~Abhigya OS - Beyond the Passing~ (sad and happy end)

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Hello everyone! Back with an OS that I asked opinions for, one is the sad one and the other happy! Please like and comment! 😳 I cried while writing one, 😭 hope I don't make you cry, if I do a gift follows cause then I wrote the happy end! 😳

Abhigya OS -Beyond the Passing

Abhi listened intently and breathless as the explosives continued around him, he heard his fellow men scream as they were hit with shell fire. He watched his friend fall in pain as a bullet hit his back. He knew that one rule was to not go back to help but this was his best friend. He ran back to help him.

"No Abhi" He uttered coughing. "Go-"

Abhi ignored his words and tried to drag him across when a bomb dropped and he was hit with a bullet straight in his chest. Abhi fell back clutching himself in pain however still he smiled as he whispered his last words.

"I - I love you f-fuggy" His eyes closed.

~

Pragya awoke sweating and found that she had been crying in her sleep. She calmed her breathing down slowly but the restlessness was not gone. Why did he have to leave her? Why? She hated it when he was away, she felt scared and unprotected. She gently patted her stomach; it was only a week since she had found out that she was pregnant. Abhi was coming the next day and she couldn't wait to give him the good news. She would have written a letter but preferred to wait for him to arrive. She checked the clock to see it was five in the morning. She sat there for a few moments, why did she feel as if something bad had happened?

Pushing such thoughts away she freshened up to find the candle out. Pragya lit it up again and completed her morning prayers. She then continued with her little work in the kitchen waiting for his phone call. He always phoned her when he had arrived at the station. She had always told him to quit the dangerous job but he had said that fighting for his country was an honour and he wanted to continue. Pragya gnawed at her nails as the hours passed.

It was the afternoon and she was sitting on the sofa when the phone rang. She hurriedly picked it up and spoke.

"What took you so long? Where are you? When are you coming? Don't you know how long I have been waiting?"

But instead of the usual heart-warming reply she heard another. "I'm sorry, are you Abhishek Mehra's wife?"

"Yes?" Pragya asked in confusion.

"I am speaking from the hospital, I am sorry, he passed away in the early hours of this morning after a he was hit by a bullet, you may-"

Pragya dropped the phone in shock unable to react for a long time. She didn't know how she managed to get to the hospital in a numb state. When she arrived she saw his friend was there waiting for her and he comforted her. Even after the incarnation of his body Pragya didn't say anything, she didn't shed a tear.

It was only that night when she went to her room alone that she realised the bitter truth of having lost him forever. She walked to the balcony, it was night and he was gone. She fell to the floor as the awaited tears flew down her cheeks. Before she knew it she was wailing on the floor shivering, yearning for comfort but there was no one, he wasn't there to tell her it would all be okay. He was gone, he had left her alone and she was alive left with a heart that had no beat...

~

"Mumma" Aditi looked at her mum who was caressing her hair patting her to sleep.

"Hmm?" Pragya asked.

"Today at school the teacher was getting us to introduce our self to our class mates"

"Yes, and?"

"We had to say four things, our name, likes, dislikes and what our parents did" She looked up into Pragya's eyes that flinched.

Pragya didn't answer and Aditi continued. "I said that my papa fought for our country and that he was my brave hero, my superstar. The whole class clapped and I'm proud of him mumma, I wish I could meet him. Can I take one of his medals to show the teacher, she asked that everyone would be interested?"

"Of course" Pragya told her.

Aditi spoke after a pause. "Mumma, why did papa go?"

"Your papa was a hero and God decided to take him with him as a friend." Pragya told her.

"Dear God" Aditi closed her eyes as she did her nights prayer. "Tell my papa who is you're friend that we miss him a lot but we are very proud of him. But God you should let me meet him some day? When will I meet him? Please pass on my message to him that I and mumma love him all the way to the moon and back and that I never upset mumma. Good night" She closed her eyes. Pragya kissed her not saying anything as she could already feel the heaviness in her throat. Pragya looked at their innocent girl, she was so much stronger than her yet she was so young, just like him. She was the one that had made her heard beat again, smile again.

Aditi fell asleep shortly after and Pragya gently walked out and sat by the window opening it as she watched the night's sky with the stars twinkling. The moon shone brightly and Pragya breathed in deeply as a tear trailed down her cheek.

"I wish you were here, I wish you could see our Aditi, I love you and I miss you" She whispered out into the darkness.

There was no reply but the gentle breeze and the twinkling stars made her feel as if somewhere he had heard her and was still with them, looking over them always.


I hope you liked, please leave your precious feedback behind! 😳


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~Alternate happy end~

"Hello, your husband Abhishek Mehra was brought into the hospital this morning. He has been shot and is undergoing an operation currently. Please could you come here as soon as possible?"

Pragya dropped the phone before running out to get the auto. Tears were already trailing down her cheeks as she asked the driver to go faster.

As she arrived at the hospital and asked where his room was she ran up the stairs breathless as she arrived and the doctors came out.

"He is very lucky, he is out of danger and you may meet him"

Pragya walked into the room to see his chest covered in bandages. The rest of his body had slight burns but the most important thing for her was that he was alive before her.

She sat down next to him and held his hand. He was still unconscious as Pragya rested her head on his hand and wept silently. After a few moments she felt him whisper her name and her head shot up to look at him smiling at her weakly.

"Cha-chashmish" He tried to get up but she motioned him to stay still.

"Are you okay? Why do you do all this? You know I can't live without you?" as she burst into tears again.

"Hey, chashmish, calm down, I - I'm sorry, but look I am perfectly fine before you"

"But don't you understand, what if?" She didn't want to complete her sentence.

The doctor came in a few moments later and said that he could be discharged in a few weeks as he still needed to be monitored as he was weak.

He squeezed onto her hand as she gently smiled at him. The horrible feeling of losing him was gone, he was with her.

~

"Okay, now go to sleep Aditi" Abhi told her as he finished telling her stories about his experience of fighting as a soldier.

"I will papa, but where is your scar?"

"Aditi you have seen it so many times, anyway you know your mumma doesn't like it so why are you so fascinated?"

"Because mumma is always crying, I am strong, like you. And I feel proud when I tell my friends that you fought for our country, they all admire you" She high fived him as Pragya walked in.

"Your still awake, come on go to sleep now" She lay down on the other side as she patted her to sleep.

Abhi watched her and his daughter whom he loved more than anything. He no longer fought in the army after his duty had finished. He now worked as an officer and Pragya was happy.

She got up after Aditi fell asleep and walked to the window while Abhi followed and held her from behind.

"Chashmish, come on I think you should sleep, you must be tired"

Pragya didn't argue and lay next to Aditi as he caressed her hair. Neither of them could ask for anything more, they all loved each other and hoped to star that way forever.


Hope you enjoyed! Please leave your comments and hit the like button! 😳

Edited by --simmi-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai simmi first one was so emotional.
Loved both if them.
Amazing work.Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved the first one even if it's sad it was really powerful at the end the gentle breeze wow it was brilliant
I like also the happy ending Adit Abhi convo lol about scars and all so cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am a sucker for happy endings...so here I am.
Fabulous os.
Loved it.
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just read the happy ending ...so sweet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I cried😭 n I would have killed you (even though I admire you too much) if you hadn't wrote the alternate ending as I asked.👏 SECOND IS SOOO NICE 😆 [too much emoticons, am i crazy or what?đŸ€Ș]
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Both were amazing sim . First one was emotional but loved both
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Simran, What type of writer you are.
You made me cry like previous time, but I loved this 👏
You know I love my father more than me, he is everything than mom, so losing father is really a great loss in your life😭
whole update i am doing this.
When it's coming to update it awsome
Love u not for this upd, always for all
Edited by NasreenAyesha - 10 years ago
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Loved both of the story.
It was beautiful.
Thank you for the pm

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