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Posted: 10 years ago
😲 That's it???
Kaamchor kahi ki! 😆

Do I need to explain myself?😛

Update soon for more comments. 😛


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chicksoup

😲 That's it???

Kaamchor kahi ki! 😆

Do I need to explain myself?😛

Update soon for more comments. 😛



kaamchori? HOW? I told u before do parts hai 😛 or else 25 chapters tak drag karna padta 🤡 aur mujhe woh nahi karna 😎
Ammu this isnt happening U r my mommy 😭 😭 😭

acha acha 😳 . u will receive a pm soon tonight ya tomorrow. thanks to strangled in house due to swimming pool bahar 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

so that i can receive comments like this 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
baby aap bahut khadoos ho gaye ho ...hw can u stop here now ...
update kar do jaldi plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

wonderful updt Ankie

so Zoya called Gaziya just 2 say sorry my bad😆
aur un dono ka emotions ka display was good attempt
yes d Urdu dialogues were brilliant👏
Zoya realized how gem of a person Asad is
& d lioness is ready 2 fight wid d lion 4 her mrg😈
but Asad is missing & this thing terrified her🥺
I m sure Asad ka accident nahi hua hoga yeh toh tum nahi kar sakti humare saath😳😉
PS- Beharm me advertising my story 😆😆
I made an attempt in writing do give it a try if u can😳😳
here's d link
waise I guess I PMd u but u didn't saw mayb


AW! I am so sorry. I actually read ffs and stuffs when i am unable to sleep or am travelling. am yet to do any of the two soon 😳 so will let you know how it has turned out to be! 🤗

Thank you for your comments. Really encouraging, 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _Annie_

Haha...okay I'm dealing :P

😆

Appiee..where is my Asad??😭😭 He's totally gayab and poor Zoe is crying so much for him😭 He better be here soon! That means u update soon, coz he'll deffo be in the last update😳😆

The GaZia and Zoe convo was really heart-touching😳 Finally thora sa khushal mangal😆 Bas Asad aa jaye next update mein tou poora khushal mangal ho jaye ga😆

Zoe is so angry :P Asad miyan ki khair nahi🤣 Update sooon Appiee :D


he HAS to come in the last Update. Or else kahan jayega batao 😆
Haan haan dekh rahe hai kitni achi tarah se people are DEALING it All complaining where Asad is. Jao usse jake poocho where he is lost 😡 😆 😆
Thanks sweetie! I hope it was worth your time. 🤗
will do. abhi bhi 11 likes kam hai 😛 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
not going to say THANK YOU for pm😛
I'll read it tonight (hopefully). PRAY I could😭😭
unres❤️

so parents have a heart to heart convo with their daughter AFTER 6 months!
Le' me guess! Asad is up-to some sort of surprise 😃😃 like confessing??😳😳❤️ OH MY GOD
Did i just noticed that there were some words missing in Razia's convo Maybe u were hungry😕
Next I liked the parents convo with their child but I some hoe felt some thing missing! like convo wiyh Asad's parents or so!🤢
over all THUMBS UP👏👍🏼
Edited by JannatKhan780 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
^^ Everything has pros and cons. So do your cousins. But remember u wanted them to come! 🤣
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Ankie... Mera Asad kahan kho gaya. Please bring him back. Bechaari Zoya crying so much for him 😭 (me too crying for My Asad 😭😭)

Heart touching convo between Gafoor, raziya and Zoya 👏. Very well written and definitely could feel the excitement of hearing their daughters voice after so !long. I could feel a lil lump in my throat reading this convo too. Bilkul bang on tha with the correct dose of emotions and the use of Urdu was beautiful. Jannat, great work done dear 👏


Ankie, hope Zoya ache se khabar le Asad ki for the papers and obviously last update aa raha hai toh the confusion will be cleared. Am waiting for it. Loved the determination Zoya has to pull Asad up nicely 😆


Now update jaldi jaldi. I know you have the part ready 😆


I typed a long long comment and that became invalid -.-

THANK U SO MUCH choco for such wonderful comment 🤗
As per crying is concerned, happiness and sadness, tears and laughter, all are in cycle so one has to cry for laughing forever. 😳 one has to be sad for being happy forever 😳

Thank u! that is also a part that I loved writing. I thought I would use the colloquial language but two days later it clicked me to ask Jannat for help! My sweet adorable pet she is toh 🤗 😆Pet ho toh Jannat jaisa 😎

As per Zoya is concerned.. shayad kahin asad na le le uski..😳 i mean khabar 😆 what else did u think? 😆

anyway
Choco berry if you google your name this will be the first thing in results 😆
So I hope the update left you the same as your doppel ganger 😆

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-- went invalid thrice 🥱


oh figured out its the images that is invalid 😡

But solution hai mere pass 😎
Here you go




the other one

http://images .wikia.com/ adventuret ime with finn and jake /images/archive /a/aa/ 20100424015423! Chocoberry.png

all without the space 😊
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
In response to your last reply, cute little evil devil, is what I'll say, however that made me think, right from childhood all little monsters were/are endearing, cartoons to fiction. As a matter of fact eight likes to the next update. I still have a PM to reply too, will tomorrow night. I found Razia and Zoe's conversation highly endearing even though I had to read the text twice to understand it, and then I read the comment below it was actually Urdu, I have a fascination for the language, extremely beautiful. Until next time!
Edited by -SilverSparkle- - 10 years ago

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