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Posted: 10 years ago
damn he doesnt get it
of course he doesnt
he has to understand her
and she him
some things need to be understood
and some need to be told
hope he does make up to her
so she doesnt leave him
or he leave her
dont think she will take it
after all she there is only so much she can take right
and she is only human
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update. Good that maan try to make her understand his point & apologize her for not understanding her point of view.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wah kya Maan geet se sorry yeise kehediya
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
maan always assumption on geet
but later maan ne geet ko mana he liya.
love d way ..
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved it
maaneet coming close in their relation 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
maan didnt know why she was angry
maan try to talk and consoling her
lovely scene maaneet
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago

this turn come

updating soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GeetMeet

Nice update dear Mann want to reduce the angry off geet and explain her that befor he asked her for part he said yes to harshad


thanks 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part 58

He kissed on her forehead...

Geet please smile na

.

Toh tum ase nhi maanongi

.

He kisses on one of her eye then other...she little smiled, this smile not misses by maan too...

Maan : that's my cutie geetu

.

His lips come close to her lips; his breath was fanning her lips...

Geet : maan

Good night

.

She try to take step back, but he held her more closer..

maan : geet I want to say something

geet : hmm

maan : you looking so hot in this sari...

She blushed & placed her head on his chest...he take her in embrace...

Maan : always smile like this shone

I want to see you happy

.

Mein kuch galat karu

Then please tell me

.

Yu gussa mt hona

.

He nuzzles in her hair, slowly he kiss on her earlobe sulking it... he parted from hug...

Maan : good night

***********

One week more passed out, in this week maan so busy in new

project and tensed too...

He came late night at home, and geet waiting for him...

Maan : geet tum ab tak soyi nhi

Geet : maan aap fresh ho jaaiye

Mein dinner lagati hu

Maan : geet am tired

Meri icha nhi hai

Geet : oh

It's mean

Mujhe bhi bhuka sona padenga

Maan : geet tumne ab tak dinner kyun nhi kiya

Geet : bs aapke sath krna tha

Is bahane hum kuch pal sath baith jaate

Nhi toh aajkal aap itna busy rhte ho

Kb ghar aaye

Kb gye

Pata hi nhi chalta

Maan : sorry geet

Ye ek baar hume project mil jaaye

Uske baad hi mujhe relax milenga

Geet : nervous ho aap

Maan : hmm

Geet : I know

Humesha aapke sath asa hi hota hai

Relax Mr. Maan singh khurana

Project aapko hi milenga

Maan : geet am serious

Geet : me too

.

You remember maan

Aapka first project

Aap kitna nervous the

Na khud puri raat soye

Na mujhe shone diya

.

We chat whole night

.

But you get success na

.

Fir aaj kya problem hai

Maan : geet

Tb dad the sath mein advice ke liye

Par abhi dad yaha nhi hai

If I do something wrong

Fir mein dad ko kya jwab dunga

He trust me

Aur maine

Geet : sshhh

Hum sath hai na maan

And I believe you

.

Maan ydi kissi ko bahar pata chala na

Aap itna nervous ho

Toh hum pakka haar jaayenge

.

Aur aapki jo image hai na

Wo toh spoil hi ho jaani hai

Maan : geett

Geet : isme maine kya galat kaha

Aap toh ase behave kr rhe ho

Jaise first time board exam hai

Aur aapne kuch pda nhi hai

Just chill

.

Maan : good night

Geet : maan khana

Maan : not interested

Geet : mujhe bhook lagi hai

Maan : am coming in five minutes

Geet : good boy

Maan : kya kha tumne

Geet : come fast

Aur kuch nhi

********

Next day

Maan : geet tum kisse baat kr rhi ho

Geet : dad se maan

Come fast

.

Dad : maan ye mein kya sun raha hu

You are nervous

Wo bhi itne project krne ke baad

Maan : dad Mr. Sighaniya want to open Indian hotels at worldwide

approx in 10 countries

This is very huge project

Isse humari company ko bhut profit ho sakta hai

If I do some mistake

Dad : never son

Isse phle jo tumne project kiye wo iske compare mein small jaroor

the

But I trust on your capability

So

All the best

Maan : thanks dad

Geet : dad

I want to ask you something

Dad : pucho beta

Geet : are you sure

He is your son

Maan : geet

Geet : dad

Dekho na

Aap kitne confident ho

Lovely and caring bhi ho

Aur ye

Maan : aur mein kya

Geet : khadoos

Gusse wala

Dad : you are right beta

I have also same doubt

Khi hospital mein badal toh nhi gya tha

Maan : dad aap bhi

Iska sath de rhe hai

Dad : she is my daughter after all

Maan : party change kr li aapne

Dad : now you really complaining like small child

Kyun geet

Geet : right dad

Maan : bye both of you

Geet : bye dad

.

.

Maan

Suno toh

.

Maan : am not interested

Geet : sorry baba

She held his wrist and came in front of him...

Maan : dad ke saamne toh bhut bol rhi thi

Geet : mein toh bs aapka mood change krna chahti thi

Par mujhe kya pata tha

You became dust danav

Maan : what

Ab toh mujhe tumse koi baat nhi krni

Geet : itti se baat pe itna gussa

Maan : ye itti si baat nhi thi

Geet : so you are angry

Maan : yes

Geet : mujhe aapko manana bhi aata hai fir

Maan : really

Try it

.

She came closer, her lips touched on his cheek, she going below,

her breath falling on his neck, she move towards his ear and

screamed loudly...

Maan : you

Both chases each other, in last maan held geet tightly in arms...

Maan : ab bhag ke dikhayo

Geet : maan sorry

Please leave me

Maan : tum abhi bhi utni hi shaitan ho

Geet : dekha finally aap maan gye

Maan : ase koi kissi ko manata hai

Bala

Geet : geet toh humehsa ase hi manati hai aapko

Bhool gye kya

Maan : toh phle kyun nhi mnaya mujhe geet

Jb mein intzaar kr raha tha

Tum aaj call karongi mujhe

Mujhpe gussa karongi

How I leave you

Mein kaise tumpe chilaya

.

Kuch gussa tum karongi

Kuch mein

.

But in end

Hum sath honge

.

Geet : darr rhi thi maan

Khi maine kuch kaha

Aur aapne jwab nhi diya toh

.

Jaise us waqt mujhse naraaz ho gye chale gye the

Khi mera kuch khehna

.

Humari dosti ko humesha ke liye khatam na krde

.

And I don't want to lose you

.

Mujhe ase aapka passport nhi chupana tha na

You missed your flight

Due to me

.

Meri wajh se ydi aapke carrier pe asar pd jaata toh

Mein khud ko kaise maaf kr ti

.

Maan : geet

Ydi tumne kuch galat kiya tha nadani mein

Toh maine bhi kaha kuch shi kiya tha

.

Tum pe itna gussa kiya

Tumse bina mile chala gya

.

Aur waha jaake bhi

.

Geet : maan

Mujhe nhi rona hai

Maan : sorry shona

But I want to say some thing

.

I missed you so much

Geet : me too

.

Both hugged each other...

Geet : par maan

Hum toh fir bhi dialy baat krte the

Wo alag baat hai

Saamne na rhke

Chupke hi shi

Maan : kya kh rhi ho tum geet

Mujhe kuch smjh nhi aaya

Geet(think) geet tub hi na

Excitement mein kuch bhi bolti hai tu

.

Wo kuch nhi maan

Bs yhi

Hum durr hoke bhi humesha sath the

Maan : hmm

**********

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

29 june

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wo ek din - part 25 on page 105

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