AsYa TS 'Tere Naal Pyaar Hogaya' Last Part Page 16 COMPLETED

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Salaam to all

today I'm here just for my BESTIE Jas šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤—
i had promised her an OS long back but i didn't get the time to put it in words
finally i wrote but i don't know how's it
hope u guys like it specially Jas
i tried my level best yaar
BTW its a TS
part 2 will be posted ASAP

P.S Sara my long lost BF apka part plan nahi tha but kal aap se milty hi dill kiya apko bhi yaha hona chahiye

P.S.S Jas mai poora Punjabi main likh deti but yaha sabko samjhata koun is liye AsYa in Punjab and tere sath hain hope tjhy or kuch nahi chahiye šŸ˜†

P.S.S hayeee Jas tera role to tera hi hai but Zoya main hoon, sooo AAK is mine 😳 wesy Zoya n Jas ki friendship u ki and meri hai

Love u Jas šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤—

P.S.S.S Aarzo, BF, Affu, Arshu, Choto yeh family TS kesa laga jaldi se btao na...

Ufff etnaaa long tha A n B part kiye or abhi etnaaa or bhi hai 😳

Ashii...


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"Tere Naal Pyaar Hogaya"

Part 1 A:

Asad Ahmad Khan, the only child of his parents Mr. and Mrs. Rashid Ahmad Khan, lives in NY with all the luxuries... he recently joined his father's firm after completing his studies, but he had applied in many MNCs bcox he wanted to make a name of his own... as he belonged to a rich NRI family, he have lots of upper class friends but he had never consider such stupid facts of classes and that's why he have some friends who took care of their expenses by doing a part time job, Asad too works with them... Actually Asad thinks that by working for a lil amount of money he will never do "Israaf" of the hard earn money of his parents... he loves his hometown, Chandigarh, he was 13 years old when he visited India, now he was all set to go back after all his 1st cousin Ayan was getting married to his love Humaira... Asad was excited to meet his Zoe, well he can address her as his Zoe, after all only he called her Zoe instead of Zoya, after coming to NY, Asad got busy in new life but he never forgot to remember his sweet lil GF Zoe, he doesn't know when this friendship turned into love but now he just wanted to confess his feelings without knowing the circumstances...

Zoya Farooqui, the only child of Mr. and Mrs. Anwer Farooqui, lives in Ambala, a small town near Chandigarh... she completed her PG 2 months back and nowadays she is enjoying holidays with her bestie Jas KaBhian... Jas n Zoya are childhood buddies, both went to the same school, college and then did their PG in English, both are super duper naughty crime partners... the whole Ambala knows about their friendship, if Jas got missing then only Zoya knows where she is and same goes is case of missing Zoya... it is said that "Blood Relations" are God gifted but "Friends" is the only relation which we made by ourselves and both the girls felt blessed to have each other in their life as a "Bestie"... AyRa, Zoya's cousins are getting married in few days, Jas is excited more than Zoya after all Humaira is her friend too... Ayan and Zoya are 2nd cousins but she always considered him as her elder brother... Zoya was 10 years old when she met with Asad, she cried a lot when her new friend left India, days turned into weeks and weeks turned into months, it has been 13 years, she don't know when and how she fell in love with him, now she is eagerly waiting for his arrival, Jas knew about Zoya's secret love for Asad, she too wanted to meet him ASAP but Zoya had strictly warned her that she will not tell him about her love story, she didn't want to lose his friend by involving love and all, but Jas being Jas decided to make AAK fall in love with her bestie...

Chandigarh, India

Asad along with his friends Haider, Sara (Haider n Sara are engaged so I'll use HaiRa, BF ki punishment, lol), Tanveer (I hate her but yaha iska hona lazmi hai, Bestie be ready to kill her) and Aman ( a cool dude guy who knows about Asad's loves for his Zoe and wanted to unite AsYa) reached Ayan's place, Ayan was really happy to see his cousin plus bhai back to India after years, RaDil were in India from last month as per Ayan's parents orders and were helping in wedding preparations...

After Lunch, Ayan told Asad and his gang about Ambala where Humaira lives, Asad grinned at the mention of Ambala, a place where Zoya lives, Asad wanted to go there but functions were going to held from tomorrow so Asad have to wait for a night, Aman felt his friend's misery and decided to do something...

Aman: Ayan, what if we leave to Ambala right now???

Ayan: I wish the same, but ammi abbu ne mana kiya hai...

Asad: uncle aunty refused but why Ayan...

Ayan: bcox they are my parents and they knew that I'll surely try to meet Humaira...

Asad: so what Ayan???

Ayan: kya bhai, aap bhool gaye, shadi se pehly ladka or ladki nahi milty...

Tanveer: yeh kesa rule hai...

HaiRa: it's a tradition tannu, and we all have to follow it...

Aman: haan, see HaiRa are engaged still they hang out together bcox we live in NY, agar hum yaha hoty to Sara yahan aisy na bethi hoti...

Sara: looser, tujhy to koi milli nahi, mere or Haider ke ghomney ko nazar mat laga, what if Dilshad aunty locked me in a room... she said dramatically...

Asad: ammi aisa nahi kar sakti, after all unhy apny betey se zaida teri fikar hai... ammi ki beti ban'ney chali hai...

Sara: beti mat bol, main teri behen nahi ho sakti, never... Sara aisy mat kha, aisy mat beth, yeh mat kar, wo mat kar, Ya Allah shukar hai mai teri kuch nahi lagti...

Haider: ab bhabi to lagti ho tum...

Asad: or bhabi ko chahieye apny bhaiyo ke samney mangetar se door ho kar bethain... he winked...

Sara: kya baat hai AAK, bohat maza aa raha hai, I know Ambala janey ke liye tum etny betaab kyun ho, haina Aman...

Asad: Aman I'll kill you...

Aman: what have I done now... he asked...

Haider: yeh tum sab Ambala ki baat kyun kar rahy ho...

Sara: actually Haider...

Asad rushed to Sara and placed a hand on her mouth and stopped her from telling, actually tannu was there that's why he stopped her or else he can easily share it with Ayan n Haider... Tanveer is just a friend to Asad, but she thinks more than enough, she forcibly joined their group and came to India... Asad looked at Sara with pleaded eyes and she nodded in YES...

Asad: kuch nahi bas hum AyRa ki secret meeting plan kar rahy hain...

Ayan: sach main bhai...

Aman: haan Ayan, par us ke liye humey Ambala jana hoga...

Ayan: par...

Haider: come on dude, bhabi se milna hai na...

Ayan: haan...

Sara: pyaar kiya to darna kya, haina Asad...

Asad: haan meri maa...

Aman: so let's go to Ambala...

All cheered up in union, except tannu, who was busy doing some nail art...

Tanveer: where are we going now???

Asad: hmm Amabal, tum chalo gi ya phir kal ammi ke sath...

Tanveer: come on Asad, main yaha tumhary sath aayi hoon, tum jaha jaha, main vaha vaha...

Asad: hmm...

Asad was sitting on the driving seat, Haider n Aman were at back seat with Ayan, they forgot about tannu and waited for Sara, but tannu came before Sara and opened the car door, she was excited to sit with Asad throughout the journey but Sara came running there and sat on the passenger seat...

Tanveer: what's this Sara???

Sara: sorry but it's taken now...

Asad mouthed a thank you to Sara while she winked at him...

Tanveer: okay... she moved towards back seat but found Haider, Aman n Ayan there... now where I m suppose to sit???

Asad: actually tannu, Ambala main kafi garmi hai or yaha se Amabala kafi door hai, why don't you join us tomorrow with ammi n abbu...

Tanveer: but Asad...

Asad: tannu I'm saying for your health, tumhy kuch hogya to main responsible hoon, tum kal hi aao to sahi hoga...

Tanveer: awww Asad how much you care for me...

Asad: so see you tomorrow...

Tanveer: bye...

Asad zoomed off, on the way, Aman n Sara broke the news of Asad's secret love, but Asad told them to be careful in front of tannu, he doesn't want that she create a scene there, all knew about tannu's feelings but the main thing was that Asad had never considered her more than a friend... they planned a secret meeting for AyRa, and teased Asad a lot after all AyRa's meeting was an excuse, he wanted to meet his Zoe...

Ambala, India

Later that night, they reached Humaira's place and found out that Humaira has gone for girls party at Zoya's place, they were shocked to hear about a girls party that too in such a small town, they bid good bye and left for Zoya's place...

Zoya, Jas, Humaira and their friends were on terrace, they were playing Antakshari, Truth n Dare and many other sweet n simple games... while Asad and his friends were downstairs, they greeted AnZee who were ready to leave for dinner with Humaira's parents where elders were going to decide last minute preparations, AnZee thought Asad and his friends were already invited for Humaira's party, so in hurry they didn't notice Ayan and bid their good bye leaving excited Ayan n NRI group...

They reached on terrace and looked for the girls, they hear some noises from the left side of the terrace and moved ahead... Asad was getting nervous so Sara held his hand, Asad looked at her, she blinked her eyes and assured him that everything will be okay, no need to scare...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Part 1 B:

Jas heard the footsteps and turned around, she found Ayan with 3 guys and a girl...
Jas: Ayan bhaijan aap yaha... she shouted...
Ayan got literally scarred by her sudden scream while Zoya n Humaira looked in his direction...
Zoya: Allah Miyan!!! Ayan bhaijan yeh kya hai, aap yahan nahi aa sakty, hayeee kisi ne dekh liya to seyapa hojayega...
Humaira: Zoya ahista bol, aunty ne sun liya to???
Haider: wo uncle aunty se hum mil kar aaye hain, aap log etna ghabra kyun rahy hain???
Jas: ek to tum sab Ayan bhaijan ke kehny pe bina bulaye aagaye or uper se aunty ko bhi bol aaye...
Zoya: dekhiye aap log jaiye yaha se, yaha hum ladkiyan hain, aap log nahi aa sakty...
Sara: but I can join na...
Jas: ji???
Sara: oh I mean main to ladki hoon, tum logo ke sath party kar sakti hoon na...
Zoya: nahi aap log jaiye na, koi panga hogya to hum pakde jayengy...
Ayan: relax Zoya, main abhi chala jaonga...
HaiRa and Aman smiled at hearing Zoya, so she is Asad's Zoe, they turned towards Asad and found him lost somewhere else... Asad had recognized Zoya from her "Allah Miyan", now he was just starring at her like a fool, her big eyes, her cute si nose, her petal like lips, her long black hair, Asad was drowned in her beauty...
Jas noticed Asad's gaze on Zoya, she didn't like the way how he was looking at her, she stood in front of Zoya...
Jas: oh hello, aisy kesy dekh rahy hain aap???
Zoya too noticed Asad and felt conscious, she looked at him and found something similar in his eyes...
Ayan: Jas KaBhi to pyaar se bat kiya kar... he said coming closer to Humaira...
Jas: aap na... she noticed Ayan's closeness with Humaira... bhajan jaiye yahan se warna???
Aman: warna kya haan... he was watching how Jas stepped in front of Zoya and now she was not letting a chance to Ayan n Humaira...
Jas: apki tareef...
Haider: tareef to us Khuda ki jisney apko banaya...
Sara: Haider... she glared at him...
Ayan: Zoya plz esko samjha na, yeh sab mere friedns hain or...
Zoya: hum kya aap ke dushman hain bhaijan... her face fell...
Jas: bhaijan apko Humaira se milna hai to theek hai aap Zoya se aisy bat nai kar sakty, Zoya tu senti mat ho, chal mere sath, Humaira tu free ho kar aajana...
Jas dragged Zoya with her, Ayan rubbed his temple and grabbed Zoya's arm...
Ayan: I'm sorry I didn't mean to sound like this yaar...
Zoya: rehny dejiye bhaijan... she faked a crying face...
Jas winked at her and continued their drama...
Jas: bas bhaijan, apko jo kehna tha aap ne keh diya, ab hum chalty hain...
Zoya: Jas chal mjhy yaha nahi rukna, hum dono apny room main chalty hain...
Asad was watching how Zoya was hurt by Ayan's words, he should take extra care before revealing his feelings...
Ayan: aisy kesy tum dono ja sakti ho??? Tum bhool rahi ho ab main tum dono ka bhaijan nahi "jeeju" bhi hoon, mazak to kar hi sakta hoon na...
Jas: to kya bas aap hi mazak kar sakty hain "jeeja ji"... she said stressing on "jeeja ji"...
Zoya: oh to janab ko yaad aagya ke hum apki saaliyan hain...
Ayan: don't tell me tum log mazak kar rahy thy...
Zoya: lehhh... assi log choti choti gallan nu dill te nayi layida honda...
Jas: te hor ki...
Asad was confused by her sudden change of moods, he should prepare himself for a rollercoaster ride if he wants Zoe in his life...
Ayan: ek second, Humaira yeh dono kya bol rahi hain...
Humaira: Ayan, ek to main aap ki enhi baato se pareshan hoon, apko Chandigarh main reh ke Punjabi nahi aati...
Jas: haan Humaira ek wari fir soch ly, munda zara maada aaye...
Zoya: oye bas haan, bhaijan hum log bas aisy mazak kar rahy hain, don't worry Jas apki burayi nahi kar rahi, haina Jas... she winked at her bestie...
Ayan: uff, acha yeh sab chodo, mere dosto se milo, yeh hain Sara, Haider, Aman or yeh... he introduced the trio and came towards Asad... or yeh hain Asad bhai...
Zoya was smiling at Ayan's friend and greeted them but when she hear "Asad", she looked straightly in his eyes, world stopped for them, both were lost in each other's eyes, HaiRa n AyRa grinned while Aman was the one who noticed a shocked Jas...
Jas: tum Asad ho... she asked shockingly...
AsYa broke the eye contact...
Asad: ji or aap???
Jas: tum Dilshad aunty ke bety ho na???
Asad: ji... he replied back confusingly...
Jas: tum NY wale Asad ho na... this time she asked excitedly...
Aman: stamp paper pe likh ke dy kya???
Jas: aap se matlab... she ignored him and focused on AAK...
Jas looked at Asad from head to toe, Asad was lil embarrassed, he looked towards Ayan who was busy with Humaira, Zoya was lost in Asad and HaiRa were noticing Zoya's eyes only, and then he looked towards Aman for help...
Asad: aap mujhy aisy kyun dekh rahi hain???
Aman: Asad mjhy kya lagta hai Ambala main shayad pehli dafa koi handsome ladka aaya hai...
Jas: hun aaye gall vi nayi, I mean aisi koi baat nahi hai, main to bas dekhna chahti thi AAK kya waqayi tareef ke qabil hain ya nahi, BTW I'm Jas... Zoe's bestie... she offered a hand...
Asad: Khan, Asad Ahmad Khan... he greeted and shook hand...
Jas: Khan to aisy bol rahy ho jesy Salman Khan ho, haina Zoya... she tried to involve Zoya in her teasing but Zoya didn't listen to her and continue starring at Asad...
Aman: kya baat hai Asad yaha India main tumhary bohat fan hain...
Asad: fan nahi Aman, dost hain, right Zoe...
Sara: ohh Zoe...
Jas: hey Zoya ko Zoe ya to Asad bula sakta hai ya Main... CopyRight and all...
Sara: Asad to Zoe bulata hai, hum sab janty hain but tumhy kesy yeh right milgaya...
Jas: Zoe ek baar Asad ko na bol sakti hai but mujhy nahi, haina Zoe...
Zoya: huh... haan, Jas ke liye to jaan bhi hazir hai...
Aman: ly Asad tujhy teri souten mill gayi... he whispered in Asad's ear...
Jas: kya kaha tum ne...
Ayan: Aman, ek free ki advice hai, Jas or Zoya se bach ke rehna, chot ek ko lagti hai to dard dosri ko hota hai, agar ek se panga lega to dosri free main maaregi... beware haan...
Zoya: bhaijan hum dono ki etniii tareef kis khushi main??? Humaira se mill liya na, ab jaiye...
Asad: hum log yahan sirf Humaira ke liye nahi aaye thy... he tried to start a conversation with Zoya...
Jas: acha te hor ki kamm si???
Haider: hey its Punjabi haina, mujhy bhi sekhni hai, aap sekhaingi kya???
Jas: yeh Sara or tum engaged ho na, abhi bhaijan ne btaya na...
Haider: haan to???
Jas: to aap un k samney kisi or ladki se kesy baat kar sakty hain...
Zoya: haan or aap dono ko bhi etna pass nahi rehna chahiye...
Sara: tum dono kounsy zamaney ki baatain kar rahy ho, NY main aisa kuch nahi hota...
Zoya: hum or aap aik hi zamaney se hain, or yeh sab hamari tehzeeb hai, kuch asool hain jinhy nazar andaaz nahi kar sakty...
Sara: main or Haider sath hain to eska yeh matlab nahi ke hum...
Zoya: dekhiye aap samajh nahi rahi...
Ayan: Zoya...
Zoya: I'm sorry bhaijan, shayad enhy hamari baat buri lagey par aap...
Jas: relax Zoe, tu kya sabko Tameez n Tahzeeb pe lecture dy rahi hai...
Zoya: Jas tu meri dost hai enki...
Asad: India se bahir rehny ka yeh matlab nahi hai ke hum apni Tameez or Tehzeeb bhool gaye hain, hum apny se bade logo ki izzet karna janty hain or haan aaj bhi hum vohi Hindustani hain, bahir janey se log badal sakty hain, lekin moral values vohi rehti hain...
Zoya didn't expect such outcome from Asad, she was just teasing them, she smiled at him, after all she spoke for his friends and she knew how much friends are important, she revealed a lil bit... Jas noticed Zoya, who was lost in her own world, she came to her bestie's rescue...
Jas: tussi Zoe nal enj gall nayi kar sakdy... uska maqsad aap logo ko hurt karna nahi tha, aap logo ko bura laga ho to main maafi mangti hoon par...
Zoya: main theek hoon Jas, tu dill pe mat ly...
Asad felt bad for speaking like this, he was just defending his friends, he didn't want to hurt her...
Asad: hey I'm sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you, it's just that...
Zoya: ji wo... she interrupted to say something...
Asad: hmm mera matlab hai, main apko hurt, nahi apko aisy nahi kehna chahta tha, meri vaja se aap logo ki party kharab ho gayi, I'm sorry Zoe...
Zoya: aap sorry kyun bol rahy hain???
Asad: matlab???
Jas: matlab yeh ke Ayan bhaijan bar bar keh rahy thy aap sab friend hain to bas Zoe apko tang kar rahi thi, she was just teasing, Sara no need to worry...
All thought Zoya was serious, but they sighed in relief when it turned out to be a teasing session, Asad was a lil bit shocked, his Zoe can be such naughty, he had never imagined...
Sara: kya yaar dara diya na...
Zoya: I'm sorry... she shyly smiled...
Sara: Zoya what if both of you join us, I mean hum sab friend ban sakty hain, or tum dono jesy masti karty ho humey bhi karni hai, kuch din hum India main hain to main chahti hoon yeh din hansty khelty guzar jayen...
Jas: mujhy lagta tha ke Zoe or main non-stop bolty hain, lekin yaha to sab aisy hain, bhaijan aap kya bas humey dant'ty rehty hain, dekha Sara ko...
Ayan n Humaira were lost in their own world, they were sitting on the floor comfortably, Jas called him but he didn't listen, all giggled at her expressions that were cute and aggressive at the same time...
Jas: bhaijan... she shouted sitting near Ayan...
Ayan: huh... he scarred by her scream... kya yaar, abhi shadi bhi nahi hui, aisy mat daraya kar...
Zoya: bhaijan apko bhi to sunayi nahi dy raha tha...
Ayan: tum logo ka hogaya to main Humaira se baat kar lon...
Zoya: koi rok raha hai kya...
Jas: haan tab tak hum kuch khany ka arrange karty hain...
Zoya n Jas left for kitchen while Asad n his friends made themselves comfortable, Asad got a chance and came downstairs, Jas smirked when she found a confused Asad there, she thought to give them some privacy...
Jas: Zoe tu yeh sab dekh ly main aati hoon...
Before Zoya can answer her back, Jas left, she came to Asad...
Jas: go to her... she winked and left...
Asad: hey thanks haan...
Jas: anything for Zoe... she replied without turning back...
Zoya was in kitchen only, she was pouring cold drink in glasses, but bottle was not opening... Asad came from behind...
Asad: main help karon??? He whispered in her ear...
Zoya: huh... she startled and turned and found him too close...
Zoya: aap yahan, kuch chahiye tha???
Asad: kyun main tumse baat karny nahi aa sakta... he replied taking the bottle from her hands and returned it after opening the cap, their fingers brushed, both looked at each other immediately, Zoya felt like drowning in his eyes, she broke the eye contact and concentrated at her work...
Asad: so...
Zoya: so???
Asad: kesi ho...
Zoya: achi hoon...
Asad: good, well I'm fine too...
Zoya: mainey poocha kya??? She smirked...
Asad: nahi par tum jan'na chhati thi...
Zoya stopped and looked at him, she was dying to ask him how's he and when did he came and all but didn't gather the courage to ask...
Asad: tum hamesha aisy badi badi aankhain kar ke hi dekhti ho???
Zoya: huh... her eyes widened more...
Asad: is se zaida badi bhi kar sakti ho kya??? He asked controlling his giggle at her cute expressions...
Zoya: Asad aap na...
Asad: I missed you Zoe... he whispered in her ear and dropped a kiss on her cheek that was already red due to their close proximity...
Asad left from there while Zoya looked at his retreaing back with an open mouth but a silly smile was there too...
Later that night, AsYa, HaiRa, AyRa, Jas n Aman chatted till 4'o clock in the morning... AsYa shared some eye locks which didn't go unnoticed by Jas, she intentionally made AsYa sit opposite and also receive a death glare from Asad for doing so, but Asad came to know that Jas is really close to Zoe, so he have to adjust with his Zoe's bestie, and he have to involve Jas in his plan, if he wanted to confess his feelings...
After an hour, Zoya strictly throw Ayan out of the house with his friends, Jas decided to tease AsYa a lil more...
Jas: kya Zoe, aisy kesy bhej rahi hai, achy se bye bol kar aa, Asad ko bhi akely main bye bolna hoga, haina Asad... she smirked...
Zoya glared at her while Asad blushed a lil...
Zoya: Asad kahin door nahi ja rahy, yahi pass main hi hain...
Jas: oh... pass main hi hain... she stressed on the word "hain"...
Zoya: tjhy bad main btaongi, Sara main lunch time tak aap ke liye traditional lehenga ly aaongi...
Sara: awww that's so sweet of you Zoya...
Ayan: etniii swet bhi nahi hai, KaBhi eska gussa dekho to pata chaly...
Jas: aap shayad bhool rahy hain Zoe ke gussy ki vaja se hi apki shadi horahi hai, warna...
Ayan: haan meri maa janta hoon, tum dono ne Humaira ka brain wash kiya or mujhse milny bhi nahi diya, or tum logo ki issi harkat ki vaja se I confessed or kal shadi bhi horahi hai...
Zoya: complain kar rahy hain kya... she pouted...
Ayan: complain nahi Zoya, sach pocho to I'm thankful to both of you tum dono nahi hote to...
Jas: to mera kya hota, Humaira Begam kisi or ki hojati or aap unki yaad main "Ranjha" ban jaty... she said dramatically...
Zoya: Allah Miyan!!! Jas bhaijan ko chodh or nikal jaldi, Phupi ke liye gift lena hai... suddenly Zoya shouted...
Aman: tum dono kisi doctor ko janty ho kya???
Zoya: doctor ko, haan kyun???
Aman: haan wo kya hai na 2 din tum logo ke sath rehny se mere kaan kharab hony valy hain na, to doctor ki zaroorat to padygi...
Jas: so funny, haina, BTW hum "Punjabi" hain, yeh hamara style hai, hum aisy hi baat karty hain...
Zoya: Jas...
Jas: Zoe...
Ayan: tum dono ka Jas Zoe hogya ho to hum chalein...
Zoya: haan bhaijan hum dono bhi nikalty hain, Allah Hafiz...
Asad: chalta hoon... he said looking at Zoya only...
Zoya: Asad... chalta hon nahi, ja ke aata hoon, aisy bolty hain...
Asad smiled at her concern while all looked at Zoya who was openly showing care for him...
Asad: sham main milta hoon, Allah Hafiz...
Later that evening, hall was beautifully decorated for the function of Mehndi, Asad and his gang was there, Humaira too came with Jas, only one person was missing that was Zoya, Asad's Zoe, he was waiting impatiently for her arrival, but she was taking more than enough, he wanted to spend more time with her, his train of thoughts broke when Tanveer came running to him and tried to hug him, Asad didn't want to hug her but he can't create a scene in front of all so he closed his eyes and waited for an unwanted hug, but that hug took a minute and then he felt someone hugging him, a simple hug and then she spoke lightly...
Jas: Mr. Khan don't you dare to hug someone else openly when my Zoe is here, usko feel hua to I'll kill you, mind it haan...
Jas broke apart while Asad sighed in relief boc he tannu didn't hug him...
Asad: where is she???
Jas: bas aati hi hogi...
Tanveer: Asad yeh sab kya hai, or tum koun ho, or yeh kya badtamizi thi???
Jas: wo mjhy Asad se milna tha, jesy hi yaad aaya, I came running to him, haina... she looked at Asad and blinked her eyes twice...
Asad: hmm... he hm-ed and side hugged her...
Jas: zaida free honey ki zaroorat nahi hai...
Tanveer: Asad yeh hai koun???
Asad: she is someone close to me... he replied honestly...
Jas: that's good, Zoe ko patina hai to mjhy bhi accept karna hoga... she said loud enough so Asad can hear...
Tanveer: whatever, stupid villagers... she left...
Jas: huh... she was about go behind her but Asad stopped her...
Asad: leave it Jas, uski aadat hai...
Jas: aisy kesy wo humey villagers bol sakti hai... she was hell angry...
Asad: kuch log dosron ko KaBhi nahi samajhty, tannu bhi wesi hi hai...
Jas: kitni ajeen ladki hai...
Asad: shaant hoja meri maa...
Jas: I'm not your "maa"... she turned to go but Asad grabbed her arm...
Asad: saali bula sakta hoon... he winked at her...
Jas: soch ke btaongi... she smirked...
Asad: chaalu...
Jas: suna maine...
Asad: haan to sun'ney ke liye hi kaha tha...
Jas: dekhti hoon Zoe apko haan kesy kehti hai...
Asad: wo haan keh chuki hai...
Jas: jhoot... wo mujhy btaye bagair KaBhi haan nahi kahygi...
Asad: let's have a bet Jas... she will say "YES"...
Jas: she will say "NO" without me...
HaiRa, Aman n Ayan were listening to their talk from a long time...
Sara: hey guys, what's happening???
Jas: your friend is going to lose a bet...
Ayan: bet, bhaijan let me clear you one thing Jas or Zoya se jeetna is impossible...
Asad: we will see Ayan...
Haider n Aman: that's like my man... they cheered Asad in union...
Zoya: kya chal raha hai??? She came and inquired...

Asad turned and froze, she looking like an angel, she was wearing a beautiful white lehenga with red dupatta, Asad was lost in her beauty while Zoya blushed under his gaze...

Jas: Ma'Sha'Allah bolna sekho... she closed Asad's mouth that was slightly open...
Asad: I'll... he replied without breaking an eye contact with Zoya...
Jas decided to tease Asad so she dragged Zoya with her, girls sat beside Humaira, Sara too joined them when Zoya called her, all applied "heena"...
Asad was just looking at Zoya only, their eyes were talking throughout the function... Soon dhool started playing and girls gathered in the centre of the hall, Zoya and Jas dragged Sara with them and the trio danced...
Japphiyon sa desh hai mera
O soneya Japphiyon sa desh hai mer
Tu door jitna jaaye
Yeh paas utna aaye
Kab dil tera le jaaye
Yaahan pe Ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soneya
Jas dragged AyRa, haider n Aman too, Zoya looked at Asad who was looking at her only and she continued...
Dil mein rehte hai gharon ko kisne poocha ji
Keh daala jo yaar kabhi naa poocha dooja ji
Raahein sabhi mudh jaayein
Tootein bhi dil jud jaayein
Kab dil tera le jaaye yahaan pe
Ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soneya
Jaane anjaane dilon ko dil se chhoote hain
Asad too joined them...
Apne begaane jo milte yaar hi kehte hain
Riste yeh rab se ne banaye
Asad held Zoya's arm and pulled her closer, Zoya was literally shocked but obliged...
Tu lakh khud ko bachaye
Kab dil tera le jaaye yaahan pe
Ishq hi hai rab aur khuda soneya
They ended the dance and all cheered for the youngsters... unknown to them, there was someone who was observing AsYa with hopeful eyes, she was waiting for this day from years and it looks like it happened today by the grace of Allah, Dilshad sent a silent prayer upward and decided to make an announcement...
All youngsters were in garden, Tanveer was hell angry on Asad, he didn't care to look at her, he was busy with Jas n Zoya... Tanveer decided to insult Zoya in front of all... she took a glass of orange juice and came towards Zoya and intentionally drop some juice on Zoya's dress...
Tanveer: I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to...
Zoya: koi baat nahi, aap ne jaan boojh kar thodi kiya hoga, main abhi aati hoon... she left in order to clean her dress...
Tanveer: bechari, ek to dress kharab hogaya or usko samajh bhi nahi aaya ke mainey sorry kaha...
Jas: excuse me, what did you say...
Tanveer: kyun sach sun kar bura laga...
Asad: tannu...
Jas: aik to tumny Zoe ka dress khrab kiya or uper se khud ko kuch zaida hi educated samjhti ho...
Asad: leave it Jas, tannu ne kaha na galti se hogaya...
Jas: main andhi nahi hoon, sab dikhayi dy raha hai mujhy...
Tanveer: kya Asad tum kinhy samjha rahy ho, yeh villagers aisy hi hoty hain, 4 lafz kya bolny aagaye khud ko educated samjhty hain... jahan NRI ladka dekha usky peechy pad gaye...
Jas: tum kuch zaida hi bol rahi ho...
Ayan: Jas kyun hyper horahi hai, wo hamari mehmaan hai...
Jas: aap sab mujhy kyun samjha rahy ho???
Zoya: kya hua Jas... she came back...
Jas: kuch nahi Zoe tu chal yahan se... she tried to take Zoya with her...
Zoya: par hua kya, Asad aap btaiye kya hua???
Tanveer: tumhy sirf Asad hi dekhayi dy raha hai kya, Ayan, Haider ya Sara se kyun nahi pooch leti...
Sara: tannu tum pagal hogayi ho kya???
Jas: tu chal na Zoya...
Zoya: pehly bata hua kya...
Asad: koi kahi nahi jayega, tannu say sorry to Jas, right NOW...
Tanveer: sorry my foot...
Zoya: yeh sab ho kya raha hai koi btaye ga kya???
Tanveer: arry tumhy nahi pata, chalo main btati hoon, tumhari dost ko sach sun kar bura laga, janti ho Zoya...
Jas: Zoya tu eski bakwas kyun rahi hai, chal yah se... she forcibly took Zoya with her...
Tanveer: haan ly jao usy, kahi sach sun kar uska sapna toot gaya to masla hoga...
Zoya stopped and turned to face tanveer...
Zoya: aap bar bar aisi baat kyun kar rahi hain, koi problem hai kya???
Tanveer: tum ho problem, jab se Asad tum se mila hai meri taraf dekh hi nahi raha, sham se dekh rahi hoon usy bas tumhari fikar hai...
Zoya: kehna kya chahti ho tum???
Tanveer: Zoya, tum kitni bholi ho...
Jas: tum apni hudd main reh kar baat karo...
Zoya: tu chup bethy gi Jas...
Asad: that's it tannu, tum baat ko kahan se kahan lekar ja rahi ho...
Tanveer: Asad tum...
Zoya: ek second, aap logo ko jo bhi baat karni hai kejiye, par pehly yeh btaiye ke apko humse problem kya hai...
Tanveer: tumhy seedhi baat samajh nahi aati kya, tum ho problem, yaahn sab achy se janty hain tum kis tarha Asad ko apny jaal main phansa rahi ho, tumhy kya lagta hai tum apni chaal main kamyaab ho jaogi, aisa nahi hoga Zoya, main tumhy aisa nahi karny dngi...
Zoya was shocked, she didn't expect such cheap thought regarding her from Asad's friend, tears brimmed in her eyes but she controlled herself, her parents taught her to be civilized to such stupid people... but Jas had enough of tannu's blabbering, she just came forward and slapped her hard...
Jas: I did warn you to remain in your limits, par mere saber ki bhi ek hudd hai, kab se bole ja rahi hai, Zoya chupp hai uska matlab yeh nahi ke tum sahi ho, or Asad tum... she looked at Asad... mujhy nahi pata that um etny kamzoor ho, aisy ghatiya dost hain tumhary, ek taraf wo tumhari bachpan ki dost ki insult kar r ahi hai or tum ho ke chup chaap khadey ho...
Zoya: Jas bohat hogya tu chal, humey kisi se koi matlab nahi hai... she was hurt, Jas was right Asad should have stand for her...
Ayan: Zoya meri baat suno...
Jas: nahi bhaijan, not now plz...
Jas n Zoya left while Asad stood there feeling guilty...
Tanveer: dekha aap sab ne, agar meri baat galat hoti to Zoya react karti, lekin nahi, uska sach samney aagyaa to wo bina kuch bole chali gayi...
Asad: or kitna jhoot bolo gi tannu...
Tanveer: Asad main...
Asad: I'm ashamed of you, meri dost hoty huway tum aisa kesy kar sakti ho, or wo bhi us ladki se jis se main pyaar karta hoon...
Tanveer: p.pyaar... she asked shockingly...
Asad: haan tannu, I love her, I love Zoe, aaj tum ne acha nahi kiya... saying so he left...
Jas who came back to take her cell phone back, heard out Asad's confession, he was somewhere happy bcox Asad at least spoke for her, but she was hurt bcox Asad confessed his love in front of that bitch, she ruined her bestie's special moment, suddenly an evil plan came into her mind and she smirked...
Jas: so Miss. Tanveer, apko Zoya ka araam se jana acha nahi laga, okay no problem, I'll make sure ke next time Zoya apko upset nahi karygi... or haan aaj mere hath se thapad shayad tum bhool jao par Zoe ke hath ka KaBhi nahi bholo gi, or tumhy yaqeen nahi hua ke Asad Zoe se pyaar karta hai, chalo yeh kaam bhi mere zimmy hogya, Asad kal sab ke samney apny pyaar ka izhaar karyga and that's my promise... BTW "Punjabi" never breaks their promises...



Sooo here u go...
ignore my mistakes plzzz...
hit like n leave ur precious replies...
next update jab "Jas" kahygi 😳
Ashii...



Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Aashu that was wonderful!!!! šŸ‘...

Mumma was rocking!!!!!
Mai chalu hun so meri mumma bhi chaalu...

Oye Nanu ko allow na karo ladkiyon me !!!!!!!!

Mere Nanu tharki haiii..
Isss kamini billi ki toh mai band bajaounga
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Res for Mumma, Aloo,Yumna, Srash,Trish,Adi
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Res
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Shona...kia likha u nešŸ‘
It was awesome blossom twosome threesome n on n on n on😃
Wow...I loved it..and meri apple to cha gaye😳
Kamal kar dittašŸ˜›šŸ˜‰
Tanveer ko chanta mar diašŸ‘
Nw continue jaldi😊
Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
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Superb part loved it
asya love each other from childhood soo sweet
asad and zoya moments were amazing
that billi is really crossed her limit
excited for has plan
thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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love it..
it was along update...yippee,,..!!!!
love i..enjoyed well..plz continue soon...
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Love it it so much
Lovvveee for uu for writing so beautiful ts
thanks for pm
Love jas and zoe bond
can't wait to read what jas is gong to do
update soon

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