OS : Karwa Chauth (A Must Read ;) )

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was beautiful moonlit night. The house was decorated with candles and red silk curtains. Arjun was waiting in the balcony looking at the lovely moon that shone outside thinking of his love. He never knew he would fall in love with his love 😳 He was a happy man now. He sensed his love's presence. He could always feel it. He turned to watch his love descending down the stairs, head covered in red ghoonghat with a tray 😳 Arjun couldn't see the face and its annoyed him. He wanted to see his love's face all the time. His love came towards him and stood opposite him, head bent down. Arjun smiled and slowly removed the ghoonghat off his love's face..
Arjun : Tumhara chaand tho mein hoon.. Yahaa dekho Jaanemaan..

A face slightly lifts itself up to see Arjun's face.. Its Neil 😛 He shyly lifts his face to look at Arjun 😳 Background Music plays..

O chand ko dekhu hath mai jodu karvachauth ka vrat me todu Tere hath se pikar panee, devdas se ban jau raja

Neil shakes Arjun's hand off of his face and takes the sieve from the thali. He looks at the full-moon and then at Arjun with the same sieve with a smile. Arjun smiled lovingly at his cute dimples 😳 Neil points his eyes towards the thali. Arjun takes the pot of water and makes Neil drink it lovingly. He wipes the water dripping form his chin with utmost love and care. Neil keeps the pot back on the thali and looks at Arjun.. Arjun points his eyes towards the tahli and then at himself. Neil looks at him in confusioon..

Arjun : Meine bhi vrath rakah hai tere liye Neilu 😳
Neil : Awww.. Mera Arju !! ❤️

He takes the pot and positions it near Arjun's mouth. Arjun drinks from it lovingly all the while staring at his love.. BG plays..

Poore Chand ki ye aadhi raat hai
Poore Chand ki ye aadhi raat hai
Tere chehre pe aake ruk jaati hai
Teri chehre pe aake ruk jaati hai

Arjun and Neil both take the sweet in their hands and feed it to each other. Arjun winks at him and Neil bites his finger in return. Arjun lovingly glares at Neil for biting his finger while Neil smiles at him with those cute dimples. Arjun decided that he had never seen cuter dimples before.. Neil bends down to touch Arjun;s feet and take aashirwaad but Arjun stops him and lifts him up by the shoulders..

Arjun : Neilu.. Ye tum kya kar rahe ho ??
Neil : Jab fast rakhte hai tho aashirwaad lena padta hai na Arju ??
Arjun : Neilu. Tumhaare jagah yaha hai (points towards the heart)..

He brings Neil towards his heart in a hug. Neil wraps his arm around Arjun lovingly and enjoys the comfort. Arjun enjoyes the presence of his love with him. They stayed like this for what seemed forever enjoying each other's warmth 😳

Arjun : Aaj hum apne pyaar ko ek naam denge..
Neil : Kya naam ?
Arjun : ArEil 😳
Neil : Mermaid Princess humaari love story mein kya kar rahi hai ??? Arju, u have been spoiling urself by watching those mermainds in bikinis, haven't u ??
Arjun (hits Neil gently on the head) : Are buddu Neilu. Hum dono ka naam hai ArEil..
Neil : Vo kaise ?? 😕
Arjun : Mere naam Arjun se AR aur tumara naam Neil se EIL.. Dono milaake ArEil ho gaya..
Neil : Oh how sweet Arju.. I love that name 😳..

They broke their hug and turned towards the door to see Nandini standing them watching them in shock 😆

Nandini : Maa Da Ladla Bigad Gaya 🤢(and then faints to the ground with a comic pop 😆)

THE END 😛

Please leave in ur lovely feedback for this OS 😳

P.S. Wht did u think ?? #SamArj ya Arjun-Radhika pe likhungi socha ?? 😛 ArEil are too hot to handle ☺️



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rekha.366 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahaha Omg I can't stop laughing Ariel is too hot handle arju and neilu is perfect for each other. Lovely os Deepu. I think this os give more fun than show. Please keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣🤣Ma ka ladla ...god 🤣ArEil rock nanu shock😳
...nelu & arju so cute kept karwa chauth...🤣
Awoseme yar...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I added something else after the hug and before Nandu's entry..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am laughing like mad what if i die laughing goddds its so awesome deepu Arjun also kept d fast how sweet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤪 i had so much fun reading this I think I am almost gonna die laughing 🤣 🤣
Edited by sruthi.r - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣🤣
Ariel..mermaid princess u r spoiling yourself by watching them in bikinis ...buddhu neil its your love name now..
humara areil..🤣 ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You... You... You...
I didn't expect that. Yes it's a must read. I completely agree with it.

I'm still 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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frstly i thnk.its ardhika den samatj bt wat a twist.too hot to handle.hope v c their bromance in serial too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣🤣 can't stop laughing. It was awesome. 😆👏👏

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