their grow up journey is suppose
i liked the way you showed distinction
update soon
pm me if you can


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome 👏👏
Pls continue soon 😳

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