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Posted: 10 years ago
Hooram hurt seeing manneet close she is right at her own place nobody can bear her husband with any other girl
Maan giving hopes to geet n way too comfortable with her...
hooram shouts at maan for spoiling her work n there is totally new maan in front of her omg if geet see that her husband is scolded by some relative then what will be her reaction????????
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
de do,
m doing last min changes
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 9



Horam: aap nai kharab kiya hai ab ap hi banao gye samjhe
She said in anger pointing finger on him
Maan mimicked ok
Maan started to draw new design and Horam look at him sat on couch folded her hand breathing high.
She closed her eyes and rest her head on couch and drifted in sleep
After about 1 hour or so she opened her eyes, stretching her arms she got up, her anger had come down by then and she realized that she went overboard in her anger. Feeling guilty, she looked at Maan whose whole concentration was on design.
She admired him the way he work look so adorable, a smile crept on her face automatically
She came close to him and cleared her throat to get his attention
When MSK is working, how can someone distract him?
Horam: Maan
She called him in low voice
Maan heard her and looked up to see her smile at him
Maan: just few more minutes and your design will be complete
He said and again concentrated on work in hand
Horam felt more guilty she get up and moved towards him
Horam: sorry Maan
She said holding her ears
Maan stop her work stare her thinking why she said sorry?
Horam spoke like reading his mind: aap say asey bath nahi karni chahiye thi aur aap rehne do mein kar lungi
She said coming close try to held papers
Maan stopped her: it's ok! My mistake, i ruin your work so penalty toh bharni parey gi na
He said not letting her feel guilty
Horam stared at him and said: Maan i love you
She said with so much love and respect in her voice and eyes
Maan stop to look at her: i love you too
He replied her
Both stare into each other eyes; their eyes reflect pure love which is divine
Maan come back from trance and said: let me work or else my wife will beat me
He joked
Horam too came in senses too and listening to his words she glared him
Both laugh and finished the design together
Horam gather all papers arrange them in file place keep them in cupboard
Maan: you are welcome Mrs. Khurrana
He said with teasing smile
Horam knotted her brows trying to understand
Horam: thank you... Not Mr. Khurrana
She replied with same teasing voice, as soon as she caught on his prank.
Maan frown his eyes go mischievous, he pulled her towards him and she landed on his lap with the force (o tri mere ko bhut chppal parey gi)
He placed his hand around her waist snuggling closer
Horam was startled with the sudden impact and tried to free herself
Hor: Maan...
She moaned
Maan: kya hmm
He asked pulling her even closer.
She shook her head and placed it on his chest hugging him to find some peace for herself
After some times she got up from lap sat next to him place her head on his shoulder both held each other hand
Maan: Tumhe pata hai Horam aaj office mein kya howa?
He said without looking at her
She looked at him like asking what happened.
He narrated her whole story
Horam annoyed: how dare she? How can she comment like this Maan? Am telling you all the time your employees take advantages of your leniency, but you...
She kept rambling, she was furious
Maan caress her arms: ohh relax, I punished them already so no use of this anger
Horam: what punishment? You just terminate her, if m there na i will rip her soul
She gritted her teeth
Maan: relax lady under-taker relax
He said teasing her
Horam glare him
Maan: acha ok but one thing is clear now i have to guard myself around you both
He said in some fake fear
Horam looked at him confusingly
Maan continue: you both make team against me look how you anger when someone said about Geet! Ohh Allah who will save me now?
He said with so much innocence
Horam first did not get what he said, then: Maan you are impossible
She said shaking her head "this man and his acts... uff!"
Horam: we did not make a team yet; or team bananey k liye first we both should meet.
She informed him that they did not meet
Maan: you did not meet her?
He asked startled.
Horam nodded her head in NO
Maan: let's go and you meet her,
He said get up from bed
But Horam stop him
Horam: no Maan not now! We will meet someday but not now
She said did not show her discomfort which is clearly seen on her face
Maan: how much you will run Horam?
He asked
Horam looked down and Maan sat again holding her chin make her to look him
Maan you will not be able to run away from this reality now
Horam: Maan i am not running away!! Just... it's just that it will be so awkward!
What will i say to her on meeting?
"hi! Geet, I am Horam and your husband's first wife"
Imagine kitna ajeeb hai; sirf mere liye hi nahi uskey liye bhi. Try to understand na
She said putting her point
Maan ** sighed ** then said
Maan: wow without team you took her side what will
Happen when you both meet
He acted like praying for his safety
He said that to remove the awkward air between while Horam looked him all ready to kill him for making fun of her.
Maan: what i said is true; areey chachu also said same
Horam: chachu! He is back ???
Maan: yes
Horam: then sho sho am going to meet him, i had given him my list let me go and see what he brought for me
She said excitedly dragging him out
Maan look at his childish wife: ok am going, why are you pushing me yaar
He come and kiss her cheek: you got your gift na, now let me get mine
He said winking at her when both were standing at door
Horam: gooo
She shouted pushing him
Maan went out or say pushed out; he was satisfied seeing her happy
Both don't know someone admired them and their relation
Annie st: why did this happen with us? Look how much they happy with each other and now...
Saying that she moved without making any sound and went to meet her mom
In room Horam said to herself
Horamam st: Maan i cannot see you with her it hurts, am not angel to let you go to Geet
Nor am I devil to stop you hurting her, yeh dil na toh tumahi jatey dek sakta hai na rok sakta hai she moan in her heart
Here Geet in their room
She didn't realize for how long she kept sitting thinking about him; just few words and it already seemed he took over her life like it was his. Suddenly her eyes fell on time and saw its 6 pm. "ya Allah!" she exclaimed and got up immediately, she had planned to tidy up the room today but he made her forget in him; but again that came with a desire to spend some more time with him. It was crazy, she shrugged her thoughts, she got up with start n started to fix things around.
Geet to herself: uff kasey files bhi thek say nahi rakhi asey koi apna cupbaord rakta hai? Look dirty clothes are also there
She pated her head
Maan room is not arranged, after Horam he did not let anyone come inside
He got phone call in corridors he walk talking with his client (i show one side convo)
Maan: ok at 7 we have meeting, let's meet n finalize budget hmm
He come to his room door is open
He saw Geet arranging his cupboard, he came inside
Geet also sensed him and turned towards him
Maan: who... Geet can you please take out my clothes
he said, he has finally decided to go with the flow, there's nothing more he can do as neither can he turn his back to his responsibilities towards geet nor can he leave his love Horam. He has come in terms with truth and decided to give his complicated fate a chance; and just prayed that he is able to do justice to both the women in his life.
Geet: aap ja rahey ho kahi?
she asked
Maan: hmm i have meeting at 7
he replied while texting
Geet: kab tak wapis ayengey? aur dinner?
she asked
Maan: Geet meeting k sath dinner bhi client k sath hi hai so don't worry
Geet: hmmm ok
she said and took out her business suit with matching tie
Maan see her sad face, he come close held her and cup her face
Maan: don't be sad warna mein ja nahi pauga aur agar meeting important nahi hoti toh nahi jata par kya karo
he try to cheer her up
Geet: nahi asi koi bath nahi ap jao apna work karo woh bhi toh zarori hai mein bilkul bhi sad nahi ho she said giving smile to him
Maan: that's like my wife, let me get ready
he said move from there taking his clothe with him
Geet pout like baby
Maan come out full ready to go he know Geet is sad he asked her to see him off at door which she happily agree
@ hall all sat talking randomly when Irfan asked about Maaneet
Irfan: where is Maan and new dulhan
he asked from Mariyam
Sultana: look here they come she saw them
Both descending down together elders saw them
Mariyam eyeing Irfan asking him how is Geet
He said in low: beautiful and innocent perfect for Maan
Mariyam smile: look sath mein kitney pyarey lagrahye hai
Sultana interrupt: maa shaa allah boliye bhabhi kahi ap ki nazar na lag jye
Annie rolled her eyes at their antics, murmur what is special in her?'
Maaneet come to them
Geet hesitate seeing Annie too there remind her morning encounter she look down
Mariyam: aaiye Maan Geet beta yeha aye humare pass betiye
Maan: nahi ammi i have to go meeting hai toh... Geet will sat here hmm
Sulatna: Maan yeh kya bath hoi ap abhi meetin k liye jareh hai , subha bhi ofice chaleye gye kam say kam evening mein toh Geet k sath time spend kijye
Maan: meeting is important have to go i cannot cancell it
Mariyam: Maan abhi koi bhas nahi chahiye muje cancel kijye you are not going anywhere expect you are taking Geet out for dinner she order
Maan : i can't he refues straight
Geet look mother son argument
Mariyam: Maan hum...
but she cut by Irfan
Irfan: bahabhi he is going i said him go instead of me i told the client Maan will be in meeting , and it very important project of kc i don't know Maan has other plan sorry Maan sorry Geet beta
Geet: no
she said at once all look at her
she smiled feeling embarresed
geet: i mean you are elder to me please don't say sorry or we don't plan anything work come first
she said hesitatingly looking down fearing to scold
Maan: see Geet also don't have problem so may i go now
he said with smile thanking Geet throw eyes which she reply with smile
Mariyam: thek hai par kal ap Geet ko bhar lekar jeye gye samjhe ok
she said and maan agreed so that she let him go.
Sultana: haan Geet ka haq banta hai akhir itni undersatnding biwi hai Maan value her
Maan rolled his eyes: ok i Value her
Geet shied
Maan move forward when Irfan stop
Irfan: ohhh hello!! At least someone intro this NA CHEZ to new dulhan; or you all want her think me as stranger
he complained
Maa : Geet he is NA CHEZ
Irfan glare him
Maan: i mean my chachu, you know he has habbit to do nutanki, so don't mind ha
he said misheviouly
Geet smile say salam to Irfan
Irfan reply her: Geet hear his words he talk rubbish
Mariyam: Maan behave he is your chachu
Maan pout and Irfan smirk at him
Sulatana supported Maan and said: kya bahbhi ap bhi in dono ko kuch nahi hosakta dono behave asey karety hai jase uncle-Nephew nahi koi 2 year kid bhi nahi karta hoga , aur yeh pehal karety hai
Maan hug his chachi
Irfan groan: ja tu late Hora hai
He said annoyed
Maan: ja raha hoo
Mariyam: Geet Maan ko car tak drop kar k ayee
Geet: ji
Annie in her mind: see how my family ignoring me am so hate this girl now grrr
Outside Maaneet
Maan: Geet i will be late so take your dinner
Geet: hmm
Maan: phir udas hogye
Geet: nahi toh
Maan ok then give me smile
Geet smile Maan sat in car drive away Geet wave him he smile at her childish he to wave
His car went out from km


...To be continued
Hope you like
Sorry readers typing from mobile and this is my third attempt coz all time I dont know how i just close result lost whole update bear me
Next part will give you soon
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NOTE
part 8 by Fariya...
Edited,Posted and Proof-read by Pooja
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Edited by Pooooooooooooja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you all for like and comments on previous part :)


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Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love you pooja
Omg you did magic
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update.. one side maan was enjoying with horam and other side with geet, geet needs to know about horam i think.. waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update but I am eagerly waiting for upcoming horam n geet meeting as sutan
Because I think from there
We will get the real story because now from 2 or 3 updates
I think u r trying to show maan effort and their daily routine
It's good too because once the truth comes out
I don't think, everything will be same
At oeast from geet side
Or I am feeling
Horam is gping to play negative soon
Which is wrong because first she was ok with her husband
Second marriage but in future if she tried to trap geet than it wil be like
She used a innocent life for a child
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
So maan accepted his fate n trying to cope with it.
Lovely moments between maan n hooram wish geet would be on her place
This Annie hope she will clear manneet way soon n adjust with geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update annie loved her bhai bhabis relation very much its hurt her to see geet between them horam n maan part was very sweet nice part thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...though didn't like horam and maans moments... geet will be shattered after knowing the truth...she started dreaming about her life with maan...annie without understanding from geets side she is blaming geet... waiting for next...

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