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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aviana

sry fr d late
wow wonderful updt
lvd it
new entry
cntnue soon


Its fine dear
Thanks a lot 😃
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello friends !!!

Surprise !!! I'm surprised myself for giving such an early update

Back with another part. Hope you all like it. Again I donno whether I have done any justice to it.

Not proofread as always.

Part 5(A)

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Everyone were leading their lives happily. Things were set for IshRa now. They were used to each other's company. Every morning Raman would drop Ishita to her clinic and evening they used to return together. They went on dinners, shopping, movies ...

One fine day

Ishita "Shall we go out today?"

Raman "umm...not today Ishita. I'm not feeling well"

Ishita "Kya huva? Fever toh nahi hai na?" [What happened? You don't have fever right?]

Raman "No...no fever. I just need some rest"

Ishita "You sure?"

Raman "Yes sure..."

Raman went to his room to rest while Ishita proceeded to kitchen to cook something for Raman. Before which, the doorbell rang. She went and opened the door to find a lady standing there.

She asked "Umm raman Bhalla?"

Ishita "Yes... you are?"

Lady "Is he Inside?"

Ishita "He is...but you're?"

Lady rushed inside the house ignoring questions put up by Ishita. She directly banged inside the hall shouting "RKB...come out"

Ishita stood wondering who that girl was and who RKB was. Nevertheless, she ran behind her to stop her from further shouting and waking Raman. She caught hold off the lady

"Arrey who are you? Why are you shouting like this?"

Hearing the commotion outside his room, Raman came out to see what the problem was..

As soon as he saw the lady, a smile came on his face and he walked towards her.

She shouted "surprise" and hugged him while he hugged him back.

Raman "Tum khab aaye" [When did you come?]

Lady "Abhi abhi.Directly from Airport" [Just now. I directly came here from Airport]

Raman "Akheli ho" [You came alone?]

Lady "Nahi Ro bhi saath hai" [No, even Ro's with me]

Raman "Ro bhi? Where is he?" [Even ro? Where is he?]

"I'm here" A voice approached from door. Ishita, Raman and the lady saw towards the entrance.

Man there came and hugged Raman. Ishita was hell confused of what was happening in that house. So Raman came forward and introduced "Ishita they are my childhood friends" Pointing towards the man "He's Rohan" and towards the lady "She's Neha"

(My note: I didn't want interference of shagun or mani in IshRa life. So brought up my friends here😳)

He spoke to Rohan and Neha "She's Ishita and she stays with me"

After the formal greeting of each other, they sat down discussing about Random things like how come Ishita is staying there and all stuffs.

Neha "Accha listen, We will continue our talk later.Now I have to go out somewhere"

Rohan "Me too.."

Ishita "That's fine. However even Raman needs to rest"

Rohan and Neha left and Raman went to rest. After about an hour or so, Ishita woke up raman

"Raman, utho" [raman wake up]

"Sone do na Neha" [Let me sleep,Neha]

"Neha nahi Ishita. Utho raman" [Its not Neha, Ishita...wake up]

"Haan Ishita... sone do" [Yes Ishita...let me sleep]

"Utho Raman. Time for dinner"

Ishita pulled Raman out of his blanket and lead him to dining table.

"Take" she handed him a bowl of soup

"Yeh kya hai?" [What's this?]

"It's good for your health. Take it"

"Uthaya toh aise jaise ki kuch parathe banaye hai par mila kya soup... Chal raman beta teri kismet mein yahi likhi hai" He mumbled to himself [You woke me as though you had cooked Paratha but what do I get...soup. See Raman you just have this in your Fate]

"Kuch kaha aapne?" [You told something?]

"Main hota kaon hoon kuch bolne wala. Do tumhara healthy food" [Who I am to speak anything? Give me your healthy food]

"That's like my good boy" She smiled at him.

Raman reluctantly put the soup in the bowl and took it up to his mouth. As soon as he tasted it, he coughed

"Kya huva?" she turned to him with concern. [What happened?]

"Have you ever cooked something in your life?" he asked

"No, it's my first time. How is it?" she asked eagerly

"First time... Very nice. I have never tasted such yummy food in my life" He faked a smile and gulped some more morsels

"Yes" he clapped her hands

She lifted a bowl from the table and walked towards the kitchen

Raman "Where...where are you going?"

Ishita "I'll get myself some. I didn't taste it yet"

Rmana "So I'm lucky person who gets to taste it first"

"Yes you're. next I'll taste"

"No..." he shouted

"Why?"

"Why...why because I want it"

"Arrey I have cooked more only, it'll be enough for us"

"More..." He asked

"Yes. I'll get it"

"No, no...listen to me Ishita. I want it, you don't eat it"

"I'm eating it Raman" she helped herself with some only to find herself spitting it out as soon as it entered her mouth

"Yuck... Raman. How did you eat this?" she asked making a flustered face

"Just like that. This was your first time cooking right. So..."

"Aap bhi na"

"So how did you like the food?" he asked her in the same tone she had asked few minutes before

"Bahot bura."

They shared a good laugh at what she had made

"So... what now?" he asked

"What?" she asked him back

"Thus thing you have made has only one place... Dustbin. What to eat now?"

"Huh..." she thought

"Arrey dimag par itna zor mata lagao... Let's go out and eat. However you wanted to go right?" [Don't use your brain much...]

"No Raman. You are not well" he argued

"It's fine. I'm quite healthy after eating this" he pointed at the soup "Let's go. Get ready"

Rohan came "Kaha jane ki taiyari ho rahi hai Bhai" [Where are you guys going?]

Ishita "We are going out for dinner"

Neha "Oh Nice...even we'll join you guys"

Raman "ya sure. Actually you have to or else be ready to get admitted to hospital"

Neha "Why?"

Rohan pointed towards the soup and told "We can eat this"

"No..." IshRa shouted together and recited the whole incident

And the all the four went out for dinner...

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Note: Both the new characters here play a positive role. They are going to bring IshRa closer

That's it for now friends. Drop down your comments. Criticism and appreciation, both are welcome.

5(B) will be posted as soon as possible😳

Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

are we getting an update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nitii


are we getting an update

Probably a YES
I'm sitting to write now 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Probably a YES
I'm sitting to write now 😳

hugiee
Edited by nitii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
he was joking...i dont believe it.. maaro puttar ko... ishtupid...
loved the update...update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
huggie huggie kissie kissie 😳
chal ab don't disturb 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalz_123

he was joking...i dont believe it.. maaro puttar ko... ishtupid...

loved the update...update soon...


hehe... Thanks 😃
aarey puttar ko maar doge then how will story continue 😕
will do it soonish
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Viddoo darling,
Iam don't get words to appreciate you my dear.
I found it interesting and funny.
Once again I fell in love with Raman today. He had the soup prepared by Ishita eventhough it tasted bad. . He knows how to make a girl happy. He is the perfect marriage material haina??
Even I don't want Shagun and Mani in this story.
And you brought my chotu in the story. Awww... Iam clean bowled now.Thank you so much for bringing her into this as Raman's friend.It will be even more interesting now. I am juzzz loving it.
Expecting more n more from you.
Let the romance start...
Can't wait..
Waiting for the next update.
Love you darling.
Edited by RaMANasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
so we are getting one more..bring it on..
give the next part soon..will comment after that
what... your fever shifted to raman 😆
so..you don't like soup dear?????🤣

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