Manya SS : Tangled hearts

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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Tangled heart"

'If I were a guitar, you would be my tune
Coz love has no meaning of its own
N without u I'd b like the moon which always seem to b alone' Amaya' love for Mantu.

'I sometimes wonder if u really know u mean the world to me
So just hold my hand and never let it go
Coz being close to you is my destiny' Mantu's love for Amay.

So guys let's read a story on these two soulmates.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part one : Broken heart

Softly rubbing the photo in her hand ,Amaya mumbled 'superman...my superman' then she tightly hugged the photo and started shedding her tears continuously. Rachita who was sitting beside her ,hugged Amaya and tried to comfort her. 'Ammu be strong ...u are papa's strong girl nar...' while saying Rachita caressed her younger sister's hair. 'No Rachi di i cant be strong ...everyone is leaving me ..first superman and now ...' She couldnt continued as her heart break into pieces everytime she think he is leaving her. Amaya looked up at Rachita 'am i that bad that everyone just like to leave me?' Said sobbing. Rachita wiped away her sister tears and kissed her forehead and said 'no Ammu dont think like that ... u r one in a million'. Then jazz came and hugged both of her sisters and sang 'ek hazaron may meri behna hai' then Rachita too sang along wid jezz ' saari umar hamay sang rahana hein... Phoolo ka taaro ka sab ka kehna hai'. They managed to put a smile on Amaya lips ' u do know that u are the best sisters right' saying these she hugged her sister tightly ...who are her pillar of strength.
Amaya know in whatever situation she is, her sisters will be there with her. but how will she tame her heart after seeing that heart breaking scene? She loved him more than her life ... Just like the way she love her superman but he left her without saying anything and now it's his turn...he is leaving her without knowing her feeling. Every nerve on her body breath and live just one name ...her mantu ... her junior superman ...her world but she is losing her grip on him to someone else ...she cant bare to see him with someone else even if it's his best friend Uma. But now they are not just best friend ...they are lovers ...she saw their pictures together on the Facebook and others' comments too saying 'perfect couple' ... It irked her to the core. More to that she overheard Uma saying she loves Mantu and uma also said confidently that she is sure Mantu too loves her. She couldnt talk or see at that moment ...her world torn apart ... She was totally shakened.
Amaya closes her eyes not wanting to think about the past. She forced herself to sleep so that she would stop thinking about Mantu. But the thought that she gonna see him the next day at the office speed up her heart. 'Oh dil ...why dont u listen to me ...he means nothing ...ok' she mumbled while trying hard to stop her unstoppable pool of tears.
The next morning Amaya is woken up by the sound of the bells which signify Banaras. She tried to closed her ears not because she hated the sound but because it reminds her of mantu..'Arrgh ..life is screwed' she thought. 'Love is the cruelest thing' she said to herself. She was a bit steady today and wasnt shaken and weak like the day before. She needed to be strong at least for her family as she is the only earning member of the family so she cant be broken with these thought she promised herself not to think about Mantu anymore.
She quickly freshened up and had her breakfast. Rachita and jazz looked at Amaya with surprise ...the girl was so weak yesterday and today she is acting like nothing had happened...Rachita came forward and held Amaya hand then whispered worriedly 'are you alright?'. Amaya nodded with a smile. Sneha asked 'tum kyar fusur fusur kar rahe ho?' to that all three of them replied 'nothing Mom'. Then Amaya left to work being nervous as well as knowing that she can face every situation.
At office , she sat at her place while forcing to be normal with everyone. Her heart was constantly yearning to see his face or hear his voice. 'Uff Amaya ..enough is enough ...focus' she said to herself. 'Focus what Amaya?' A sweet voice which she was yearning to listen shook her heart and made her skip a beat. Her lips curve to make a smile ... She was happy to listen. Mantu shook her shoulder from behind and said 'Amaya?' . Amaya came back to her senses 'hmm.. Hm.. Ya ... Wh...what Mantu?' She said with trembling voice. Mantu touch her forehead ' you alright hun?' ...she was lost again at his touch.. 'Amaya!' Mantu said a little louder . Amaya eyes popped out then she closed her eyes tightly 'stop u fool amaya' she thought. With closed her she said ' u ...u go ...i m alright ...u just go' she said softly. Mantu was shocked and questioned ' what?'. Still closing her eyes 'just go ...i cant see you' she said. Mantu was more shocked and he again said 'what!' Louder. 'Oh shit amaya what did u said' she thought. 'Umm... I mean i have got infection in my eyes so if u see me, u will be infected too, that's why i m saying u to go... Ya that's why' she took a deep breath. 'Pagal' thinking that Mantu went from there.
How can someone be free from love? That's the only question running on Amaya's mind. She sat down in front of her laptop and went on to search for the divine truth of how to stop loving someone. Sometimes she thought to herself how can she be that crazy. Finally she got an idea, she thought 'if i had to stop loving someone , i should start loving someone else... Ya perfect' she smiled crookedly thinking that her problem is solved. 'Let's find the target' she whispered. Then she started her mission to find her prey. Her mission was completed when she planned to make only friend , her prey. He is called Arun.
She went near Arun cabin but stopped 'uff what am i going to say him?'she thought. Then she went to canteen to buy some snacks and then came back to Arun's cabin. 'Hi Arun' she said with her cheeky smile. Arun already like Amaya from the first day unknown to her. ' ya hi Princess' said with content as this is the first time Amaya visited his cabin otherwise he had to go and initiate a conversation. 'How come you are here?' He asked with amaze. 'Here i got these' holding her snacks she said 'couldnt eat alone , needed a friend' she continued smiling.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow!!!its very nice dear plz continue.good start by the way.guys plz attach it to the ss thread 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazingly written!!
Can't wait.to read more from you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: beatsdongandy

wow!!!its very nice dear plz continue.good start by the way.guys plz attach it to the ss thread 😃


Thz so much ... It's means a lot to me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriyansh_tanya

Amazingly written!!

Can't wait.to read more from you


Thz u ... I will try to continue as soon as possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well written dr. I would love to read more. Do continue

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