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Deeksha Rao

@paridhiloveu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

replying on temptation

are plej Payal leave ur angry and please don't stop ur stories😭

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Neetu

@NSKay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

replying on temptation

ah i understand your point di...

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: Monucute

ah i understand your point di...

yeah..anywayz leave😳

give me a long chapter of revenge as u promised earlier😉

otherwise i am not going to give u my comment😡

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Neetu

@NSKay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu
are plej Payal leave ur angry and please don't stop ur stories😭

yep di deekshu is saying ri8

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Neetu

@NSKay

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+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

yeah..anywayz leave😳
give me a long chapter of revenge as u promised earlier😉
otherwise i am not going to give u my comment😡

didu plz naa no gussa... I think my update is long enough...😉

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: Monucute

didu plz naa no gussa... I think my update is long enough...😉

ohk..then it's fine😉

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Neetu

@NSKay

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+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#267

...Chapter - 36...

Next moment he
was standing
behind her... "jo" he called her...
Jodha immediately wiped her tears for the purpose to hide her pain hearing a familiar voice... And turned to look at the source of the voice... Only to find a suspicious arth, "uh...arth" she looked confused... Arth came and took a seat beside her, wiped her tears which didn't go well with jodha, so she shifted back... Arth didn't liked her uneasiness so he shifted more towards her... She shifted more but before she can shift furthur he grabbed her waist and pulled her towards him... Jodha looked baffled by his act... She tried to push him but he held her more tightly... This triggered jodha's anger , "what the hell do you think you are doing?" she asked angrily... Arth just smirked and signalled her through his eyes to look back... She looked back and indeed if she just shift slightly back , she would have fallen down the bench... She looked at arth and uttered embarrassingly "sorry and thanks"... Arth left her "so..?" jodha got confused "so..." she initiated to know the reason of his unexpected entry at the most unexpected time... Arth didn't wanted to roll on words, so he questioned straightly "what happen?" jodha didn't wanted to reveal her personal matters so she replied in nod conveying that nothing happened and literally ran away to avoid any furthur conversation...

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Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago

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Neetu

@NSKay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Jodha reached near the house and immediately turn the knob to open it but it is not opening means the door was locked from inside... "what the hell? He didn't noticed my absence?" her face fell by this thought ... So with a heavy heart she rung the door bell...
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His eyelids felt heavy due to effect of medicines... But then mere thought of the person on door being jodha gave him strength... And he immediately reached near the door and opened it , only to find a sad jodha standing... But his eyes lit up seeing her perfectly fit and fine standing infront of him... And the next moment jodha find herself in his tight embrace, she felt her fragile body got crushed in his iron arms... "you are safe, you are safe..." he kept blabbering it again and again to himself rather than her... She was shocked with his care, finally after a quick recovery... She started to rub his back whereas jalal started to sob bitterly... He was so scared to lose her... After a long time he had shared his pain with someone... He have someone to call as his, and she is his only his...
Jodha's POV
I never know he would react like this... M really becoming his obsession now... His habit ... He has started depending on me... i doesn't know it is right or wrong... But whatever it is m contented...
End of POV
jodha tried to shush him "bs jalal hush...shhh... Chup..." jalal came to his senses... Now gloom got changed with anger... And he parted away from her... Jodha got scared the devil in him was awake now...

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Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#269

Jalal needs a psychiatrist very badly.

Feeling very bad for Jodha😭

Nice update Neetu😊

Update soon.

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harsh

@sirat.kaur

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#270

amazing ch ...ja is so confusing. one moment he cares for her n next moment he hurts her by his anger n talks...update soon.I can't wait to read next ch.waiting...

Edited by sirat15 - 10 years ago