SidNi TS 'Beginning Of Our Story' last part pg 6 *cmpltd* - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abinaya12

Wowww...😳😳 continueee sooonm


Thank u abinaya...glad I m😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: amikool143

Y don't you continue next part and make as ts


Lol yeah...gonna do that only😳😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Salam SidNians...here I am back with the last part of this OS turned TS😆 seriously thank you a lot for proving me wrong and actually finding part one good or shall i say the actual OS good😳😆 was so happy and surprised...so here comes LAST Part of this TS..but before scrolling down do tell me in your comments about how many of you already knew that I will continue😆

BEST DAY OF OUR LIFE


She was going through her cupboard not knowing what to wear when DD walked in her room 'so someone is going somewhere?' She asked eyeing the room which was a mess now ... roshni giggled 'promise to clean it mom' she said 'yes...you have to for sure...but what's this...where are you going? ' she asked already knowing the answer 'mom..wo..I am ..sidd' she didn't knew how to tell her mom that she was going out for a date although her mom is aware about her love but still this was such an awkward situation

'So finally he asked you out?' Durga asked directly making her blush 'yes but as I told you about him, he kept on playing with his words and can't say it directly...it's been five years and he is still the same' roshni said 'what was his reaction after meeting you?' Asked durga roshni took her hand and sat on the bed 'ohh mom...he was quite...he didn't even uttered a word at first but later was better, may be was out of shock and then..' 'then? ' durga asked 'nothing he messaged me and asked me to go out with him..' 'bus?' 'Yes..bus for now ...now mom please please help me na about what shall I wear' roshni asked

Durga smiled at her daughter and walked to the cupboard taking out a while colour chudidar suit for her 'you should wear this...my daughter will look like a princess' durga said Kissing her forehead and left giving her time to get ready

Soon she was standing in front of mirror dressed in the suit durga selected for her, she then applied a little make up and smiled finding herself perfect and just then her mobile rang

Sid
You ready?

Roshni
Yup

Sid
I will be there in five minutes

Roshni
Waiting

Picking her clutch from bed she ran downstairs informing durga that he will be here any moment and saying bye to durga she went outside as he messaged her 'hie' he greeted 'hey' she greeted 'come' he said opening the door for her 'thanks' 'pleasure is all mine' he said walking towards his side, seated in and drove away

'No doubt but someone is looking gorgeous ' he complemented making her crimson red 'thanks' he smiled ear to ear seeing her blush and drove towards there destination



He stopped the car and coming out walked towards her opening the door for her 'thanks' 'looks like with a lot of things what else you have learned is the word thanks' he joked making her look down embarrass 'acha khair leave it lets go inside' he said holding her hand taking her inside ...

he brought her at his apartment where he Is living alone since his parents shifted New York, she frowned as it was all dark 'siddhart why it is too dark?' She asked confused 'you will know' he shrugged and walking towards the socket turned on the lights...

She gasped finding the hall beautifully decorated and a big screen was set at the front with a couch 'what's this?' She asked 'it's movie time' he said and made her sit on the couch bringing pop corns from kitchen and other refreshment 'wow this all is so perfect. ..' she smiled widely 'I know' he winked 'so what are we going to watch?' She asked taking her bowl of pop corns 'mujhse dosti karoge' he replied bringing a big smiled on her face 'wow sid..its my favorite movie' she said 'I know I know now let me play it'

As the movie started he turned off the lights and sat beside her ...through out the movie she kept glued to It..sometimes laughing over a scene or sometimes crying on some emotional scene, sometime enacting her favorite dialogue and sometime telling him about her favorite places in London which were shown in the movie 'do you liked it?' She asked as it ended unknown to the fact that through out the movie he kept starring at her and didn't watched a single scene

'It was awesome' he whispered , she looked at him and blushed under his intense gaze 'umm what next?' she asked diverting his attention 'dinner' he announced and walked in the kitchen laying the kitchen counter with all the dishes he prepared and set two chairs on the opposite sites of counter 'have a seat' he said as he pulled the chair for her and made her sit 'wow these all are my favorite dishes' she said jumping on her chair 'I know' he smiled 'did you made them yourself ?' She asked unsure

'Of course I prepared this delicious food...you don't know but I had turned itno a perfect cook since mom dad shifted to New York' he declared proudly and she clapped dramatically making him chuckle

They had dinner and through out the dinner she kept praising the food and later he brought two cups of ice cream from refrigerator 'chocolate vanilla I love it ' she exclaimed snatching cup from his hand and he shook his head on her antics



'Can I have a dance please?' he asked forwarding his hand to her as they finished the coffee, she turned to look at him standing by the railing in balcony 'sure' she replied placing her hand In his and he took her inside and turned on the music ... they danced romantically lost in each other when he called her out

'Roshni' 'hmm' she hmmed in response lost in the beautiful song 'you didn't answered me?' 'About what?' She asked looking at him 'about my yesterday's proposal?' He asked and she blushed thinking about there conversation and how he asked her to be his girlfriend 'it's a yes' she replied hiding her face in his chest 'that means I won the challenge' he exclaimed...she frowned and looked back at him 'what do you mean?' She asked 'you challenged me na that I won't be able to change your answer in a yes' he winked

'Did you did all this for the challenge?' She asked making him aware of the blunder he made by saying what he shouldn't had, he tried to say something but she cut him off 'it's ohk...my mistake I took it all in a wrong way..I should leave' she said in one breath as her eyes moistened, releasing her hand from his hold she turned to go only to be stopped by him

He held her hand and pulled her back 'I thought that you had changed a lot in past five years but I didn't knew that this silliness of yours is still here' he said pointing at hef forehead above her eye 'ohkay I am sorry too for bringing challenge topic here but seriously do you really think that i did all this because of that challenge?' He asked calmly but she didn't uttered a word 'roshni...I am not some crazy who will do all this for just a lame challenge...neither you are some Prime Minister that I will get all your information on internet in just one night' he said as a matter of fact

Holding her hand he took her in his room and as soon as he switched on the lights she gasped 'Siddhart this..' she whispered scanning the room again and again 'roshni I was never interested in a feeling called love until I met you in college...that time it was just some unknown feeling but as you joined our group you started to make a place in my heart...they all called you behenji for wearing glasses and for wearing shalwar suits and not some western uncomfortable dresses ..but I found you perfect...I felt that you are the right one for me...roshni I had captured all our moments together in those three years with me and had hide them In this room of mine...

This room turned my secret sharer when you left without saying anything...you know I was going to propose you in the farewell of our seniors that year and just one weak before that day you left...I tried searching for you like maniac but didn't found you anywhere but still I didn't lost hope and waited for you...roshni in past five years I had become what was you..your likes dislikes are mine now...every night I had dreamed about you...you were you are and you will always be my first and last love..' he carressed one of her picture in which she was holding a cute puppy and smiling over something

'Roshni I want you to be with me forever..I now want to bring my life out from this room, with you and not with your memories as I want to create more new and beautiful memories...will you allow me?' He asked turning towards her and found her weeping silently, 'please don't cry I can't see tears in your eyes...' he whispered and as he did she ran In his arms surprising him 'I love you Siddhart ...I love you a lot...I love from the day I saw you...from the day you found the real roshni behind that scared roshni and those glasses ..you were the first guy who called me beautiful...I love you and only you' she confessed

'I love you too' He too hugged her back and confessed kissing her forehead ..breaking the hug he sat on his knees and took out a ring from his pocket... a simple yet expensive ring 'Miss.Roshni Patel urf My dear Over Confident Doctor can you allow me to get injured in your love and get admit in that beautiful heart of yours...Will you be treat this crazy for all your life?' He asked making her giggle

'what if I say no?' She asked 'then I will make sure that you cange your answer in yes' he replied back making her laugh 'yes...I can admit you as my personal patient but can you tolerate this crazy doctor for all your life?' She asked 'this one life is not even enough ...I want to stay with a crazy doctor like you for all the lives I will be blessed with' he said with pure love and stood up

Slipping the ring in her finger he pulled her in a hug not even letting the air to pass from between them... 'I love you' both said together and chuckled



He stopped the car in front of her house 'so we are meeting tomorrow right?' Asked sid 'umm why?' She asked acting unaware of reason 'uffu!! Karan and krystal are leaving for there honeymoon the day after tomorrow...don't you want to reveal the news to everyone?' He asked 'krystal knows about my feelings for you but I am excited to see other's reaction' she said excited 'everyone else too knows...they were aware and my liking towards you' he said and both of them laughed out a loud 'that means all knows so there is no need to meet right?' She asked

'Not done...we are meeting tomorrow and that's final and if you denied then I will come inside right now and will ask aunty about it' he said pretending to be angry 'this anger doesn't suits you...ohkay we will meet but it's you who is going to inform others about tomorrow's plan...' 'done' 'ohkay I will go now...' 'aren't you forgetting something? ' he asked 'what?' 'A goodbye kiss' he reminded winking making her blush 'close your eyes' she said while he smiled widely before closing his eyes and brought his face near her

She came close and kissing his cheek hurriedly came out of the car 'that's not done' he pouted 'aww save the other one for later' she said winking while he shook his head 'sunu(listen)' he called out as she turned to go 'hmm' 'mom and dad are coming the day after tomorrow as I had asked them so can you please discuss with aunty and inform me that when shall I bring them?' He asked 'any day they want too...' she said and run Inside the house unable to hide the happiness she felt that moment...he too felt blessed and as she closed the door he drove away

Unlocking the door of his apartment as he went in his mobile buzzed

Roshni
'Thank you so much for everything Siddhart..you gave me the biggest happiness of my life...I will be waiting for uncle aunty at my place'

Sid
I love you

Roshni
I love you two three four and so on... :-D

It was indeed the best day of there life

The End
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So that's it!!! Do ignore my mistakes as it isn't prove read😳 and yeah do hit like and leave back your precious comments⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thank u
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Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
It was a brilliant finish to a perfect story...I am in love with how simple it was and how well you described Sid feelings as he took her to the room...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: stephie34

It was a brilliant finish to a perfect story...I am in love with how simple it was and how well you described Sid feelings as he took her to the room...


Thank u so much stephie...glad u liked it😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Everything was perfect from beginning to end. I loved DD and Roshni's conversation. DD knew about their feelings for each other and it was so adorable the way she picked up a dress for Roshni. The dinner date was so romantic! At first watching movie then Sid making her fav dishes, then the proposal aww. I loved everything. Sid's room full of roshni's picture just like the Bangkok wala Sid in our show. It was an amazing update. And thanks for making it a TS and completing it. I think I wrote too much in my excitement but loved it. It was superb. Wish you continue and make it a FF. Ahh!! I think I'm asking for too much. 😆 you will kill me nah Aroo!
Edited by paru10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Read both the parts in a go.
It's a nice story first.

Woaho roshni was a behenji??? Imagination is far away from me...

But she is a doctor. Yus she is a doctor who should treat sid's heart.

Liked first part as all the people were having fun liked their convo and sid 's excitement and happiness on seeing her.
Sid and roshni phone convo was fun to read

Second part was perfect.

To be frank I thought sid will play pictures if theirs at the college times something like this.but it was actually a movie 😆

Movie popcorn dinner coffe dance and confession what more do a perfect night need more than this???

Likes their convo in d last...

And it's perfect end.

Finally it's a fabulous writing. Congratulations🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
perfect ending
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Lovely update
If not asking more can you write one more part please want to see frens reactions
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Superb ending.
Loved Sidni's romance and the fact that Roshni accepted his proposal after knowing each other for 5 years.

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