Akdha FF- Journey Of Passionate Love Thread 1 closed - Page 63

payal di🤗
love u nd ur update di... Di u r an awsm writer...
U described each and every scene beautifully...
Well written di...
Haaye jealous jallu always took my heart away
loved sibblings bonding...
Thnx 4 the pm di
and haa
update soonish😆

Sorry for commenting late payal
I loved this update so much that i read it 3 times.
I throughly enjoyed each and every part yaar .
Mehendi and sangeet function was awesome .u described it so beautifully
I loved the songs selected for sangeet function.
So finally jalal got his answer
Jo was least interested in surya that she thinks that he isvnot even worthy of her hatred.
But really jalal needs to change his attitude but he cant help himself .
As soon as he sees his wild cats harsh behaviour towards him he can stop himself from hurting her.
Wild love hehehe.
Enjoyed jajo dance payal
And at last "AGLI BAAR SE DHANG KE KAPDE PEHENNA "😡😡😡
He really needs to check on his attitude hehehe
Update soon dear
Waiting for next part
Thanks for pm

Waiting for next part
Pls pls pls update soon

lovely chaptr...its bcuming interesting... update soon eager 2 knw wat happns nxt... 😉

Beautiful update payal

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Awesome chappy chinnie👏

loved bro-sis moments😛

loved the chappy

sry 4 chotu cmnt u know na

i hav no time 4 big cmnts

love u and update nxt part soon😛

Lovely Update Payal... Amazing as always ...👏

awesome update wen will jj start to understand each other????? Continue Soon Nd Do pm

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Lovely Update Payal... Amazing as always ...👏

Thoroughly enjoyed JJ's banter.. though not an easy going one..😆😆

He hurts Jodha unknowingly 😡.. makes her furious again n again..😳

He he... he loves her hate towards him... Jalal fallen hard for her❤️😳..

Their sizzling dance number was just awesome😳😳...

Love his attitude possessiveness😉 ... adjusting her dress strip and making JO blush.. hayee😳

And love the surprise to JO by her lovely brothers😆.. how beautifully U wrote it..❤️

Awaiting for their marriage... If Jalal keep hurting JO at this rate😡.. There is hardly any chance left for SR to happen😭😭

Eagerly waiting how will u take their relationship further😉😳

What happened to Jalal's friend request Payal😡

UPDATE PART 3 SOONISH😆😆

😆😆ha she didn't say what happened to the frnd req... may be I guess dollie (payal di) ate the req😆

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

ohk baba😆

acha gnsd tc dollie di😃