Edited Discontinued - Page 11

Originally posted by: asya_luver

awesome update once again! :)

thank u asya luver😳

Originally posted by: binuuu

good work Nikki,,
razia is an evil...waiting what will destiny stored for them

Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya

nice update
like it
thanks for pm

thank u😳 stay tuned

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Nice

thank u😃

Originally posted by: sasir

Awesome

thanki😊

Originally posted by: swapno

Wow...lovely story...

I love tangled and lost count how many times I watched it...

So I am on for it...

Update soon

yep tangled nd frozen my fav...even I hav watched it many times

KKPRIYA, honeylika, muskaan17rocks, fatima30, laks_vish, KT15661, asya_luver, Tunailuvsahil, binuuu, ajanshul, -Sunkissed, shailu123, suearmaniac, NaughtyRiya, anopama, sasir, asifiqbalsh, swapno, well thank u once again peeps for hitting likes and giving me appreciation keep loving more nd I wont disappoint u hehe😳

Chappy 6

Asad shows her the beautiful city of narnia...walk along wth me

Our glorius city...The gift of a pardise
Peaceful and harmonious upon

The mountains so high and waters deep
Are her disguise
Her secrets are safe from foreign hands
(well these are the lines taken frm song) hehe

Zoya sees The fountain the birds the kids playing...I hav always dreamt of going on my own meeting my people yes earlier I had come during certain occasions but was always coming in a carriage I had to see people through the carriage window...now iam here...seeing them face to face..seeing them live

And all of a sudden ..The fresh scent of cool breeze comes...her hair flying and aftr feeling the breeze for a while... she starts to dance with the kids and the nearby people lik a normal gal...and also sing

The wind is howling like this swirling storm inside
Couldn't keep it in, heaven knows I tried!

It's time to see what I can do
To test the limits and break through
No right, no wrong, no rules for me I'm free!

Let it go, let it go
I am one with the wind and sky
Let it go, let it go
You'll never see me cry!

Here I stand
And here I'll stay
Let the storm rage on

Asad sees her lovingly...how can someone be so cuteee..a smile appears on his face

Hmm princess lets show u Narnia mountain come along

She walks behind him...We trekked through the forest and I chattered with asad happily about the most random things; I really never knew what to say to him.

Every once in a while we would pass something absolutely amazing and I would have to stop to look at it. For whatever reason asad would look at me funnily and stand back when I did this, as if a "butterfly", as he called it, wasn't amazing

Something in me told me that I probably shouldn't trust asad, and yet, sometimes when I looked into his deep brown eyes I saw pain, and sorrow that I felt mirrored in my own heart. I honestly couldn't get a grasp on who he was

I need some privacy" zoya said

Asad :hmmm wht" ?

Zoya : No... what... what I mean is... I need to be alone for... do... things which are natural," she staggered words out confusing asad even more.

She hesitated a bit more, he saw every bit of her insecurity etched on the face making him smile involuntarily.

"Oh just tell me what you want gal!" he said in annoyance

"I want to pee!" she screamed out unexpectedly.

Asad pressed his lips together to avoid the laugh that was playing at his throat

"Should have said that without using fancy terms! he stopped when he saw zoya's face which was a mixture disgust and urgency at the matter.

"Fine, go... he smirked.

"Where?" she whispered, looking around.

"What do you mean where? Go anywhere...

"I can't go with you watching! Where is your sense of respect? Dignity?" she stared daggers at him.

"Fine, I am going to be behind that bush.

As soon as he disappeared behind the bush,zoya looked around in haste and peed

Asad stood near some tree and whistled away. He stopped when he heard her soft voice say she's done. She was washing her hands on the stream when he walked in,

He handed some fresh nuts nd malberries picked from the surrounding to her and simply ushered her to proceed

The sun was burning on them and zoya was thankful that they rode on horseback and would not walk in the scorching sun

"Sleep by me tonight," he said in between

"What? I... I will do no such thing! You think you could..."

Calm down you silly gal! I'm not trying to have my way with you or whatever crazy thought you are having! This is not a cave. This is out in the open. Neither do I want you to run away nor dragged away by some gypsy or criminal. Really, you do think highly of yourself. And if I wanted you, I would have had you by now," he said just to incite annoyance from her. "So come here and lie down princess," he pointed to his side but zoya was shocked at the title he keeps on useing.

"Why do u keep on calling me a princess?" she questioned.

"Because you talk like one!"

And in the night thy both drifted off to sleep close to each other underneath a huge tree

Next morning they traveled far without stoping and they reach highest Narnia mountain

Well this is Narnia's highest mountain...yeh kafi ucchai main hai...

Zoya : wow so beautiful so serene so pure

Asad : and u never came here before baffles me..

zoya : ahh ..i told u na tht I was not allowed to go out I was always supposed to be wth the princess...

Thief: hmm well I guess this spoilt princess was a big hurdle for you..i mean she never met people or went out coz she enjoyed all the luxuries in the palace and also kept the maids restricted to the 4 walls of palace

Zoya :ahh no she is not lik tht you r mistaken..she is a well mannered gal

Asad : oh well.. look who is talking,... the loyal maid ...Are u her mouth piece

Zoya ; sometimes the truth is different...

Thief : truth ?? wht truth ?

I paused glancing back at him u seem to be more interested in her story hmm..but I wanna know your story where do u stay ?? I asked curiously

Asad : I froze. One of my number one rules was to never tell anyone anything about myself that they didn't need to know.

Its none of your business...

Zoya : fine then even you need not know more abt me or the princess..and no need to assume anythg abt the princess u cannot judge the people who u don't know ...she is rich tht doesn't mean she is happy...and goes to the edge of the mountain

Asad thinking ; well she has all the riches on the planet..she is the legel princess of narnia she can afford anythg ..all her wishes will be granted ..then y on earth will she be sad...

Zoya ...starts to echo ohhh ...and swirls on the edge of the highest mountain of Narnia...

Whooo I am freee freee yes iam free

Asad : be careful there its slippery near the edges...

all of a sudden she slips ..ahhh.

The thief panicks and holds her hands within a split second she drops the bag which had the crown and the diamonds in it...he strongly grabs her pulls her close to him...nd their eyelocks...both seem lost in each other

Bgm :... Is pal main hoon ya tum bhi ho
Am I here in this moment or is it You
Ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Or we both aren't here, even if we are
Kyun ho, kya ho, ho bhi ke naa ho
Why are You here? What are You? Are You not here even if You are?
Ya kehna sunana mana hain
It's forbidden to talk or say anything about this
Is pal main hoon ya tum bhi ho
Am I here in this moment or is it You
Ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Or we both aren't here, even if we are

Aa Aaa Aaa...
Da Da Da Pa Dha Ni Sa Re Ga Aa A
Dha Ni Dha Pa Daa Pa Ma Pa Ma
Ga Ma Ga Re
Da Na Da Na Da Naa...

Asad coming out of the trance realizes tht the bag has fallen from the mountain

Hey nikki update is so loyely yaar awww zoya is so cute she said that out loud 🤣 n their eye lock heeyyy precap is interesting continue soon 🤗

I just Loved it
It's really really amazing
U r an amazing writer
Plz continue soon