arshi ff: not cut out for love #5, chapter 49, p 144, 31/3 *completed*

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1041

Originally posted by: sirivalli.t
Awesome update!!!!!

thank you, sirivalli.t,

great to see you.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1042

Originally posted by: mayurisb80
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that was oohh soo perfect...

mayuri,

awww. thanks so much... glad ncofl made you happy. hugs back.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1043

Originally posted by: ARS24
Awesome dear !!
Cant believe its ended !
Awesome
Thank u for pm !!

hi ars,

ha ha even i find it hard to believe it's over... thank you so much. glad you had fun at ncofl.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1044

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
our bholi-bhali si Khushi... she is sooo innocent... what i love the most how she knew that she can share all her sawals, all confusions with her magarmaach... and our volcano Raizada, he doesnt need his wife to say her troubles loud, hai naa... he just knows... and his confession... hum jante hai, he can't live without her... aur aaj toh unhone khud bhi keh diya... its BEAUTIFUL... Ahhh, these first few days of marriage... this is actually like bliss... and seeing both the couples having great time in their own paradise, its amazing... Didi, is it really necessary to stop... cant it just go on & on... like forever...

yes, nishat... must go on... like forever. 😆

delighted you enjoyed. that little trepidation becoming storm in her mind, i thought i felt it so i wrote about that. thrilled it came out right. of course, now her fate is sealed, only magarmachh can she take her this sort of problem to... i hope she is sparing devi maiyya er... all the details.

so happy you read ncofl. i have loved writing this tale and watching all of you having fun. i hope asr and khushi were true to who we think they are... i also hope another story comes along because h, i will miss them dammit. and you all.

saw your comment on the epilogue. thank you... for always taking the time to put down your thoughts... you are really a fine reader. take care... jaldi jaldi milte hain.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1045

Originally posted by: bluesky10
Beautiful dear
Thanks for the pm

hi bluesky,

thank you so much. glad you enjoyed the chapter.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1046

Originally posted by: wiwy
Ha ha dushtu In di, so this is what you were holding back! The abnormal khushi! The adorable, pagal, cute, beautiful and hopelessly in love with Arnav! Hey but that sounds perfectly normal Khushi! She even remembered the volcano where he had wanted to make love to her! Jwalamukhi update in Bali.

teehee wiwy,

imagine being in love with that magarmachh and feeling the ahem er ah khushi ji of the sanka kind feels when he er ah... aaargh. i cannot breathe. so happy you like the hum normal nahin bain jwalamukhi update. really, i feel for the girl... can you imagine... nahiiin this is too much to imagine. 😆 😆 😆 my frail heart can't take it.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1047

I was so damn busy could not read promptly. Now reading while I'm on the way to North Carolina. Enjoyed the epilogue so much. Khushi and and Arnav are in Bali, spending some romantic, passionate moment, whereas akash and payal are in Paris! These two sisters really deserve all the happiness of life and with their soul mates they got blessed life.
Thank you so much to make khushi wear some sexy, western outfit.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1048

Originally posted by: sohara
I was so damn busy could not read promptly. Now reading while I'm on the way to North Carolina. Enjoyed the epilogue so much. Khushi and and Arnav are in Bali, spending some romantic, passionate moment, whereas akash and payal are in Paris! These two sisters really deserve all the happiness of life and with their soul mates they got blessed life.
Thank you so much to make khushi wear some sexy, western outfit.

sohara,

the non kurta outfits were for you. 😆 thank you... just read when you can, i have a feeling you'll like. take your time... north carolina, hope this is a break and you will have lots of fun. tell me what you thought of the epilogue later. yeah, i love the idea of the four of them just having some fun together, no interruptions, no havan and knocks on the door.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1049

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Beautiful story

thank again, tina. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1050

I loved the wedding festivities.. Arnav may say that he doesn't believe in romance or anything like that but he is quite a romantic otherwise who would come to fetch his bride himself taking her in his arms, kissing in public view. They both are made for each other. Dono hi bahut ajeeb hain 😉😳
Loved the gentle Akash and the way Khushi was mumbling to herself all nervous.
I'm so happy that they spend their first night in the farmhouse. It has special memories for them after all. Loved how you showed the questions any new wife can have regarding her desire or interest towards the physical aspect of marriage.
But Khushi bahut crazy hai 😆
Now with only epilogue left I'm wondering what will happen to Shyam, if JP & Kareena will get together, if La & NK will get together and also if Anjali will find someone who truly loves her.

Edited by aquagal - 10 years ago