Originally posted by: Fimiramak
π²OMG ... I have missed three (edited: four ) chapters... I will comment and read...
Chapter 23:
Brilliant chapter. Feeling sorry for Paro, missing her
Rudra. I found it sweet that she was unable to sleep without her MajorSaab. Sad
to see that she is so worried about Rudra.
Liked Mohini's new, softer side even though I was a
little surprised.
I liked Sumer in the original RR but for some reason I
like your version of him even more.
Thank you. It's mean to keep them apart, but his job does require it sometimes.
Mohini has warmed up big time π
He has the potential to be a great devar and a brother. Why not use him well π
Chapter 24:
Me glad: Rudra is back. π
And thank you for Mirza note; I had difficulties with
that character..π
Paro and kurta & Parud kitchen scene was lovely... but kadai oil was on fire... oops...π
And Shatabdi - I wonder how that story develops..
You ended like that, but no worries.. I can move on
right away to the next chapter.
I realised after two comments that people had forgotten the character I introduced during Aman's wedding. Glad the note helped.
Shatabdi is Parud's friend and Sumer's love interest. Keeping her that away.
Chapter 25:
Parud moments - me... π³π³
Maithili - I like her and her role in the Ranwat
family. Sweet convo they shared...π
And Paro speaking English... I was surprised but glad!
Seriously? sometimes I wonder if my Parud moments are convincing enough π³
Maithili is a sweetheart who wants the family's peace to remain undisturbed π
Paro's is now an Officer's wife, she needed more skills
Chapter 26:
OMG..OMG..OMG..
Mala - What kind of world does she
live? Seriously, she wants her son back. A son who fights against criminals. And
her husband is in the other side of the law. And Paro in the middle of this,
she is planning to use her to get her son back. How lame.. π‘
But that mirror scene - it brought back so many lovely
Parud memories...
And LAILA is back?! Why?? She is a dangerous & evil
lady... π‘
Waiting to read how the story continues.. π
Mala never understood the gravity of what she and Tejawat did. Both separately and together. That's her biggest problem.
I know. The perfect hero-heroine first meet
You'll know more about Laila's true intent in time.
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