Obsession Or Love ?? A Virika FF - Page 73

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Posted: 10 years ago
Let me start with Congratulating you on 35th update.
This story is far from actual Virika but the way you have written, same purity, same feelings, same love of Virika.
My wildest dream of Virika getting intimate on beach came alive. It was so beautiful to read it. I can't afford to lose you. Promise me ull never go near beach. That care and possessiveness Viren has for Jeevika. How much he loves her. When he was searching for her throughout the house, took me to that scene of ehmmbh when Jeevika left for hrishikesh and Viren was looking for her.
Coming to the party scene, how his gaze was always on his love. Their eye locks, they don't need words to convey. And my my that heroic act of Viren to save Jeevika looked like a movie playing in front of my eyes. I was biting my nails while reading it. It was that intriguing. You always manage to amaze me with your writing. Splendid display of emotions. Loved the update. Thank you so much Millee baby
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMGGG!!!!!!!!!
Viren!!
Hope he is okay..
I want him to be okay..
Because i know how he would just hate hate hate to be dependent on someone else...

What a cliffhanger!!!
You are a brilliant writer millee...
Update pretty soon..Cant wait...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omggg...that was scary ...brought gooseeebumbs ...plzzz don't let anything happen to viren...Awesome twisttt...update sooonnn .
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh god that was scary
i mean hats off girl u showed this part really well
i mean i have goosebumps in my whole first in the starting i seriously thought that jeevs is comiting suicide the way u start it i was like wats going on but thank god it was all ok
i just loved viren possessiveness his demanding nature
loved how he orders jeevs nd how possessive he is abt her
i really loved nd enjoyed the beach moments
then the ball party loved how jeevs is adoring viren
but but wat happened next stop my heartbeat
oh my plz don't let anything happened to viren
loved how he saved her
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you sooo much for the lovely update👏...plzzz don't let anything happen to viren😭...update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update soon Shubhiii.we are waiting for it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Millee thank u for a lovely n heart gripping update.. The way u hv ended it leaves the reader wanting for more n it's like a cliffhanger as we can't wait to know as to what happens to viren. U hv done full justice to the story till date n hv managed to keep ur readers engrossed in the updates. The way u describe virikas relation it's so beautiful n one just wonders how can someone love each other so much.. The possessiveness of viren towards jeevika n their baby is just too adorable.. Love how jeevika just lets him have his way when he is all possessive for her. The way viren tells jeevika that he wld never let her go. It's the most beautiful line someone could tell a person n it wld mean the world to tat person. Then the description of the ballroom events n how virika hold each other's attention even though they are standing away.. The way viren jumps to save his life not even caring abt himself. N jeevika's reaction after she realises what viren has done. Millee hats off to u for such a long update n tat too which is so gripping.. Take a bow girl.. U write so well.. Loved reading it n looking forward to the next one soon.. Thank u for all the efforts u put in to give us the updates.. Love u Millee.. <3
Edited by Simarpreetm - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
unreserved on pgs. 101 and 104
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
❤️
unres!!
that was super duper adorable!
even in pain, Viren is such a romantic...
so weird and amazing to see how a strong and bold personality like Viren still melts his heart but only for his love, Jeevika!
every situation your write about them just shows and defines how strong and amazing their relationship is and their feelings for each other!
i also loved the part when Viren shows his authority again and just walks to Jeevika in the waiting room 😆 totally sounds like him!! its so funny
then the way he wants to leave and Jeevika just being herself... loved it!
can't wait to read what happens next!
do update soon please 😳
Edited by Kays94 - 10 years ago

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