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Dear, I thought by tuesday I would finish my update but you see my manager is going for vacation, I didn't know that so I have to finish my incomplete work asap..I have already wrote half of the update, only half is left so maybe within this week I may update :)


its ok dear no worries...😊
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Chapter 15

"What are you doing?" Vikram asked as he sat on the chair.

"Looking for clue." Karan replied with his eyes fixed on the paper he was holding.

"On which case?"

"Niranjan case." He said and pulled another paper from scattered papers on his desk.

"Did you find any?"

Karan looked up and replied annoyingly "I will dance in joy if I found even a single clue."

Vikram chuckled and said "You will never find the clue you are looking for in these reports, you know how manipulative they can be."

He sighed and stretched his body, he yawned "His slate is clean, not a single spot at all."

"And you believe that?" Vikram asked with a raised brow.

"Of course not! Besides, I've read his son's case, I think it may give some leads."

"Good luck! Hey, wanna join us today?"

"Where?"

"We're out for club."

"Nah, I---"

"Oh come on! It's always work in your mind, I will not hear anything. You are gonna come today."

"Ok, fine."

"See you later!" Vikram said grin and vanished within seconds.

***

"Mission sucessful." Vikram said on the phone.

"You guys are going to be late not early like what happened last time." Astha said.

Vikram rolled his eyes and replied "I know and I am sorry for what happened last time, just how many times am I gonna apologize?"

Astha grinned and purred "Until I get satisfied babybear!"

"Don't you call me that, I'm not kid anymore!"

"For me, you're always be my little kid who used to cuddle me while sleeping, who always had running nose---"

"You're embarrasing me!" Vikram said with a blush.

"Am I?" Astha asked innocently then laughed.

"Whatever." Vikram muttered grudgingly.

"Are you nervous?" Vikram asked suddenly.

He heard her sigh then her reply "I'm not nervous just scared to lose my control. It had been years since I went to that house, where the whole thing started, I'm afraid I don't get another PSTD attack."

"Don't worry you're stronger than you think."

She snorted "I highly disagree with you. You didn't saw me the last time I got attack with only Shlok to comfort me."

"Really! What was his reaction?"

"I didn't stay much longer to see his reaction, and you wouldn't believe what I did to him after he comforted him?"

"You kissed him?"

"Vicky!" Astha shrieked with a blush.

"I punched him actually."

"That was really mean thing to do."

"Cannot disagree with you. I get very guilty whenever I see his bruised jaw."

"You apologized?"

"I can't, I have to keep distance---"

"Why are you punishing yourself?" Vikram asked.

"I am not punishing myself, i'm trying to save myself from punishment."

"What does that mean?"

"I don't deserve the happiness when I am the one who will take his happiness, his father."

"In this thing you're right but what if his happiness is you? What if he don't want his father?"

"It is impossible---"

"What if it did happen?"

"Then I'll gladly be his!" Astha replied in irritation.

Vikram chuckled and replied "I'm sure he will choose you over his father, you are too much of temption to just let go. I would've proposed you for myself but you see I can't propose you."

"You better not or I'm gonna kick your ass, babybear."

"I love you so much---"

"You have girlfriend! And you never told me!" She heard another voice from the phone, the one she completely recognize.

Vikram went still as soon as he heard Karan's voice from his behind, he turned towards him.

"One day I'm gonna wring your neck." He muttered to her but with his eyes fixed on Karan.

She laughed and replied "First save your ass, babybear. Bbyee!" then hung up.

"It's not what you're thinking, she is not my girlfriend just a very great friend of mine."

"Who eventually will be your girl."

"No! She already have someone else in her life and she is like a sister to me."

"You never told me about her."

"One day you will meet her but for now let's resume to what we were doing."

"Why not ask her to come in club today?"

"Seriously Karan! will you quit being matchmaker! she is really like my sister!"

Karan laughed and said "Start dating man so I will quit being matchmaker."

"First get yourself a date, with your nose always in the files you never got a decent girl who could stick with you forever!"

"Excuse me, they leave me for a simple reason I don't give them time. How will I give them time when I myself don't get time for myself?"

"How will you get time for yourself when you're so busy thinking about Blackhawk?" Vikram asked with a grin.

"Just because I'm curious for that guy, it doesn't mean I always think about him."

"Oh really?" He asked with a raised brow.

"Whatever." Karan said and went out.

"Thank God, he didn't hear everything." Vikram said to himself.

***

"Good evening, Mr. Prabhakar Joshi. It is a great pleasure that you visited my poor house." Niranjan said as he welcomed the Joshi family.

If it wasn't for my daughters, I wouldn't have stepped in this house!

"The pleasure is mine, Mr. Niranjan Agnihotri." Prabhakar replied with a fake smile.

"Let me introduce to my family. This is my daughter Aditi, my son Ankush and my grandson Avi."

Niranjan frowned, from what he had heard, he only have one daughter named Aditi Joshi, he did planned of asking Aditi's hand for his son Shlok during this meeting, to expand his wealth was his main reason but unfortunately his son is no more to marry.

"I thought you had only one daughter?" Niranjan asked.

"Biologically I have only one Aditi, Ankush and my other daughter who gave me this precious grandson is both adopted, I never disclosed this news in media that's why only few people know about this."

"Where are she and her husband?"

"She is out of town and for her husband, he is no more in this world."

"Oh, I'm sorry to hear that."

"I'm sorry to hear about your son too."

A wave of sadness washed over him, he never realized the importance of his son Shlok, he kept him away thinking that it was best for him. But after he was gone, he realized he missed a lot during those past years, he never got to know his son completely, he is a complete failure as a father. He remember those days when his son begged to stay at home, begged for his time but he never gave him anything, he may have provided him everything but never gave anything, which is what he regret the most.

Niranjan gave a faint smile and said "I hope his soul rest in peace."

His soul will definitely be in peace, now that he is with us, Ankush said in his mind.

"Let's proceed to dinner." Niranjan said as he led the way.

***

"I knew you would come here." Ankush heard Astha say from his behind.

Ankush silently slipped away from the dining hall, without getting any attention to visit his favorite room, Shlok's room, where he spent the happiest moments of his childhood life. Even though he knew it was a risk, he couldn't resist coming in the room, he wanted to see it at least once. He entered the room, didn't flip on the lights to avoid getting caught, it wasn't even necessary with the moonlight brightening the room and closed the door.

He grinned and glanced at the dark figure sitting on the bed, the one he completely recognized.

"I knew you would too." He said.

Astha sighed and replied "Couldn't control myself."

"Me too. I'm glad that bas***d kept this room as it was."

"It's still the same. The only paradise in this hell house."

"Even for brief time, I spent the best moments of my life in this room." Ankush said while looking around.

"Me too."

"He still kept my sketch!" Ankush said aloud.

"What sketch?"

Ankush approached the laminated paper attached on the wall, it was a child made sketch of a young boy.

"Master Shlok! Master Shlok!" Sid excitedly shouted as he came running into his room.

"What happened buddy?" Shlok asked as he sat up from his lying position.

Sid hesitantly grinned and spoke "You're going nah, my father said if someone goes away give him something so I made something for you."

"That's so sweet of you. Let me see then, what my buddy made for me?" Shlok said.

Sid pulled out a neatly folded paper from his pocket and forwarded it to Shlok with hesitant smile.

Shlok opened the paper and was surprised to see a sketch, he concluded it is a sketch of him, although it looked nothing like him. But his sweet gesture touched his heart.

"Thank you buddy, I love it! This is the best gift I ever got."

"You love it? I will tell Astha, she said it is not nice and you won't love it but I'm gonna say you love it! Thank you buddy!" Sid said and ran from the room.

"The one you said wasn't nice."

"It really isn't nice." She said while looking at the sketch.

He chuckled and said "You're right but Shlok loved it and I can't believe he laminated it and hanged it on the wall."

"That's who Shlok is. He is the sweetest person in the world."

"And you always fight with him."

"As if I like fighting with him, I have no choice."

"You have but your stubborness never let you chose the right choice."

"I don't wanna talk about this."

"I don't wanna talk about this." Ankush imitated while she gasped at his imitation.

"You never wanna talk about it! I'm going!" He said and left the room silently.

"Yeah go!" She pouted.

***

"I'm very glad you chose us, Uncle Niranjan." Ankush said as he pulled out a bundle of papers from the briefcase.

Niranjan smiled and replied "I always wanted to be part of Joshi group of industries."

"These are the contracts you have to sign then you'll be part of Joshi family." Ankush forwarded the contracts to him.

Niranjan took the paper and started to read, suddenly a phone ring interrupted him.

Prabhakar pulled out his phone and answered the call.

"Hello?"

Niranjan looked up then looked back on the file and resumed his work.

"Yes..Oh! Is it important?..But weren't they coming next week?..No it's just..ok we'll be there tomorrow..make sure everything is ready.." he hanged up.

"What happened?" Niranjan asked.

"It is a new project and the company we are dealing with is based in London, I thought they were coming next week but now they changed their mind, they are asking us to go to London, So we have to leave tomorrow."

"That is a great news but you're not happy."

"I am happy but I have told my lawyer that I will give this contracts before he leave for his vacation, you can't read those bundle now and sign it unless you sign them now and read them when we'll be back from London."

"It is fine with me." Niranjan said.

"Are you sure you want to sign these contracts without reading them?"

Niranjan chuckled and said "The foundation of relationship is trust and I do trust you. I will read them once you'll be back from London."

"Thank you Mr. Niranjan, I appreciate your gesture."

Niranjan smiled and signed the contracts.

"Welcome to Joshi Family, Mr. Agnihotri!" Aditi said with a grin.

***

Arjun stepped softly on the stairs leading to the servants quarter, followed by Abhay and Ansh who were bringing a big suitcase along, Astha, Swati and Jyoti.

"You sure you know the way?" Ansh asked as he adjusted the heavy suitcase on his hands.

"I know every corner of this house, I used to roam around without being noticed when my mother was busy cooking in the kitchen." Arjun replied.

"Nosy jerk!" Abhay mumbled.

Arjun looked back and spoke with a glare "You wanna fight, I think?"

"Will you guys stop! Do you guys have any idea how dangerous this work is?" Ansh scolded.

"Then keep his shitty mouth shut."

"Why don't you do your bloody work and ignore me?"

"Who can ignore a giant like you?" Arjun said sarcastically.

"You---"

"Both of you will get a piece of me if this thing get failed." Astha said in a chilled tone.

Both Arjun and Abhay clamped their mouth shut while Ansh chuckled at them.

"That includes you too, Ansh."

Ansh abruptly fell silent while the others hid their grin.

"Here we are." Arjun said.

They entered the room and placed the heavy suitcase on the bed.

"I'm leaving you guys. Don't get caught, got it?" Astha said and opened one of the door.

"Yes, boss! Take care!"

She grinned and dispersed in.

"Where is she going?" Jyoti asked curiously.

"Going to that bas***d's room. It is the only room connected to that bas***d's room because he keeps his mistresses here and sometimes the girls brought by Sushant for his body pleasure." Arjun said disgustingly.

"Arjun! Stop!" Ansh gritted out softly.

Arjun looked at Ansh with confusion but when he saw his eyes fixed somewhere else, he knew the reason.

All eyes turned towards Swati, whose gaze was fixed on the bed, they noticed she was neither inside nor outside the room, she was like a statue.

Swati froze as soon as she put one step on the room, all those horrible memories washed over her like an big ocean wave. She couldn't get herself to take another step, she felt her knees weak, she felt her feet glued on the stoned floor.

"I..don't want..in here.." She whispered.

Abhay cradled Swati in his arms, she buried her head in his chest, that was when the shaking started and tears sprawled from her eyes.

"I did told you to not come in here, you don't listen to your brother." Abhay gritted out as he caressed her head.

"I thought..I could..I'm sorry..I don't think..I'm strong..enough..like Astha.." She said softly.

"Now don't cry, princess. Look at me" She looked up from her teary eyes "You are strong or you wouldn't have been brave enough to escape that night."

"I wasn't brave..I let Astha..and her..family suffer..everything..started in..this very room..because..of me.."

"Don't blame yourself, it's not your fault and you know how Astha feels about that." he cupped her cheeks "Besides, if you feel guilty then become strong for Astha and her family, both of us owe them our life."

"You're right." Swati said as she wiped her tears "I should become strong not weak because if I became weak, I won't be able to protect them like they protected me."

"That's my girl!"

"Don't worry, this prince of yours will always protect his princess." Arjun said with a silly cheesy grin.

"She ain't a princess of bloody foolish loverboy! I'm gonna smash your face if you came closer to three of my girls! Stay away from Astha, Aditi and Swati!"

"And who says I'm gonna follow---"

"You---"

"Time out, guys! Let's resume what we're doing!" Jyoti said aloud.

"I would've torn you into pieces if Jyoti hadn't asked me to stop." Arjun said.

"Who's stop---"

"I don't think Astha would like to see this mission failed." Swati added.

"I don't want my ears chewed out, especially not by her." Ansh said.

"You think the maid won't be early?" Abhay asked, changing the subject.

"I know the rules in this house, as long as the work isn't done no one is to enter his room. By the time, she'll finish talking to that bas***d, the maid will be screaming out of her wits." Arjun said.

"So let the show begin."

***

"I heard you asked help from police, Mr. Niranjan Agnihotri?"

Niranjan froze in his tracks as soon as he heard that deep rumble voice, completely identical with the man who haunts him day and night. After the Joshi family left, he stayed longer nursing his grief over the loss of his two precious sons. Tiredly, he went straight to his room, without bothering to lit the lights, he took steps towards his bed and now he was standing in the middle of the room.

He tried to locate his enemy in the darkness of the room but much to his luck, he could form only a dark silhouette of him. He stepped backward with intent to turn on the light but he must have read his mind that's why he spoke.

"Don't even think to turn on the lights or this dagger will pass through your hand, you know how good I am at knives, right?"

"How did you get in?" Niranjan asked.

"Is there no hi or hello? That is too rude of you, well, what can I expect from you?" He heard him mock.

"What the hell are you doing here?" Niranjan asked with a glint of anger in his voice.

"I came here to see how you're doing." He said amusedly.

"How do you think I would be after taking away my both sons!"

He heard him laugh then his mocking reply "Your sons? Come on Mr. Niranjan Agnihotri, we both know you never prioritized your so called sons, all you care about is yourself. Those poor boys could be thanking me now for taking them away from you, they deserve better than you, especially Shlok. I pity him for having a father like you, who never cared about him, who always kept him away alone with no family. His mother was dead and his father was like dead, he spent his whole life like an orphan. But why do you care, all you care about is your dirty work!"

A tear gushed through Niranjan's eye, the guilt of ignoring his only son for whole life was killing him, if only he realized it sooner.

"Who are you?" He asked now.

"Your destructor. That is enough for you to know."

"What have I done to you?"

After a momentary silence, he heard his bitted filled voice.

"What have you not done to make my life hell?" he sighed and added "Let's save this confrontation for future, I might kill you this very moment if I lose my temper."

"You haven't answered my question."

"Yes, I asked help from police, a better one, he will definitely catch you."

He heard him burst into laughter and reply "We'll see about that. But you know Mr. Niranjan Agnihotri you made my work easy by involving police in this. See ya!"

Niranjan frowned and asked "How?"

"That is for you to see."

He turned and approached the wide open window, the silver moonlight brighten his form, he wore black clothes, black knee length shoes and black jacket with hood covering his head, showing everything yet nothing.

"By the way, I have a gift for you. I bet you'll love it." He heard him say and jump from the window.

Before he could ask what or make any move or go towards the window, he heard non stop hysterical loud screams of a woman.

Sorry for late update guys, I was busy 😃
Enjoy the update and new revelations😉😆
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superb update😃😃
loved it very much..😳😳
very well written...👏👏

nice start...
vikram convincing karan to get refreshed & cum to a club y?? r they going to get ny type of clue there.. or is it a distraction for karan to not turn up early at the blackhawk's incident place...

liked vikram & astha's convo... very well written...👏👏
so vikram is quiet younger then astha.. astha loves vikram likes she loves her son... vikram admires astha so much😳😳.. liked their bonding... but astha called vikram baby bear... isnt that name for shlok.. i mean v forumwasis have kept this name for shlok na... 😉 but surely baby bear seems so cute...😳😳
vikram talking abt astha to karan... gud karan dint hear their full convo... he thinks astha is viks gf... but he cleared that astha is his elder sister & more like a guide to him... karan wishes to meet astha... fellow doesnt know he already met her...😆😆

liked NA & PJ meeting.. d way PJ & his family trapped NA... wow.. NA still dreaming abt d money... loved hw PJ introduced Ankush & Avi to NA... d way they acted for NA to sign d papers without reading them was just fab... surely that papers contained NA's confession or may b his property ... but was d actual purpose of this meeting to get his sign or d thing which blackhawk gang planned in that room... but d plan was superb...👏👏

arjun-abhay fight was funny...😆😆
but wat was that swati said... she was d reason behind astha got into this... bcoz of her she suffered...means to save swati from NA/Sushant astha got into this & became d target... so she decides to b strong for astha... & support her...so abhay is swati's brother & he is grateful to astha... but hw did swati became their target...?? Hw was she saved...?😕 poor girl was reminded of her past there 😭😭
arjun said he knew all d rules of this house.. hw?? it seemed his mom worked there... ?? was she also d target?? ohh god u solve sum mysteries in such a way that they create another mystery...😕
wen wil all secrets b out...

astha-ankush went to shlok's room to refresh their memories... as they remembered their childhood & shlok's room was a proof of their good time with shlok...😳😳

Astha meets NA.. actually scares him😆😆 Nirubaba got scared... couldnt do anything.. & astha warned him of upcuming danger but it was too late ...😆😆

waiting 4 next exciting & rocking update eagerly.... & for more secrets to b out.. & more mysteries said...😉😆
continue soon... plzzz
thnks 4 d pm..
sorry for late comment...

Edited by coolhi1988 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Ramit😃

Brilliant Update👏

Very well written buds👏...loved each and every bit of it dear😃

Nothing Much to Say...Just wow😃

You truly Deserves this👏👏👏

Sorry for the late response...was busy with some other work😭

Hope you understand it😉

Thanks for the PM dear😊
Edited by VijjuShrenu_MB - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update
I wonder what the person left behind for Niranjan
Hopefully aastha will belive in shloks love one day
Continue soon
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Waiting next part ⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Chapter 15:
Nice update dear...

Loved the convo between karan and vikram...

why is vikram helping astha...

as per their plan they reached niranjan's place..

will NA truth will be out soon in public...

will shlok able to accept the reality...

thanks for the super duper update dear..

waiting for the next update...

sorry for the late response...
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Thank you dear 😃
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Thank you dear 😃

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