OS : Vibharth Precap

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Buddies,

Okay so i decided to wrote an OS on the precap Vibharth scene, sorry it must be not great as i wrote it in a little hurry but i will try next time i wrote to do it in a better way...sorry for this one and hope you will like it even if in reality the epi will show a far better scene..

Anku this once for you as you adviced me to write this

Parth looked at Vibha shocked of what she just did, his hand on his cheek. He wasnt able to believe that she really do that.
Vibha was looking at him with regrets she didnt want to do that but he didnt left her any choice, someone was there and he wasnt ready to let her off...
Both stare at each other and before Vibha could say anything an angry Parth left from there.
Vibha's face turned red : hey bhagwan yeh kia kardiya maine...Parth peh hath uthaya...mujhe aisa nahin karna chahiye tha...lekin woh bhi to meri baat nahin man raha tha...
She was feeling upset he must be so angry at her...she was lost in her guilt when breaking her though :
R : Vibha are you ok ?
V : coming out of her think yes sir..am fine..
R : you sure ?
V : yes Sir...kuch kaam tha ?
R : Haan woh Kamini maam tumhe dhoond rahi hai to unho ne mujhe bheja tumko lene..woh tumko pata hai na students ke report card teyar karne hai Thursday ko sab parents arahe hai..
V : inside herself Thursday ko...hey bhagwan itni jaldi...matlab ke Thursday ko Parth chala jayega...mujhe Parth se baat karni hogi...bohot ghussa hoga woh..yeh kia kardiya maine
R : Vibha ? Kahan khogayi ?
V : kahin nahin sir...acha to me chalti houn...
Vibha was leaving when Reshab hold her hand back : Vibha rukooo

Vibha looked at Reshab shocked that he hold her hand, following her eyes he immediatly understood what was bothering her and left her hand : Sorry
V : Kahiye Sir...
R : Vibha woh me...me soch raha tha ke..
Reshab was trying hard to speak but everytime she was in front of him, he was loosing his words and wasnt abble to say anything...he tried hard and when finally he was about to say it Vibha looked lost in her though and didnt pay attention to any word :
R : Vibha look i know your upset...yeh Angela wala incident, your birthday and all but..
Vibha remind of her birthday, how sweet Parth has been, how he organized her birthday and bring Daadi here knowing that she didnt get permission to go home, how he bring cake and fight the goons for her..
She was feeling more guilty at each though coming in her head, so before Reshab could told her that he was falling for her Vibha left..
Reshab didnt notice when she left as he was showing her his back and talking :
R : look i know you must feel strange about that but you know..i guess whatever happened for a reason..you came back here...because we had to meet..we had to come closer..maybe God want us to..to become one..so..if you allow me i would like to...ask your parents permission and go out someday with you...taking a deep breath of relief uff you dont know how good am feeling now i said it all i was really worried thinking how you will take it..but...am glad you didnt misunderstood me...i think..

Reshab turned and suddenly he got the shock of his life seeing that Vibha wasnt there anymore but another women was standing right there where she was a while ago...Kamini Chatrelekha Singh.
K : Reshab ji...aap...yeh kabse ??
R : shocked and understanding what she was thinking : Maam...err.. Your mistaken..i..i was..i...i am sorry have to go..
Reshab left unable to say anything, he was feeling so humiliating..Kamini on her side was thanking god that finally she had the choice between two men : Karthik ji and Reshab ji..

Parth was very angry, he wasnt abble to believe that she just slapped him, he was fuming in anger, he wasnt able to do anything, he couldnt went to Utkarsh..otherwise he will ask him the reason behind soo much anger so Parth went to change and left in sports room in order to do some boxing..and change his mind.
He wear his boxing gloves and stared at the punching bag angrily. He closed his eyes and suddenly it came back to his mind, the image of Vibha maam slapping him and withouth a second think he open his eyes and start punching the bag with as strengh as he could letting his anger flow on the bag..(background music laal Ishq)
P : she slapped me ?? I just asked her to tell me that she loves me and she slapped me...why ??? Why couldnt she say the three words she told me the other night ??? What was the problem ?? I told her nobody was there but she didnt listen to me...and she slapped me !!!

Parth anger was still on fire, he kept punching the bag trying to get his anger out of him but no...it wasnt working...he was still punching the bag when the door slowly got open on a guilty Vibha.
She looked at Parth, his anger was clearly visible on his face, she slowly walked toward him saying: Parth...with a soft voice
But Parth didnt reply to her, he punched the bag with more strengh, hearing her voice was reminding him of how she slapped him,
V : Parth...please meri baat sunho
P : punching the bag more and more..
V : Parth..i am sorry...me woh..
P : closed his eyes and punched the bag more stronger wishing he could stop his ears from hearing her voice...but no it wasnt working..her voice...her soft beautiful voice..he was hearing it..
Vibha waited for a while but Parth wasnt getting attention to her, he was still punching the bag as if no one was around him...taking a deep breath Vibha walked toward the punching bag, she put it aside and said : Parth meri baat sunho..
Parth's eyes were still closed, he was about to punch right on her face unknown of the fact that she removed the punching bag when her scream make his fist stop right in front of her face. He opened his eyes and shocked discover Vibha in front of him with a frighten face, he looked at her with guilt she was having tears in her eyes.

P : Maam i am sorry..mujhe pata nahin tha ke aap ne...
V : No Parth i am sorry..maine tumpeh haath uthaya...me yeh karna nahin chahti thi trust me..lekin koi araha tha..aur tum meri baat nahin man rahe the..to me dar gayi..or yeh..am sorry am really sorry please mujhe maaf kardo..
Her tears were rolling down her cheeks, Parth couldnt see her more in pain, he slowly walked toward her removing his gloves and letting them fall down, he cupped her face with his hands and slowly wiper her tears away, looking in her eyes and shaking his head in a no dont
P : No Maam i am sorry...i should have stopped when you said that you heard someone...i am sorry...i know we have to be careful because you need that job and my mum need me to study here...i should have control myself..please Maam forgive me...
V : crying i swear Parth i didnt want to slap you
P : please maam dont cry am sorry..i know you didnt want that...please stop crying...for me
Parth wipes her tears away and slowly looking at her he said : Maam apko pata hai ap kitni sundar ho ? Rote hue bhi ap bohot sundar lag rahi hai..
That sentence make a small smile appear on Vibha's face and Parth smiled too...both were staring at each other, lost in each other, it was such a good feeling to be together...both wanted time to stop there but reminding her duty, Vibha free herself from Parth and said : I have to go Kamini is looking for me...

Parth let her go, she was slowly leaving when coming back on her step she waslked toward Parth who surprised look at her and on her tiptoe she slowly move her face ahead and sweetly kiss him on his cheek where earlier she slapped him. Vibha's face turned red, she looked down smiling and Parth was like on cloud, he was surprised that she did that..seems like there was a lot of things he didnt know about his Vibha maam...she was slowly about to left when Holding her back Parth pulled her toward him and hug her very tightly whispering : I love you Maam i love you..
Vibha surprised of what he just did, slowly let a smile appear on her face and hugged him back saying : i love you too Parth..i really do..

Together they were as one proving the whole world that love has no boundaries and that no matter their difference, their heart were beating for each other and their feelings..enough strong to face the whole world waiting outside for them.


End of the OS



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Adi_Ki_Zoya thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Okay me first!!
I truly have no words to explain how awesome it is 👏
I will die of happiness if this happens in the show 😆

So so so cute OS .. Kamini rishab scene Lol 😛
Loved the way party said 'aap rothe hue bhi sundar ho' aww ❤️
You portrayed angry part so well.
The way he pulled her in the last part was splendid
And then they confesses .. Vibha kisses on his cheek aww aww
Plz bagwaan make this true .. 😳

You made my day my dear parth😉
You are truly an amazing writer 👏

Write more and more
I love reading all your work👍🏼

Edited by Helping_angel - 10 years ago
Garima04 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mindblowingg..best part was kamini hving two options 😆

Keep writing dear
mansinarang95 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was magical one..
awesum sam..👍🏼
loved every bit of hit.
the angry scene of parth and vibha saying sorry superb..👏
vibha kiss aww and their hug 😳😳
u wrote soo beautifully
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome!! it was really good!! i was going to write one after the boxing but i don't think i can match up to your amazing story!!
loved the way parth was punching away and she came and he was so close to hitting her... nice hug at the end too!!

well done! superb!! bravo!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it 👏, i want more, continue writing. Hope this happens in the show. After reading this, i have high expectations from C.Vs now, they better not disappoint us.
Semeira thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Helping_angel

Okay me first!!

I truly have no words to explain how awesome it is 👏
I will die of happiness if this happens in the show 😆

So so so cute OS .. Kamini rishab scene Lol 😛
Loved the way party said 'aap rothe hue bhi sundar ho' aww ❤️
You portrayed angry part so well.
The way he pulled her in the last part was splendid
And then they confesses .. Vibha kisses on his cheek aww aww
Plz bagwaan make this true .. 😳

You made my day my dear parth😉
You are truly an amazing writer 👏

Write more and more
I love reading all your work👍🏼


My Vibha is always first😉
Thank youuu very much😳😳
It goes right on ma heart coming from you that comment is more special for me
Semeira thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Garima04

Mindblowingg..best part was kamini hving two options 😆

Keep writing dear


Haha i also loved writing this😉😆
It was my way to punished Reshab if he comes tomorrow between my Vibharth😆
Thank youuu😳
Semeira thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansinarang95

it was magical one..

awesum sam..👍🏼
loved every bit of hit.
the angry scene of parth and vibha saying sorry superb..👏
vibha kiss aww and their hug 😳😳
u wrote soo beautifully


Thank youuu😳
Glad that you loved it more than me😉
Semeira thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosabelle

awesome!! it was really good!! i was going to write one after the boxing but i don't think i can match up to your amazing story!!

loved the way parth was punching away and she came and he was so close to hitting her... nice hug at the end too!!

well done! superb!! bravo!!!!


Oh dear you can easily match up and do far better than me..please do make a try i would love to read your take on this scene😉
Thank you sooo much for appreciating my work😳😳

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