DEVEEL OS- COMPANIONS FOR LIFE!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Orey manva tu to bavra hai
Tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai

a bright smile appeared on her face just like the bright sun as he gifted her some fresh flowers... she loved to receive gifts and specially from him but after a few moments, she shouted in a high pitch voice... "KANJOOS!!!" she started hitting him with the lilies itself, then pulling his hair cursing him of how it had taken her a whole month to patiently look after the plant and wait for the first flowers of the season but he plucked them to gift her...did he not have any better option or did he want to practice cost cutting!!!😈


Tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai bavre
Kyun dikhaye sapne tu sote jaagte

she hurriedly picked up her bag to come downstairs as he must be waiting for her to leave for college... but a big surprise for her was how some new girl sat behind him... with her hand on his shoulder! was that not supposed to be her seat...she wanted to go and ask him about how dare he allow some other XYZ girl to take up her place that to with him... but she let them go as he gave her requesting and then apologetic looks from under his helmet😔

Jo barse sapne boond boond
Nainon ko moond moond

I think m in LOVE he declared as she was busy doing the dishes after dinner...he told her about SHANAYA, the new girl in the neighborhood who seems to be interested in him, who finds him cute! she did not speak a word in the whole conversation...just did hmmm, acchhaaa, OK, then... and he continued to talk about his movie date with shanaya that day!!! she did not understand what was he talking...she did not want to, half of the time lost in her own world. sje turned as he poked her twice but broke a plate while keeping it in the rack... CARELESS!!!he labeled her...but more than careless she was hurt😭


Kaise main chaloon, dekh na sakoon
Anjaane raastein

he was in love??? did he ever understand what kind of a feeling is love!!! he remembered all the time when she was with him, how they had been the best of friends...laughing, crying, singing, dancing...even banging each other's heads...they rightfully claimed each others time, she knew him so well, he knew her so well, did he never understand or got any kind of hint that she had felt for him..that she had fallen for him...she kept on tossing and turning in the bed..sleep still being far away from his eyes...😲


Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara
Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara

TUMHE NEEND NAHI AA RAHI KYA??? he asked her seeing on the terrace so late at night...nah!!! she replied holding back all her doubts, questions and pain...kept blinking her eyes to hide the tears but he caught her...what's wrong??? he asked holding her hand...m missing maa...she explained pointing towards the brightest star... successful in concealing the actual reason of her heartache, OHHO see mumma is not alone there and so r u here, lets count how many friends she has!!! and he started counting the twinkling stars... BUDHHU!!! she thought of him to be as he was not able to figure out the truth that she was hiding, she could have easily caught him by just looking at his expressions!!!😒


Dheeme bole koi iktara iktara, dheeme bole koi iktara
Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara

she blushed more than anu as she saw rajat not letting his wife arrange the breakfast table, pulling her to him, teasing her, tickling her, nibbling her... u know when u love someone just let them go, if they come back, they r yours forever and if they don't, they were never meant to be!!! WHAT DIDI??? R U OK??? peeya asked worriedly and she came back to the real world when peeya clicked her fingers to get the attention...😊

Sun rahi hoon sudh budh khoke koi main kahani
Poori kahani hai kya kise hai pata

feeling fresh after a great afternoon's nap... she had a complete mood turn off when she saw shanaya sitting with him, in his room, on his couch enjoying a cup of coffee as he sang some romantic song for his new found love strumming the guitar...but heyy wait a minute, is it not that mug which she got for him as a birthday present...yeah it is! she clearly remembers because she had bargained for that particular mug for a good half an hour and then got it for 99 rupees!!!😲


Main to kisiki hoke yeh bhi na jaani
Ruth hai ye do pal ki ya rehgi sada

HEYY SELFIE QUEEN...PLS POSE FOR ME TODAY!!! he asked setting his new camera in the right frame...but she stood up to walk out of the room and to get his way right he pulled her hairband, making her straight silky tresses flair in the air... she did not wish to be clicked but got so unknowingly, as she rolled her eyes which sparkled like always, it was the perfect shot to capture the beauty of her photogenic face... AUR ABHI ABHI USKE DIL MEIN KHAYAL K does his so very much talked about shanaya know him??? the way he lives, his likes, dislikes, his favorites, his love for music, his love for his bike, his equations with his family members, will she be able to handle him if he starts cribbing about how his gadgets don't work when needed! will she stay awake till late just to watch cartoons with him...😛

Jo barse sapne boond boond
Nainon ko moond moond

she came down running from the staircase to stop him, NEIL TUM MARKET JAA RAHE HO NAA, SABZI LAANI THHI!!! ohh pls devyaani we are going to an antique jewellery shop in chandni chowk, not anywhere to bargain for vegetables... shanaya cut her words... how was she not able to see the so called diva shanaya!!! again it hurt her and even he did utter a word but she was DEVYANI SHASTRI!!! she put 100 rupees on his palm saying... 1 KILO BHINDI, I KILO TAMATAR AUR 1 KILO AALOO, USKE SAATH JO DHANIYA MIRCHI FREE MILTI HAI WHO BHI CHAAHIYE AUR HAA 500 GRAM PYAAZ BHI... AUR YE SAB WHO CORNER WAALE UNCLE K PAAS SE KHAREEDNA AUR DISCOUNT ZAROOR MAANGNA... he was so helpless and just dumbfounded nodded a yes!!!😆

Jo barse sapne boond boond
Nainon ko moond moond

he was busy cleaning his bike in the porch when some random guy came asking for devyaani, he was confused but she came down to him and then left the place with him... he felt a slight tinge of envy developing into him...HOW COULD SHE GO WITH SOMEONE LIKE THIS??? WHY DID SHE NOT TELL ME ABOUT THIS??? I DON'T EVEN KNOW THAT GUY!!! SHE OWES ME AN EXPLAINATION!!! 😡


Kaise main chaloon, dekh na sakoon
Anjaane raastein

continuously stirring his coffee mug, he questioned himself, about what was he doing in that caf with shanaya, who was just crying for her broken nails leaving his best friend alone who was shivering in fever since the morning, SHAME ON ME!!! he murmured to himself thinking about how she did the assignments twice when he was in no mood to do them, when he made her lie to all the family members about their studying together whereas he ran away to party with his friends... picking up the keys of his bike, he left the place and so his "GIRLFRIEND"😃

Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara
Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara

SARR JO TERA CHAKRAAYE YAA DIL DOOBA JAAYE AAJAA PYAARE PAAS HUMAARE KAAHE GHABRAAYE, ARRE SUNN SUNN SUNN ARRE BABA SUNN, ISS CHAMPI MEIN BADE BADE GUNN...dev sang aloud while massaging peeya's head..didi u r not keeping well pls don't do this!!! go and rest, peeya ordered in a stern tone, which had to adhere...🥱


Dheeme bole koi iktara iktara, dheeme bole koi iktara
Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara

the doorbell rang continuously disturbing her sound sleep... she looked all around.. shastri had gone to office and peeya left a note saying she is going to a friends place... she opened the door running her fingers through her messed up hair only to see him short of breathe but with an inflated face... KYA HUA NEIL??? DID THAT SHANAYA SAY SOMETHING??? BLOODY CHANDNI CHOWK WAALI CHUDAIL, HUM ABHI JAAKE THEEK KARTE HAI USSE!!! she turned blabbering out all her frustration of shanaya on neil but he just said M SORRY, to which she reacted something like HEEE!!! m sorry devyaani, I cant think of leaving u, I can never think of hurting u, m sorry, nobody can take the place u have In my heart, in my life, m a big buffon head, PLS MAAF KARDE YAAR... MAIN SAB KUCH CHHOD SAKTAA HU PAR TUMHAARE SAATH KI PAAGALPANTI NAHI, MAIN SAB KUCH BHOOL SAKTA HU LEKIN TUMHARA CARE, TUMHAARI FRIENDSHIP NAHI, I will never be able to afford to let u go or lose u!!! AAAWWW was a reflex reaction to his confession... and she held him tight in her arms... THANK U SHANKARJI... LAUT K BUDDHHU AA GAYA GHAR KO!!!😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful os poitu!!!! 😃 It's very different and totally new for us anurajian!!!! I think it would have been a new experience fr u also na😉 but very beiatifully written and it was perfectly a deveel os 😃 going gr8 poitu😃 keep it up!!!! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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what to say no words loved frm starting to end all the scenes you wrote were awesome devyani beating neil with a bouquet and counting stars ghoomna Shanaya ke saath the hug at last al awesome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: herapanna

what to say no words loved frm starting to end all the scenes you wrote were awesome devyani beating neil with a bouquet and counting stars ghoomna Shanaya ke saath the hug at last al awesome.


thank u so much hera😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice OS!
Agree with Shri, it's a new experience for AnuRaj fans...😊
But it's veery enjoyable! Keep it up! 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Very well Written 👏 and its perfectly Deveel 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _habiba_

Very nice OS!

Agree with Shri, it's a new experience for AnuRaj fans...😊
But it's veery enjoyable! Keep it up! 👍🏼


thank u habi😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fari2608

Very well Written 👏 and its perfectly Deveel 😉


thanks fari😊
Nithya.G thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb pooru lovely update👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nithianu

superb pooru lovely update👏


thank u nithya😊

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