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Jaldi! De me topic waiting
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Ok done
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Part 8


Geet saw Horam moving out she want to asked about her but not said shrug off her thought
Geet st: may be koi relative hogi
She said giving herself answer to own question
Here Maan cursing himself for the situation in which Horam saw Maaneet
Maan in mind: what the ***. Grrr! Kya zarorat thi mujko asey uskey pass janey ki, Horam ohhh Allah!!! She saw us, like this, how awkward it was he mentally hit himself for his foolishness
Geet saw him lost, she come close call him
Geet: ji suniye
Maan huh?????
Geet: lunch?
She asked
Maan: fresh hokar ata ho
He said n move from there
Geet place food trolley near table, sat on couch placing dishes on table
Maan joined her soon and they started eating in silence.
Geet was looking at her plate all while like it was the most beautiful thing in the world, while maan along with having food was observing her.

It was the first time he was observing a woman other than horam; geet unlike his first wife was a simple girl next door, she would harshly push her tresses when they disturb her, she did not at any circumstance meet his eyes, the occasion brush of hands made her withdraw harshly as if touched by current.
He realized that there is a critical need of conversation between them, she being so uneasy and shouting at his presence was not good; it's already 2 days to their marriage. They were done with the lunch and she was clearing the table and was about to go when he stopped her holding her hand.
The sudden touch was no less than a shock for geet, her heart thudded so hard that she didn't know how to control it, other side her mind was busy thinking all the possible reasons of him stopping her. She turned towards him with partly closed eyes to see him smile at her; that gave her confidence and she opened her eyes full and stood straight returning his smile.
Geet: ji?
She said questioningly also tried to pull her hands and free herself which he didn't relent.
Maan: geet, baitho tumsebaat karni hai.
She joined him on the couch, he held her other hand too in his hand as he began to speak
Maan: geet, I know tumhare liye ye ghar aur yaha k log sab kuchh naya hai; thodi mushkil bhi hogi sabse adjust hone me, but never forget that I am always with you. Koi bhi pareshani ho, you can come to me without second thoughts.
She nodded and he continued...
Maan: Whenever a new relation is formed everyone has high expectations, but you do not have to feel burdened with them. As my wife, I only expect from you to be yourself and whatever you do for me and my family comes from heart. And at the same time I expect from myself to become your support, your friend and guide during difficult times.
He then gave a gentle squeeze to her hands in a sign of assurance then looked at her only to find her listening to him with great concentration like class 1 kid taking lessons; her expressions made him smile,
Maan: aaj ka pravachan samapt hua baalike!
He said teasingly to break her concentration; and she got startled with the sudden teasing voice in mid of serious talks and started to look here and there not sure if all that actually happened? She scratched her head and he laughed loudly this time not able to control anymore and pulled her cheeks.
Maan: ok I'll be leaving now.
Saying that he left the bed but as he neared the door, he turned back to see her smiling with red red cheeks.
She was so so lost in the moment just passed; him stopping her, then those words enough to assure her for life, and then suddenly teasing her; oh sweet lord what was happening to her?
Maan: aur haan, abse mujhe dekh kar chikhna mat!
Came his sudden voice again startling her out of her thoughts and before she could think on what actually happened, he left the room shaking his head. she smiled at own lost state.
Other side Horam come in her room: Maaneet closeness was flashing in front of her eyes, disturbing her peace full mind, she struggle a lot to forget their closeness she sat down on bed took glass gulp it in one go , to calm her nerve but no use a lone tear escape from her eyes , like laughing at her that now life would not be easy for her.





@ evening elder sitting in hall enjoy evening snacks and tea



Irfan: now am feeling relax , you know bhabhi jaan , you can travel around the world but get peace only at home he said relishing his tea making himself relax on couch
Mariyam Sultana both smile at him
Sultana: who asked you to go at your business trips
, when talk about your business you and Maan both work like robot and after that crib "we are missing home "she said sarcastically


Mariyam: yes bhai sahab, now no more business tour , you were in tour since two months now relax for some time
she advised him
Irfan: uff !!! Aap women toh bus ek chance nahi chorati humai sunaney ka arey itna bara business empire hai ab usko asey hi toh nahi chor saktey na
he answered them


Annie also comes back from uni she happy to see her chachu back
Annie call him in exclaimed : chachu
All look at her
Sultana : shock her head and whisper in Mariyam ears: lijye bhabhi princess k nakhrey start hongye , aur complaining session bhi


Annie come close sat next to Irfan give him bear hug
Annie : miss you a lot chachu
Irfan ruffle her hair me too
Annie : where is my gift she demand
Irfan : at my room he said
Annie then let him go
she exited got up and dragged Irfan too
Mariyam stop both
Mariyam : Annie yeh kya bath hui, abhi aye hai let him fresh up first aur aap k chachu kahi nahi jarey hai ,
Annie try to say but Mariyam glare her and continue
Mariyam : aur humain aap say bath karni hai abhi toh jaye fresh hoye uskey bad room mein aye she said ordering her make her remember morning scold
Annie head hug she pout
Both Sultana and Irfan look this (he don't know about morning but Sultana know she knows now Annie will get tight scolding for her morning behavior, she try to save her)
Sultana: bahbhi mere matlab hai
but she did not say more seeing Mariyam eyes which signal her no don't favor her
Annie looked at her chachi and pout but Sultana shrug her shoulder she cannot help her
Irfan: acha I will give you at night and we both open your gift together, ok?
he said made her cheer up thinking she sad coz Mariyam stop her
Annie moved to her room
Mariyam and Sultana went in kitchen and Irfan go to attend video call
Other side


Maan come to see Horam (Geet was in room arranging her things)
Horam working on her design she work as designer own a fashion house of her father
Maan : Horam he called her
She look up seeing him there her mind went in Maaneet closeness but she jerks her thought smile forcefully
Horam : Maan come
she stopped her work
Maan come sat next to her
Both did not said anything , don't know how these
hesitation came between them like they are some strangers


After some times Maan break the ice asked about where she gone in afternoon


Maan : where you are in after noon ?
Horam: woh I went out for meeting with client uff she is headache i want this type of design, this that this... grrr!
she said irritatingly
Maan: why don't you send her off if she create problem
he advised her seeing her tensed


Horam: no na i cant
she said hopelessly
Maan knotted his brows said why ?
Horam made faces and said "she is mom's best friend's daughter and mom specially call me to take care for her, only i made her wedding dress"


Maan: ohh !! So mother in law ka order hai
he said play fully


Horam frown: Maan am irritated and you making fun
she said glaring him
Maan but i love to make you irritate baby he said winking at her
Horam: maaan !!!!!!!!
She shouted
Maan close his ears : ok you work am going said get up hurriedly but his hand bump at glass water pour down on her work


His eyes poop up gulp hard and Horam her anger go high then higher
Maaan what you did she shout at him
Maan held her design wiping them which no use he smiled sheepishly at Horam who was all ready to kill him.
Maan: baby i did not do intentionally
He said like a scapegoat


Horam show her hand: kya matlab intentionally kiya ho ya nahi, mere work toh kharab hogya na, kitni hard work say banya tha yeh sab grrr aap ka dhyan khaa tha?
Maan try to say something coming close to her holding her arms but she jerk his hand


Horam: aap nai kharab kiya hai ab ap hi banao gye samjhe
She said in anger pointing finger on him
Maan mimicked ok


...another on the way

NOTE
part 8 by Fariya...
Edited,Posted and Proof-read by Pooja
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Edited by Pooooooooooooja - 10 years ago
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W we Thankful for your support which you all give hope u like it
Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

i dont understand how maan is comfortable with geet
geet..she still dont know she is his 2nd wife n horam is his first wife
she thinks her as relative
n horam couldnt see maneets closenss
any girl at her place will be hurt
n maans talk with geet
he is making her comfortable n asking her to be with him like a friend
always open up with him
here geeet is all last in him
he teases her making her all red
he came to horam n chatting with her
horam shoing her anger
it was not for spoiling the work
but closeness with geet
she cant express it
ani going to get class from her mother
nice part
but im waiting for geets reaction...after knowing who she is to maan
n her place in house
n y anie behaved like that
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22


i dont understand how maan is comfortable with geet
geet..she still dont know she is his 2nd wife n horam is his first wife
she thinks her as relative
n horam couldnt see maneets closenss
any girl at her place will be hurt
n maans talk with geet
he is making her comfortable n asking her to be with him like a friend
always open up with him
here geeet is all last in him
he teases her making her all red
he came to horam n chatting with her
horam shoing her anger
it was not for spoiling the work
but closeness with geet
she cant express it
ani going to get class from her mother
nice part
but im waiting for geets reaction...after knowing who she is to maan
n her place in house
n y anie behaved like that


valid question h di; answer mujhe b nahi pata 😆
ye ff bhagwan bharose chal raha h 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22



i dont understand how maan is comfortable with geet
geet..she still dont know she is his 2nd wife n horam is his first wife
she thinks her as relative
n horam couldnt see maneets closenss
any girl at her place will be hurt
n maans talk with geet
he is making her comfortable n asking her to be with him like a friend
always open up with him
here geeet is all last in him
he teases her making her all red
he came to horam n chatting with her
horam shoing her anger
it was not for spoiling the work
but closeness with geet
she cant express it
ani going to get class from her mother
nice part
but im waiting for geets reaction...after knowing who she is to maan
n her place in house
n y anie behaved like that



Actuual he giveup running from responsibility will create problem so may be he accept. His life they way
poojaa nai type Kya ttoh only she knows next part read kaar k ap galiya do gye would bhi ttamil neon mujko so before poojaa give next me bhaging.
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Posted: 10 years ago
abe status update karti ja
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet is getting nervous around maan.
Maan tells her to not b nervous nd b herself.
Maan teases Geet.
Geet doesn't know abt horam.
Maan goes to talk hot but she gets angry on him.
I think Geet I going to help maan in work.
Edited by kamnagupta7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
maan trying to make geet comfortable with him...
loved maaneet conversation and maan teasing geet!
annie is going to get a get scolding from mariyam because of her behavior in morning!
horam angry on maan for destroying her hardwork!
i'm eagerly waiting for geet reaction about she being maan's second wife!!!!
waiting for next part...

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