OS: learning to breathe chap2 updated

potterhead14 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
Helloo everyone my name is Ramisa.
i am new in this forum and i have brought a gift with me.
I hope you all will like this OS please do share your views.

Introduction


''arei yaar kaha hai vo...''
''ab taak tou ajana chahiye tha''
'haar rahe hain hum...

The engine broke.
Hands on steering wheel.
She turned and took her jersey from the backseat.
Took off her scarf and wore the jersey on top of her shirt.
Slowly she got off the car.
'Amaya'' read jersey no. 14.
Closed the door with her leg and started running.
Aali re, saali re
Kaali re, jagdali re, nakhrali re, bawali re, hatt
Aye hatt

Aali re, saali re
Milgi toh dilwali lekin muh khole toh gaali re, hatt
Aye hatt

She replaced one of her team mates.
'Yeh kya yeh ladki humarei saath khelegi??'' said the member of opponent team
'hai isei koi ladki nahi samajh tha'' giggled his teammate
'Tou kya samajh ta hai ladka??'' he giggled back.
The thunder strike.
Both the boys looked at the sky. Amaya's associate stood near them and said
'Nahi toofan''

Thodi si nasheeli, thodi zehreeli hai Yeh thodi si kameeni, thodi namkeeni

Dhinchak dhinchak...
Rapa rap, rak chik rak chik

Ding dang...

Badi hi-fi, jispe muh lagayi
Shaamat aayi, jaan lo
Hai kadva dhatoora
Rampuri chhura
Ghus gaya poora, jaan lo

Rahu ya phir ketu ki hai aadhi gharwali
Aali aali aali saali aali re aali
Temper hai bhayankar udhde cactus ki daali
Aali aali aali saali aali

Aali re, saali re

And yes indeed she stroked like the thunder. Wearing her jeans and bangles she started running like professional football players. Running pass all the boys and giving them a tough time, there she gave her first GOAL!! And all the boys screamed with joy!!

'Amaya darvaza khol..amaya'' Sriti kept on banging the door, no answer. How would she know the person was not on that side of the door but on this side and that too just behind her.
She slowly turned scratching her forehead.
PPOOOPPP
Busted Amaya's bubblegum.
'Good morning''
'Good morning??tujhe tou Goodnight kehna chahiye sari raat office mein thi?? Aur atei hi football khelne chali geyi??'' said sriti pointing at her jersey which she was still wearing. 'itni energy lati kaha se hai??''
'Boost is the secret of our energy'' and she opened the door of her room.
'Amaya bimar paar jayegi''
'kuch nahi hoga maa aap jao mere liye naasta banao please go go go go'' how could her mom say no to her innocent plea and she got away to make breakfast.
'kuchi der pehle tou ayi thi ab phir se jaa rahi hai'' said Srite as she walked down the front stairs with her daughter. Amaaya kept tucking the Tiffin box in her bag, she knew arguing was useless she could never make her understand that how much she loved her job and that it was not at all stressful for her.
'Aaj bhi todi der ho jayegi maa..bye'' and she got in the car.
'Tell me sth new'' smirked Sriti but as she started to go away she could hear the usual noise
'Auuur phir se gayi teri gari''
Amaya bumped her head on the steering wheel and shrugged looking at her mom.
'Aab jaa jaldi varna bus choth jayegi''


Amaya was sitting in the crowded bus when she saw an old man standing right behind her. She stood up.
'aap baath jayi yeh'' The man thanked her with a warm smile.
She was standing holding the rod, looking straight when she started to feel a bit uncomfortable. She looked back, the guy just behind her immediately looked away. Again she started to feel a hand around her waist, she abruptly looked back this time the guy didn't even bother to look away. He gave a wicked smile. She saw that there were two more guys like him at the back seat who were harassing a schoolgirl, she also saw that all the passengers were seeing the 'drama'' but were not doing anything about it not even making a single sound.She was about to go towards that schoolgirl when the hooligan grabbed her hand and brought her back to her previous position. 'kya plan hai aaj raat kaa'' he winked and was about to move his face towards her face when Amaya gave him a tight slap with her free hand and immediately took out the chilli powder from her bag and threw it on his face. All of it happened so fast the man didn't even get the time to stop her.He covered his eyes with hands and started screaming. Amaya clutched his curly hair with both her hands and hit him in the 'right'' place with her knee. He screamed even louder and fell on the ground. The boys at the back seat stood up and were all prepared to hit her when amaya took out her gun and pointed towards them.
'Ek kadam bhi age bara tou sari ki sari tum dono ke andaar bhaar dungi.''
She looked at the guy lying on the floor 'Saale S*** ki olad tujhe kya lakta hain ladkiya kamzor hai??'jaha maan kiya cher diya?? Jaha maan ki chu liya aur vo kuch nahi bole gi?? Kamzor hum nahi tujh jese K****** hai'' And she hit him again.
'Aur aab log'' she looked at the crowd and smirked 'Aab tou insei bhi gaye guzrei hai...ladkiyon ko cher rahe hain aur aab saaab sirf tamasha dekh rahe hai?? Har haafte main inn saalo ko dekhti huin ladkiyon ko cher ta hain kahi baar warning di kuch nahi hua ...maine phir bhi warning di aab logo ne kya kia??KUCH NAHI!! Agar aaj humari jaga aapki beti,biwi,bahu ya phir girlfriend hoti tab kya yehi kaar te?? Cherte yeh log hai, haath pe haath dhare aap log ttamasha dekhte hain aur phir seena chor k kehte hain gaalti ladki ki thi...''' Amaya shook her head in disgust
'Paata han aap kiliye kya acha hai?? Yeh...
She took off her silver bangles and threw it on them
'Beethe rahiye pehen kaar'
She looked down at the man who was still lying on the ground. ' Aur tum log...bohut shokh hai na ladki yo ko cherne ka?? Aab dekh main kya karti hoon'' She looked outside and gave a smile.
'Oh conductor gari rokh ne ko bol'' no one really had the guts to argue with her anymore.
She looked at the crowd again ' vo raha police station aab waha taak vi main enhe leke jayoon ya aap log AB thode insaan banenge??'' still no one moved from their chair.
Then the old man stood up and with his trembling legs came towards Amaya. 'Chalo main jata hoon''
Amaya gave a smile and then slowly some more people came forward and took the 3 boys outside the bus.
'Ek minute'' Amaya stopped the constable who was taking them to the jail after they registered the complain.
'Dekh aab tujhe main kaisei famous banata hoon'' and she took a picture of all the three boys 'Aur yeh lo khilone ki pistol jail ki andaar baath k khelna iss se'' she threw it towards them.
Jiski lugaai, banegi re bhai
Uski tabaahi, paper mein chhapegi hatt
She walked outside the police station wearing her shades. She opened her bag and took out her id and hung it on her neck. The Id said
Amaya Mathur
Senior Reporter
Edited by ramisaaAli - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

3

Views

1.4k

Users

3

Likes

10

Frequent Posters

DEEPZzzz thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Nice os will add it to the ff/os thread soon
beatsdongandy thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
nice and welcome to the forum 👏
potterhead14 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Chapter 2

Moonlight

The 'shehenai's music and the pleasing rituals of the wedding had spell bounded everyone so badly that no one noticed that something was wrong. That one of the girls amongst the dancers was not actually a dancer. Behind the long rajasthani 'ghunghat'' was a reporter carrying out her sting operation.
David, her cameraman and a very close friend didn't want her to go alone but she was adamant.
So there she was ready to unmask the actually face of the woman who acts like a saint but asks for dowry instead. The activist who claims to be every girl's well-wisher is actually the biggest evil herself.

Amaya was now hiding in the closet in the room where Vasundhara devi was compelling the bride's father to give her more money. It was all captured in her camera but the trouble occurred when unwillingly she made a noise and Vasundhara opened the door of the closet. She was caught!
Both the ladies kept on staring at each other but then amaya pushed her really hard and ran out of the window.
'Oi ladko jaldi jao uss ladki ke piche uske haath mein camera tha jao jaldi'
Amaya kept on running with 5-6 men behind her. She was not afraid of her life but she knew if she got caught the whole operation will fail. Soon she found an under construction building. She went inside followed by the goons. She soon reached the fifth floor in search for a hiding place and she found one. She hid behind the edge wall. It only had enough space for her to sit even if she straightened her leg it would be in open air.
'Dhond uss ladki ko aur agar milei tou baal khicke bahar le ana''
she held her breathe and closed her eyes. She could hear some footsteps getting closer. She stop breathing and held the camera tightly.
no no no...
Suddenly she could hear noises as if someone was fighting.
she slowly turned her head and looked through the hole in the wall.
infront of her eyes was a figure around 6 feet tall broad chest wearing a black shirt. Soon he punched one of the goons who came near him and one by one he beat all of them.
yeh superman kaun hai??
She was in a fix and had no idea what was going on. Amaya stood up and slowly came out from behind the wall. All the goons were lying on the floor. Amaya was facing his back.
'Excuse me??'' he turned half. She rubbed the sweat from her forehead and started heading towards him. She didn't know him but somewhere she knew he was safe
She was now standing just one hand away from him.
'kaun ho tum??''
The guy was about to turn but just then one of the goons rose from the back and was about hit him.
'tumhare piche...'' Screamed amaya.
and abruptly he just turned and held the rod. However the goon gave him such a hard push that he lost his balance and he fell backward and along with amaya he fell on the wooden pulley lift.
Amaya clutched his shirt tightly and buried her face against his chest. HE, grabbed her waist with one hand making sure she stays safe and with the other hand held the lift tightly. After rapidly falling from the fifth floor it came to a halt.
Everything was silent. Even the wind was careful about making noise the only sound present there was the heartbeats.
Her veil was flying in the wind and soon it flew away. Amaya slowly lifted her head.
The moonlight had taken them in its protection separating them from the surrounding darkness and with that little light she could see his face but it wasn't clear to her cause her head was all dizzy and then she went unconscious. But to Ridwan her face was clear. He had held her head with his other hand...carefully as if she was a new born baby and yes she was...she was that innocent. Her face had the same peace as that of a new born child. He kept staring . With the gentle care Ridwan slowly rested her head back against his chest.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".