th#2 Hum Aapke Dil mein Rahte h/th#3added - Page 18

Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Part 13

Superb Update

That B**** Naintara maan ko sab kuchh bta diya, bahut oversmart ban rahi hai,poor maan could not take all this,what happened to him, really worried for him

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Awesome update...!!
well written..!!
thnx 4 da pm..!!
hope maan is alright..!!
maan is in too much shock..!!
Nt tells da truth wid a twist..!!
thank you for post on IF
waiting 4 nxt updt...

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

open your blog to everyone

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

Waiting

Originally posted by: Surbhivarun001

Thanks... After my xams I. Will surely comment regularly...!!

Originally posted by: Surbhivarun001

Awesome update...!!
Hope maan is alright...!! Nt is gono be a big problem for all... Its seems dangerous...!!
Feel... Sad for geet... Poor her...
Update soon...!!

Originally posted by: maneetarsh

Nice one, so naina Tara said all thier misdoings and at end twisted saying that Dev is geets pehla pharmacy Hai. What happened to maan now

Originally posted by: SAI92

Wat happened to Man?I don't want naintara to create more misundersting

Part 14

She placed her hand on his shoulder, and feels his body start fall on left with the sudden touch... she came in front of him, and sees his face fully sweated... his clothes also wet...

Geet cupped his face and try to wake him...

Maan please aankho kholo

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Maan

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He not responds to her...

Maan please

She hugged him tightly and calls dev...

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All family patiently waiting of doctor to come outside...this 20 minutes so heavy for all... finally doctor come ...

All ask about maan together...

Doc : relax

Aap sb itna panic honge

Toh maan ka dhyan kaun rakhenga

Geet : maan kaise hai doctor

Doctor : I give injection to him

Aap kal unhe hospital le aana

Kuch test krne honge

Geet : ji

Now he is ok

Doctor : hmm

Aap chahe toh unse mil sakti hai

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Daadi : maan ye kya halaat kr rakhi hai aapne

Aap kyun apna dhyan nhi rakhte

Maan : daadi

Am fine

Dev : bro

Achanak aapki tabiyat kaise kharab ho gyi hai

Maan : tabiyat hai dev

Phle email toh bejengi nhi mujhe

Dev : mein toh bs

Maan : am feeling sleepy

Daadi : maan beta aap rest kriye

Maan : hmm

All left except geet ... She come near to him & sits...

Geet : maan

Ab aap kaise ho

Maan : am fine

Mujhe neend aa rhi hai

Geet : maan kissi ne kuch kaha hai aapse

Dekhiye

Mujhe bataiye

Maan : I think you forget your condition geet

Tumne kya kaha tha

Tum is ghar mein tb tak nhi aayongi

Jb tak mere mann mein tumhare liye whi ehsaas na ho

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Asa hi kuch tha

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Aur abhi mere mann mein asa kuch nhi hai tumhare liye

She painfully takes his name "maan"

Geet : maan

Ye aap bhi achi tarah jaante hai

Mere liye aapse bdke

Aur koi kasam

Ya condition nhi ho sakti

.

Mujhe lagne laga tha

Ab aap mujhe thoda bhut smjhne lage hai

But you proved me again wrong

.

Aap jaante bhi hai

Jb aapko

Waha garden mein asi halaat mein dekha

Toh mein kitna darr gyi thi

.

Ydi aapko kuch ho gya

Ydi maine aapko kho diya toh

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Nhi

Mein toh marr jaati na maan

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He don't see tears in her eyes, he pull her by wrist, she fall on his chest...

Geet : maan

Maan : sshhh

Bhut bhol liya tumne

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He wipes her tears and takes her in embrace...she hugged him tightly... Her tears wetting his vest...

Maan : geet am fine

And sorry too

Maine pata nhi kaise

Wo sb kh diya

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Dev come inside without knock ... Both parted due to sudden entry...

Geet dev ko maaf kr chuki hai

.

Kaise naraaz rhti wo apne phle pyaar se

Aur kb tak

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Aur dev uske bache ka pita bhi toh tha

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Maan reaction changed to see dev here... But no one noticed this...

Dev : sorry bro

Sorry geet

Mujhe pata nhi tha geet tum yaha ho bro ke sath

.

Mein jaata hu

Geet : dev

Kuch kaam tha

Dev : wo bs medicine deni thi

Geet : tum mujhe dedo

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Geet and dev hand touched in this process, maan noticing every bit very carefully...

Dev : geet bro ke sath - sath

Tum apna bhi dhyan rakhna

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Geet : hmm

Both passes smile to each other...

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note : -

1) ankeeta and pam this is for you

2) see below posts carefully