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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NidsJ

nice chapter Elvish..👏👏

u r writing their thoughts very well.. the way u r developing their care and emotions towards each other is amazing.. and the way u described the winter.. what can i say.. it was just wow...👍🏼👍🏼

and he is still hurt by the remark on him.. but it's good to see that ishani understands it so well...
n I just loved this line of his.."But it took the most important decision of my life. It separated me from the person I loved the most. It snatched the biggest reason of my life."
it described his feelings (or I would say insecurities) so well...⭐️⭐️

ur way of portraying emotions is too good.. and I am loving their care for each other.. keep writing and update soon..😊😊😊

Thank you, NidsJ! I'm glad you're liking the story so far. Ishveer's friendship/relationship is intact even after all the things they both have been through, and Ishani feels guilty because she was very mean to Ranveer during her Chirag-love phase, and Ranveer cannot stop loving Ishani, so this is what working here. That winter part is my own thinking, to be honest. I've lived my entire life in parts and now valleys of Himalayas and here winter gets way too cruel many a times, also I used to hate winter until 3-4 years back. So, that's what I tried to put there too. Thanks again.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RTPMS

Finally I ended up reading all chapter's at once, it was awesome, seriously maza aa gaya parh kar.😊

I loved the way u described each and every scene with full of emotions and their surroundings as well.

Your Ranveer and Ishaani are actually what I want to see, how much I wanted to see Ishaani standing on her own feets, and Ranveer keeping distance with her but helps her. Your progress of story is excellent this is what I liked too too much rather than sticking on just one thing, u revealed how Puneet meet Ranveer and how they moved to London, Ishaani to postponed her marriage and realising that current Chiraag is not the one whose actions attracted her, she getting back her company from Mr. Watson, and many more excellently put up👍🏼. Ah one of the best scene that where Ishaani realised that she has to live happy for other's happiness with the help of Ranveer, this scene is turned out to be my one of the most favorite scene.

Puneet's character is my another favourite character now, he being positive with Ishveer and now gradually he is understanding them, and hiding it from Ishveer is fun to read.

Now coming to chapter 12, I was so right about it yayyy, I liked Ishaani and Anya's part, how she trashed her was brilliant, she calling her Zebra, and saying even media will also agree with her, just try it once, I had a good laugh, loving this Ishaani.

Love they both still care for each other.

Amba and Falguni scene with their respective child was also very well written, how much it reflects to the reality, a mother can never be against her child wishes, and how she easily understand her children.

I m eagerly waiting for your next chapter now... Outstanding, powerful writing...👍🏼

*blushes* RTPMS, Thank you so much. I'm surprised you tolerated all the chapters at once.! :D Coming to Ishani and Ranveer, I and all of us wanted to see them like this. Always. But in the show they had their another pets who needed more attention. I still complain like this. :p
I think the back story was definitely needed as in the show those things appeared to be hollow due to them not revealingn certain things, and going ahead with unnecessary things. And yes, Ishani does feel Chirag is not the right person for her and nor is she in love with him. Do you remember the part he calls her and she's like "who's this?" Had she been in love with him, Ishani would atleast have understood it was her fiance. :D
Ishani moving on from the sorrow of the loss of her father was great to write as well. She loved two people the most- her father, and Ranveer. And only Ranveer could give her assurity of her happiness. That's why that scene. :)
Ishani and Anya's part was my favorite to write. XD There are some people who deserve this treatment, don't they? :D and yeah. Through mothers' scenes you got that right. Amba in my story is a very positive and pleasant character. I'm sure you'd love her here. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!!!! It was amazing waiting for another chapter!!!! Please tell me when u will update it? waiting for it😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Elvish its brilliant. I read 13 chapters in 1 night and 1 day 😆. Ofcourse i did sleep at night. Do Pm me the next chapter, i will wait.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

*blushes* RTPMS, Thank you so much. I'm surprised you tolerated all the chapters at once.! :D Coming to Ishani and Ranveer, I and all of us wanted to see them like this. Always. But in the show they had their another pets who needed more attention. I still complain like this. :p
I think the back story was definitely needed as in the show those things appeared to be hollow due to them not revealingn certain things, and going ahead with unnecessary things. And yes, Ishani does feel Chirag is not the right person for her and nor is she in love with him. Do you remember the part he calls her and she's like "who's this?" Had she been in love with him, Ishani would atleast have understood it was her fiance. :D
Ishani moving on from the sorrow of the loss of her father was great to write as well. She loved two people the most- her father, and Ranveer. And only Ranveer could give her assurity of her happiness. That's why that scene. :)
Ishani and Anya's part was my favorite to write. XD There are some people who deserve this treatment, don't they? :D and yeah. Through mothers' scenes you got that right. Amba in my story is a very positive and pleasant character. I'm sure you'd love her here. :)

Ok after a long time I came to this thread..
Torture No buddy, I was too much excited while reading your FF, that I read all chapter's at once.
Not only u, me also say the same that there attention to the extras has spoiled the show mainly leads, don't know y but I m still not having positive vibes for the upcoming track or the future for this DS, they are once again taking IshVeerians on a ride, I hope my this doubt don't comes true..
Coming to your FF I get a laugh when Ishaani asks who is this and it was Chiraag, she talk to him only up to the point and then finishes the call, no extra talks, a person will never talk like this with your lover atleast u will have hello hi, this completely proves that she is not in love with him. The way u define each and every scene is perfect👍🏼 and the best part is there is logic, every scene have some connection.
I loved your Amba, she understands her son. Do keep her positive throughout your FF..
Edited by RTPMS - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ILuvIshveer

Wow!!!! It was amazing waiting for another chapter!!!! Please tell me when u will update it? waiting for it😆😉

Thank you. :) I'll update the next chapter on the first of July or on the second. :) will inform you as well.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: strings123

Elvish its brilliant. I read 13 chapters in 1 night and 1 day😆. Ofcourse i did sleep at night. Do Pm me the next chapter, i will wait.

Aw, strings. Thank you so much. Will update the next chapter soon and yes, will inform you as well. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RTPMS

Ok after a long time I came to this thread..
Torture No buddy, I was too much excited while reading your FF, that I read all chapter's at once.
Not only u, me also say the same that there attention to the extras has spoiled the show mainly leads, don't know y but I m still not having positive vibes for the upcoming track or the future for this DS, they are once again taking IshVeerians on a ride, I hope my this doubt don't comes true..
Coming to your FF I get a laugh when Ishaani asks who is this and it was Chiraag, she talk to him only up to the point and then finishes the call, no extra talks, a person will never talk like this with your lover atleast u will have hello hi, this completely proves that she is not in love with him. The way u define each and every scene is perfect👍🏼and the best part is there is logic, every scene have some connection.
I loved your Amba, she understands her son. Do keep her positive throughout your FF..

Thank you, RTPMS, once again. :) I don't know anything about the upcoming track, but hopefully they don't get that useless lawyer into the middle of our leads. Don't worry about Amba. She has an important role to play and she's far more sensible in my story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 14

Hey, guys! First of all, sorry for my late update. Had my exams that's why the delay. And please don't throw your valuable shoes on me as this chapter might be bit 'off'. Rest upto your judgement.

Ranveer, after a couple of days, seemed to recover from the effects caused by the nasty turn of events. However, short the span was of Ranveer's misery, Ishani found each day of hers being in the same anguish as he. They both had spent their entire lives sharing each others' happiness, sorrows and dreams and there were promises that were made between the two. Ishani had always tried to fulfill them as much as possible but she knew she had failed in many ways.

"I will be by your side, Ranveer, whenever you are in pain," she had said to him years ago, because she had felt her own heart aching seeing him hurt. Ishani had to keep her mouth shut whenever Ranveer was punished for the mistakes he did not make because that would mean more troubles for him since her family had only person, Baa, who would take such tyrant decisions for others. Ranveer, to save her, always ended up bringing the wrath of her on himself but this time it was her turn, and she knew what she had to do.

Luck did more than a good favor to her when the news of the announcement of Annual Business Awards came out and Ishani was certain that Ranveer would bag this for sure but he was not ready to attend the function as he said he doesn't work to collect awards but working for him is a passion which does not need any external motivations from some unknown people.

"If going there is so much important, Puneet will do it," he said when Ishani insisted him. "I have other important things to do."

Ishani could not deny how irritating he really looked sometimes with his attitude but she knew this was what had protected him from the flings of the cruelties of the people around him for two years now. This time Ishani made sure that Ranveer knows his own worth very well and does not blame himself anymore because of the people who had no importance in his life.

Puneet along with Rishi agreed to go to the award function, and Ishani also was invited there. Although she hated to be in public but this time she had to make it there and surprisingly she found strength to do so.

The award function was to be held on 15th of December, and most of the businessmen and politicians of the country were invited. This certainly was one of the most awaited events of the year and for Ranveer was the one being considered for the Best Businessman Of The year Award for his growth had been excellent in one year and he was one of the pioneers who had played prominent role in country's economic growth as well.

"I'm sure you will win this year," Ishani said to Ranveer on the Award evening.

"Oh, okay," he replied, not caring much about the topic Ishani was bringing in.

"Don't you think it's cool?"

"Ishani, when I was a servant no one cared to give me any award and when I became RV no one presented an award me to do so. I respect their sentiments but I just do not have the same opinions about them like everyone else does. And as far as I remember you never were interested in them either why this excitement now?" Ranveer said earnestly.

Ishani was surprised to see that Ranveer still remembered her dislike for them but there was no time to ponder over them as she had other things to focus on.

"Alright, then. I'm leaving now. I'll pray it's you," she said and left, not answering his questions.

*

After Ishani left Ranveer gave a sigh. He never craved for attention or special honor from the authority, for it never mattered to him. He tried avoiding all such things and hoped he had not been rude to Ishani, and Puneet and Rishi would handle everything.

Ranveer remained lost in his reverie when a familiar voice reached his ears.

"How're you, RV?"

Ranveer turned around to see Mr. Zaveri was standing there with a worried look on his face.

"Zaveri sir!" Ranveer said. "It's good to see you here."

Mr. Zaveri smiled a worried smile and said, "RV, there is a problem that I have come to know just now. Do you know there have been some troubles in the shares for last couple of weeks?"

Ranveer nodded, "And I still have not been able to understand who it is."

"I also have no confirmation but there is a thought that this person belongs to your company only who has a wide knowledge of it too. No outsider can do this," Mr. Zaveri said.

"That's right. But is there anything you know that I don't?"

"No, RV. Nothing has been cleared since our last discussion last month; and the problem occurs that even my own company has not been spared by this person. He has caused some problems in my financial department."

"I understand this, sir, and the problem is that he has been very careful in his plans because never once we have doubted anyone," Ranveer said with a concern in his voice.

Mr. Zaveri nodded.

"Apart from this there is something else, RV, that you should know," Mr. Zaveri said. "Do you remember Ralph?"

"Of course I do. How can I forget that wretch?"

"Very fine. He has been seen here, near your office, several times and I fear he is not upto any good."

"Even though he is upto any wrong I will handle him," Ranveer said.

"Are you sure?"

"You doubt me?"

"No, no. No doubt on you. I'm worried that you already have so much going on; how will you manage all this?"

"I'll take care of this all, sir," Ranveer said, with a weird emphasis on sir'.

"Alright then, RV, it's time to leave. There are some clients I'm supposed to meet at 10 pm, and it's only 15 minutes left. See you soon," Mr. Zaveri said and left.

*

Ishani knocked Ranveer's cabin door as she looked pleased, a smile on her face. Ranveer looked at surprised her for he was not expecting her to be there at this moment. It was past midnight now and the temperature went down due to continuously snowing around the country.

"Hey, congrats!" Ishani smiled broadly as she entered the cabin.

Ranveer looked confused for the moment but changed his expressions when he realized what Ishani meant. Before Ranveer said anything Ishani came closer and looked at him happily, her eyes expressing a happiness that was never seen before, but suppressed beneath her confused smiles.

"They declared you the winner, Ranveer," Ishani said in excitement.

"Thanks," was all Ranveer said, not getting what he should be saying.

"See, didn't I say people do respect you? Today this honor to you proved this as well and now no one...I say no one can mean anything wrong to you. Mark my words," Ishani said.

Ranveer's face fell as he did not want to be reminded of such things. Ishani noticed this and said, "Ranveer, do you know what people think of you? They think there's no one like you out there in the whole market of UK. There's no one who has such deep understanding of their business and there's no one who really works the way you do. Do you understand this?"

"Why didn't you go home? It's midnight already and you're here," Ranveer said, trying to drift the conversation to something else.

"Don't change the topic, Ranveer. It's not going to make any difference," Ishani replied, imitating the rude voice of Ranveer in which he asked her to leave.

"Look, I don't need to know what people think of me, or if they think good or ill of me. I just don't care. I don't work for others to please but earn money and for myself," Ranveer said curtly.

"Really? You don't care? But there's someone who does," and with this Ishani switched on the TV which was showing the highlights of the award function. Ranveer's gaze stopped at the moment he was announced the businessman of the year by Mr. Peter Shackleford, the ex-chairman of the Paramount Group, and his parents proceeding towards the stage to receive the award. Ranveer looked at Ishani.

"Yes, Puneet and Rishi convinced them both to attend the ceremony since you had refused to, and they agreed," Ishani said softly.

Ranveer nodded and looked back at the TV screen and saw his parents' faces illuminated with deep smiles.

"Thank you. It's an honor for us," Ranveer's mother said and the tears of happiness streamed out of her eyes. She could say nothing further and looked at her husband with a proud smile on her face.

Ranveer's father smiled back and happiness was explicitly visible on his face.

"I'm glad that our son has been awarded with this honour. He started where he was regarded to be of no importance, but his dedication, hard work and sacrifice has paid off," he said. "I always knew my son would reach on the heights of the success one day and then the whole world would be by his side. It is amazing to see this happening today. Today a father's dream has come true."

And with this the news channel continued to show the further details of the function and Ishani switched off the TV.

"You saw?" she asked.

Ranveer nodded. "Yeah."

"Don't you think you should be thinking about these people rather than the ones who hold no value in your life? Look at you. What you have made of yourself in these days. Ranveer, didn't you once say Ishani, give yourself a chance, get out of your little world and see it from others point of views not even you will feel like to be sad'? Just see it from your parents' point of views and let me know what you feel. Sometimes it just takes nothing more than following your own advice," Ishani said.

Ranveer gave out a sigh and looked at her helplessly.

"Why are you doing this?" he asked, making Ishani feel awkward as she turned her eyes away from his.

Ishani did not realize herself the cause of her worry towards Ranveer, and all she thought throughout the while was how to make him feel better. There used to be certain emotions that hit her everytime she saw him happy or in pain. The feelings were like she had never felt before and their presence was like swimming in a swirling ocean of unknown flurry that would take her to an unknown destination ultimately.

"I asked something, Ishani," Ranveer said gently when Ishani did not answer.

Ishani still did not have any answer and kept quiet. After some time she spoke, "I was talking about something else, Ranveer, and why do you always have to change the subject?"

There was a tension in her voice that could be noticed in the silence of the dark night. She looked nervous and scared. Scared because she herself feared to admit the emotions that would be exposed in front of the man she least wanted to. She saw Ranveer, still not convinced and a broken look in his eyes.

Ishani swallowed. "Please try to understand, Ranveer. I...I don't know why I'm doing this but I don't want you to let go of Ranveer," she said.

Ranveer did not blink, but stared at her continuously, hoping against hope if he saw a glint of hope in what he just saw in Ishani's eyes. They were burning with pain yet had that serene comfort in them that had always been there when he needed her. For the first time he found himself unable to look into them, for they gave him a hope but the fear of it getting shattered again crushed his heart.

"Let's go. I'll drop you home," he said, ultimately.

"But, Ranveer..."

"I'm tired, Ishani. I cannot talk about anything now. Please."

Ishani understood his gesture and agreed.

*

"It was amazing. The whole function," Rishi said to Puneet after Ishani and Ranveer left.

"Yeah, it was," Puneet returned.

"But I noticed something, Puneet. Don't know if you think the same way. It's about RV sir and Ms. Parekh," Rishi said.

Puneet raised his eyebrows, "Never knew you were interested in any gossip of this kind."

"It's not like that. I just think something becomes very different the moment these two stand together. The air, the atmosphere, the meaning of the whole situation alters. Only because of them. I guess I don't sound too cheesy but it's something I have always come to feel," Rishi said rather hesitantly.

"No, you don't sound cheesy. RV sir's story is complicated, very complicated. Few chapters of his life are like an open book that are read by everyone and rest are like an untold mystery that are disguised somewhere never to be reopened again. I feel the same way as you do, and I don't know what's there that makes the things different; but I hope. I really do whatever it is comes out to be positive. I feel they have seen a lot," Puneet said.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear EH 🤗 🤗

You are amazing , do you know that ? 😳 😳 Why would we throw something on you , you gave a masterpiece dear and all you deserve is praise, love and hugs 🤗 🤗

I am loving how Ishani is falling for him , and loving his parenst her 😳 😳 Kash hamare CVs bhi itne smart hote 😉

Update soon dear 😳 😳

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