Manan ff: you are the one for me(chp2: pg1)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys presenting a new story of you all...hope you all like it...please silent readers like and comment..

character sketch:

Manik Malhotra: this handsome hot hunk, tortured guy, who hates his mother and is the protector of his friends...difficult to understand him and any girl can easily fall for him.

nandani murthy:this beautiful innocent sweet girl who never gives up on people and never fears to speak her mind...came to Mumbai for her dreams..

cabir thakur: this fun-loving guy, always laughs to cover up the sadness filled inside him. He shares a great friendship with Manik on an equal level...the coolest guy...everyone likes to be his side...searching for his soulmate.

Navya Naveli - this pretty naive girl who came to Mumbai for music. She is Nandini's best friend.

Dhruv Vedant - mysterious hot guy, who falls for Alya. He is like a brother to Manik.

Alia Saxena - this hot and pretty girl of S.P.A.C.E., who is the girlfriend of Dhruv.

Mukti Vardhan - this sexy but angry broken girl, betrayed from her first love. She is like a sister to Manik.

Abhimanyu Thakkar - He is a lively guy who likes to see others happy, enters as the love interest of Mukti, but it is later revealed that he is a cancer patient. He is a True friend to Nandini when she is left heartbroken.

index
chapter 1: page 1
chapter 2: page 1

so guys this was the character sketch of main ppl...let's see what happens next chapter 1 will be posted soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1

Nandani: navya kha ho tum? Mai station pai ruki hu...jaldi aao na..

Navya: bas 2 min mai aa jahunghi...plz sorry..

Navya reaches to station

Navya: sorry sorry...yeh autowale bahiya bhi na

nandani: accha abhi jaldi chalo train lag chuki h

Navya: hmm...waise tum aaj badi hot lag rhi ho...kya baat h Colg kai phele din pai kitne logo ko udhane ka socha h...

Nandani was wearing blue shorts and a pink crop top.

Nandani: tum bhi toh hot Hi lag rhi ho na..

Navya was wearing black shots and white t-shirt

Navya: accha jaldi chalo

Navni's reaches Mumbai

Navya: abhi dekhna abhi hum aa gye h na ...watt laga dengai hum manali ki log yaad rakhengai Hume

Nandani: accha meri natunghi bas abhi

Nandani ask a autowale bahiya for space academy

Navni's reaches space academy

Nandani: phele hostel chalte h fir formalities puri karengai..

And they were entering to college...a big car comes and lands...in middle of collage...everyone gathered to meet fab 5

Navya: yeh log kaise gadi chalate h?

Nandani: pka koi bade baap ka bigda hua beta hoga..

And fab 5 comes out of car first dhruv all were like awww...and then alya...all boys faces were open...then cabir...girls were like olala...and navya was also flat on him...then mukti...half of the boys fainted there...and then the manik...girls were like oh my god...and many girls fainted..

Nandani: handsome h...

Navya for cabir: sahi mai

Fab 5 scene

Cabir: manik fir tune ladkiyo ko faint kar diya...n mukti nai n alya nai toa ladko ki band Baja di...n dhruv tune toa sabko Baja dali

Mukti: cabir saale jaise tune toa kuch bhi nhi kiya na

Dhruv punches him little bid

Dhruv: sab humnai Hi toa kiya...fir tune humko roka kyu nhi ha
Tu kya humare saath driver banke aya that..

Alya: guys bas bhi karo abhi

Cabir: manik tu kyu kuch nhi bol rha

Manik was busy on phone and fab 4 surrounded him and giving him tu to gya wala look

Manik: kya hua guys?

They all see to his phone...manik keeps phone in pocket..

Manik: ha bolo kya hua abhi?

Cabir puts his hand around him: yeh hum batahega kin tu samaj gya

Manik started running and all were running after him to beat him bcoz manik dosent listen dem due to his phone

So guys chp 1...next chp will be awesome for u guys plz tell me how's it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
It's beautiful good going
I'm excited to to see how manan meet and what will be there first reaction
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start..
waiting to see their first meeting..
what shocking things will happen...
please do pm next when you will update..
thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice strt dear...plz pm me na
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous one dear
continue soon
plz PM me for this also
waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
chapter 2

precap: nandani comes to mumbai...space academy...fab5 entry

manik was running and fab4 was running behind them to beat manik...as he was not listening to them...

manik falls on a girl

girl: dekh kar nhi chal sakte kya😡?

manik was not listening to her...and was busy starring her and her beauty

girl: oh hello mr.? dekh kai nhi chal sakte kya? tum sun rah ho mai kya bol rhi hu😡?

manik: n...na...nhi

girl: oh mr. get up

she pinched him and suddenly woke up and manik gave her hand to get her up but a girl came from her back and gave her a hand she was continously starring at him in anger

girl2: tum thik toa ho na?

girl1: hmm...these people na😡

girl2: tumhe kha lagi toa nhi na😲?

girl1: thoda haath pai laga h...see and shows her hand

girl2: alhah itna blood nikal rha h😲

girl1: its ok! medical room mai chalke dressing karte hai na...dun worry

fab 5 scene

cabir: who was she?

manik was busy in his thoughts and remembering his moments with her

cabir: kon thi vo?

manik: angel

cabir: what?

manik: aree baba i dun know who was she?

dhruv: kya hua guys?

cabir: manik ek ladki ki beauty mai khoya hua h

manik gives your are dead now wala look to cabir

dhruv: what?

alya: dhruv yeh kaisa question h what?...we should be happy that manik ko koi ladki toa pasand ahi

dhruv made a sad pout

mukti: aww...mera chotu sa manik ko ladki pasand ahi

manik gave a deadly look to mukti and started running after her

manik: mukti you are gone now

mukti: aww...poor manik pakad kai toa dekhau

fab 3 laughs

alya: chodu ho gye dono

cabir: let it be will have fun

dhruv: buddy ka angry wala face😡...sad pout wala face😔

and the trio laughs

in all this fab 5 reached to their class

fab 5 was running here and there...finallly stopped and laughed seeing each other...and had a group hug

so guys sorry for such a small one...will come back with a big one...lets see who was these girls. were they navni? or any other?
comment your views...plz guys tell me should i continue this ff or not...waiting for your replies..😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think they r navni
N i wish that only they r over there
N manik falls for our sweet nandu
Waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: sarita2393

I think they r navni
N i wish that only they r over there
N manik falls for our sweet nandu
Waiting...


thank you so much...you loved it...it means alot to me...😃let it be a suspense about navni ot not...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
Its gudd dear n thanxx for pm

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