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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Snow_Angel

Finally read it...very nice update...we got to know many thinks about maaneet past but frankly I was waiting for some parish geet scene...if possible pls add 2-3 present scenes along with past .Geets family seemed to very conservative and she was not even happy in her life... I love maaneet first meeting very much and there cute tutu main main too😉why I feel geets step sis is behind all those bad incident that separated maaneet ...love is already booming between maaneet waiting for next one😊

Thank you so much Sanjh 😳
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Hi guys 😳 Thanks a lot for your feedback on the previous update 😳 Here goes the 4th chapter.

Inseparable hearts



Chapter 4

'Hey Geet! you've got a parcel for your name!' Rahul stormed in to Geet's room. It was early in the morning the very next day after her encounter with Maan. Geet was getting ready to go to college.


'What is it?'


'I don't know! it's for you!' Rahul winked.


For me? But who is there to send me such parcels?' Geet was confused.


'May be someone special!' Rahul winked again.


'What the hell? Are you sure it's for me? or is it someone else's?


'Oh god Geet! see the name written! Miss. Geetanjali Handa! & the address is correct too! isn't it? So any doubts?' Rahul chuckled.


'Open it soon & see!' Rahul was excited. Geet was doubtful of his actions.


Rahul, you behavior is too weird today! What's wrong?'


'Umm me?' 'Nothing!' Rahul shrugged.


'Are you sure? you are playing a prank on me! aren't you?'Geet inquired as she knew about her cousin brother who is a prankster.


'Trust me! I didn't do anything! what the hell Geet? are you suspecting me?'


'Umm not really! but why are you so impatient to open this?' 'Here you go! open by yourself.' Geet passed the parcel to Rahul.


'Oh dear! I cannot open this! this is for you! I am not Geetanjali!' Rahul chuckled.


'Rahul, what if it is a time bomb inside!' Geet held the parcel & placed her ear to check on. That made Rahul laugh so hard.


'Who on earth will send you a bomb? You are such a lovely girl. You haven't got any haters to destroy you!' Rahul patted her back.


'Did you forget there is one in our house itself!' Geet replied in a low tone.

'Oh! you mean your evil sister Deepali!?'

'Who else?'

'Hahaha I don't think she will do such a thing!

'Why?'

'I don't think she is that much intelligent!' Rahul chuckled.


'I don't know why she hates me this much. What have I done to her?' Geet spoke on a low tone.

'Okay just forget about her! She is not worth our time. Hurry up! Open the parcel.'

'Okay okay just give me a second!' Geet started unwrapping it. It was a box. She opened it slowly & the very next sight made her surprised. It was a beautiful casual dress, yet elegant. It was purple in color, which is one of her favourite colors & a leather belt was there in the waist level.


'OMG this is beautiful!' 'But wait! who sent me this?' Geet was puzzled.

After a few seconds she saw a little note attached to the wrapper. It said,


'I'm really sorry for ruining your best outfit that day though it was an accident. Please accept this gift as a token of apology. I don't know if it would reach up to your standards, but I hope it looks good on you! Please wear that the next time we meet!'

Regards,

No need to mention my name right? Hope you have figured who I am!'

'Maan?' Geet was surprised. She never expected such a thing. It was so sweet of him to send her a gift as an apology.

'Oho! so Maan has sent this?' Rahul winked.

'Rahul! today you are winking too much & behaving too strangely!' Geet spoke doubtfully.


'Please tell me! you are hiding me something! aren't you?'

No Geet!' 'Check me! I'm not hiding anything!' Rahul giggled.


'Rahul!' Geet punched on his chest.


'Stop joking! I am seriously asking you something!'


Okay okay calm down!' Rahul made Geet sit on the bed.


'I really didn't know what Maan was going to send you! He was feeling guilty yesterday & wanted to send you something so...'Rahul stopped midway.


'So?'

'So! I just gave him some ideas! Simple as that!' Rahul smiled.

'What?

'But believe me Geet! I suggested him the lamest gift ideas like Flowers, Chocolates etc.' 'But he has chosen the best one I guess! Just try it out!'


'Hey Geet! Aunty is calling you. It's getting late for you to go to the college.' Rashmi came into the room.

Rashmi noticed the dress on Geet's hands.


'Oh wow!' ' Such a beautiful dress! did you buy anything new? I didn't see this in your wardrobe.' Rashmi inquired.

'Um uh.. actually it's a gift.' Geet replied.

'A gift? who gave this to you.?' Rashmi further questioned.

'Her boy friend! any problem Rash?' Rahul chuckled.


'Boy friend? what the hell Geet? how come I didn't know? you never had one! right?' Rashmi was hyper.

'Oh uh!' Geet face palmed.


'Why are you so hyper Rash?' Rahul winked.


'Just tell me what's going on! who is Geet's boy friend?' 'And why would he send a dress to her?'


Oh god you lack common sense Rash! what would you expect a boy friend to gift a girl?'


Geet! what is this nonsense? you never told me that you have a boyfriend?' Rashmi inquired Geet.


'Stop it Rahul! just don't lie! I don't have a boyfriend! & if I ever get one, you guys are the first to know!' Geet replied.


Oho so you are desperate to get a boyfriend?' Rashmi winked.

'No way!' 'Not so soon!' Geet chuckled.

'Please! will anyone of you tell me who sent this dress to Geet?' Rashmi inquired again. She was curious.

Why you are so desperate to know about it huh?' Rahul winked.


'Shut up Rahul! 'Geet just tell me who sent this?'


'Umm.. this was sent by Maan.' Finally Geet blurted out the truth.

'Maan? you mean our Maan? our friend?' Rashmi was in a state of shock.


'Hahaha look at you! you look like you have seen a ghost!' 'Why such pathetic expressions Rash? Seriously you look like a blood Mary!' Rahul teased her.

'Shut up!' Rashmi threw a pillow towards her twin brother's direction.

'Umm.. oh nice. But why suddenly?' Rashmi asked again.


'Let me explain! Maan wanted to apologize Geet for ruining her dress yesterday. That's why he had sent this for her!.' Rahul explained.

Oh really? but it was an accident right? He didn't do it deliberately!' 'Then why should he be sorry?' Rashmi questioned. Geet was confused with her behavior.

'Because my best friend is a good human being! May be he felt bad about Geet's dress yesterday.' 'It was so sweet of him to send a gift to Geet, that too a beautiful dress.' Rahul replied. Geet noticed a sudden mood change on Rashmi's face.

'Oh! so what if Maan's car collides with Geet's car one day! will he buy a brand new car for her?' Rashmi smiled sarcastically.Jealousy was clearly visible from her words & behavior.


'Wow! what a logic Rash!' 'But what are you trying to point out? what Maan did was wrong?' Rahul inquired.

'When did I tell that Maan was wrong?' Rashmi gave a fake smile.

'Okay okay just stop this! I think Geet is getting late.' Rahul tried to divert the topic.


Rashmi left the room within no time. She looked frustrated. Geet looked at Rahul with a confusion.

Rahul came upon & patted Geet's back.

'Just take it easy Geet!' 'I don't know why Rash behaved so weird today. May be she also wanted this kind of a dress! You know how much she is obsessed with clothes!'

'Typical girls!' Rahul sighed. 'May be I will have to take her shopping soon!'

'Rahul, I'm getting late. See you in the evening.'

Okay. Take care!' 'And don't fret too much of what happened a while back.'


Geet left the room to go to college but she was worried about Rashmi's behavior. She has never behaved like that before. She can clearly remember how the smile on her face faded away when she told that it was gifted by Maan.


In the evening the first thing she did after coming home was trying out the dress gifted by Maan. It suited her perfectly. She twirled near the mirror. She felt so special. It was the first time someone had gifted her something remarkable. It was the first time someone had cared about her this much. She felt something special & a happiness that cannot be expressed in to words. She could not wait until she meets Maan next time, to show up the dress.


She wanted to thank him for his sweet gesture. Unfortunately she didn't have his contact number. She sent a message to Rahul & asked for Maan's number. Rahul teased her first but gave his best friend's number to her. Finally Geet got his number but she was in a dilemma to send him a message.


What if thinks that I am interested on him? Should I message him first or?' Geet self thought. Though she was a little bit hesitant to message him she couldn't just stay without thanking him. She felt bad about him. What if he is waiting for a message from me? Anyway it's too bad to stay silent when someone sends you a gift. She decided to send him a message.


'Geet!' Geet heard her dad's voice. He has returned home. She was about to type the message. She quickly hid her mobile under the pillow & put the dress inside her wardrobe. Her life is going to be stressful once again with her dad's presence.


Geet always feared talking to her dad. She used to behave like a student in front of a principal. She never felt relaxed in front of her father. She wished that her father was more close to her but it never happened. Though her father used to give her all the luxurious comforts he failed to give the love of a father which every child expects.

Geet had to report her father what she did for the past few weeks while he was away. She was mumbling fiercely. She looked at her mother while talking. Padmini kept numb. The meet up withMaan was hidden. It would be a disaster if her father gets to know that she went out.


Later at night Rashmi came to Geet's room.


'Hey Geet!' 'I need a huge favor from you.' Rashmi sat beside her.


Yeah Rash? tell me. What it is?'


'Tomorrow I have to go for a site inspection. Could I borrow something from you to wear?'

'Oh sure! why not?'

'Actually I tried out almost all of my casual outfits but nothing reached up to my satisfaction. I need to replace my wardrobe soon with some good outfits!'

Rashmi started trying out Geet's outfits. Geet's outfits started flocking up on her bed which were rejected by Rashmi. Geet wondered why any of them couldn't reach her satisfaction. But she didn't question her, just kept staring at her cousin praying that may she find the outfit which satisfies her soon as Geet knew that Rashmi could even take the whole wardrobe outside till she finds the perfect because she was so picky.


Finally at last one outfit could reach up to her satisfaction.




'Geet! I think this is the one I was searching for. I guess it suites me perfectly.' Rashmi smiled delightedly.


Geet's smile faded away after she noticed the outfit which Rashmi has chosen. It was the purple casual dress which was gifted by Maan.


'Umm.. that dress?'


'Yeah! it suits me perfectly! Doesn't it?' Rashmi winked.


Geet couldn't bear it up. She has not worn it officially though she just tried it out. Maan wanted her to wear it when they meet up next time. Geet simply couldn't let anyone to wear it before her. She was obsessed of her dress which was gifted by him. Possessive feelings were unknownly implanted by Maan in her heart. She didn't like to see her dress worn by someone else as it was so special for her. Geet felt selfish. She has never felt like that before but she just couldn't resist her feelings.


'Just let me try this out!' Rashmi took the dress & in a swift, she was barricaded by Geet. Geet was standing in front of her, blocking her way. She dragged the dress from Rashmi's hand. Rashmi seemed to be shocked with Geet's reaction.


'I'm sorry Rash. I cannot give this to you.'


'Why? what's wrong with you?' Rashmi inquired.

Geet kept silent.


'Geet! I'm just gonna borrow this. I will return it to you tomorrow evening.'


'I'm sorry. Can't you find anything else to wear?'


'Anything else? you know how I was searching all over your wardrobe but couldn't find anything good as this. This is not the first time I'm borrowing a dress from you Geet. So why are you so much hesitant to give away it to me?'


' I can't Rash! I haven't even worn it properly. I don't like to see someone wearing it before me. This is so special to me. I'm so sorry! I can't give this to you. Please could you find something else?'


'What? Geet I'm so surprised! Remember last week I borrowed one of your sleeveless tops which you told that you haven't worn it officially. But you let me to wear it. Then why not this?' Rashmi inquired.


'Please Rash! don't question me further. That's the final. You are not gonna wear this!' Geet raised her voice. Rashmi was shocked to see her strange behavior.


'Oh fine! I know why it is so special for you. Because Maan gifted it to you na? But I never thought that you would be this much selfish because of a mere person!' 'I'm sorry for wasting your time! I shall just pick out an old dress for me from my collection!'


'Good night!' Rashmi almost slammed the door. She seemed to be frustrated with Geet's actions. Geet started arranging her wardrobe which was a complete mess. She took that dress again & rubbed it gently. She inhaled the new fragrance of it. It drove her crazy.


After arranging her wardrobe she freshened up herself & settled on the bed. She started feeling guilty for behaving rudely in front of Rashmi. But she didn't regret her decision. She was possessive about the gift which was sent by Maan. It was so special for her & she just couldn't even imagine someone wearing it other than her.


Geet re called the memories of Maan's encounter. How they used to fight like kids. The moments she spent with him celebrating Rashmi & Rahul's birthday. How they used to run behind each other with icing & lastly how he held her tightly. How she felt at that moment, something special was blooming inside her. Their eye lock & at the end they were brought back to normal by Rashmi & how they looked away embarrassingly. It was such an awkward moment.


A smile crept on Geet's face, re calling the memories. She was missing him badly. She couldn't understand it. She has never felt so dull without a presence of someone. She was used to be isolated but when she met Maan her loneliness was faded away. A single day could make differences in her life. She realized that she already has a crush on Maan.


Finally she gained some courage to type a message to Maan. She edited the draft so many times. She knew that her feelings for Maan knew no bounds. She could even write a book with her feelings. But a message should be short & sweet, that too when you are sending someone for the first time. So she typed as,

'Hi Maan. It's me Geet. Thanks a lot for your gift. It was totally a surprise for me. Loved it.'


Finally she pressed the send button. She re checked her message & finally it was on the 'Sent messages' folder. She was waiting impatiently for a reply from him. She was tossing on the bed, unable to sleep without a reply from him. It's been more than a half and hour she has sent the message. She re-checked Rahul's message for her, with Maan's number & checked whether she has sent the message to the correct number. It was the exact number of him.


She looked at the clock hanging on her wall. It showed the time as 10:30 pm. Why is the reply is so late? Hasn't he received it? Is he sleeping at the moment? But it's still 10:30, I don't think he would sleep this early. Or was he waiting for a message from me in the morning & has he felt bad that I didn't send any till now? So many questions were popped up in her mind. She was a little bit disturbed. She was desperately waiting for a message from him.


An hour passed, still there wasn't a reply from him. It was almost midnight & Geet was feeling sleepy. She could barely open her eyes. She couldn't stop thinking about him. She checked her mobile numerous times, unfortunately there wasn't any message.

Finally after about 15 minutes she heard her mobile beep, the sound of receiving a message. That little sound made her dance with happiness. In the other hand she was a bit nervous to get the mobile & open the message. She felt a feeling of butterflies in her stomach. Stop behaving crazily Geet! Just check it! She ordered herself.

She took her mobile & unlocked it. Her excitement was faded away at once. It was a message from one of her friends asking him to bring some of her notes tomorrow. It was not Maan. She re-checked her inbox but there weren't a single message from him. Geet was thoroughly disappointed. Her hopes were crushed. She couldn't wait anymore. She literally threw her mobile on her bed & buried her face under a pillow. Soon she dozed off.

The next morning she was awaken by the buzz of her alarm. She soon turned it off & got her mobile with the hope of a reply from Maan. But there wasn't any. She was frustrated. She freshened herself soon & started getting ready to go to college. Then she heard somebody knocking at her door. It was Rashmi.


'Good morning Geet.' 'May I come in?' Rashmi asked in a polite way like never before.

'Rash! Good morning. Please come in! You don't need permission to enter my room. Why so formal?' Madhu chuckled.

'I need to talk to you Geet.'


Yeah tell me!' Geet spoke to Rashmi while combing her hair.

'Umm.. Geet. I'm sorry about what happened yesterday. I'm sorry for calling you selfish.'

Geet looked at her. Even she was feeling guilty. She held Rashmi's hand. 'Didu, I'm really sorry. I think it's my fault.'


'No Geet. I understand. I know it is special to you. I know nobody would like to give away a dress to somebody which is so special to them. You told that you haven't even worn it properly yet. So your actions are justified.' Rashmi spoke in a calm tone.

'But I'm feeling guilty. I don't know why I behaved like that.'

'It's okay Geet. Just forget it.'

'I'm really sorry didu!'

'Oh god Geet! I can't forgive you for one thing!' Rashmi made a face.

'What?' Geet was confused.

'Stop calling 'didu' for god's sake. How many times I had warned you?' Rashmi chuckled.

'Okay okay ma'am! sorry about it.' Geet smiled. Then they shared a sisterly hug.

Suddenly Geet heard her father calling her name. She felt something different. Something fearful. His voice was loud & fierce. It didn't give her positive vibes. Something bad is gonna happen. She could identify it from her father's voice.

She went towards the living room, trembling out of fear. She saw her father was looking furiously at her. His eyes were burning with anger. Geet looked down with fear as she couldn't face him. She was unaware of the reason but she was scared to look at him directly.

'What the hell is this?' Raj threw a newspaper on Madhu's face. It hit Geet & dropped on the floor near her toes. Geet was fearful & confused at the same time. Her heart was pounding. She slowly focused her eyes on the news paper. She couldn't believe her eyes.

'Business rivals Raj Hand & Mihir Khurana's juniors are in love?' The headline was in Bold red letters. There was a photograph of Geet & Maan holding each other tightly below it. Geet was shocked to death. It was when they were fighting with icing. How the hell it appeared on the paper? It happened 2 days back. Who took this photograph? A lot of questions were bugging Geet's mind & she knew that her father is gonna kill her in the very next second.

'Answer me Geet! how did this happen?' Raj roared. He was fuming in anger. Rashmi & Rahul too came there with the noise. They were shocked to see the news paper.

Geet couldn't believe what was happening around her. She never expected that something like this would happen. She was numb. Her father almost shook her from her shoulders. 'Answer me! what the hell is this?' 'How did this happen?'

Tears started forming in Geet's eyes, mixed with fear & sadness. She couldn't speak a word. It was something she never expected to happen. She wished that she could vanish at once. Dying is much better than answering her furious father.

'Geet! why are you silent huh? Are you bloody testing my patience?' Raj shook her again. Geet started crying. He pushed her away. Rashmi & Rahul exchanged fearful expressions. Finally Rashmi gained courage & decided to speak on behalf of Geet.

'Uncle! let me explain' Rashmi came forward.

'Rashmi! just stay away from this. It's none of your business.' Raj rebuked.

'But uncle please.'

'I told you once! Just don't intrude our family problems!' Raj replied furiously.

'Uncle please! let me talk. I want to explain this incident as I am also related to it. Actually Rahul & me both of us!' Rashmi raised her voice.
Raj was shocked & confused at the same time with Rashmi's reply. Rashmi explained everything from A to Z what happened that day.


'Rashmi! How dare you took Madhu out without my permission? 'And you Padmini! how dare you to permit them without my consent huh? Above all you kept it hidden from me! Raj was fuming with anger.


'Geet! Shame on you! you don't know how to behave yourself! how dare you to get on with that Mihir Khurana's son huh?

'Are you all hiding something from me? Is Geet really in a relationship with Mihir's son? ' Malik continued his furious talks.

'Uncle! try to understand! I can guarantee that there is no such relationship between Geet & Maan !' Rahul spoke.

'I warned you when you sought permission from me! See what has happened now! Not Geet! our whole family is in trouble'Finally Padmini raised her voice who used to be silent all the time.

'Aunty, uncle I know that me & Rahul are responsible for this incident. But why are you accusing Geet as she has done a crime? You are behaving like she has slept with Maan! She just had fun with us.' Rasjmi spoke aggressively.

'Shut up Rashmi!' Raj seemed to be more furious with that particular fact. Geet couldn't stop her tears. She was trembling of fear.

'I'm sorry uncle! I won't keep quiet anymore! I stand for injustice. Just try to understand that you've been treating your daughter Geet so badly. What do you think? Supplying her with all the luxurious things would only make her happy? where's the love she is expecting from her father? Tell me exactly the last time you spoke to her softly? tell me when did you tell her that 'I love you' ? I bet you can't remember! Because you never cared to shower love towards your daughter.' Rashmi spoke non-stop.

'You better not teach my how to love my daughter. I know how to love her. I don't want to see her degraded by the society.'

'Oh look who is talking about society when he himself keeps his daughter home 24*7 trapped like a bird in a cage. Please don't bring up lame excuses like you are protecting Geet from the society. For how long? won't you let her step out this house one day? won't you let her get married? are you planning to keep your daughter under your draconian laws in the rest of her life time? Answer me please! what would you get huh?'

'Just don't try to advise me!' ' I have experienced life more than you!' Raj replied aggressively.

'You may be mature than me but I'm sorry to say that you are still not mature in your nature. As a parent you should be more flexible towards children.'

'This is a matter of my reputation. Geet ! you just ruined it!' Raj loud furious voice almost echoed in the house. Geet broke down with tears. Rashmi came back to spotlight.

'Reputation?' 'So you care about your reputation more than your child? Uncle, you & Mr. Khurana might be rivals in business field but why should the younger generation too should be rivals huh? are you trying to spread hatred between Geet & Maan? Why can't they be friends? why should children suffer because of the issues between elders? Our generation is not narrow minded like yours.' Rashmi continued.

Raj was numb with Rashmi's words. She didn't let him anything to talk.

'If the media questions about all of these things. Make sure that you will preach them too!' Raj left the living room.

'Yes we will! Me & my brother are always there for Geet no matter how others would refuse to support her.' Rashmi almost bawled out.


'How can a person be this much disgusting?' Rashmi muttered.

'Rash! calm down.' Rahul tried to cool down his sister. Geet left the room with tears. She soon locked herself in.

At Maan's house.

Maan woke up with the sound of the knock on his bedroom door.

'Maan sir, please wake up. It's time for breakfast.' He heard Ram, one of the helpers at their mansion talking to him.
'Okay! I will come down!' Maan replied with a yawn. He got back home late night after completing a project as he had to submit his design portfolio the next day. He took off his mobile from the charger where he kept it to charge last night as he came home in the midnight with a dead battery. At the time he switched on the mobile he received Geet's text message which was sent last night.

A smile crept on his face after reading it. Geet's text made his day. He realized that how little things from a special person could make a huge impact in his life. He felt bad that he couldn't reply her yesterday as his mobile battery was dead.

'Hi Geet! Glad you loved the dress, though it is just a small surprise gift from me. Can't wait to meet you. I'm really sorry for being late to reply you as I was so busy with my project work & my mobile battery was dead. PS- How did you get my number huh? Seems like you have done a lot of investigations on me! LOL

Soon he went to freshen himself up. Meanwhile , Geet was weeping her heart out burring her head under a pillow. She heard her mobile beep. She lazily took it & was surprised to see a reply from Maan. She read it & just kept away her mobile. She wasn't in a mood to reply him.

Maan came out of the bathroom & checked his mobile but there wasn't any reply from Geet. She must be at college. He thought. He took his breakfast & left home soon. He couldn't even talk to his father. He was sleeping & Rishabh didn't want to bother him.

Maan was impatient to get a reply from Geet. He texted her again while driving to the university but she didn't respond. He couldn't wait anymore. He decided to call her. He rang her once but she cut it. The second time Geet spoke. 'Please Maan! don't talk to me again!' & she disconnected the call suddenly.

Maan was shocked with her reply. What's wrong with Geet? He was confused. 'Hmm! typical girls! May be she is upset with me because I got late to reply her. Let me cheer her up!. He dialed her number once again but her mobile was switched off. Maan was getting late. He decided to talk to her later.

When Maan was walking towards the lecture hall he saw some of his batchmates were looking at him in a confused way. Some of them were mumbling something. All of them were looking at him like if he has committed a crime. He couldn't understand what was happening around. He heard some of them were whispering his & Geets's names.

'Oho! here comes our Romeo! welcome bro!' One of his batchmates extended his hand. Maan was confused.

'Romeo?'

'Hey! where is your Juliet?' Another one inquired.

'Juliet?' 'What are you guys talking about?'

'How dare you Maan! you didn't even tell us the good news!'

'Good news? what the hell are you talking about?' Maan was a bit irritated as he didn't have an idea what his friends were talking about.

'We should celebrate it!' 'Why didn't you tell us about it before?'

'Guys! I can't understand a freaking thing!'

'You are right bro! People go crazy when they are in a relationship.'

'In a relationship? which relationship are you talking about?' 'For gods sake please tell me what you guys are talking about me!'Maan almost shook one of his friends with anger & frustration.

'Oho! please calm down!' 'We were talking about this!' They show the news paper to Maan. He was shocked to read & the headlines. He identified the photograph were they were playing with icing. How did it appear here? He was left with so many questions.


After few hours.

Maan was stuck with work. He denied the news appeared on the paper. He tried Geet's mobile numerous times but it was switched off. He couldn't contact Rahul either. He was worried about Geet. He could imagine what the situation would have been at her place. He spoke to his father, but since he spoke to him normally without showing anything he assumed that his father was unaware about it.


When he reached home he saw their gate was obstructed by a few media reporters. His father was outside too, replying them calmly. All of them gathered around Maan after spotting him.


'Mr. Maan Singh Khurana! Please clarify this! Are you in a relationship with your father's business rival Mr. Raj Handa's daughter?'

Maan looked at his father. He was in a serious yet calm mood.


'Please answer us!'

'There is no such thing between Miss. Geetanjali Handa and me. We are just friends! Why the hell are you behind us all the time?' Maan raised his voice.

'Oh seems like you are furious. We asked you a simple question...'

'Just leave this place right now. Are you all jobless to peep in to personal lives? why are you all trying to poke your noses in to personal matters? Maan they don't deserve any clarification. I know that you are right.' Maan's father Mihir spoke. 'Let's go.' He accompanied him inside.

'Papa, you trust me right? There is no such love affair between me & Geet. She is just a friend of mine. We met 2 days back. You know Rahul? She is Rahul's cousin.' Maan explained the whole story from A to Z. Mihir listened to him calmly. He was lucky enough to have an understanding father like him.

'I understand Maan. I am sure Raj would be fuming with anger right now. We were good friends about 3 decades back, but when we handling our business affairs there were tiffs in between. Raj always wanted to become rich in a short span of time. He never wanted to earn in good ways. About 2 decades back, he started a business partnership with some underworld group who imports illegal drugs. So I cut off my ties with him for the betterment of myself as I couldn't keep a business relationship with a person who does illegal things. He was arrested twice as far as I can remember but he had so many supporters. Time passed, I became successful with my dedication & hard work, but Raj chose the wrong path.

Mihir revealed the past. Maan was surprised to hear about it. Mihir never talked about his official life at home as he didn't want to mess up his professional life with his personal life. Maan was proud of his dad. He raised Maan alone after his wife & Maan's mom Savithri passed away due to a cancer when Maan was just 5 years old. He played the role of both mother & father to Maan & brought him up.

'Papa, I am worried about Geet. I tried dialing her but her mobile is switched off. I tried Rahul too but no answer.

'I understand. It would have been affected Geet so much. She is a girl & not matured enough. Mihir spoke. He was matured enough to understand the younger generation.

Papa I wonder who clicked that photograph!' Maan was frustrated.

'Just let it be. May be a jobless person. You know when you are successful there are so many people around you trying to pull you down. But we shouldn't let them to do so. Remember in the past you were linked with 3 girls? They were your good friends right? Gossip mongers are always behind successful people. Those rumors are carried away by people with low standards.'Mihir further explained.

'Papa I'm feeling bad for Geet. I think she got into an unnecessary trouble because of me. I just want to go & talk to her.'

'As you wish son. But be careful. I don't Raj would let you meet her. That poor girl must be already under home arrest.'

Maan finally could contact Rahul. He got to know what happened in Handa house & how Geet is suffering with the incident. Maan felt bad about it. He never expected that something would happen like this.

2 days passed. Geet was under house arrest. Raj didn't even let her to go to college. Geet was so much depressed & isolated. She refused to talk to Maan. She refused to talk to anyone else. Rashmi & Rahul were worried about her. Geet refused to eat too. Padmini & Rashmi was forcing her but they failed.

Maan desperately wanted to meet Geet. Finally he was informed by Rahul that it is possible to meet Geet as her parents will be out for a few hours as Raj had to attend a function. The security of the house was tightened.

According to Rahul's plan, he disguised himself to conceal his identity. Rahul told him that he would inform the security that a client has come to visit him & they would let him come in. Maan was hesitant initially as he wanted to meet Geet directly at her home but later realized that it would cause trouble.

Finally at the night, he reached Geet's home. He provided a fake identity card & some documents to prove that he was Rahul's client. The security guards let him go in without much trouble.

Hi Mr. Mehera! please come in.' Rahul greeted him with a wink. Rishabh was accompanied by him inside the house.

'Thank god you could come safely Maan!' Rahul whispered after locking the door.

'Are any security guards inside?'

'No! all of them are outside.'

'We cannot waste time! go & meet Geet soon!' 'She is inside the room'

The room seemed to be closed. Rahul signaled him to go in. Maan gave a slight knock at the door. At that time he realized that it was open. He tip toed inside. He couldn't believe his eyes.

'Geet!' He screamed as he saw her lying lifelessly on the flow. Blood was running out her nose & mouth. She had a handful of tablets on one of her hands. Has she attempted suicide?

To be continued...


Note - Since this is a long update I expect valuable feedbacks from you all , instead of just two word comments 😆 Because I have put on a lot of effort on this. Once I was about to post my connection lost & it didn't post 🤔 I had to re edit all once again with much patience 😆 It's nearly 3 am from my time! I'm posting this story sacrificing my sleep cause I'm gonna be inactive for 3 days & I didn't want to keep you all wait for a long.

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Posted: 10 years ago
It's amazing. So who was getting jealous was none other that rashmi.actually she was so much sweet with geet that I didn't thought that she could also be jealous. Maan gifted geet a dress which is liked by geet very much. Geet observed rashmi's behaviour which was totally changed knowing maan gifted something to geet. She tried to took that dress bit geet denied which made her angry. Rashmi iS complicated for me . suddenly she again become soft toward geet. Omg who printed that fake news in news paper. Poor geet got scolded by her father. Maan also got shocked reading that news. I must say his father is so much understanding. Omg geet tried to suicide. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
rashmi j about geet as maan gift her dress n behave rudly but next day ask sorry
some one publish maan n geet's pic in news paper which show very bad effect on geet as she is house arrested
maan's father told him all bout raj
maan wants to meet geet but not able
finally when he able to reach to her was shcok for hims as geet attempt for suicide

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update , so maan gift geet dress as apology, ooops Rashmi big J is she given pics in newspaper... Geet dad arh loved d update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awrsome going. First i was baffled by rashmi behaviour but it do hppns .human nature . I loved the way rashmi stood for geet nd showed the mirror to geets father
But alas! Thick skin itna jaldi kaise gusega .Maan's father is understanding nd now maan went to meet her .but shocked to see geet s condition . She was in edge of her patience nd she had taken,extreme step .scared to c her lyk this . Continue soon,

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update, geet father is very strict.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww Geets first feelings for Maan! Poor Geet in trouble for something she hasn't done :( OMG she took pills :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
first of all i will like to draw your attention towards use of name Madhu,Rishabh and Malik, it sound like reading 2 story together with different names.it distracts concentration when used repeatedly may be because u are writing 2 story together, it is not complain , suggestion.
about updates geet's father being don type person and Khorana were friend , similar type of plot i am writing in ghsp family ff fiction, but due to many writers story has rotated round and round and turn out very different story, but yours is great going keep it up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Maan send gift to Geet. Geet liked the dress n very happy. Rasmi jealous of Geet having gift from maan. She asked to try once n Geet refused got angry n rude with get. Next day Rashmi came n said sorry. Geet send message to maan but can't reply due to dead battery. When he replied every thing changed in Geet home her dad saw Geet n maan pic in newspaper n blasted Geet but Rashmi supported Geet. Geet is house arrested. Maan came to know about newspaper but his dad support him n said how Geet dad is not good person. Maan came to know Geet suffering from Rahul n came to see her escaping security with fake identity. Geet is on floor with blood waiting for next. N thanks for long update.

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