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Posted: 10 years ago
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I just liked Shravan reddy in Manmarziyan.
When I searched , i found no fanfictions ... So I just created 1 .Hope u all lyk it ! Do post your feedbacks... plzz 😊


Cast :

Vivaan Kundra - Shravan Reddy (VK)

Amaaya Malhotra - Krystle Dsouza

Ansh Deshmukh - Karan Jotwani (Amaaya's BF)

Jeeva Mishra - Varun Kapoor (Vivaan's Bestfriend)

Meera Sinha - Rishina Kandhari (Amaaya's Bestfriend)

Trupti Malhotra - Mihika Verma (Amaaya's Elder Sister)

Savita Malhotra - Neelu Kohli (Amaaya's Mother)

Makhesh Malhotra - Sanjay Batra (Amaaya's Father)

Ravidaas Kundra - Sachin Tyagi (Vivaan's Father)

Vimla Kundra - Jyoti Gauba (Vivaan's Mother)

Priyanka Kundra Patil - Parul Gulati (Vivaan's Sister)

Story :

Clock hits 9:00 am

"Vimla, mera chai kaha hai ? Office kaliye der horahi hai mujhe" a hoarse voice called out. It was Ravidaas Kundra, manager of NBI bank who was calling his beautiful wife.

"Yeh lo , aapka gharma gharm chai, with biscuits." Saying this Vimla started laughing. Ravi who didn't understand the reason of her laughter enguired the reason for it. Again with a small smile she ignored his question.

Ravi now made his voice a little stronger and asked her "Tumhara bigda hua beta kaha hai ? Kahi nazar nahi aa raha hai. Phir se kuch"

Vimla suddenly cut his sentence saying "Who toh apne dost ke ghar gaya hai. Bola ki uska dost US ja raha hai aur use paking mein madat karna hai"

Scene shifts to a bike racing ground in Mumbai.

"VK" "VK" "VK" "VK" "VK" "VK... Come on VK" ...

The crowd is seen cheering for VK. A person wearing a helmet is saying riding his bike very fast and wins the race.

"I told you VK hai jeete ga. Ab kya hua ? Meine hi bet geeta hai . Ab mera paisa do" a person in the crowd asked another.

The guy with the helmet is seen removing his helmet and roar of the crowd increases with this.

It is VK.

"V, tumne toh aaj sub ki dil geet li bro" VK laughs and says "Mujhse koi unimpressed kaise ho sakta hai ?" VK's phone rings , and his hands start shivering.

"Bhai.. kya ...kya hua ? tera haad kaap kyu raha hai ? Kiski phone hai" Jeeva asked.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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good good. waiting for next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's nice..
Plz continue soon..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for liking it !

I have uploaded the 2nd episode ! Plzz do read

Edited by SaraSharon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Episode 2


"Mom ki phone hai !... Maine toh bola dha dost ko madad karne jaa raha hai... Par yahan ki shor sun kar unhe pata chal jayega ki mein kaha hoon... Shit shit shittt... Yaar ab mein kya". VK said.

"Mujhse koi unimpressed nahi ho sakta" Jeeva mocks VK and starts laughing.

Scene Shifts.

10:30 am

"Wohho ! haaaha ! Go meri jaan .. Ra One .. I love you ..." a girl is seen cheering for Ra. One watching the film.

"Tu pagal hai ! Villain ko support kar rahi hoon ? Tumhe pata hai ki G.One geetega. Phir kyu yaar ? Aur vaise bhi tum poora pagal hai ! Redline Productions ka Creative Head hoon phir bhi tumhe Heroes se zyada Villains pasand hai !" Meera, the girl's friend said.

"Haan mujhe pata hai Villains haar jata hai ! But jo baat Villains mein hote hain woh Heroes mein nahi hai !" the girl said.

"SRK mein bhi ! Paagal ... Tum paagal hain" meera got angry and was about to leave when the girl caught her hand and said , but this time her face was revealed.

"SRK toh Handsomeness ki baap hain. Par yaar mera toh connection hamesha se pakka hai Villains ke saath , aur mein unko hi support karoonga!"

"Amaaya! Tumhari kuch nahi ho sakti" meera said.

"Bachon ! kya baatein ho rahi hain ? Jaldi aa jao aur nashta karo ! Vaise Ammu, aaj tumhe office nahi jaana hai kya ?" it was Savita Malhotra , Amaaya's mother who was enquiring about the girls talks.

"Maa, aaj toh late hi jaayenge ! Mera Co- head ka interviews chal raha hai kyon ki Bonnie ne apne job chod diya dha na .. ! Toh mera waha jaa ke koi kaam nahi hai !"

"Haai bhagwaan, ab isse subhah hi jeel na padega kya"

Meera laughs out loudly at Savita's joke, while Amaaya makes a sadoo face and goes and hugs her dad, who was sitting in the dining table all set to have his breakfast.

"Paapa, aap toh mujhe hi support kar rahi hoon naa ?"

"Mere paas koi option nahi hai na." Makhesh said laughing.

"Mujhe aap lokhon se baat nahi karni hai.. Mein jaa rahi hoon" saying this Amaaya goes and sits in the near by sofa.

"Ghaana ghaake toh javo na !" Makhesh tried to increase Amaaya's anger.

Suddenly, the doorbell rang, and when Amaaya opened the door, she was shocked to see the person standing there.

"Diii..." Amaaya screamed at the top of her voice.

Both Amaaya and Trupti hugged each other.

"Itna loud welcome" Trupti said.

"Tumhare liye special hai" saying this Amaaya winked.

"Achaa ! Tumhare signature style mein andhar le jaavo na"

"Amaaya je najbolja (Amaaya is the best in Serbian language) avo avo andhar avo" and pushes Trupti into the house.


Leave your suggestions and comments below.. Plzz and do say what you feel after reading !

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Episode 3


Vivaan Kundra - Shravan Reddy (VK)

Amaaya Malhotra - Krystle Dsouza

Ansh Deshmukh - Karan Jotwani (Amaaya's BF)

Jeeva Mishra - Varun Kapoor (Vivaan's Bestfriend)

Meera Sinha - Rishina Kandhari (Amaaya's Bestfriend)

Trupti Malhotra - Mihika Verma (Amaaya's Elder Sister)

Savita Malhotra - Neelu Kohli (Amaaya's Mother)

Makhesh Malhotra - Sanjay Batra (Amaaya's Father)

Ravidaas Kundra - Sachin Tyagi (Vivaan's Father)

Vimla Kundra - Jyoti Gauba (Vivaan's Mother)

Priyanka Kundra Patil - Parul Gulati (Vivaan's Sister)




VK had reached his home, and immediately called his sister

"Di..."

"Haan, haan.. abhi darvaza ghol deti hoon" Priyanka answered his call and assured to open the door.

"Thank god ! kisine tumhe dekha nahi" Priyanka said with an angry face.

"Accha .. toh mein jaa ke fresh ho gati hoon" VK tried to make Priyanka happy and started tickling her.

"Vivi..." a voice called out , it was none other than Vimla, his mother.

"Beta, tu faz gaya" VK said to himself

"Tumne mera phone kyu nahi uthaya ?, Sach bolo kaha gaya tha tu ?" from an angry tone , Vimla's voice had changed to a concerning one.

"Mom..." he gave a grin and hugged her tightly.

"Mujhe manana sirf tumhari bas ki hai" Vimla teased VK saying this and all the 3 started laughing.

"Mein fresh ho ke aathi hoon.. and papa ko mat bata na" he winked to Vimla and ran upstairs.

"Mein kya karoon, is ladke ke saath, who kab aur kaise sudrega beta" Vimla was actually concerned about VK's carefree attitude.

"Aap fikr mat karo , mujhe pata hai kya karna hai" Priyanka had a plan in her mind and asked Vimla not to worry and trust in her.

Aftersometime, Priyanka was in VK's room, while VK was busy watching a soccer match.

Priyanka - tumne kya socha hai.. apne future ke bare me?

VK - achanak se ye question ? Kya hua darling (Winked again)

Priyanka - kuch nahi ? Huh !

Mom kafi tensed hai ! aisa jayega toh kya hoga !

VK - toh ab mujhe kya karna hai ?

Priyanka - ek job ke bare me sochna padega na ! Dekho , ek bohot bade Production house mein Creative Co - Head ka position ke job.

Saying this she showed him the site which was viewed in her laptop.

He just took a look and pushed laptop to Priyanka.

VK - Dii , mujhe nahi karna aisa job. Tume pata hai na, I want to become a Director , mein iss job karke kya karronga.

Priyanka - wahi toh ! Redline Production House ka offer hai pagal ! Ek baar uss job tumhe miljaye na, toh tumhe connections bhi bana sakta hai ,aur Director ka kaam bhi seekh sakta hai.

VK - Director ka kaam? Dii woh mere liye ek kaam se bhi important hai.

Priyanka - jo bhi hai ! tumhe iss interview ke liye jaana hi padega.

VK- kya dii, ab tum bhi shuru hua ! Right time ho ne pe mein ek acche Director banke dikhavoonga tum sab ko! Plz mujhe force mat karo .. Mujhe match dekhni hai.

Priyanka - Tum gaa rahi ho ! Yeh toh pakka hai . Varna mein tumse baat nahi karne wali hoon. Tum iss job ke saath bhi ek Director ban sakte ho na ! Phir kya problem hai tujhe.

Tum gaa rahi hoon , gaa rahi hoon, gaa rahi hoon !

*And she started pleading*

VK- accha baba tekh hai . Par mera ek condition hai !

Priyanka - Kitna bhaav gha raha hai (Taps on his head) Haan bolo kya condition hai ?

VK- Mere liye ek BLIND DATE arrange karo ! Who bhi kisi hot ladki ke saath !

Priyanka was shocked listening to his condition and drank ample of water.

Priyanka - Blind date ? Mein match maker lagti hoon kya tujhe .. Huh ! Tumhe lagta hai mein maan gavoongi ? Bet nahi ! Bhool ja apne yeh sapna !

VK - kya match maker, baker kar rahe ho ! Date ke baad mein iss ghar ki Bahu k otoh nahi leke avoongi ! Bass masti ke liye he yeh sab yaar ! (Winks)

Aur vaise bhi , bina blind date ke mein yeh interview attempt nahi karoonga!

Priyanka - Masti ! Pagal ho tum ... Aise behave kar rahe ho jaise Job tumhare liye intzaar kar rahe ho !

VK - accha , toh interview ke liye nahi jaa na, ryt !

Priyanka - nahi , tumhe jaa na hai !

VK - toooh ! kya socha hai meri jaan !

Priyanka - tekh hai ! tumhara blind date karavoonga ! par uske baad tumhe iss job interview ke liye jaana padega !

VK - Date karvaado ! Pakka mein interview ke liye javoonga !

Priyanka walks out of the room thinking how to arrange a blind date for VK.

Amaaya's house

Amaaya - Tum kya kar rahe ho inti raat ? sona nahi hai kya ?

Trupti closes her laptop immediately after seening Amaaya.

Trupti - so javoonga ! Tum bhi so javo !

Amaaya - kya chupa raha hai Di ? BoyyFriend hai ? (excited) Bolo na kya chakkar chal raha hai ?

Trupti - Haaan haan BoyyFriend ko hi chupa raha hoon, varna tum use mujhse cheenonga ! kyoon ? (mocks amaaya)

Amaaya - Tumhari Boyyfriend tumhe cheat karo namaha ! cheat karo namaha !

Saying this she bursts into laughter.

Trupti - ab tum javo ! (pushes Amaaya into bed)

On the other hand ,

Priyanka (to herself ) - mein Blind date kaise arrange karronga.

She searches on internet how arrange a blind date and then gets the idea of searching a girl on frinedsbook.

She opens her friendsbook account and thinks which name to type.

She sees a bag having TRUPTI JEWELLERS written on it, and types the name Trupti.

She goes through the first account available , and sees an old lady

She later comes to the 4th account available and opens it,

Trupti Malhotra

She likes both the cover page photo and profile picture and decides to message her.

Priyanka (to herself) - sab se acchi toh yeh wali hi hai ! God koi gad bad mat ho na ! plzz.

She sends the messege.

Trupti, sees the message and reply to it.

Both Priyanka and Trupti keeps on chatting on various topics and finally, Priyanka asks Trupti about the blind date !

Trupti was actually excited and thinks of sending Amaaya, instead of her and agrees to the Blind date.

Priyanka informs her to come to Ledbury Restaurant the next day at 7 :00pm.

Priyanka (to herself) - I hope koi gadbad naa avo ! Chalo agar issi bahane Vivi interview ke liye javoonga toh achha hi hai na !

Trupti (to herself) - Khadoos behen ko thode masti ki zaroorat hai ! Tumhe to hiss date ke liye jaana hi padega !

Edited by SaraSharon - 10 years ago

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