FF___JAB TUNE JHOOT BOLA___Chapter-28 on pg 126 TEASER Pg 137

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Posted: 10 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: --abha--
OMG!!!!! ! Update was so sweet and romantic ☺️...I loved the way he asked her that he want to slerp in her arms.....And ruhi bachha deserves a hug 🤗...for making dubbu jealous... 😆...This one is one of my fav part...Looking forward for next...Continue soon...Thanks for pm...

Thank you yaar 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: Ishu27
Hey gayu, great update asusual.. Wonderful lovely update da.. Loved it a lot.. Superb darling.. Pls kill that subbu soon.. Want ishra honeymoon.. Pls

Thank you so much yaar 😃
Honeymoon 🤔
Let me think 😉

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#873

Originally posted by: rk654
enjoyed very much this part...👍🏼
super cool update...

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: sush_rddt
OMG gaya superb!!!
Ruhi hihi lola she is too evil and cute!!
raman and ishu's moments were awesome.. especially raman's wish..
and the pre cap i know its subbu telling ishita that he loves her
ahrrr i hate it!!!

update jaldi.. too greedy and update a teaser before it too please

Thanks dear 😊
Precap... 😉
Surprise 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: divazfankau
awsome updated
I just loved mhika n ruhi
joulesy plan continue soon

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: rufana10

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nice and romantic update😳
poor ishra...bathroom is now their only secret place😳
smart ruhi...she very well knows how to make subbu dubbu jealous😃
i was imagining subbu's face during ruhi-mihika convo😆😆
ishra and their romance☺️☺️
loved this update👍🏼
update soon

Thanks dear 😃
Yeah...at least they have bathroom 😆 😳

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#877

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Mera song phir se select ni hua huh...
I am not going to suggest in future (I amtoo good in breakingaise promises :D)
What an irony last time for manmarzian I told the saanso ko song it wasn't selected.. Now I thought yeh nahi Chun hoga to nahi dia n it is selected :P
Anyway
I told you mihika is karamchand jaasoos.. See up early :P
Ohh.. Toh Ruhi is as actually there to stop them doing ahem ahem lol.
Subbu jal k raakh Hua kya???
I loved his wish that was so cute

Sorry sweetu... 😳 (for the song)
Mihika karamchand jaasoos 😉 😆
Thanks for enjoying 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

#878

Hi Kutties 😃

It's fun posting Teasers 😆

So here goes another one

Not proofread

TEASER

When she tried to part from him her mangalsutra ravelled to his shirt button. She worriedly tried to unravel it carefully while he looked at her enticing beauty. She tried her best not to touch him. However, the small chain made it difficult for her to maintain the distance. That was when Raman entered the scene and halted in his track. He could see Ishita's back. From that view anyone would think that she is kissing his chest. Subbu looked diabolically at an aweatruck Raman. He ran his hands behind her back withoit touching her. He drew her perfect contour in a devilish way as if showing Raman that how close she is with him. Raman didn't move from his track but waited for her to turn gritting his teeth.

Ishita after some patient tries, successfully unknotted her mangalsutra and turned towards the door. Raman looked on at her messed up countenance. Her vermilion smeared on her forehead because of touching Subbu's chest. Her facial expressions voiced out that she didn't expect him to see it. She walked up to him but he stopped her making her shudder.

Ishita: "Raman...?"

PS. Do you want the update this evening 😉

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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago