IshRa SS: || Pyaar Hai || (Chap 1- pg 4)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys, I'm Reema, your new writer.. Haha!! 😆😃 Guys, I have decided to write IshRa story.. I hope you'll like it.. I'm new here, so I don't know anyone here so please Buddy Me...


Here goes the prologue.. Must read & do comment... By the way here I'm introducing a new character name Isha who looks a like ISHITA...


|| Pyaar Hai ||


Prologue


In UK,


"Congratulation Mr. Bhalla, we liked your presentation & we will be greatfull to work with you..." Raman smiled & he shaked hand "Thank you.. Thank you Mr. Tandon.."


Soon the clients took leave from meeting room when Raman checked him watch & murmurred "Oh no!!" He took his coat & grabbed the car keys & quickly left from there, leaving all his works behind...


"What happen little girl?? Hadn't your father reach yet??" The school's guard asked to Ruhi..


"No uncle.." Ruhi replied & went to the nearby bench, she dropped her bag there & sits...


Soon Raman reached there & found his princess sitting there upset... He felt guilty as he promised her to come early at school as there was mother's day special program.. He went to her & gave a choclate, Ruhi looked at him & without saying anything she took it.. Raman knew it was not enough so he gave her teddy with a sorry note, still she didn't melt... Now Raman bend on his knees in front of her & hold his ears...


"I'm sorry princess.. Papa ko aane mein late ho gaya!!" Raman apologized when Ruhi removed his hand from his ear & said "It's okay papa.. I understand... Ab ghar chale??"


Raman gave a weak smile & took her in his arm & they left for home...


Later night, Ruhi was sitting in room sadly, today she didn't eat properly, didn't watch her cartoons, all time sits alone somewhere in house, Raman noticed that..


"Ruhi.. Beta aapko kisi ne kuch kaha?? Aap itna upset kyu ho??" Raman asked naking her sit on his lap...


"Papa aaj school mein sab students ne apni mumma ko kuch na kuch dedicate kiya... Sabke mumma ne sabko kitna pyar kia.. Par waha mere liye koi nehi tha, aap bhi nehi.." Ruhi's eyes filled with tears, for a moment Raman wanted to kill himself, how can he forget this... He didn't know what to say to his little princess, he felt helpless...


"You know what Ruhi mumma toh hamesha apke sath hai, woh hamesha apko dekh sakte hai... Pata hai kaise??" Raman said while wiping her tears, he took her in his arm & walked near the window... He pointed his finger one of the shining star & continued "Waha se..."


"Par mumma mujhe chodke kyu chali gai?? Kya woh mujhse pyar nehi karte??" She asked..


"Pata hai mein jab chota tha toh dadi kehti thi ki bhagwan jisse bohot zyada pyar karte hai woh usse unke paas bula lete hai.. Sayad woh apki mumma se bohot pyar karte hai jaise mein apse karta hu.. Iss liye mein hamesha apko mere sath rakhta hu.. Hai na?? Aur mumma apse bohot pyar karti hai beta.. Woh apko dekh sakte hai aur agar aap aise sad rahoge toh mumma ko bhi takleef hogi.. Woh bhi waha khush nehi reh payegi.. Kya aap aisa chahogi??" Raman asked still wiping her tears & Ruhi shook her head in no..


She looked at the sky "Mumma dekho mein nehi ro rahi.. Dekho mein smile bhi kar rahi hu.." She smiled & Raman felt relief.. "Papa kya mumma mujhe sunn sakti hai??


"Of course.."


"Mumma!! I miss you & I love you..." Raman smiled with teary eyes & hugged Ruhi... He looked at the sky..


"I miss you & I love you too Isha.."


Ruhi got down from his lap & went near her morther's photo & give her a gift saying "Happy mothers day mumma..." Raman's eyes got wet but he control himself as Ruhi will feel sad if she saw him crying...


"Mumma se baat ho gai ho toh sone chale?? Kal school hai yaad hai na??" Raman saud while tickling her & they went for sleep, Raman once looked at Isha's photo with a smile...


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I know it's so boring but it's needed for my story... Now waiting for comments... Advance thank you... 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!! Different concept.. Ishita's look a like Raman's wife.. Interesting... Looking forward...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi dear...
It was an awesome start 👏
So Raman's wife/ Ruhi's mom is Isha... 🤔
I hope there is no twists in it😆
Waiting for the next update..
Come up soon
Will try to comment if possible 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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new interesting story please continue. it was so cute & its not boring. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi reema welcome to ishra land..:-)

Its so emotional..;-(

Papa conviencing his daughter about her mother is heart touching.

Being a single parent it is a tough job to raman.

I love the way raman telling how much his wife loves his daughter.

Ruhi wish her mother ,happy mothers day;-(.

Is u want to bring past of raman ,like how isha died?how they met..?

Actually i expected ishita...
Thanks for pm

continue soonish,intresting concept..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww that is soo emotional loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting start
continue soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai dr
Not at al boring...
Its awesome update...& different one...
Pls pm me when u update ur next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start.
If possible PM when you update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Isha 😳
loved the story... nice start
already love this name 😉
now waiting for ishita and wanna know Isha more
ruhi is such a sweetheart really poor girl she is always away from mother's love but good to know that raman is a dotting father to her
waiting for next part

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