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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful start...very cute...
Waiting for next part..

Please continue soon..

Thanks for pm.Dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so so so much ^_^ ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continued ..


" what ? " ananya eyes popped out in horror " did you just said that you love me ? "

" yes i did " kabir declared proudly " you even heard it a week ago when i was talking to vikram ! i thought you would come " he added a few seconds later .

" no , that must have been someone else " ananya lied to get out of that situation .

" ananya i know the wrist when i see it " he said and moved his hand to touch her finger and then slides it above her wrist and caught it in his tight hold .

" kabir " ananya gasped as he again pulled her close "

" shh " he ordered her and she followed .
he moved a little more closer to her and kept on of his hand over her neck ...

His lips where approaching her's very slowly and smoothly .

" kabir " she gasped again " i don't " she tried to utter and pushed him a little far away .
kabir smirked at her action and walked upto where she was standing .

" come lets go to the party " he suggested her " we will talk about this later " he smiled and ananya accompanied him to the party place .

" your looking beautiful by the way " he complimented her like a perfect gentlemen before the would enter the party .
her face turned a little red with blush , which she tried to hid for some unknown reason .

" listen kabir i don't love you and i can't . " she made it clear

" can't i compliment my friend " kabir asked eying her " is this the first time i told you that your looking beautiful ? " he added and ananya had nothing to say .
he loved how easily he could leave her speechless ..

" let go inside " he suggested " like always "

ananya nodded and circled her hand around kabir's as they walked into the fresher's party ..

They kept walking in unless they found their little friend circle cilling out at the corned .
" hey guys " ananya waved her hand and walked towards them . She was followed by kabir .
" kuch hua ? " vikram asked kabir in a whisper as he came and stood by him .
" ye ladki pagal he ! " he declared " abhi bulwata hu isse me " .
" be mana kar di kya ? " vikram was a little shocked .
" nahi be aur tu chup kar mereko sochne de " he held vikrams neck from back and acted as if he was burying him in the ground .
" accha baba abhi chup me " vikram laughed at his action and said " tu pehele apni vali ko pata le " he winked and made kabir turn a little red .
" dekh tu chup kar " kabir was desperately trying to hid his blush but was terribly failing at it so he caught ananya's wrist and took her to the dance floor .
" kabir are " she said on the way
" can't I dance with you ? ananya ! " kabir asked sincerely .
She smiled at his stupid question " of course you can " she replied and giggled again .
" ok , then lets dance my way " he said and grabbed her waist .
He slowly pulled her closer to her such their their tummies touched each other .
Their mouth was turning dry and there was some sort of heat created in between the two .
" kabir " ananya uttered
" have you ever felt this way with someone else ? " he whispered in her ears .
" vo " she tried to speak " well "
" i know you haven't remember we share everything ! " he cleared her thoughts .
" I love you " came another whisper from his mouth ..
This time ananya initiated the first step and moved closer to him , she softly kissed his cheeks and said with a smile " I love you too "

Edited by janvi.sadhwani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
I didn't understand is it KaYa OS or SanDhir OS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i think u have forgot to change names in this os dear.
plz do that as its reporters forum.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OK dear did the editing for you just changer parth character to Ronnie

Originally posted by: janvi.sadhwani

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" what ? " Ananya eyes popped out in horror " did you just said that you love me ? "

" yes i did " Kabir declared proudly " you even heard it a week ago when i was talking to Ronnie ! i thought you would come " he added a few seconds later .

" no , that must have been someone else " Ananya lied to get out of that situation .

" Ananya i know the wrist when i see it " he said and moved his hand to touch her finger and then slides it above her wrist and caught it in his tight hold .

" Kabir " Ananya gasped as he again pulled her close "

" shh " he ordered her and she followed .
he moved a little more closer to her and kept on of his hand over her neck ...

His lips where approaching her's very slowly and smoothly .

" Kabir " she gasped again " i don't " she tried to utter and pushed him a little far away .
Kabir smirked at her action and walked upto where she was standing .

" come lets go to the party " he suggested her " we will talk about this later " he smiled and Ananya accompanied him to the party place .

" your looking beautiful by the way " he complimented her like a perfect gentlemen before the would enter the party .
her face turned a little red with blush , which she tried to hid for some unknown reason .

" listen Kabir i don't love you and i can't . " she made it clear

" can't i compliment my friend " Kabir asked eying her " is this the first time i told you that your looking beautiful ? " he added and Ananya had nothing to say .
he loved how easily he could leave her speechless ..

" let go inside " he suggested " like always "

Ananya nodded and circled her hand around Kabir's as they walked into the fresher's party ..

They kept walking in unless they found their little friend circle cilling out at the corned .
" hey guys " Ananya waved her hand and walked towards them . She was followed by Kabir .
" kuch hua ? " Ronnie asked Kabir in a whisper as he came and stood by him .
" ye ladki pagal he ! " he declared " abhi bulwata hu isse me " .
" be mana kar di kya ? " Ronnie was a little shocked .
" nahi be aur tu chup kar mereko sochne de " he held parths neck from back and acted as if he was burying him in the ground .
" accha baba abhi chup me " Ronnie laughed at his action and said " tu pehele apni vali ko pata le " he winked and made randhir turn a little red .
" dekh tu chup kar " Kabir was desperately trying to hid his blush but was terribly failing at it so he caught Ananya's wrist and took her to the dance floor .
" Kabir are " she said on the way
" can't I dance with you ? Ananya ! " Kabir asked sincerely .
She smiled at his stupid question " of course you can " she replied and giggled again .
" ok , then lets dance my way " he said and grabbed her waist .
He slowly pulled her closer to her such their their tummies touched each other .
Their mouth was turning dry and there was some sort of heat created in between the two .
" Kabir " Ananya uttered
" have you ever felt this way with someone else ? " he whispered in her ears .
" vo " she tried to speak " well "
" i know you haven't remember we share everything ! " he cleared her thoughts .
" I love you " came another whisper from his mouth ..
This time Ananya initiated the first step and moved closer to him , she softly kissed his cheeks and said with a smile " I love you too "

Edited by pallavi_bs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
lovely update
i think you forgot to change the names
anyways thanks for the pm
Edited by pd786 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
This was written so beautifully 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Your names confused me...
Anyway it was awesome...
Beautiful yaar...
Keep writing but on KaYa
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: krazykaju

i think u have forgot to change names in this os dear.
plz do that as its reporters forum.


yes i did .. i guess i copied the wrong one 😭😭

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