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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

Sorry spoorthi late ho gya..
Nice update so geet is finally realizing what can distances do to their relation. Good she needs to. Aur i want them to talk more often and more openly. Dil mein baat rhene se hi toh problem hoti hai but sab kuch bola bhi nhi jaa sakta. U know what i love those last liners which u use at the end of chps.
Vaise did u realize i had updated those comments in the last thread . Did u get time to read them?


Talking hmm this is more about understanding

the comments on this story amuses me to no end

Seriously y do people think it's only because they aren't talking to eachother!!

They are just married its less than a month!!

N to get femeliar n the home wala feeling will take time no amount of talking will help one realise the importance of a relationship!!

Chado not even a single reader here thinks in those lines!!

Every one wants them to talk... n mere hisab se the more they talk the hard it would get!

Dono k characters hi kuch ayse hai...

Sirf last line pasand hai😳

Though ive read ur comments on the previous thread I couldn't reply sorry afer posting the update will get back to that thread😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: spoorthi28



Talking hmm this is more about understanding

the comments on this story amuses me to no end

Seriously y do people think it's only because they aren't talking to eachother!!

They are just married its less than a month!!

N to get femeliar n the home wala feeling will take time no amount of talking will help one realise the importance of a relationship!!

Chado not even a single reader here thinks in those lines!!

Every one wants them to talk... n mere hisab se the more they talk the hard it would get!

Dono k characters hi kuch ayse hai...

Sirf last line pasand hai😳

Though ive read ur comments on the previous thread I couldn't reply sorry afer posting the update will get back to that thread😃


spoorthi the thing is that all of us think from our own perspective so we might not realize where we go wrong it is your story and i am sure you will make us see through your eyes what is wrong between them . Jaruri toh nhi har baar likhe sab kuch pasand aaya kuch baatein kehni nhi padti hai..story achi lagti hai tabhi toh yahaan hai ..last lines last mein padhte hain isliye yaad rehta hai samjhi..:D;)
but trust me you are doing a great job !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part #18

Relations are not simple when u are friends with some one its quite easy to talk n share views n life... but when it comes to any relation they are bound with to many things

She knew she was being stupid n jealous talking all nonsense to him but what could she do... she figured it out in the silence of night that it was time for her cycle. .. n all that irrelevant talks were the result of it!!

No sooner the pain kicked in while she shuffled into the draws searching for the pain killers!

Finding one she stepped out of the room making sure not to disturb him slowly with the support of the doors...this is one time of the month she cursed to be born as a women to bare so much physical pain...

He found something odd n missing in his sleep... slowly adjusting to his surroundings his eyes searched for her around the room not finding her he looked out of the window to find it still dark n then glanced at the clock to see it was just an hour since he slept n where was she??

Running his hands through his face getting out of his sleepy state he looked at the washroom door which was still swinging. ..fearing something odd he flew out of the bed n ran towards the washroom to find it empty!!

Though he was relieved but it was just momentary n rushed out of the room to look for her... the previous stunt she pulled was still fresh in his mind.. n he didn't want to think in those terms now!

when he found her he was scared to death finding her in that position leaning against the railing n slumped down middle of the satircase... her dupatta which she never missed waring was missing too...

Shaking his head out vigorously out of the ill feeling it brought to him he called out to her loud enough to hear his own voice echoing around the empty house!

Geet!!

Geet what happened?? Here look at me..geet??

He was going frantic with each passing second... beads of sweat formed on his fore head... while he continued patting her wake..

She gained her conscious by then n looking at her husband she knew she had frightened him again. ..

Maan... I'm alright. ..

He wasn't even speaking all her earlier discussion n there baseless argument flew out of the window looking at his worried face...
She slowly tried to get up using the support of the railing n took a step down while he picked her up n made his way down. ..

Kitchen!

He nodded his his head n settled her on one of the chairs..

While she opened her fist to open the tablet he held her hand stopping her from talking it...

It's pain killer maan... n doctor prescribed too..

He still didn't seem convinced but left her hand seeing her twist in pain...

Settling a bit with the pain she nodded her head n he picked her up to their room... gently placing her on the bed he looked if she was ok..

But she knew it better she was not n the pain even after the pill wouldn't let her sleep... one glance a him she knew she had to let him know or else he wouldn't sleep whole night. ..

He didn't utter a word after finding her... did she scare him so much... did her being matters to him really... why isn't he shouting at her for being so careless or reacting the way he usually does...

Maan??

He looked at her with his eyes blank... she slowly touched his cheak hesitating a bit.. n when she did he pulled her to him n hugged her tight...

Geet!!...

That's all he could say after every few second... while she hugged him back trying to calm him down...

After a while or say a long time he let her out of his embrace n while she tried to cover her pain turning side biting her lips n closing her eyes tightly ...

Geet are u alright? Should we go to the doctor??

No maan wait ... just a while ... please. ..

He was still not sure if it was ok staying home as he saw her twist in pain ... slowly she adjusted with the pain n explained him it wasn't something serious n was common among girls... irritation...n being tired were just a part of it... filling him with the basic details for the time being she asked him to sleep coz he would have a busy day ahead. .

All the while he held her hand while she saw him slip into his deep slumber... Life in this short span of time had made her so much mature n looking at him she decided if at all there would be any fight or argument in there married life she wouldn't hesitate n let her ego overpower her relation coz she knew though he appeared strong... he wasn't!

Silly she was as she thought he would know her dressing habit. .. she had never been out of the house how would he know she wasn't into those makeup stuff... the only thing that pricked her was he didn't notice her interest in bangles the other day n he went out of his way selecting all those stuff for her with Aanchal!!

And when it all came out the whole thing did take a bitter turn... the night invaded with her hand still in his.. the effect of the tablet did kick making her eyes drop resting her wandering thoughts!


Possessiveness comes to me naturally coz u my love are a treasure to be treasured...



To be continued. ..
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing. Geet is in pain as her monthly cycle started. She accepted that she spoke more than enough to maan but it is just a little bit jeolousy of a wife who is annoyed as her husband didn't notice this simple things about her. Omg I was in awe seeing the love and concern in maan's eyes when he saw geet with so much pain. At first he thought, she repeated same act but after that geet explained him n then he slept peacefully. this small incident changed something in geet. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Basically geet is kinda jealous of aanchal... When we are in a relation we want the other person to be open with us to be comfortable with us.. To be happy with us only.. Possessiveness comes along with it... And it all happen with geet too but here maan has to realize... Geet's monthly cycle started.. Seriously yaar.. I hate that phase of my life too.. Bhht burrii halat hoti hai... Sometime I think insan pragnant hojae ... Instead of it...lolxxok ok coming to the update maan was tensed about her... He felt relived and hugged her she told him its a part of girl life...nice update... Sweety u update deti raha karoo naa... Jaldi sai
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet kabhi sahi sochti hai...phirse kabhi doosri baatein sochti hai...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Love it waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...geet s monthly prbs scared maan... So geet s getting adjusted to the new life...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think in a relation words doesn't have that much importance as the feelings have.. One could simply let his or her several hours just feeling their loved one neared them..geet is off mood bcox her hotty hubby isnt paying attention to her ways of dressing or to her nature.. but if we see from maan point of view he is making sure that her wife is comfortable as she was in her own house but in between that he is missing her... He isn't trying to know her rather than that he is seeking help from aanchal.. Which isn't much appreciated by geet..lolxx..sorry fo long long bak bak..I don't know but I write so much.. Hehe... Was hell waiting for this update to come and now be a good girl and always give us update on time..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

Amazing. Geet is in pain as her monthly cycle started. She accepted that she spoke more than enough to maan but it is just a little bit jeolousy of a wife who is annoyed as her husband didn't notice this simple things about her. Omg I was in awe seeing the love and concern in maan's eyes when he saw geet with so much pain. At first he thought, she repeated same act but after that geet explained him n then he slept peacefully. this small incident changed something in geet. Waiting for next dear

Did I forget thanking you for being here every time n being honest enough with me!!😃

Thanks for the last time too for letting me know my flaws regarding the end🤗

Glad u liked it!

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