MG OS/SS ~HO GAYA HAI PYAR TUMSE~ Note page 15 || March 18th

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INDEX

TEASER

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Ho gaya hai pyar tumse

Intro /teaser

She cornered him holding his right hand tight.. For the first time , he found someone who could hold him.. Her hazel eyes were having some anger that he couldn't justify but he could definitely say that he was in a big mess..
Maan tried to take the control but whom he was kidding .. The girl herself was having some powers.. And some supernatural powers that MSK doubted ..
Girl took her index finger and lifted his chin asking him in the most intimating matter..
Girl : hmm.. Toh ab bolo.. Kathe peecha kar raho ho mara.. Ki chahte ho.. Aur dekho jhooth toh bolna na..
(Hmm.. Now say me.. Why are you following me..what do you want ..and listen don't tell lies..)
She asked raising her eyebrow while her hand twisted his hand a little.. Though that was not at all painful for him but he was speechless seeing the fearless attitude of the girl..
The petite figure was having the wrestler definitely..
And Maan couldn't say anything..


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A new attempt for me..
And geet in a new shade..

This is definitely inspired from kangana's character in tanu weds manu returns kusum and i am just trying to portray a HARYANVI CHORI(GIRL) here..

So some similarities will be there..

Read CHARACTER SKETCH AND NOTE BELOW..
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character sketch..

MAAN SINGH KHURANA : HE IS THE PRESENT MD OF KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS HANDLING KHURANA INDUSTRIES WITH PERFECTION.. HE IS ENGAGED TO NATASHA SHAW.. HE IS NOT IN LOVE WITH HER JUST FOR HIS DAADI's SATISFACTION HE IS HAVING A FIANCE TAG.. AGE 27

VIKRANTH KHURANA (VICKY) : MAANS BROTHER , COMPLETING MBA FROM THE TOP IIM .. HE SOMETIME ACCOMPANY MAAN TO KC . AGE 24

ANWESHA KHURANA (ANNIE) : YOUNGEST OF THE KHURANA FAMILY .. DOING HER GRADUATION FROM DELHI UNIVERSITY ,

DAADIMA : A SWEET AND STRICT MATRIARCH OF KHURANA FAMILY.. LOVES MAAN A LOT HE BEING THE ELDEST GRANDSON .. JUST WISHES TO SEE HIM MARRIED

RAJ AND NAINA KHURANA : MAAN'S PARENTS


SINGH FAMILY

GEET SINGH : SHE IS A STRONG GIRL OF HER PIND(VILLAGE) , GOT ADMISSION IN DELHI UNIVERSITY WITH SPORTS QUOTA .. SHE IS A NATIONAL LEVEL ATHLETE .. STAYS IN A PG WITH HER FRIEND PINKY AND MANISHA .. HER FAMILY IS IN ROHTAK (HARYANA)

RANO AND MOHINDAR : GEET'S PARENTS..

TAU : ELDER OF GEETS FAMILY.. THOUGH HE IS GEETS GRANDFATHER BUT EVERYONE CALLS HIM TAU INCLUDING GEET..


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REST OF THE CHARACTERS WILL ADD AS STORY WILL PROCEED



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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE. : WILL BE ON BLOG AND THOSE WHO WANNA READ CAN COMMENT

NO SILENT READERS WILL BE ENTERTAINED
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on new story di!!
Wow...interesting
geet in a bold and brave avatar
loved it!!
So maan ko ho gaya Pyaar...Geet se ;)
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Nice introduction
Geet haryani girl
Waiting to read more
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congrats on the OS/SS! superb intro! well written! Bold Geet! interesting! awesome CS! update soon n do pm me!
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

character sketch..

MAAN SINGH KHURANA : HE IS THE PRESENT MD OF KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS HANDLING KHURANA INDUSTRIES WITH PERFECTION.. HE IS ENGAGED TO NATASHA SHAW.. HE IS NOT IN LOVE WITH HER JUST FOR HIS DAADI's SATISFACTION HE IS HAVING A FIANCE TAG.. AGE 27

VIKRANTH KHURANA (VICKY) : MAANS BROTHER , COMPLETING MBA FROM THE TOP IIM .. HE SOMETIME ACCOMPANY MAAN TO KC . AGE 24

ANWESHA KHURANA (ANNIE) : YOUNGEST OF THE KHURANA FAMILY .. DOING HER GRADUATION FROM DELHI UNIVERSITY ,

DAADIMA : A SWEET AND STRICT MATRIARCH OF KHURANA FAMILY.. LOVES MAAN A LOT HE BEING THE ELDEST GRANDSON .. JUST WISHES TO SEE HIM MARRIED

RAJ AND NAINA KHURANA : MAAN'S PARENTS


SINGH FAMILY

GEET SINGH : SHE IS A STRONG GIRL OF HER PIND(VILLAGE) , GOT ADMISSION IN DELHI UNIVERSITY WITH SPORTS QUOTA .. SHE IS A NATIONAL LEVEL ATHLETE .. STAYS IN A PG WITH HER FRIEND PINKY AND MANISHA .. HER FAMILY IS IN ROHTAK (HARYANA)

RANO AND MOHINDAR : GEET'S PARENTS..

TAU : ELDER OF GEETS FAMILY.. THOUGH HE IS GEETS GRANDFATHER BUT EVERYONE CALLS HIM TAU INCLUDING GEET..


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REST OF THE CHARACTERS WILL ADD AS STORY WILL PROCEED



wow! Just thrilled to see geet in such fearless and Haryanvi Chori Avtaar. It's going to be very very interesting for sure .
Waiting very eagerly to see Haryanvi chori to deal with Attitude dude maan.
Congrats for such thrilling concept👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats on the story
loved the intro
continue soon!!!
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interesting prologue...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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