arhi- Teenager Love and Complications-update5 pg 16

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Fantastic update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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KeerthiRajkumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

nice update
boys behave like a real jerk sometimes

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

I hoped Aman has better character, but looks like he is a big jerk in this story. Are I are trying to work on the attraction they are feeling for each other.

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moni27.love

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: anjs
a different take with teen Arnav n Khushi...its heartening to see them such good friends...to the extent that Khushi wanted Arnav to be her first kiss...
well, i must confess, that i started first with chapter 5th, and later read the chapters...hence when i ended up reading chapter 5th, i thought, that is strange...a Khushi who has already lost her virginity to her bf n an Arnav who is waiting for the right girl, probably Khushi...and still doesnt mind other guys discussing her virginity loss so easily...

he reason for me to think so...is this below sentence ,

"She's not as bad as Sheetal, though." Arnav added. "Khushi said she's been fooling around with a lot of guys lately."
"Can you blame her though?" another boy asked. "She slept with her boyfriend and he dumped her the next time he saw her."

for some reason, my mind deduced it wrongly, thinking that they guys are discussing Khushi and not sheetal...hehehe

then i started reading all the chapter from 1 to 4 and realized Khushi hasnt even had a bf yet, so i thought did she lie to fit-in...then i realized that she herself requested for a kiss from Arnav, n everyone knows bt her non-existent love life...so read chapter 5th again n then realized that its sheetal who got dumped by her bf...hehehehe

anyways, Ratna seems like those socialite brats who think money is everything...glad that ARnav doesnt agree with her...but this pressure on him to loose his virginity, will force him to do something hurtful...khushi already loves him, just hasnt realized it...though i feel Arnav will do it with Sheetal, so that he gets the experience n Doesnt care whether sheetal sticks around or no...and this deed will hurt Khushi n push her away from him...hope it doesnt happen though...its a novel thing to see Arnav n Khushi who are waiting for each other...otherwise every other story, Arnav already has a long list of bed-mates...so hoping here it doesnt happen that way...and khushi does become his first, just the way she was his first kiss

hi...first of all thanks for this comment. when i read starting 2-3 line i thought i made some mistakes when i were witing..hahaha..

ya khushi and arnav are friends here.

both have crush on each other, arnav understand this feeling but khushi not.

they are teenagers so obviously their talks will be around opposite gender, sex and all. Arnav also want these but with Khushi only. Khushi is bold, intelligent but naive also. she like arnav but doesn't understand it like attraction, love...what she want from arnav truely, but they will realize soon.

Aman is not a bad character here...

Edited by moni27.love - 10 years ago