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12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

I'll pause like Is hu 😊
Tum bhi nah Asha... Kuch bhi...matlab... Kuch bhi... 😆

Sirf Kuch bhi I thought to do aur bhoth Kuch more

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12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

I'll pause like Is hu 😊
Tum bhi nah Asha... Kuch bhi...matlab... Kuch bhi... 😆

Sirf Kuch bhi I thought to do aur bhoth Kuch more 😛

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--HANISA--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

nice one want to know what is pari is hiding

well done asha love it

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12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb
Res
Me 1st

Abb unres kar bhi dey mari maa 😉

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: pretty_h
nice one want to know what is pari is hiding

well done asha love it

Thank u so much glad u liked it 😳

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb
My EVERLATE comment...😆
Me FIRST
And may be the LAST...😭
What's cooking in that gutter mind of yours?
To be honest...I loved this part because of Ruhi 😳
She is intelligent (Adi banda 😛 )
Pari/teri plan kya hai?
Pari ka lover dha 🤔?
Last scene was lovely ❤️

Mujhe next part PM karne ke bad damki de rahe ho 😲 ki comment nahi karegi to BAA...H scene nahin behejoge... 😡
Seriously, I'm unreserving to read it ☺️
Send me fast...waiting

Patience pays my dear and first fulfill my demand then u get what u want ek hath le ek hath dey 😆

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Hi dears... 😊

Jump to the next part...

Not proofread...

PART-5

It starts with Raman and Ishu getting ready. Raman was super exited and Ishu was confused of the reason y is he so exited

Raman:Ishita yar jaldi karo Hum late ho jayege

(Ishita be fast. We'll get late)

Ishita:Raman relax humare pass 2hr hai. Abhi itni jaldi kyu hai app ko

(We've 2 hrs. Y so hurry?)

Raman : (st ) thum Nahi shamjogi madrasan

(You won't understand)

Flashback

It was another morning when Raman was sleeping peacefully tightly clutching the pillow and dreaming of some one else in place of that pillow. That is when the alarm started ringing and he got up with a start screaming "Ishita wait...!!!!!!

He was sweating very badly and as he looked around here and there. He found himself dreaming. This happend very frequently now a days which increased Ramans frustration even more.

Raman : bas bhoth ho Gaya. Abb aur Nahi. Muje Kuch karna he hoga. Varna is pagal madrasan ke Sapne muje pagal kar dega

(I'd do something or else I'll get mad by her dreams)

He took out his phone and called someone

Raman : Hello haa muje tere help chayea...
Nahi thu vo sab chood aur India aa...
Ha vahi sapna. God I will get crazy man
Thum kab tak aaa saktey ho?
Ok then bye

(I want your help. Leave all that and come to India. When are you going to come?)

------End of flashback------

So now Raman was going to pick up the friend who was his only hope. But little did he know that there was soneone else sailing in the same boat

In Pari's room

Pari was busy with her phone as usual texting her jaan when ishu entered the room.

Ishu : Pari thum yaha ho! Aur mai thum ko pure ghar mai doond rahi Hun

(You here. I looked for you in the whole house)

Pari : Hiding the phone, Kya hua Akka. Y r u so tensed?

(What happened akka?)

Ishu : So tensed matlab thum kal ki bath bhool gayi? U promised to help. Didn't u?

(Meaning...you forgot yesterday's matter?)

Pari : Ha muje yaad hai par is se phele ki mai app ki help karu app ko promise karna hoga ki jo mai bologi vo app karogi ok and no questions

(I remember. But you'd promise me that you'll do as I say if you want me to help you)

Ishu : par...

(But)

Pari : Akka promise

Ishu : OK

Pari smiled remembering the flash back of what happend yesterday night

FLASHBACK

Pari just ended the phone call when she saw Ishu passing by the parking lot from her window

Pari : yeh Akka yaha kya kar rahi hai? I should go and check

(What's akka doing here?)

Pari & ishu conversation

Akka what r u doing here? iss time par...

(In this time...)

Pari vo mai vo vo ...

(Me that)

Akka muje Nahi bologi

(You won't tell me?)

And ishu told her problem to Pari that how she and Raman want time but are not getting it at all and even when they get how she messes it up getting all nervous.

Akka do u love jiju?

Pari what kind of a question is that! Obviously I do

Then what r u scared of Akka?

I I ...I am just nervous I don't know y I ... I just don't know

Ooo Akka it's ok it happens

No pari thum Nahi samaj rahi ho I don't want to disappoint him

(No your not getting me)

Akka trust me aise Kuch Nahi hoga. ok fine mai app ke help karugi but abhi app jake so jao kal bath karegey

(I'll help you. Now you go and sleep)

Ishu reluctantly accepted and went away and Pari smiled texting her jaan plan is working perfectly ab dono taraf Barbara lagi hai abb tho bas kal ka intizar hai

(Now both sides are equal and waiting for tomorrow)

------Flashback ends------

Ishu shook Pari vigorously asking kha khoo gayi

(Where're you gone?)

Pari : kahi Nahi Akka acha app ko airport jana tha na take me with u

(Nowhere. You're going to airport right...)

Ishu : par thum vaha kya karogi aur ek second thum ko mere airport Jane ke bare mai kise patha

(But what'll you do there? And how do you know that I'm going to airport?)

Pari : vo vo vo mai jab app ko good morning bolne ja rahi thi tho Thoshi aunty ne bola. Abb. chalo and u promised to ask no questions remember

(When I can to say good morning then Toshi aunty told me)

All this convo was heard by Ruhi when she came to find her Ishima as ker papa was ready to go

Ruhi : Ishima app ko papa bula rahe hai, she said coming in the room

(Papa's calling you Ishima)

And ishu went to see what Raman wants and ruhi turned to a panic struck Pari

Ruhi : abb sach sach bolo yeh kya ho raha hai Varna...

(Tell me the truth else)

Pari : Nahi ruko Ruhi mai bathathi hu par plz kise ko Nahi bolna promise

(Stop Ruhi I'll tell you)

Ruhi : thinking for some time and then said ok promise
And pari said some thing to ruhi. Convo muted ( I know I am acting evil by muting the convo but plz bear me for one or two more part )

Now the scene is shifted to the airport where Raman and Ishu along with Pari and Ruhi are waiting for Raman's friend. And a tall fair man of early 20s came dressed in a red shirt and blue geans. He was nothing less then a Prince Charming every girl would dream of.

He waved to Raman and Raman went forward and hugged him Ravi yar thank god thu aaa gaya hum sab Thera hi intizar kar rahe they

(We're waiting for you)

And he introduced Ravi to all and as he came to pari and introduced then Ravi winked at her and she gave him a flying kiss which went unnoticed by all.

As Raman and Ishu went ahead to the car leaving pari ruhi and Ravi alone Pari hugged him and said
I missed u so much and he replied the same but was intrupted by ruhi

Ofo app dono arey muje bhi tho koi hugge Karo

(Someone please hug me too)

And Ravi picked ruhi up in his arms. And pari narrated the whole story how ruhi got to know the plan

Ravi : I must say ur smart miss smarty pants and tickled her which made Ruhi laugh

Pari : that she is bade Miya tho bade Miya chote Miya tho subhan alla

And the trio giggled when ruhi stopped and asked about the plan in an exited tone

Pari : haa Ravi now what next. Hum kya. Karne wale hai

(What we're gonna do next?)

Ravi : ( wickedly ) Barish

Pari and ruhi to get her : barish ... And gave confused look

Ravi laughed and said chalo bathathia Hun

And the trio left out of the airport
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That's all for now friends this part actually became too long so I am dividing it into 2 parts

Precap - the rain of love barish

Hope u will enjoy reading do tell me if it is getting boring I have given an hint for all those who want to know about the master mind But I am openly telling it is none of the people mentioned above
See u soon with a new update

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LOVE

ASHA

Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

As always...
Me first 😆

Well...became a bit late...
*I know not a bit*
Coming to the update...
Pari...is planning to unite IshRa along with her lover (Maybe 🤔) Ravi
Hmm...ab to sab kuch open hai... Toh..
I hope that I'll get to read some Romantic Stuff ☺️
Nothing is getting inside my brain as I'm full of dreaming about the surprise you're gonna give us (BAARISH)
Amma thaaye... Zyada tang mat karo...

Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago