Poison Of Love--a LaakhAm ff part 2 updated

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hello guys!!!dont faint 😆 its not written by me 😛 one of my friend Shirsha who is a laakham fan has written it and requested me to post it here as she is not in IF 😳 part-1 lakhan and poonam's life take the first step of lovePoonam was little shocked to get the message,"'itna toh jan gayi hai lakhan ko message toh kavi nhi krte who jab vi bat karni hoti hai phone krte hai ya fir amne samne bat hoti hai' poonamput her bindi on her forhead and placed it rightly ,she thought to call lakhan, she start pressing the button but stopped for a while ,shethought jaldi jane ko kaha hai agar der hui toh fir se gussa krenge" poonam's relation with lakhan has always been full of twists and turn she was still confused with the sudden mood changes of lakhan she has never seen such a unpredictable person ,he protects her from all external perils he keeps his every promise he has never touched her body without her consent rather he slept separately ,she found him silently watching her doing house-hold chores ,he gazed at her with immense appreciation as if he is a thirsty man quenching his thirst by sipping the every single bit of her beauty, earlier she used to become quite afraidof that gaze but now a dys some way or other she feels blushed and her heart yearns to ask him -""why he gazed at her? but at the same time he screams,scold and scare her by his continuous interrogation he is so impatient thathe does'nt even had the time to hear her clarification, the more he yell the more she start fumbling and search word to give reply hiseyes pierce her heart ,and she fail to answer hisquestions at once ultimately she end up crying and give incomplete answers .but today's incident is different, he generally accompany her wherever she goes but he never messaged him like that before ,"will she call her and ask him? What if he treat her call as disobedience! She take her purse and left , alas! She left her phone in the bed room! Poonam take a rickshaw and ask the driver to go a desolate construction site she keep thinking why he will call him in suchj a place! But as he is the most unpredictable person of begusarai . he can do anything . poonam's rickshaw left the doorsteps of lakhan's house the safest place of her life,dolte could see his rickshaw passing poonam did'nt notice her brother. Dolte was alittle awestruck-"I poonmy ricksa mein kaha ja rahi hai' lakhan s jeep stopped near his house he came down and was about to enter his house. Hemeet dolte there and ask him _'ssale tum e itvatti ki kam ke liye veje the avi vi yahan khare hoge kiski tapasya kar rahe ho be! Dolte with immense awe just uttered-bhaiya oo punnmy"! lakhan wiped his sweat and say"ghar mein hogi' dolte- are nahi avi use riksa mein jate huye dekha? Lakhan turned like a wild fast leopard< ricksa! His senses get alert ,ashe knew poonam never goes any where without him . dolte continues-kitnibar bulaye use par suna hi nhi, lakhan at once ran towards his home and saw the door of his house is half-opened< and no was there in home ! he called her number whichwas ringing very distinctively , lakhan ran and entered in the home and found her phone .he was perplexed-"ja kaha sakti hai poonam! give comment guys will update it as soon as she update it 😳
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shivanika thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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love it and waitin for next part

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Superb yaar! Continue karo jaldi! Want to know the mystery ;)

Thank you so much for it dear! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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shirsha ganguly right... she told me she cant join here.
by the way nice start... FF showing lakhans possessive side...excited for consequence

waiting for next part... update soon 😉
and pm me if possible.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ahem ahem.. M to chakkar khane wali ti andy 🤣 okkk so writer is srista...amazing..waitng for next part..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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meenu tum chakkar na khayo isliye phle hi disclaimer dikha di ki ye mera ni hai 😆 Btw,writter is shirsha yaar srista ni 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello guys!!she has updated the next part so here u go...

recap- poonam got a message and went to an desolate place lakhan get worried.poison of love part -2Lakhan never shows his weakness to anybody,for him showing weakness does'nt suits a man's personality. But the entire begusarai knows thathe failed but can never hide this fact that poonam indeed his is weakness along with being his obsession. No one knows how it feels when you dreamt off losing your dearest possession. Lakhan was not able to get over thatnightmare that haunted him past a few days. Hecant even share it to others. To whom will he share it? Dolte-will he not think that his mentorhis brother-in-law the feisty thakur is a weak vulnerable entity if he get to know lakhan's fear of losing poonam he will never respect him. Priyom? He used to be his best buddy but now has become his arch rival who constantly seek a chance to snatch poonam from him.Poonam! Ohno! she will laugh at him even she will not understand! None have ever tried to do so. No one tried to understand him , all misjudge him by his apparent wild beastily quality none have ever knocked his heart to listen what his soft and silent heart-beats say?if poonam would have listen to his heart she would have known lakhan's heart only beats by her name. bindiya and ghungroo in their room ghungroo looked atbindiya Ghungroo- kya kehte ho kuch samaj nhi ata!Bindiya turned to ghungroo and pinch his cheek and said- dekha nhi lakhan thakur kaise tilmila raha hai uski tota matbal poonam thakurain ke liyeA tensed ghungroo asked bindiya- kya kiye ho bindiya rani! he recall the wrath of lakhan and his beating .Bindiya smiled and said-us din pooche the na lakhan thakur ko kaise mat dungi! Uski ek trailordekh lo!Bindiya was well aware that lakhan can be torn into pieces only if poonam get hurts. This venomous lady knew well that lakhan' apparently seems an iron-chested afearless ferocious tiger but inherently he is too vulnerable and softest part of his life is his poonam ,his love ,obsession , passion. Poonam'sabsence from his life will make him half-dead anon-resistant entity as fragile as a piece of glass.Bindiya knew lakhan is the strongest part of the entire thakur family if he get united with the others none can break them or defeat them sheis well aware only poonam can convince him,redeem him and make him unified with the family. She knew lakhan's weakness if not checked will one day turn out be the strongest part of his life,the day poonam willfall for him he will be a complete ly changed person the efficient most .he cant be wooed by seduction and nymphic pleasure because thisman bow down only near his beloved wife and has preserved his body and soul for her. her unquestionable loyality has made bindiya worried as she now is repenting that she shouldnt have thrust poonam towards lakhan by helping him to get her. now bindiya wants to kindle a fire of fear and insecurity in lakhan thatany day or other he might lost poonam. Destinyhave always helped her ,she found lakhan's phone which he gave to a shop for repairing andthis shrewd lady has messaged poonam to go toa desolate area. A petrified ghungroo asked bindiya- agar poonam mar gayi toh bindiya smiled and said -wohh toh aur accha hoga !par avi vi yeh waqt nhi aya sala us lakhan ko aise jagah marenge ki uth nhi payega she gives an evilish smile as she knew lakham should fall deeply madly in love for each other.why bindiya want lakham to fall in love! next part coming soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...bindiya in picture...waitng 4 next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update 👏 👏
why bindiya want lakham to fall in love! 😲 😡 (i mean she will defo take advantage of their love)
n wher 's pooh? 😕
waiting for next... update soon 😉
Edited by ladli_manu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update! Bindiya is behind all this? OK but why she wants Laakhan & Poonam to fall for each other so badly?! Mystery...

Update sooner!


BTW, loved the description of Laakhan' love for Poonam<3

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