ISHRA FF: WILL LOVE BLOOM IN OUR LIVES (TH #2)(COMPLETED- pg 48) - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
My sincere apologies for neglecting this story for some time. I had written the update long back but couldn't really update due to some real life issues and yes my other SS which I wanted to finish. So this is my only pending story and I promise to update this regularly and not keep you waiting. Will post the next update end of this week. Till then do read this update and post your comments. They're valuable 😃


CHAPTER 20

It was time for the naming function when the couple sat with the baby. The name was decided but on everyone's insistence a function was held and the baby was now named "Aditya Raman Bhalla" traditionally. All the while she was not her usual self. She was not someone whoh believed in omens. But certain things that kept happening did not settle down well with her. She could feel her brother in law's gaze contasntly upon her. She could only sit peacefully with her husband around. One option was to share everything with him but what did she have in hand. They loved each other but she wasn't sure if he'd trust her blindly. They have spoken about trust at various occasions but not once they have really faced such a situation. With two minds she carried on with her work for the day which was being with the baby. Every time her room door knocked or she had to walk around the house alone, it did not settle down well with her. She was always under his lustful eyes. She wanted to bring the man in open but how could she do all this alone.

She was in the kitchen making coffee for herself but found Neelu around cleaning up something. She thanked the gods yet another time for making Neelu staying around her. It was only her and the baby at home now. All had gone out including her brother inlaw. She couldn't be happier. Her room door flung open and he found her sleeping with the baby in her embrace. She looked truly beautiful under those tiny fluorescent light bulbs and his eyes were set on her naval which were exposed as the pallu had moved in sleep. She woke up when she felt an unpleasent breath fanning her face.She opened her eyes to see her brother in law staring at her villainously and was looking sloshed. She threw glares at him and sat up quickly trying to move towards the edge of the bed. The room was already locked and with all her might she pushed him but he was too strong for. In no time he got hold of her pallu and tried pulling which she resisted. His hands clutched her neck tight pinning her to the wall. He forcefully made her face him and kept calling her "Ishitha ji". She managed to push him this time around and moved from his clutches as fast she could. He was up again in seconds and caught her from behind. She was sweating vigorously in fear and she felt his creepy hands rubbing her sweat. She kept calling out her husband's time and every time she heard him say "There is no one at home, Ishitha Ji. It's just you and me". She refused to believe him and with another push she ran out of the room. They were now in the living room and while she ducked herself behind the sofa. He pulled her up by holding on to her hair and they both landed on the sofa. He was on top of her and was trying to forcefully kiss her. She called out to her mother, to her murugan but none seem to hear her plea today. The main door creaked open which alerted his sharp ears. Within minutes he tossed and she was over him. He shouted "Ishitha Ji leave me. I respect our relationship and we are like siblings". Raman and Simi both came in walking and their face looked pale. He got up and started adjusting his shirt and set his hair. A devastated Ishitha ran towards Raman and hugged him tight. He did not reciprocate the hug back but stood like a statue. Another side, Simmi kept hovering over her husband throwing glances at Ishitha which were filled with rage. After calming herself, Ishitha tried explaining herself but felt simmi's hands landing hard on her cheeks. She looked towards him for support but he did not show any kind of expression. He was in a different dilemma all together. His heart wanted to believe his wife's pleas but his mind and eyes were against it. He wanted to walk from the place but his sister made him stay there and demanded an answer. Their parents had come by then and as fate would have it even her parents had come back who did not understand anything. Ishitha's mother ran to ishitha and hugged her tight when she saw her daughter's disheveled state.

Simmi who was witnessing all of this shouted "Stop it all of you, this woman is incorrigible. My Bhai gave her everything. He gave her love, all the support she needed but she is now interested in another man. He is my husband and she sets her eye on him. She respects no relation and I know the kind of relationship she shares with bhai. It was always him who kept taking the next step. She was stuck in her past, with her Ex. Who knows why the man collapsed?"

Ishitha stood silent all long listening to the blame game but then she did not like a word against her character. She was waiting all along waiting for him to stand up for her but he stood emotionless and his face turned turned away. "Simmi not a word anymore. I was silent that doesn't mean I am accepting to any of this. The man whom you got married to is the guy who forced himself upon me. Ask him. This guy is not worth your love and trust Simmi" Once again Simmi raised her hand to slap her but it was Param who stopped.

Param: Let's wrap it up Simmo. Why do you want to blame your Bhabhi maybe it was an accident and eyed Ishitha still feigning innocence. Ishitha came forward shouting it was not an accident and slapped param but he kept smiling at her.

Toshi: Raman, I don't want her here anymore. You will be better off without her. A woman who lusts over someone's man is not worthy of anyone's love. But whatever you do I don't care my grandson, iss ghar ka chirag, your son will stay with us and not with this lady. Get rid off her now.

Raman stood perplexed nothing really reached him but he becme alert the minute he heard his little baby wailing. "You know what, I have had enough with you. You should be first in a position to become a good mother than involve in all this. I have always been understanding and all the more patient when it comes with you. Especially whenever you had to deal with that ex of yours. Your sister crosses all limits and gets my sister to get married to some loafer. I seriously don't want to talk about anything. Its better we give some time to our messy relationship and before we sort out everything its better you stay away from me and my family. That includes my son as well"

Raman, do I not mean anything to you? Is that all we shared that you choose to belive what you saw and stand up against me for a person who married your sister a month or so back. Even I wasn't happy with whatever Mihika did but when did I fail Raman? Yes we did not have the greatest of starts nor a dreamy relationship but we gave it time. I am not denying the fact but I never let it to fall Raman" and she was stopped again. He raised his hand signaling her to stop and showed her way outside the house. It was only Ishitha and her parents along with Raman in the hall. All others had cleared the place by then. She wiped her tears and walked up the stairs to get her baby in hand. She was stopped at her room door by Toshi and was almost pushed. She cried but Toshi was being the rude mother inlaw. She came down after waiting for a while and begged Raman to let her take her child. He paid no heed whatsoever. She even asked if she could stay in one corner of the house but half way through it, she was talking to the empty room. Her parents could only be mute spectators after the shock they were welcomed to. Her father and mother made themselves strong and took their sobbing daughter along with them.

P.S: Not Proofread

To be continued...




Edited by Aru.Divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aru ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Sorry aru couldn't comment on last update...
so commenting together...

-- Oh ! simmi coz of have to bear Param😡...
poor Mihika , raman blasting on her but finally he got the truth...
Sensible Raman, said ishita not to talk about it just gud ...
Param and his antics😡😡😡...

OMG First kiss 😉😉😉, aru superb yaara...
A kiss u explained such a hot way ☺️, hayee ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Kiss in Bed oops Bed Romance☺️
- * "When are you going to feed my lips??" raman's line maar daala hope show mei kuch issa lines ho, scene we cant expect na😕...



wow Kitchen Romance❤️❤️❤️...
Raman lifting her esshhh , placing her in kitchen top
kisses

Terrance pe Romance ???

-- Naming Ceremony was gud😃...
Kamina Param 😡😡😡...
i felt ishita should have said with raman about this param at least he would have understood but this aru i thought param attacking ishita was a dream, bt it was real😲😲...
i hated the moment Raman,when ishita hugged him, but he didnt reciprocate it...
Toshiji talking non sense😡...

Even they didnt allow to take Baby with ishita this is too much...
poor ishita😭😭...

hope everything sorts very soon that i need to see Romance more😉😉...
make Raman realize his mistake, she should have thought of her and baby once but he kept quite😕...

I was expecting romance in Terrance but 😭😭😭...

Nice updates esp chap 19 was awesome just loved it ❤️

beautifully written aru...
Waiting for the next update...
hope something which will make IshRa come closer again...



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Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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finally you updated my favourite story, I am always in wait for your pm for this story and you finally updated it 😊

you know I was expecting something like this and see my it comes true. leechad param 😡 😡 seriously yeh mere haath laga na toh na pakka marega

We was expecting terrace romance after their first kiss 😳 but you gave us shock. I am truly feeling bad for poor ishita 😭

how much she pleaded everyone but no one hear her. simmi toh hai hi bewkoof but Mrs. Bhalla and even Raman. 😡 how could they question on her dignity and self respect. bewkoof kahi ke

poor aadi...usko bhi ishita ke saath nhi jaane diya. poor baby. isse kyon beech mein fasa diya. rude bhallas 🤓 but you know I have gut feeling that puttar will back with a bang and prove her innocent and pakka you will give us some passionate romance between ishra 😳

now I am so excited for next part. update soon and thanks for pm
Edited by aarohi26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
aru not fair...chotu sa update...

cmng to update...feeling sorry fr ishu bt raman nd toshi are very rude...hw can thy keep away mother nd son...

tht too a few months baby...

gkc rant phirse...it irks me...

i hop raman ko akal aaye nd send his son to b with his wife...

param kamina😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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finally unres...late wala but you know

sabse pehle 👏👏👏 not for the update but for you remembering that you have a story called Will Love Bloom In Our Lives...i thought you had totally forgotten it

Ishita's fears were described so perfectly di...actually beyond perfect...any woman would feel the same when she knows some bad eyes following her everywhere and at the same time how beautifully described her comfort in his presence...truly a woman looks upto her husband only for security other than her father

she being dicey about trust issues was again right...i really like how you pay attention to every small thing which is very rare

and i hate you...when i read that room open and she sleeping, i thought it was Raman but you ruined the moment by getting that creepy man 😡

but dont mind plz...i know that is how the story is

It was even painful to read her struggle to free herself from her...i just hate that Param only if i could shoot him

Simmi's reaction was justified but it was heartbreaking to read Raman's reaction...battle between his mind and heart was again 👏

I liked the part where Ishita stood up for herself...surely silence does not mean acceptance

Toshi Ji's GKC rant 😡...why cant she understand a mother' pain being a mother herself

until you are planning to make Raman do all this intentionally to reveal Param's dirty face or so...i hate this Raman...i am not being a feminist but then i just hate him for separating her from the baby...giving her the baby was the least he could do if not trust her

di this was just another perfect update...if i have written above that i hate param or raman or any other person...it proves that you justified it all...only when one can feel those feelings then the reactions come out and all my reactions came out while i was reading...hatred and that disgusting wali feeling for param...anger and disappointment for Raman

i dont know if i was able to convey what i meant to but in simple words i can just say you have just done it brilliantly 👏

P.S. i will not wait this long for next update...you better make it sooner


Edited by -Pankhuri- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
How can they all be so mean to Ishita?? They are not even allowing her to take her kid with her??? Is dat d trust Raman is having on Ishita??? He is d one who is not over his ex not ishita
Y is he behaving so insensitively ?? And toshi ji is not at all ryt pushing her from not meeting her son dis is too much even Mihir did a mistake by helping Simi y Raman is pointing out only mihika?? Is Mihir not his so called brother??? Wen he knows dat Param is a creep y is he not supporting ishita?? I want Ishita to take away her son with her after everything gets sorted out and dey all should know her value she should not forgive dem atleast she should not forgive Raman for wat he did with her
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Posted: 10 years ago
Damn that Param but I can't believe Raman didn't stand up for Ishita and in fact asked her to leave the house that too without her son. He is so going to regret this when he realises Ishita was right about Param all along.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Damn that Param and I can't believe Raman stood there silently without supporting Ishita. Even worse when he told Ishita to leave without their son. I'm sure he's going to regret all this when he finds out the real truth about that filth named Param!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was expecting something different but as usual nowadays our writers r getting some traits of YHM CVs😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
pls update soonish...we have to wait very long..pls update soonish...

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