(VIRAJ FAN FICTION) 'Life! As It comes...' - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Awesome👍🏼 update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👍🏼 update soon😊


sorry for delay

Thanks for reading and encouraging me
Will update soon hope you will like it...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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A good beginning of the story.I always wanted to see an ambitious Viraj who is sensitive &emotional but strong in his approach towards life.In the show also I wanted the creatives to show his side of story i.e. how he viewed the situations from his perspective.
Thank u for giving a realistic touch to the story where everyone's(nisha,vasu,kabir)behaviour was natural in this context.😊
BTW I want anjana's character to be explored soon waiting for ur next update😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Viraj was super annoyed that GM left without even knowing that he was here to meet her and then this Vintage room issue ..its 14:30...

Viraj's in his cabin sitting on his chair (side turned) and feeling all mix of anger, restlessness and bad... ( damn i shouldn't have shouted at that girl like that... but then she was there without permission ...what was she doing there...and what is happening here ??? GM you will have to have and answer for this utter carelessness and lack of professionalism??? you better have an answer to it...)

GM's car enters LA gates @ 14:30 and wants to go straight to practice ground for some much needed motivation after very hectic meeting at showcase venue...

On Keeping first step on practice ground GM senses thickness in the air which was quite expected knowing Tornado's Visit at LA today, but wait it never affected practice ground or students... taking in the view for inspection GM saw Anjana sitting on a resting bench and with the looks of it didn't feel that she was on a break ( whats wrong with this normally sweet and at her peak of cheerfulness at practice is looking that she will breakdown any minute..) Kush notices GM 's presence and go and gives update on what transpired at LA. 'Kush, for Mr. Kotian's meeting, presentation and other details are in place?' Kush replies 'Yes'. Gm's nodes 'Good. Thank you. Kush, please go home by 4 today you need rest.Tomorrow is going to be most hectic, go directly at venue... though much is done, but you know how it is,right? Kush hesitates but says thanks and leave to complete his pending works before signing off for the day. ..

Gm goes and stands next to coach both looking at Anjana and coach says 'Today KID has got taste of real life I think. Her Sports God has made up his mind to keep everyone around him in absolute reality... please, go talk to her this showcase is very important for her we can't effort to loss out on this chance after coming this near to our goal...I tired talking to her but, you have this professional touch, Ms. Psychologist and that special bonding you have with everybody here... is my only hope go lady'... GM looks at him in annoyance ''seriously coach, I might be or rather have been before coming to this place a professional psychologist but I fail to understand how you manage to be so cool in such situations...'' on that coach say 'in just 60 years of young life, I have seen worst on war fields; where worst is actually worst and not created by one own self ... and people out here are funniest of all, they create war fields of problems in their brains and then gets on the battle to solve it...' GM's retort was interrupted by coach...'go girl go she need you and than you still have tornado to deal with ,he is still in and waiting for you...''GM walks away from coach and towards Anjana and doesn't listen to what coach says ''with the looks of you and your anger I hope to be entertained...''.

Everybody around the scenes with hope full eye awaits the sigh of relief moment to see Anjana being back to normal ...but then all of sudden GM stops in the middle on the ground 'enough is enough and I m not going to take this crap any more' and Gm storms towards academy building -Viraj's cabin...

GM goes straight into Viraj's cabin without a knock and stands in front of Viraj, and Viraj is all socked that somebody can dare to come in without knock and that's to Amber... But before he could say anything in his anger which he was trying to control...

GM commanded. '' I want you to talk to Anjana... right now''
''AMBER ! How dare can yo..


Amber interrupts ''OF COURSE I CAN DARE. I DON'T CARE A DAMN IF YOU OWN THIS PLACE OR YOU ARE SOME ROYAL PRINCE... I WILL NOT STAND ANY ONE WHO IS RUINING ALL MY AND MY TEAMS WORK...DO YOU EVEN REALIZE WHAT HAVE YOU DONE...WHAT WERE YOU THINKING... THAT A 14 YEAR OLD KID IS THERE TO DO WHAT ?ROB SOMETHING ...FOR HEAVEN SAKE, FOR YOUR BLOODY ''TREASURE ROOM''YOU HAVE RUINED HER CHANCES OF GOOD PERFORMANCE FOR THE EVENT ON WHICH WE ALL HAVE WORKED SO HARD AND FOR SO LONG...

On this Viraj retorts with his half smile''I saw hard work out here Amber, with the securities,discipline, i must sa... and he was again interrupted and his annoyance and anger shot up...to his shock of life no body; mind it nobody ever cut his words not even Nisha dared that and now this lady ,who never uttered a word beyond few concise and to the point and flat statements.

''Really you care what happens over here... FOR YOUR KIND INFORMATION THAT TREASURE ROOM OF YOUR WOULD HAVE GONE FOR DUST AND RUST IF NOT FOR US, IF WE SAY on YOUR INTERESTS for academy ,where were you when this academy needed you the most, just getting money is not enough. I hope you know that? OK fine, you where busy elsewhere.tell me something, do you know that person's name on whom you shouted at, in the morning over a cup of coffee...do you know ,how many events are lined up and what are the pain points we are to deal with... which department needs the extract attention at this moment...

'That's what you are hired here for and let me remind I own this academy and i m still your employer... And nobody talks to me like this.

Really ? That's what exactly the problem is; nobody ever spoke to you to make you see reasons. I am sorry, but i am not your Daarji to bow downs and take every word of yours to the letters and follow. Hiring and Firing Doesn't make you an employer. For haven sake Viraj his academy might be is some whimsical hobby of you royals .But we are people out here who really works hard, there are people who come here to earn their living, students who comes with their dreams and when you come and ruin it all, I just can't stand and do nothing about it...I don't know how you are going to do it, but if Anjana doesn't win first place at showcase ... then I M WARNING YOU VIRAJ... YOU WIL ...

Knock at the door interrupts Amber words. Kush peeps in and says' Mr. Kotian and Mr Krishna is waiting in conference room its time 1500 hrs'



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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
It's amazing yaar.It's so professional on how an academy works in real & what r the issues faced by them.👏
Amber knocked some sense into Viraj's head otherwise he wont be able to come out of the inner turmoil faced by him currently.😃
So what wud be Viraj's reaction.Waiting for ur next update.😛

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