ArHi SS: Lapsus Linguae - Ch 07, pg 21, 7 June

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lala rukh

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Posted: 10 years ago

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awee dear awesome update...wow loved the verses khushi wrote after meeting arnav's mom...and loved khushi verses in reply to arnav's on rain...loving the story loads ...arnav mom is cool...and payal is awesome sister...both arnav and khushi feeling so connected with each other through poetry ...now have to see as class mates they going to become friends now or not :)

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

WOW!! brilliant update dear...loved it

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cocoamob

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Just loved the way Arnav's mom and Khushi found an instant liking to each other and bonded. Arnav's mother is an amazing woman - trying to be a mother and a friend to Arnav - not easy for a single mother to a teenage (?) son. She is also so open-minded about his friend, a girl and then makes that girl feel so comfortable with her attitude.

Khushi simply enjoying the rain is one of best features of Khushi and their exchange of words about it is so beautiful!

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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Seventh June seems like such a long time ago RB... Heart long for an update... will there be one?

I know you have your finger AND your toes in so many pies.. But then heart wants what it wants. 😉

--MB

Edited by Mirabell - 10 years ago

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

I read all the parts at a stretch. Loved it so much.

The conversation and sharing of their emotions and feelings in the form of verses, the way they understand is just amazing. You are one awesome writer. I wish I had the ability to pen how much I appreciate your writing style, this story, alas.. I don't have it in me. I just love reading. Looking forward for next update.

Hope you get well soon .

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