Ishra OS-Ajab Gazab love updtd lil part pg 1 and note on pg 4 (9 july)

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He was standing in front of the ganga ghaat..he looked around and saw the purity and peace of banaras..this is what he love about this place..so calm and so peaceful. He looked around to see many peoples chanting mantras..some offering prayers. Some were in the holy river and some were just sitting in the stair case to get fresh. This place is his favourite and why it wont be after all its the only place which have the ability to calm him down. His ringing cell caught his attention and he looked at the name flashing on it and its his mother..he whined and disconnected the call. And then switched his phone off. Because he know why she is calling him but he is not in mood to have any interrogation with her as of now.

He turned around to sit near the river ganga but as he turned around he froze on his spot..he couldn't avert his gaze g
from the beautiful creation of the god. He tried but failed miserably..as a girl wrapped in yellow saree was looking serene..her wet saree was clinging to her body showing her womanly curves. He was mesmerised by her beauty and innocence..he was looking at her god knows since when but a tap on his shoulder forced him to turn around. He saw his brother romi standing there.

"Bhai what are u doing here. C'mon we are getting late. Nani must be worried" romi said with a tinge of excitement as he can't wait to meet his nani.
"Romi we will leave after taking aarti till then go and sit quietly"he replied and turned around to look at the girl but to his disappointment she was not there..who was she..whats her name..all these thoughts were making him restless..
Raman looked around again but she is no where to be seen. He was little annoyed on romi as because of him it happened.

Sun has been sat. Now only darkness was there. Soon diyas were lighting in the river..loud sound..aartis were going on and on. Raman sighed and reached at the place where aarti was going on. He closed his eyes and stood there. Suddenly he felt someone's presence beside him. He ignored it and was concentrating on the aarti but a soft arm brushed against his forearm and electric shocks passed through his whole body. He abruptly opened his eyes to see the much awaited sight. The same girl was standing in front of him in the same saree..he got to see her face to face..she is beautiful..her saree is still wet and her long traces are hanging losely on her back..eyes closed and lips moving..a perfect example of epitome beauty. Raman was literally drooling on her as if he is a teenager who is standing beside his crush..suddenly someone pushed him from his left side and he collided with her soft body. He steadied himself and held her waist to prevent her from falling..her eyes were wide. She was looking at him with comical expressions..he wanted to move away from her but can't do that..he just want to live this moment. They were looking at each other and then a voice caught their attention..

"God bless a couple like u. Next time do visit here with ur kids.."the priest said when he found them in that position..

Raman steadied her and withdraw his hands back from her waist and he is already missing the her warmth. He looked at the girl through the corner of his eyes. She was biting her lips..she was looking down at her hands. She is cute and innocent.

"Beta take this aarti. And then spill some water over ur husband's head"
This time the girl replied"sorry pandit ji but we are not a couple. And i will come tomorrow.."

Raman was mesmerised with her sweet and magical voice..he wanted to know her name but is it good to ask the name of a girl who is a complete stranger and why will she tell me. He was about to start the conversation with a sorry but she turned around and left from there. Raman stood froze as he saw her moving away. His mind took almost two minutes to react and then he rushed to find her but she is not there..is she a ghost?? Appearing in a moment and disappearing in another. He thought with great irritation..

"Ayyio murgan..what he must be thinking. Thank god i left from there to avoid further embarrassment.."Ishita was relieved. She quickly approached vandu akka and left from there to meet her darling dadi who lives in banaras.





Will complete it asap. But i want honest reviews and comments please. And i m ready for ur tomatoes and chapals😆
Ankita :)

P.S do let me know if anyone want pm😃
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Pravalli thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story
Interesting start
The girl was ishita na
Continue soon
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Intresting start and different one continue soon
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Originally posted by: Pravalli

Nice story

Interesting start
The girl was ishita na
Continue soon

Hey thanks a lot dear.
U have to wait to know who that girl was😉
Will continue for sure😃
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Originally posted by: Sri1091

Intresting start and different one continue soon

Thanks a lot dear😳
Will continue for sure😊
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Thanks a lot😳
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Fairly new on this forum. So bit nervous :)
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I'll be waiting for the update 😊
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Interesting start dear
Continue soon...do pm me fr d nxt part
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Beautiful start and interesting first meet with the unknown beautiful girl. Raman got mesmerize by her beauty and then she disappeared hope he will find her next update.please continue. You doing good for the first start dear.😊

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