Kumkum bhagya imaginary story

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intro of main characters:
Abhishek Mehra(also known abhi)-A very rich,educated,handsome,strong,muscular,arrogant and self made man from whom all the country was afraid and he ruled the country.He was a dangerous person(don/gunda type).Many girls used to be attaracted to him bcz of his power,money and bcz he was so handsome but he never took interest in girls. He was always serious and angry when something wrong happened.He never had any family as his parents died in his childhood!
Pragya Aurora(doesnot wear glasses)-A educated very sweet bubbly and most beautiful girl. Although she was poor but was happy from what she had.She had falken in love with her friend Vedan.
Dhruv Aurora-Father of Pragya Aurora and a servant at Abhishek Mehras mansion (who had loads of cars,mansions,servants etc.)He was scared if his Sir and was a real coward(everyone was scared from abhishek)
Tanu lakhna-A poor girl like pragya.She was a fake friend of pragya and was jealous from pragyas lovely voice.
Vedan-Pragyas friend.Both of them like each other at the beginning

Chapter 1:

Abhi slammed the door before his servants could clise them for him.He was almost the worlds richest person!50 bodyguards and 80 servants followed him till he reached his room in the huge mansion. Although he had just earned 500 crore(which he earned daily
almost)his mood was off bcz one of the body guard reached late to pick him up(only ten mins late)
Dhruv the servant looked really sad as he saw his sir was pissed off as he had toask fir advance so he can pay his rent of his small home.Already his mood was so bad!Dhruv looked as a servant went inside to give him his juice. He took a sip and threw the glass on the floor.
Abhi(A):U idiot what type of juice did u bring!Take this away!!
Ser:Sir jee wohh...
^Abhi took his gun out which he always kept with himself and pointed to all the servants including the one who brought the juice.
Instantly, everyone went out^
stupids'abhi murmured
Dhruv standing out was really scared but mustered up his courage abd talked to him about all!
A:ohhh so u want advance hah?!?
Staring at abhis sneaky look dhruv got more scared
D:jee wohh
A:ok ok ok shut up now!Look come tomorrow work hard and i will see what can u do but trust me only 1% chance for ur advance
Abhi laughed and demanded him to get lost!
Dhruv went out sadly!

Dhruv went back home and saw pragya talking to someone.Pragya switched off the phone when she saw her dad.
P:hello dad! How was the day and the..ummm..the
D:the advance?!?
P:yess
And then dhruv told everything.Pragya didnt like abhi the way he ruled the country and his anger show off etc but her dad respected and was scared of him alot and never let her say anything against him.
P:tomorrow i will go with u and see what he does for us after all u r so loyal to him
After a long arguement dhruv agreed to take her only bcz she will help him work(dhruv).
NEXT DAY:
Abhi wanted to today enjoy his day and relax today at home.He only saw Dhruv and was prepared for a reason not to give advance as he liked teasing ppl.Pragya saw the huge palace type mansion and was amazed..he had so many like these..she thought.She never really had met him just did see him on tv or news papers. Her father gave her 10mins to see the mansion(too less to see the while mansion😳)
Pragya loved the garden which was sooo huge.She loved singing while seeing flowerz.She started singing beautifully while abhi heard the lovely way he came to the balcony and saw het.She was beautiful! He was still for 10mins to see her beauty and voice. He knew that it was the first sight of love.
A:Who is she?
Abhi asked a servant still facing pragya.
The servant told that she was here to help dhruv.She was her daughter and was here to work. Abhi immediately called dhruv andsaid
A:when she has came then she will work and she will clean my room!
D:sir but ur room is full of precious things and pragya is not ut trustworthy.
A:DO AS I SAY!!
D:ok then i will be with her so that..
A:No ! She will work alone in the room i will be there to tell her..now leave
*If u like it then plz comment to tell me to continue..ot is my very first fanfiction and i wrote in a hurry so dont mind plz:-))*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start ,continue soon .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please do continue.. its great.
Loved the concept. Its different. Goodjob😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
THANX ..hoping to continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2-
Dhruv told pragya what abhi had said.
P:Hate hi
Pragya murmured .
D:Shhh!!!
Pragya angrily went inside his room.
There abhi was still lost in her thoughts. Her beauty,voice!He saw a girl coming in and saw her back.Pragya thought nobody was in the room.
A:Who r u?!Get out..Dont u know how to knock!
Pragya shivered as she was scared of the thunderous voice.She slowly faced him and was shocked that he was in the room.Abhi and pragya had an eyelock.-well abhi did-
He again got lost in her thoughts...but shaked his head and tried to be serious so she doesnt understand that he is melting from inside.
A:ohhh..its u!
Abhi tried to be kind.
P:i am really sorry look it was a mis understanding plzz u...
A:its ok..calm down.
Abhi patted her on her shoulders which made her move behind as nobidy touched her.
Pragya started cleaning the room as abhi watched her smiling sneakily. He slowly went and locked the door which made pragya increase her speed.
A: look i think u r tired..someone else will do it u come sit here.come..
This made pragya think why did he call me then..she didnt reply and continued working which angered abhi and he said a little in anger.
A:Come i said !!!
Pragya immediately stopped working and sat.
Abhi started the conversation.It was a small one but all she said was to give advance!
*If u like it then plz comment so i can continue*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
please continue, your story is wonderful and Abhi falling for Pragya is so dreamy
I love Pragya's feisty attitude and Abhi is so hard on the outside yet tender and soft on the inside.👏

Can't wait to see how the GREAT Pragya changes him😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Chapter 3:-
Abhi really didnt care or was concerned how her dad survived or wished to get advance(how rude seriously😕) but when he got to know pragya wanted advance his heart melted.^why i am feeling like this!!^ he thought to himself. He was a rude person who liked seeing ppl in pain then why was he feeling like this...is ^Am i fallen in love with...!!?!
Abhi was just thinking when there was a knock at the door.Dhruv came saying that he had to go now and that he knew the answer when abhi stopped him and said..
A:wait...umm..i can help u ..bcz u r my loyal servant
(Obviously he couldnt say he was helping for pragya)
Abhi had made a solution that he will give them a bigger house actually a huge servant quater for them and he would double his salary+give advance even if he needsor not with good food and all other supplies only when her daughter will work too
D:Sir jee i am really thankful ofc she will
work too..thbx for...
A:ok ok come sharp at ten pm tomorrow with pragya..She is really careless and i bet she wont get ready and come!Everyone here is always ready

clever abhi told pragya to dress indirectly😆lol

D:ok sir

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Pragya had already reached home and hated abhis attitude what does he think he is?
She thought!

After her dad came he explained her everything which made pragya even angry but she agreed eventually!

And abhi was really happy for tomorrow😃
And uf u guyz r happy for an update then do comment so i could write the update soon😊
Plz dont mind any typing errors as i dont really read it again and i type fast


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update .loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loving that you are updating so fast. Thank u
Going great so far👍🏼



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Posted: 10 years ago
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and one more thing..pls do make abhi suffer.. don't let him get her too easily..I love the fact that in your story attraction started from abhi's side not pragya's unlike the show.

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